翻譯癥的克服方略.ppt

1、翻譯癥的克服方略,How to overcome translationese?,Warm-up exercise,See P99.,1. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)的調(diào)整,英語(yǔ)通過(guò)介詞（by, of, on)，連詞等銜接手段把各個(gè)分句按照一定的邏輯連接起來(lái)，構(gòu)成一個(gè)緊密結(jié)合的句子。 漢語(yǔ)：零散的短句，每個(gè)句子承載的信息量單一，通過(guò)語(yǔ)序來(lái)體現(xiàn)邏輯關(guān)系。 英譯漢：對(duì)語(yǔ)言單位進(jìn)行疏散，按照漢語(yǔ)的語(yǔ)序習(xí)慣，調(diào)換位置，并適當(dāng)加詞。(Deconstruct),Memories of the past filled her mind to the exclusion of all else. She study world

2、 history at the university, to the exclusion of all other subjects.,她在大學(xué)里專攻世界歷史，其他課未修。,她滿腦子全是對(duì)過(guò)去的回憶，其它事情都不想了。,漢譯英：選擇主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)，并把各個(gè)分句按照其內(nèi)在的邏輯關(guān)系，處理成定語(yǔ)、狀語(yǔ)、補(bǔ)語(yǔ),從句等(介詞短語(yǔ)，分詞，獨(dú)立主格，從句）。（assemble) P100102,改變?cè)~性,英語(yǔ)中的名詞，介詞，副詞等具有動(dòng)詞含義，翻譯成漢語(yǔ)時(shí)譯成動(dòng)詞。,The sight of her tears softened his heart. A new dignity crept into his

3、step. P104,Is life so dear, or peace so sweet, as to be purchased at the price of chains and slavery?,難道生命就那么寶貴，和平那么美好， 竟值得不惜以鐐銬加身、屈身為奴來(lái)?yè)Q取嗎？,P104,Poverty kept him from school, and he felt regret for life. （抽象名詞）,只要想起母親，他就有了堅(jiān)持下去的力量。,Only the thought of his mother gave him the strength to go on doing

4、it.,The application of electronic computers makes for a tremendous rise in labor productivity.,使用電腦后，勞動(dòng)生產(chǎn)率突飛猛進(jìn)。,具有動(dòng)詞意義的副詞，介詞 He needs more time off duty for relaxation and rest. Going to work today, mum? No. It s my day off today. P105 例8,To be above reproach To work against time Against a rainy day

5、 Below contempt Below the mark Between two fires Get far off the point A cop off duty Off the beaten track In ones true colors,Talk over tea To my liking Without ceremony With his approval Cops under arms,定語(yǔ)和同位語(yǔ)拆分出來(lái),These new neighbors, to whom I was introduced last week, have come back from abroad.

6、,這些新鄰居是從國(guó)外回來(lái)的， 上周經(jīng)朋友介紹我才認(rèn)識(shí)他們的。,某些形容詞、副詞需要拆譯,順譯導(dǎo)致搭配不當(dāng)，或顯得冗長(zhǎng) P109,On one of those sober and rather melancholy days, in the latter part of Autumn, when the shadows of morning and evening almost mingle together, and throw a gloom over the decline of the year, I passed several hours in rambling about Wes

7、tminster Abbey.,時(shí)值晚秋，天色肅穆。晨暉似與暮靄交融， 灰蒙蒙的天空，令人憂郁。我漫步在西敏寺， 消磨了幾個(gè)鐘頭。,分清信息的主次,P117,The desire to prove ones social status by collecting brand name “l(fā)uxury” products more than ever resembles irrational obsession, as more and more people head to the malls armed with easy-to-get credit cards. “Peacocking” your image with expensive but generally unneeded products helps stimulate the economy, but is your bank account ready for the pres