Unit4-Grammar-公開課課件（三）VIP

Unit4AVisittotheMoon

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溫州二外高楊露Freetalk:Ifyouhaveachancetovisitthemoon,whatwillyouexperiencethere?

BasicInformationWho

WhatWhen

How

Whatchanged?byspaceshipLiYanping,anastronomerandIatripintospaceandvisitedthemoonlastmonthAVisittotheMoon

beforearrivingonthemoononthemoonreturningtotheearthUnderlinewordsthatshowthechangeofgravityandfeelings.thechangeofgravitytheweightlessenedfeelgravitypullingfloatweightlesslyclimbdownandtriedtostepforwardbutwascarriedtwiceasfaras…andfelloverbecomelightmovefreelygodown/forwardspecificTip:Usewords(verb./prep.)thatshowspecificactiontomakewritingvivid.whenleavingthegravityofthemoonandearthwhenwegotclosetothemoonwhenwegottothemoonafterwegotthehangofwalkingwhenwewerereturningtotheearth

cheerup,floatweightlessly------curious/excited------delightedfrightened/amazed/exhausted/excited------painfulthe

changeoffeelingsindirectwords(verb.)

------directwords(adj.)Tip:Usewords(verb./adj.)thatshowspecificfeelingstomakewritingvivid.bepushedbackintoseats,notabletotalk------cheerful/excitedexploreimmediatelyenjoyourselvesMydreamonMarsIwassleepingwhenaloudsound__________________.①Suddenly,theground____________(moved)asiftherewereearthquakeandIwas____________(taken)outofbedbyastrongforce.Lookingoutofmyroom,Isawwildwind________(goingup)intotheairandwater_________(going)throughwalls.②I_______,“OhmyGod!It’sTornado!”However,③,itcalmeddownsuddenlytenminuteslater.SoIopenedthedoor

and__________thesteps.④,I______forwardcarefully.1.Fillintheblankswithwordsthatshowspecificaction.2.Addwordsthatshowspecificfeelingstoplacesmarked①②③④tomakethewritingvivid.roared/burst/brokeoutshook/trembledcarried/thrownrisingcriedrushingclimbeddownsteppedMydreamonMarsIwassleepingwhenaloudsoundroared/burst/brokeout,

whichconfusedme

alot.

Suddenly,thegroundshook/trembled

asiftherewereearthquakeandIwascarried/thrown

outofbedbyastrongforce.Lookingoutofmyroom,Isawwildwindrising

intotheairandwaterrushing

throughwalls.Ishiveredwithfear/Icouldn’tcontainfright.

Icried,“OhmyGod!It’sTornado!”However,

tomysurprise/amazement,itcalmeddownsuddenlytenminuteslater.SoIopenedthedoorandclimbeddown

thesteps.Inrelief,Istepped

forwardcarefully.

①②②③④Homework

Readthepassage“Avisittothemoon”againandfindoutmorewordsthatmakeitvividandcoherent(連貫的).Usewhatyoufindtocontinuepolishingthepassage“MydreamonMars”Tip2:Useword