江蘇省東臺(tái)市頭灶鎮(zhèn)中學(xué)中考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)課時(shí)方案 書(shū)面表達(dá)(無(wú)答案) 牛津版

1、江蘇省東臺(tái)市頭灶鎮(zhèn)中學(xué)中考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)課時(shí)方案 書(shū)面表達(dá)（無(wú)答案） 牛津版專 題 內(nèi) 容第 16 課時(shí)（總第 50 課時(shí)）主備人審核人執(zhí)教者復(fù)習(xí)目標(biāo)：了解中考書(shū)面表達(dá)的考查要求，提高學(xué)生使用語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的綜合運(yùn)用能力。導(dǎo) 學(xué) 活 動(dòng)（以達(dá)成復(fù)習(xí)目標(biāo)作為貫穿全課活動(dòng)的一根“紅線”，從助你補(bǔ)缺、給你定標(biāo)、請(qǐng)你點(diǎn)擊、引你運(yùn)用、為你指點(diǎn)、推你提升等6個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)去設(shè)計(jì)整個(gè)教學(xué)過(guò)程）：復(fù)習(xí)研討：Task1:Important points一：如何寫(xiě)好一篇作文： 1.審題：時(shí)態(tài)（注意混合時(shí)態(tài)），段落（注意各段比重，特別是“我的觀點(diǎn)”自由表達(dá)部分，不能太單?。ㄖ辽?個(gè)觀點(diǎn)），而且要語(yǔ)句通順、清晰。寫(xiě)好開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾。）

2、2.句子表達(dá)地道、清晰，一句一句寫(xiě)清楚。（注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)規(guī)范，大、小寫(xiě)規(guī)范） A句與B句用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞連接，段落上要注意層次性。 如：Cooking is fun：Why is cooking fun? First , its a good way to show my love to my parents. Second, its a kind of creation 3. 層次清晰、流暢最重要。 A, 為避免句子單調(diào)、乏味，可使句子多樣話。如不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)： To prevent such things from happening, we should learn to save energy

3、 in our daily life. B，可做必要的添加。如森林濫砍濫伐，“Large numbers of trees are being cut down +(and the forests are disappearing fast) C, 用好轉(zhuǎn)承自然的連接詞：多用“sothat” “so that” “not only. but also.” “however.”等。 D，不熟悉的不要硬翻，找相近的替代。中英文表達(dá)有很大差異，要靈活選擇地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)。 4.每段主題清晰 二：書(shū)面表達(dá)萬(wàn)能詞句：詞：As we all know（開(kāi)頭） there is no doubt that.

4、Whats more on the other hand Firstlysecondlythirdly. Finnally.however. so that, in order to, so . thatGenerally speaking.(總結(jié), 結(jié)尾 ) In my opinion.句：1. Many people havent realized the importance of .Everyone should understand the importance of .(結(jié)尾)2.It句型。 It is +adj +for/ of sb to do sth.3.It has a g

5、ood/bad effect on.4.More attention should be paid to doing sth We should pay more attention to doing5.More action should be taken to do. We should take more action to do.6. If everyone try their best, the life/ our health/ wild animals/ our environment .will三：作文話題：1.環(huán)保： （地球一小時(shí)，動(dòng)植物保護(hù)，節(jié)水，世界環(huán)境日,低碳生活（Lo

6、wer carbon, happier life）2.社會(huì)公德： （創(chuàng)建文明城市，家鄉(xiāng)的變化（changes to my hometown）3.學(xué)生成長(zhǎng)：（Ss development）（身心健康，壓力問(wèn)題，學(xué)校生活，終生學(xué)習(xí)，假期計(jì)劃，中考打算，畢業(yè)前為學(xué)校做什么，與人相處，快樂(lè)生活，文明禮儀）4. 旅游：（travelling）參觀某地，旅游注意事項(xiàng)，帶人參觀（家鄉(xiāng)景點(diǎn)介紹），暑期打算5. 新生事物評(píng)點(diǎn)：電腦、上網(wǎng)、手機(jī)、機(jī)器人利弊談等。6.全民健康：學(xué)生身心健康，飲食健康，身體鍛煉四：范文歸類：(1)關(guān)于環(huán)境保護(hù)問(wèn)題, 典型例句：1.Itsourdutytosavewater. /Its

