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1、,writing a picture story,06/28/06,假定你是TOM,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的圖畫內(nèi)容寫一篇日記.,1. Style : 2. Tense( generally): 3. Person:,1. Go over the requirement,A diary,past tense,I,Tuesday December 6 ,2005 Fine I had a very bad day yesterday. Everything go wrong. In the morning, my alarm clock didnt ring so I woke up an hour lat

2、e. I am in such a hurry that I burned my hand when I was cooking breakfast.,Correct any mistakes,went,was,Then I run out of the house to catch the 8:30 bus, but of course I miss it. I was very unhappy because I know my teacher got angry if anyone was late for class. So I ran three miles to the schoo

3、l. But when I arrived there in the end, I find that it was Sunday,Correct any mistakes,ran,knew,found,missed,根據(jù)下列圖畫中 Tom 騎自行車的經(jīng)歷，用英語寫一篇故事。 短文要寫得連貫、完整。,Sample 1,1. topic : 2. Tense( generally): 3. Person:,1. Go over the requirement,A story （a traffic accident),past tense,Tom , he,Tom /ride a bike Alo

4、ng the street/road A few days ago/ the other day/ one day,2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how),A car / run fast to/run into him Tom/ fall off his bike Suddenly,2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how),The driver/ frightened/ run away,2. Go over the pictures （w

5、ho, what, where, when, why, how),A woman/ remember the number of the car The police The driver/ catch,2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how),Key words,sentences,A woman saw the accident and remembered the number of the car. She called the police. The driver was caught.,ride a bik

6、e /run fast to,see the accident /remember the number /call the police /be caught,be frightened /run away,hit him /fall off his bike,When Tom was riding along the street. A car ran fast to him.,The car hit him. And he fell off his bike.,The driver was so frightened that he ran away.,Tom was riding al

7、ong the street. A car ran fast to him. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver was frightened. He ran away. A woman saw the accident. She remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman. The driver was caught.,Passage 1,3. Writing a passage,The other day, Tom was riding along

8、 the street when he saw a car run fast towards him. He turned left quickly but it was too late. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a woman hap

9、pened to see it and remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman and told him what had happened. Finally, the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.,passage 2,The other day, Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him. He turned left quickly but

10、it was too late. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman

11、and told him what had happened. Finally, the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.,Passage 2,Using connectives,并列 轉(zhuǎn)折 3. 因果 4. 其他,and, bothand,but, however, though, while,so, therefore, because,when, suddenly, immediately, as soon as , unfortunately, sothat , finally, as a result, What

12、was worse,Go over the requirement（person, tense, style）,Summary : How to write a picture story?,Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how),Write a passage （using connectives and adding details and specific information. ),基本篇章結(jié)構(gòu) 點(diǎn)題（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件） 事件的起因 事件的發(fā)展/過程 事件的結(jié)果 扣題,2004年遼寧,下面4幅圖片描述的是星期

13、天上午在中山公園里發(fā)生的一件事。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片所提供的信息用英語為你校的“英語園地”寫一篇短文。 注意：短文須包括所有圖片的主要內(nèi)容。短文的內(nèi)容要連貫、完整； 短文單詞數(shù)：100左右（已給句子中的單詞不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）； 參考詞匯：貨攤stand (n.) ; 搶奪 snatch (v.) ; 逮捕 arrest (v.),1點(diǎn)題（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)） 星期天上午，中山公園，冰淇淋貨攤旁 2事件的起因 年輕婦女的包被搶 3事件的發(fā)展/過程 人們追趕搶包者 ；長(zhǎng)排椅上坐著一位老人；搶包者從老人身旁跑過，老人用傘將他絆倒 4事件的結(jié)果 兩名警察逮捕搶劫者： 5扣題 婦女感謝老人，人們稱贊老人的機(jī)智,審題,描述過去

14、個(gè)人經(jīng)歷,第三人稱,一般過去時(shí),星期天上午，中山公園，冰淇淋貨攤 One Sunday morning,；in Zhongshan Park.；At an ice-cream stand 年輕婦女的包被搶 snatch her handbag away 人們追趕搶包者 run after the snatcher 在附近長(zhǎng)排椅上坐著一位老人 There be sb. sitting on the bench nearby,提綱,從老人身旁跑過 Run past the old man 拿起傘；將傘放在他兩腿之間； pick up his umbrella ; put it between th

15、e two legs of the snatcher; 摔一大跟斗 fall down on the ground heavily,兩名警察來到并逮捕搶劫者 Came in a police car; arrest sb. 感謝老人的幫助 Thank sb. for his help 稱贊老人的機(jī)智 Praise the old man for his cleverness,1、幾天前 the other day; several days ago 2、使人感到意外 to ones surprise 3、就在這時(shí) at that moment; at that time,常用關(guān)聯(lián)詞, 副詞：s

16、uddenly, unfortunately, luckily, immediately as a result so/suchthat two hours later, and,1. It was (天氣) 2.While sb. was doing / sb. was about to do when 3. sb. did and 4.see /hear sb. Doing 5. with the help of sb.,一些可能用到的句型和詞組,One Sunday morning, many people went to Zhongshan Park. As it was very h

17、ot, some people got thirsty and were trying to buy some ice-cream. Suddenly a woman at the stand shouted because a young man behind her snatched her handbag away.,Seeing this, immediately a few people began to run after him. However, the snatcher ran so fast that it was not easy to catch him. Luckil

18、y , there was an old man sitting on a bench nearby.,As the snatcher was running past him, the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put it between the snatchers legs. The young man cried and fell down on the ground hard.,A few minutes later two policemen came in a police car and arrested him. The woman thanked the old man, and the people around praised the old man for his cleverness.,Homework,finish your writing and hand it in tomorrow,Clear idea Correct grammar Complete passage Beautiful language Beautiful handwriting,What is