讀后續(xù)寫+泳池邊的生死營救：愛犬創(chuàng)造奇跡+講義 高三下學(xué)期第一次月考試英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。SnowhadjustmeltedoffthegroundthatAprildayatourhouseinReginaBeach,Saskatchewan.Ihadjustcleanedupthepoolinpreparationforsellingthehouse.Theyearbefore,Ihadlostmyjob,andnowourfinancialsituationwasterrible.Indespair,Ihadfinallyputthehomeonthemarket,andabuyerwasduetoshowuplaterthatday.Evenworse,IwouldhavetogiveupmybelovedGreatDane(大丹犬),Brigitte,becauseIcouldnolongeraffordthecostoffeedingit.ThethoughtoflosingthedogandourbeautifulhomewasalmostmorethanIcouldbear.Deepindespair,Isattypinglettersforjobs.OutofthecornerofmyeyeIcouldseemy13-month-oldson,Forrestplayingnearourbig,gentledog,Brigitte.BrigittecametoourhouseonChristmasevewhenthedoorbellrangandIwassuresomeofmyChristmaspackageshadarrived.Irantothedoorandswungitopen,butnoonewasthere.Isensedsomethingandlookeddown,onlytofindabeautifulGreatDanesittingthere,lookingupatmewithbig,intelligenteyes.Therewasnowaythatshecouldhaverungthedoorbellbyherself,wasthere?Perhaps,someonehadfoundthepuppysomewhereandleftherthere,andthenrangthedoorbellandranaway.TheyaccuratelyguessedIwouldwelcomeanadditionalfamilymemberandtakecareofher.Thinkingofthese,Icouldn’thelpbutsighandwentstraightbacktowork.However,Ihadn’ttypedmorethantwosentenceswhenBrigittebeganbarkingmadlyandrunningoutoftheslidingglassdooroverlookingourpool.Iracedtoseewhatwashappeningandnoticedthattheslidingdoorwasslightlyopen.Suddenly,Irealizedmysonwasnowheretobeseen.Inpanic,Iopenedthedoorandranoutside.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右：2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Isawmysonstrugglinginthewater.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Later,Itoldthestoryofthedogtothebuyer.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：故事圍繞“我”展開，因失業(yè)陷入財務(wù)困境，準(zhǔn)備賣掉房子并放棄愛犬Brigitte。一天，“我”在為找工作打字時，13個月大的兒子Forrest在Brigitte附近玩耍。突然，Brigitte狂吠并跑向泳池，“我”發(fā)現(xiàn)兒子失蹤，驚恐地跑到外面，看到兒子在水中掙扎。Brigitte勇敢地跳入水中救起兒子。后來，“我”向來看房的買家講述了Brigitte的故事，買家深受感動，決定買下房子并幫“我”承擔(dān)養(yǎng)犬費用，讓Brigitte繼續(xù)留在“我”家。故事山分析：開端：“我”失業(yè)，經(jīng)濟困難，準(zhǔn)備賣房棄犬。發(fā)展：兒子在Brigitte附近玩耍，Brigitte突然狂吠沖向泳池。高潮：兒子溺水，Brigitte勇敢救子。結(jié)局：買家聽了故事后決定買房并幫“我”養(yǎng)犬。伏筆及回應(yīng)：伏筆：“我”準(zhǔn)備賣房棄犬，暗示生活艱難?；貞?yīng)：在困境中發(fā)生了狗狗救子的奇跡，改變了“我”的命運。伏筆：Brigitte在圣誕夜神秘出現(xiàn)。回應(yīng)：強調(diào)了Brigitte與“我”家的特殊緣分，為它救兒子增添合理性。伏筆：“我”看到兒子在Brigitte附近玩耍。回應(yīng)：為兒子溺水時Brigitte能及時救援埋下伏筆。伏筆：Brigitte開始狂吠并跑向泳池?；貞?yīng)：引出兒子溺水，Brigitte施救的情節(jié)。伏筆：“我”家有泳池。回應(yīng)：是兒子溺水以及Brigitte展現(xiàn)英勇行為的場景。續(xù)寫要點：