7、 our duty to love and protect our environment。2.Asweknow,waterisveryimportanttoman./wecantlivewithoutwater.3. Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers.4.It is very important to take care of our environment. 5. Butsomepeopledontcareaboutit./ They waste a lot of water in their daily life.6. Manyr

8、iversandlakesareseriouslypolluted./Somethingmustbedonetostopthepollution.7. Weshouldplantmoreandmoretreesinordertolivebetterandmorehealthilyinthefuture.8. We should not throw litter onto the ground.(文明禮儀)9. If everyone can try their best to protect the environment, the world will become much more be

9、autiful.10. If we dont save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.(如果我們不節(jié)約用水，那么最后一滴水也許會(huì)是我們?nèi)祟惖难蹨I。)范文： 保護(hù)環(huán)境例：6月5日( June 5)是世界環(huán)境保護(hù)日， 我們周圍的環(huán)境變得越來(lái)越糟糕，污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重。假如你是學(xué)生Jane,你校要進(jìn)行“如何保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境?”專題演講比賽，要求：1、舉例說(shuō)明環(huán)境存在的問(wèn)題13方面;2、如何保護(hù)好我們的環(huán)境，采取怎樣的措施，舉例13方面進(jìn)行說(shuō)明，字?jǐn)?shù)90左右。Dear headmasters, teachers, classm

10、ates and friends:（演講稿:環(huán)保、低碳）I m very proud that I have been chosen to speak to you all today.As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. In some places we cant see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we

11、 must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do? How to protect our environment? For example（first）, we can go to school on foot or by bike . when we go shopping we can use shopping baskets instead of plastic bags. and we can use both sides of the paper when we write.In a word, if

12、everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better.“There is only one earth”, I hope everyone will protect our environment well. Thanks!(2)新生事物評(píng)價(jià): 1 Computer is becoming more and more important.2 The Internet brings us not only great use, but al

13、so troubles.3 Of course, students should study, but we should keep a proper balance between work and rest.4 We can do lots of things with it, at the same time, we should make good use of it.5. Now mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.例：關(guān)于中學(xué)生使用手機(jī)（電腦，電子辭典、機(jī)

14、器人等），的利弊關(guān)系?？梢杂脤?duì)比模板。贊成意見(jiàn)1.現(xiàn)在是信息社會(huì)，手機(jī)是最快的信息交流的工具之一。2.應(yīng)充分利用好手機(jī)。如偶遇突發(fā)事故，可立即撥打手機(jī)求助。3.可在每天學(xué)習(xí)之余利用手機(jī)游戲放松一下自己。反對(duì)意見(jiàn)1.學(xué)校已提供了公共電話，因此手機(jī)并不能帶來(lái)更多的方便，而且花費(fèi)較多。2.若課堂接聽(tīng)手機(jī)會(huì)影響上課。3.學(xué)生玩手機(jī)游戲或接發(fā)短信，將無(wú)法集中精力學(xué)習(xí)。你的觀點(diǎn)只要正確使用好手機(jī)，但學(xué)習(xí)是首要任務(wù)。（可自由發(fā)揮）Dear Editor, Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle sc

15、hool students.Somestudents think we can bring mobile phones to school. As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information. A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information. It is a fashionable and useful invention, but at the same time, we ought to make th

16、e best use of it. It is easier for us to ask for help immediately. Therere also some games in the mobile phone. We can relax ourselves after long time of study.But others students dont think its good to take mobile phones to school. (總)There are three reasons. （分）The first reason is schools have pro

