9.話題寫作（九 )　安全問題篇.ppt

1、英語,新課標(biāo) （RJ),話題寫作(九) 安全問題篇,話題寫作(九) 安全問題篇,安全問題主要涉及如何保證人身安全、校園安全、交通安全等。此類試題常以要點(diǎn)提示的方式來考查。,話題點(diǎn)睛,話題寫作(九) 安全問題篇,1I dont think sixteenyearolds should be allowed to drive. 2I agree. They arent serious enough. 3Dont run in the hallways. 4If we are in danger, we must call the police for help so that we can kee

2、p ourselves safe. 5Dont fight with each other.,常用表達(dá),6Safety is the most important thing in our life. 7We should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. 8You mustnt walk across the street until the traffic lights turn red. 9Eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food.

3、 10Its dangerous to play on the road.,話題寫作(九) 安全問題篇,根據(jù)漢語意思完成句子 1你最好不要獨(dú)自一人在河里游泳。 Youd better _ _ _ in the river. 2我認(rèn)為安全第一。 I think _ must come _ 3無論在哪里，我們都要盡力確保我們是安全的。 Wherever we are, we should try _ _ _ we are safe. 4對我們來說， 玩火是很危險的。 Its very dangerous for us _ _ _ fire.,基礎(chǔ)寫作,to play with,not swim a

4、lone,safety,first,to make sure,話題寫作(九) 安全問題篇,5健康飲食對大家都很重要。 Eating _ is very _ for everyone. 6當(dāng)我們處于危難時，要及時求助。 When we are _ _， we must ask for help in time. 7上下樓梯時，請不要相互擁擠。 Dont _ _ each other when going upstairs or downstairs. 8不允許他們帶刀進(jìn)校。 They arent _ _ _ knives to school.,crowd with,healthily,impor

5、tant,in danger,話題寫作(九) 安全問題篇,allowed to take,為了增強(qiáng)中學(xué)生的安全意識，提高自我保護(hù)能力，某校開展了以“安全”為主題的英語演講比賽。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇演講稿。,典例精析,話題寫作(九) 安全問題篇,話題寫作(九) 安全問題篇,注意： 1內(nèi)容必須包括所給的全部要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2表達(dá)清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范； 3詞數(shù)80左右。文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯： be careful, online, danger, callfor, go bad How to keep safe? As teenagers，we shoul

6、d always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. First_,話題寫作(九) 安全問題篇,【思路點(diǎn)撥】 1明確主題：本文根據(jù)圖示內(nèi)容就“如何保持安全”這一話題進(jìn)行闡述； 2寫作要點(diǎn)：(1)慎重交友；(2)遇險報警；(3)安全飲食；(4)自己的觀點(diǎn)； 3時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時； 4人稱：第一人稱； 5重點(diǎn)詞匯和句型： (1)safety, dangerous/in danger, especially, healthily, do harm to, in short (2)

7、when/if/so that/that引導(dǎo)的從句，動名詞作主語，Itsadj.to do sth.,話題寫作(九) 安全問題篇,【寫作模板】,話題寫作(九) 安全問題篇,【佳作欣賞】 How to keep safe? As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, i

8、f we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it is dangerous to swim alone in the river. In

9、 short, safety must come first!,話題寫作(九) 安全問題篇,【名師點(diǎn)評】 1關(guān)聯(lián)詞(first, second, last)的使用讓文章布局合理，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。 2文中使用了豐富的詞匯：make friends, in danger, in time, do harm to, in short等。 3復(fù)合句讓文章的語言優(yōu)美、流暢。例如，when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，so that 引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句，that引導(dǎo)的定語從句(Eating food that goes bad will do)。 4最后用in short進(jìn)行簡明扼要的總結(jié)。,話題

10、寫作(九) 安全問題篇,近來，全國正在進(jìn)行平安校園建設(shè)，作為一名學(xué)生，我們更應(yīng)該珍惜自己的生命，更加注意自己的人身安全。假如你是Daming，擔(dān)任校學(xué)生會主席，請你就安全問題，向全校學(xué)生發(fā)出倡議，寫一封安全倡議書。 內(nèi)容提示： (1)不帶管制刀具到學(xué)校； (2)不私自下河洗澡； (3)不打架； (4)上學(xué)、放學(xué)的途中應(yīng)該注意安全； (5)遇緊急情況，立即報告警察或老師。 ,實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練,話題寫作(九) 安全問題篇,參考詞匯：restricted knives or things(管制刀具)；have a bath(洗澡)；fight(打架)；emergency(緊急情況)；pay attentio

11、n to the traffic(注意交通安全) 寫作要求：(1)用詞恰當(dāng)，要點(diǎn)全面，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范。 (2)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，80詞左右，開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。,話題寫作(九) 安全問題篇,Dear students， As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe._ _ _ Yours， Daming,We mustnt bring restricted knives or things to school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds alone without our parents permission. We should be friendly to others and fighting is strongly banned. Make sure that we always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or h