第一段：重點描寫B(tài)rigitte救兒子的過程，突出緊張氛圍和Brigitte的勇敢。

第二段：詳細(xì)描述“我”向買家講述故事的過程以及買家的反應(yīng)，展現(xiàn)溫暖結(jié)局。情感線：故事開篇是“我”的絕望，因經(jīng)濟困境賣房棄犬。兒子溺水時“我”極度恐慌，Brigitte救子后“我”轉(zhuǎn)為驚喜與感激。向買家講述故事時情感真摯，買家的回應(yīng)讓“我”充滿希望，從絕望到希望的情感轉(zhuǎn)變明顯。故事線：“我”失業(yè)陷入經(jīng)濟困境。準(zhǔn)備賣房棄犬。兒子在Brigitte附近玩耍。兒子溺水，Brigitte救子。“我”向買家講述故事。買家決定買房并幫“我”養(yǎng)犬。主旨升華句：Loveandloyaltycanturndespairintohope,asshownbyBrigitte'sheroicact.Eveninthefaceofgreatdifficulties,aglimmerofhopecanemergefromunexpectedplaces,likethearrivalofaloyaldog.Thebondbetweenahumanandadogcanbeunbreakable,capableofcreatingmiraclesinthemostdesperatesituations.Sometimes,themostpreciousgiftsinlifecomeintheformofloyaltyandselflessness,justlikeBrigitte'srescueofthebaby.Miraclesoftenhappenwhenloveandloyaltyarepresent,asdemonstratedbythisheartwarmingstoryofadogandafamily.寫作示范一：

Isawmysonstrugglinginthewater.Myheartseemedtostopbeatingforamoment,andIletoutablood-curdlingscream.Mylegsfeltlikejelly,butIforcedmyselftoruntowardsthepool.Brigitte,withadeterminationinhereyes,launchedherselfintothewater.Thecoldwatersplashedaroundher,butsheswamwithallhermighttowardsForrest.Herstrongstrokescutthroughthewaterasifshekneweverysecondcounted.Finally,shereachedmyson,andwithagentlenudge,shepushedhimtowardsthesideofthepool.IquicklygrabbedForrest,pullinghimtosafety.Hewascoughing,butalive.Iheldhimclose,sobbingwithrelief,andthenlookedatBrigitte,whowasshakingthewateroffherbody,hereyesshiningwithpride.Later,Itoldthestoryofthedogtothebuyer.Irecountedeverydetail,fromthemomentBrigittearrivedonourdoorsteponChristmasEvetoherheroicrescuetoday.Thebuyerlistened,herexpressionamixofshockandadmiration.WhenIfinished,shewassilentforamoment.Then,shesaid,“Thishousehasaspecialstory,astoryofloveandcourage.Iwanttobeapartofit.I’llbuythehouse,andIinsistthatyoukeepBrigitte.I’llhelpyouwiththecosts.Adoglikeherisatreasure,andsheshouldstaywithherfamily.”Herwordsfilledmewithanewsenseofhope,andIrealizedthatsometimes,lifehasawayofturningthingsaroundwhenweleastexpectit.寫作示范二：

Isawmysonstrugglinginthewater.Instantly,awaveofterrorwashedoverme.Ishoutedatthetopofmylungs,butmyvoiceseemedtobeswallowedbytheair.Brigitte,withoutamoment'shesitation,divedintothepool.ThewaterrippledaroundherassheswamtowardsForrestwithincrediblespeed.Shereachedhiminnotimeandusedherbodytokeephimabovethewater.IrushedtotheedgeofthepoolandpulledForrestout.Hewaspaleandgaspingforair,buthewasokay.Ihuggedhimtightly,tearsofjoyandreliefstreamingdownmyface.Then,IturnedtoBrigitte,whowasclimbingoutofthepool,exhaustedbutvictorious.Later,Itoldthestoryofthedogtothebuyer.IstartedfromtheunexpectedarrivalofBrigitteonChristmasEveandthendescribedtheheart-stoppingmomentwhenIsawmysoninthewaterandhowBrigittesavedhim.Thebuyerlistenedintently,hereyesfixedonme.WhenIfinished,shesmiledandsaid,“Thisisahousefullofloveandmiracles.Iwanttobuyit,andIwantyoutokeepyourdog.I’llhelpyouwiththeexpenses.Adogthatcansavealifelikethisisafamilymember,andfamilyshouldalwaysbetogether.”Herkindwordsgavemeanewleaseonlife,andIknewthateveninthedarkesttimes,thereisalw