17、vided students with public phones, students dont have to spend more money on their mobile phones. The second reason is that the mobile phones can afftect the class. Students cant listen to the teacher carefully in class, it will make the teacher unhappy. The third reason is students cant control it

18、well.If they receive or send text messages, they wont pay attention to their study. In my opinion, if students can use mobile phone in right ways and follow time, its not wrong . People like to become fashionable. But we know that study is ourfirst task. Yours truly,Li Ping（3）健康問(wèn)題1. It is very impor

19、tant for us to keep healthy。/ How can we keep healthy?2. To keep healthy, we should not only eat the food healthily but also do more exercise。3. I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world。4. There is an old saying: “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”5. Either study o

20、r work is based on strong body.身體是革命的本錢6. We should achieve a balance between study and exercises to keep us healthy.7. Health is very important to us teenagers.8. Health is far more important than money.9. Good health can help us enjoy our life while poor health leads to nothing.10. Staying up late

21、 at night is bad for our health.例：假如你叫李華，你校初三年級(jí)同學(xué)正在開(kāi)展一場(chǎng)討論，主題是“初三學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉？”。請(qǐng)據(jù)提供的信息，用英語(yǔ)總結(jié)出討論情況。并最后寫(xiě)出你的觀點(diǎn)。Im Li Hua, After the discussion we found that 70% of the students think they should take allkinds of exercise every day but not spend too much time. They think exercise builds body and can keep

22、 them healthy. Sports also let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.On the other hand 30% students believe taking exercise is tiring and its a waste of time. They say that after having sports they are too excited for a long time to pay attention to their lessons. And its

23、possible to be hurt while doing sports.Every coin has two sides. Just as an old saying says:“Exercise one hour a day, keep illness away.”Either study or work is based on strong body. So I think we should achieve a balance between study and exercise to keep us healthy.（4）壓力問(wèn)題：1.Some students cant get

24、 on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams. 2.Our parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send us to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. 3.We have too much homework and we dont have enough sleep.4. I think a communication/talking with parents is nece

25、ssary to solve the problem.例：假如你是李華，就個(gè)人愛(ài)好帶來(lái)的困惑給英國(guó)朋友Stephen發(fā)電子郵件進(jìn)行交流并請(qǐng)求幫助。 李華愛(ài)好對(duì)太空旅行感興趣；經(jīng)常到圖書(shū)館閱讀資料困惑得不到老師理解觀點(diǎn)1.個(gè)人愛(ài)好有助于學(xué)習(xí)；2. (至少一點(diǎn))老師觀點(diǎn)時(shí)間應(yīng)花在功課上；成績(jī)就是一切Dear Stephen,I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I dont know how to deal with it and would like your help.You know I am crazy abo

26、ut space travel. In my spare time I often go to the library to find something to read. This makes my teacher very angry. To him, good marks are everything and I should spend more time on my lessons, even at weekends. I think healthy hobbies are helpful for our studies. If I can achieve a balance bet

27、ween my schoolwork and my hobby, it will be of great value to my future development. But I dont think my teacher understands me. I feel bad about that.What shall I do? Can you offer me some suggestions? I am looking forward to your early reply.Best wishesLi Hua（5）語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)問(wèn)題：（How to learn English/Chinese

28、 well，The importance of English/ Chinese）1. My favorite subject is English，at the same time, we have a lot of fun in the English class。2. More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English。3. It is used by travelers and business people all over the world。4. Its necessary to re

29、ad more and speak more.5. So English is very important and I like English very much。6. Our English teacher often use a lot of activities to make us happy in the English class。7. I hope I can go abroad one day, and then I can speak to foreigners in English。例：假設(shè)你叫陳軍，昨天收到了筆友David的e-mail，得知他不久要作為交流生到鹽城來(lái)

