任務(wù)型寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)(廣東).ppt

1、A,1,summary?,Writing,How to write a,Welcome,A,2,IV. 寫(xiě)作(共兩節(jié),滿(mǎn)分40分) 第一節(jié): 基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作 第二節(jié):讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)(共1小題,滿(mǎn)分25分) 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下的任務(wù)說(shuō)明和寫(xiě)作要求,寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文. 任務(wù)說(shuō)明 請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的短文,然后完成以下的任務(wù): 1 )概括短文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),該部分的詞數(shù)大約 30-50字左右; ),Leading in,A,3,Summary:,Summary is a short passage giving the main points of an original article.,摘要,Warming u

2、p,A,4,Preparation for writing a summary,Find key words,Find key sentences,Find the main idea,Warming up,A,5,任務(wù)型寫(xiě)作-歸納大意的寫(xiě)作 仔細(xì)閱讀所給的文段. 找出每一個(gè)段落的主題句(topic sentence), 并用下劃線劃出。注意首句和首段原則。 根據(jù)題目的詳細(xì)要求，審清要寫(xiě)的短文的題材和體裁如“發(fā)言/演講稿”、書(shū)信、日記、通知、記敘文、說(shuō)明文或議論文（比較少是議論文）等等。從整體上把握好文章的格式和結(jié)構(gòu)。 根據(jù)要求和主題以及自己要表達(dá)的觀點(diǎn)，確立好標(biāo)題 根據(jù)找出的每一個(gè)段落的主題

3、句，用同義詞、短語(yǔ)或句子，通過(guò)恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞或過(guò)渡詞串寫(xiě)成個(gè)句子。（30詞）,A,6,Passage I How to choose a career 1.At fifteen,students should be told what career to pursue based on their school performance. 2. Most students are confused about what career to choose. 3. They need to be told what to do. 4. When students choose a career the

4、mselves, they usually pick one they dont know much about. 5. When they get a job, they discover they dont like it, then all their education and training is wasted. 6. If careers were assigned instead of chosen, society would always have the right number of workers. 7. Unemployment would decrease and

5、 job satisfaction would be higher. 8. And taxpayers would know that money going to education was being well spent.,A,7,How to choose a career 1.At fifteen,students should be told what career to pursue based on their school performance. 2. Most students are confused about what career to choose. 3. Th

6、ey need to be told what to do. 4. When students choose a career themselves, they usually pick one they dont know much about. 5. When they get a job, they discover they dont like it, then all their education and training is wasted. 6. If careers were assigned instead of chosen, society would always h

7、ave the right number of workers. 7. Unemployment would decrease and job satisfaction would be higher. 8. And taxpayers would know that money going to education was being well spent.,A,8,Task ,Summary At fifteen,students should know what career they will have in the future based on their school perfo

8、rmance. They need instructions. Society pays when young people choose the wrong career. (30 words),A,9,Task : Write a summary of passage ,Lets have a try!,Read the passage and write a summary,Group work,A,10,Task Two,Recently, students in our class have had a discussion on whether space is worth exp

9、loring. 30% of us think space exploration is not worthwhile. They think space is too far away from us and our daily life. And the money spent on space exploration can be used to solve the earths problem such as starvation and pollution. On the other hand, 70% think space is worth exploring because w

10、e have benefited a lot from it. We use satellites for communication and weather forecast. Also, space research will enable us to find new sources to solve the problem of energy shortages on the earth. Whats more, with further space research, we may solve the population problem by moving to other pla

11、nets one day.,A,11,Task Two,1 Recently, students in our class have had a discussion on whether space is worth exploring. 2 30% of us think space exploration is not worthwhile. 3 They think space is too far away from us and our daily life. 4 And the money spent on space exploration can be used to sol

12、ve the earths problem such as starvation and pollution. 5 On the other hand, 70% think space is worth exploring because we have benefited a lot from it. 6 We use satellites for communication and weather forecast. 7 Also, space research will enable us to find new sources to solve the problem of energ

13、y shortages on the earth.8 Whats more, with further space research, we may solve the population problem by moving to other planets one day.,A,12,Task Two,Part: Part: Part:,Three parts:,How many parts can we group the passage into?,Sentence One,Sentences Two-Four,Sentences Five-Eight,A,13,section: Re

14、cently, students in our class have had a discussion on whether space is worth exploring.,section: 30% of us think space exploration is not worthwhile. They think space is too far away from us and our daily life. And the money spent on space exploration can be used to solve the earths problem such as

