Unit 2 Home sweet home復習課件人教版英語八年級上冊 寫作提優(yōu)練

Unit2HomeSweetHome寫作提優(yōu)練[寫作導引]本單元以“溫馨之家”為話題,屬于“人與自我”主題范疇中“生活與學習”這一主題群。此類話題常見的寫作角度涉及：①家庭生活中的溫暖氛圍;②家庭生活中家務活的積極參與;③家庭生活中的愛與感恩。[寫作任務]俗話說“家和萬事興”。和睦的家庭能給每一位家庭成員帶來溫暖、快樂、健康、智慧和前進的力量。英語課上,老師開展了一次以“Whatcanwedotomakehomeahappierplace?”為主題的討論,同學們交流了自己的想法。請結合圖片,用英語寫一篇短文,向?？疎nglishLearning投稿。要求：1.短文須包括所給要點信息,可適當發(fā)揮;2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名以及地名;3.詞數(shù)80左右(短文開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù))。InourEnglishclass,wehadadiscussionaboutwhatwecoulddotomakehomeahappierplace.____________________________________________________________________________________________________[精彩范文]InourEnglishclass,wehadadiscussionaboutwhatwecoulddotomakehomeahappierplace.We’veshareddifferentideas.Somesayit’sagoodideatospendmoretimewithfamily.④

Theybelievefamilymembersshouldsharehappinessandworries①.Whentheymeetproblems,familymemberscandosomethingtocheerthemup②.⑤Homeisalwaysthefirstplaceforthemtogethelpandsupport.Othersthinkit’snecessarytorememberfamily’sbirthdaysandpreparesmallpresents.Inmyopinion③,showingloveforfamilyisreallyimportant.Sometimes,eventhesmallestthinglikewalkingwithfamilymakesthemhappier.亮點詞塊①sharehappinessandworries分享快樂和憂慮②cheerthemup讓他們振作起來③inmyopinion在我看來高分句子④Somesayit’sagoodideatospendmoretimewithfamily.

(省略that的賓語從句)⑤Whentheymeetproblems,familymemberscandosomethingtocheerthemup.(when引導的時間狀語從句)跟蹤演練英文有句諺語“Noplacelikehome.”,家是幸福溫暖的港灣。假如你是Sandy,請你以“Home,SweetHome”為題寫一篇短文介紹你的家。要求：1.詞數(shù)80~100,開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);2.內(nèi)容可適當發(fā)揮,使其連貫、通順;3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人

名、校名和地名等相關信息。Home,SweetHomeIamSandy._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Home,SweetHomeIamSandy.Ilivewithmyfamily,andwesharemany

happymoments.Homeismyfavoriteplace.Itiswarmandfull

oflove.Myroomissmallbutcomfortable,withsoftblanketsand

adeskforstudying.Inthelivingroom,wewatchTVandtalk

together.Mymomcooksdeliciousfoodinthekitchen,andthe

smellmakesmefeelhappy.NomatterwhereIgo,Ialwaysmiss

myhome.I’mluckythatIhaveasweetfamily.Inthefuture,Iwi