30、學(xué)習(xí)中文。他想了解如何學(xué)好中文。請(qǐng)你用英文給他回復(fù)一封e-mail，介紹學(xué)習(xí)中文的體會(huì)和方法，提出你的建議，以及表達(dá)你幫助他學(xué)好中文的愿望。90字左右。要點(diǎn)提示：1.漢語(yǔ)非常有用，現(xiàn)在許多外國(guó)朋友都在學(xué)習(xí)。2.漢語(yǔ)較難，因?yàn)樗⒄Z(yǔ)很不一樣。3.必須盡量多記詞，讀和寫(xiě)也很重要。4.可以通過(guò)看電視和聽(tīng)廣播鍛煉聽(tīng)力。5.其他的方法Dear DavidIm glad to hear that youll be an exchange student and come to Yancheng to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful and many forei

31、gners are learning it now. Its difficult for you because its quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. Its also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practice your listening. Do your best to talk with people

32、in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me.Dont be afraid of it!Im sure youll learn Chinese well.Hope to see you soon in Yancheng (Im looking forward to seeing you!)（6）旅游問(wèn)題： 1. If you come to Yancheng ,Ill show you

33、around my hometown.2.Yancheng has attracted a lot of tourists all over the world.3.You can learn a lot about the history and the Chinese culture.4.Also, you can go to Yancheng Wildlife World. In the theme park, you can see a lot of wild life, and you can play with some of them.5.When you are hungry,

34、 you can go to the Food Street, there you can taste a lot of delicious food.6. If you are an art lover, you can go to the Culture Street, there you can find many things you like. Such as handwriting, drawing and so on, they are all full of the artists wisdom.例：城市文明建設(shè)How to make our city civilized：（a

35、t home, at school, in society） At present all of the people in Yancheng are actively founding the national cultured and civilized city. As a student, We should do something to make our city more civilized. Firstly, theres no doubt that we should respect our parents at home. We should help them do so

36、me housework so that they can have a rest after work. We can also tell jokes to our grandparents to make them happy. All of them should be spoken to politely and taken good care of. Next, at school, we should protect flowers and trees. Its necessary to pick up the litter on the ground. At the same t

37、ime, we should always keep our classroom clean and tidy. Finally, in society, we should obey the traffic rules. We can give seats to someone in need on the bus. Also, It is a good manner to be polite and helpful. People should be prevented from throwing rubbish everywhere. We should try our best to

38、take care of our environment and fight against pollution. I think if more actions are taken, our city will be more and more beautiful in the future!（7）學(xué)生成長(zhǎng)問(wèn)題：1.Today we are all proud of our school, tomorrow we will be the pride of our school!2.Im sure if you try your best, you will make great progre

39、ss.3. With the teachers help, he studies very hard and gets on well with his classmates now.例:2011年一?？荚嚱饓矸段模杭偃缒銓⒋?011屆畢業(yè)生在學(xué)校畢業(yè)典禮上發(fā)言，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，發(fā)言稿的要點(diǎn)如下：回顧美麗的校園，生動(dòng)有趣的教學(xué)，三年來(lái)的收獲感謝老師的培養(yǎng)，父母的支持，同學(xué)的幫助祝愿考生自擬，至少兩點(diǎn)參考范文：Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates,It is a great

40、honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2011.First, I want to say something about my school life. Three years ago, when we first walked into this school, we were surprised at its beautiful views(beauty). we have worked hard and studied happily since then. As we all know,

41、the teachers here are all very excellent, they often make us interested in class. With the help of our teachers, we have already made great progress. Well never forget the good time we have spent together!Then, We would like to thank the following people for what they have done. Thanks to our teache

42、rs, you give us so much useful knowledge! Thanks to our parents and classmates, you give us so much support and help! Weve known not only how to study, but also how to grow healthily.Finally, I would like to give my best wishes to all of you. I hope all our students can make your dreams come true. We all believe our school will be more and more beautiful, and our teachers will have a better