15、 starvation and pollution.,WhatA survey on whether,(Result ) Disagreement,Task Two,What does the writer want to tell us in each part?,A,14,Task Two,section: On the other hand, 70% think space is worth exploring because we have benefited a lot from it. We use satellites for communication and weather

16、forecast. Also, space research will enable us to find new sources to solve the problem of energy shortages on the earth. Whats more, with further space research, we may solve the population problem by moving to other planets one day.,(Result) Agreement,A,15,Task Two,Outline, because and . While beca

17、use and .,A survey on whether space is worth exploring,What: Disagreement: Agreement :,not worthwhile ; too far awayour daily life; a waste of money.,worth; benefit a lot; solve problem of communication , weather forecast, energy shortages, even the population.,A,16,Task Two,A survey, whether space

18、is worth exploring, of our class, shows 30% of the students think it unnecessary, because the exploring has little to do with our daily life and it will be a waste of money. While 70% think it worthwhile because it brings us benefit and helps to solve the problem of communication, weather report , e

19、nergy shortage, and even population problem. (64words),Summary,A,17,Task Two,A survey, whether space is worth exploring, of our class, shows 30% of the students think it unnecessary, because the exploring which wastes money has little to do with our daily life . While 70% think it worthwhile because

20、 it brings us benefit . (42words),Summary,A,18,What should you pay attention to when writing a summary?,Focus on main ideas and omit(省去) examples, specific details, and minor supports. 2. Mainly use the words and phrases in the original passage. Do not include your own opinion, but be sure to use ou

21、r own words.(主要引用原文的詞句,不能添加自己的見(jiàn)解，但是要用自己的語(yǔ)言概括） 3. Write it in the third person .（第三人稱(chēng)）,To sum up,suggestions,A,19,Change unnecessary clauses into phrases 2. Change useless phrases into single words 3.Change the sentence structure(結(jié)構(gòu)) 4.Change the voice(語(yǔ)態(tài)) of the sentence 5.Use the synonyms(同義詞),To s

22、um up,About the language,A,20,讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)型寫(xiě)作模板,標(biāo)題 第一段: 第二段: 第三段:,概括所給短文內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)約30字,過(guò)渡詞引出主題句-自己的觀點(diǎn)-理由 約105字,總結(jié)句 約15字,A,21,標(biāo)題 標(biāo)題是段落中心思想的精練表達(dá)形式。根據(jù)所寫(xiě)短文的內(nèi)容，概括出中心思想然后加以提煉，擬定標(biāo)題；（如果沒(méi)有要求，可以不寫(xiě)） Is time more valuable than money？ On Smoking How to make friends？ Happiness Is watching TV a good thing? My view of money / ti

23、me / pollution My attitude toward building a car factory ,A,22,第一段：概括所給短文內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 注意：利用原文中所給的語(yǔ)言材料，用自己的話來(lái)寫(xiě)；概括后的文章意思要通順，行文要連貫。 寫(xiě)作具體方法和要求: 第一段概括要做到開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山: 例如: According to the passage, we know This article is mainly about The writer states that 2. 第一段要做到有層次感: 必要時(shí)概括段中運(yùn)用 firstly,secondly,lastly, 或but, so等來(lái)列出原文

24、作者觀點(diǎn)或內(nèi)容。 3. 第一段概括要抓住要點(diǎn),語(yǔ)言精練:,A,23,The writer tells us that the parents should also do something about education. To start with, parents should provide friendly atmosphere. Next, parents should help their children become more independent and responsible.,Parents Help Is Important,A,24,第二段:過(guò)渡詞引出主題句-自己

25、的觀點(diǎn)-理由 開(kāi)頭用語(yǔ)： I do agree with the author In some way, I agree with , but Every coin has two sides. It is right in that, but This opinion sounds right but is hardly practical. It is definitely not like that. As a matter of fact, In my opinion, From my personal point of view As far as Im concerned ,A,2

26、5,第三段最后一段 : 總結(jié)句開(kāi)頭用語(yǔ)： In conclusion, In short, In general, In a word, In belief, On the whole, All in all, ,A,26,Examples: 1) All in all, the development of children is not only the responsibility of their parents, but also the responsibility of the whole society. 2) In a word, smoking harms yourselves as well as your neighbors, so it should be strictly forbidden. 3) In conclusion, we value money but cant put money above everything else.,A,27,讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)型 寫(xiě)作方法 總結(jié),A,28,寫(xiě)作具體方法和要求: 第一段概括要做到開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山: 例如: According to the passage, we know This article is mainly abou