高中英語改錯題解題技巧.ppt

短文改錯 proofreading checktheanswers 2011課標 mysummertravelstartedterribly iwasattheshanghairailwaystationbuyatickettohangzhou iwasgoingtovisitafriendhereandafterthatiwouldgotoxiamenforlongholiday iboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybagfromthefloorandthenirealizedthatsomeonehadstolenit luckilyihadallmymoneyonmypocket buttheonlyclothesihadwasthoseihadon itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages whenifinallyarrivedatmyfriendhelenttomelotsofclothes ifeelveryhappythaticouldchangemyclothesatall buying there a and in were luggage friend s felt 2011浙江 iwasplayingatmycousinhouse sincehisfamilywasrichthanmine hehadmoretoysthanidid therewasoneonparticulari dalwayswanted iputintomypocketwhenhewasn tlooking iguessed evenattheage iwouldneverbeabletoenjoytoplayingwiththetoyorfacedmycousinagain iwouldalwaysknowi ddonesomethingwrong lateon myauntdrovemehome whenshedroppedmeoff ipulledoutthetoyslowandgaveitback sheknowswhathadhappened butshethankedmeandevermentioneditagain cousin s richer in it later face slowly knew discussion 短文改錯題的特點 1 文章的特點2 考點分布的特點3 改錯方式分布的特點 短文改錯的出題特點 1 語言材料 取自于學生的作品 詞數(shù)在120左右 2 短文題材 為常見話題或?qū)W生身邊事 以應用文 記敘文為主 3 短文難度 符合學生水平 以考查學生書面表達中的常見錯誤為主 4 語言 簡單易懂 沒有生僻的語言現(xiàn)象或繁難的語句結(jié)構(gòu) 5 設題面 動詞 名詞的考查較多 但知識覆蓋面廣 6 三不考 標點符號 語序 單詞拼寫一般不作要求 7 錯誤分布 新題型不再局限于每行一錯 而是一行多錯或多行無錯 其中多詞少詞一般2 3個 改詞7 8個 高考英語短文改錯主要考查考生在語篇中綜合運用英語語言知識的能力 它不同于單句改錯 考生應在理解短文的基礎上 根據(jù)上下文的邏輯關(guān)系 對文中的錯誤做出判斷 并進行糾正 因此 該題型綜合性強 涉及面廣 短文改錯的能力要求 短文改錯的解題技巧 1 通讀全文 理解文章 解決四個一致的錯誤 1 時態(tài)一致 出現(xiàn)一處與整篇文章時態(tài)不一致 2 指代一致 代詞的性 格 數(shù)的不一致 3 主謂一致 主語與謂語動詞在人稱 數(shù)上的不一致 4 邏輯一致 and so but therefore however的混用 after when與before的混用 肯定與否定的混用 thestoryaboutgrowingpainsismyfavoriteamericantvplaybecauseitisveryinteresting theplaytellshumorousstoriesthathappeninseaver sfamily withsuchstoriesitmakepeoplethinkaboutlife butthereforeattractstheaudience itisalsoawindowfromwhichwecanlearnaboutamericansociety andthereweremanymeaningfulthingsthatareworththinkingof suchastherelationshipbetweenparentsandchildreninalotofamericanfamilies itisquitedifferentfromthoseinchina theplayisverypopular we dbettermissthechancetoenjoyit are makes and that not 通讀下篇短文 改正文中的四個一致的錯誤 twoyearsago itraveledtobrazilandirentedacar fortunately ihadanaccidentandhitanothercar andineededtostayinahospitalforatleasttwoweeks icalledmyparents soididnottellhimwhathadhappened iknewthattheywillbeworriedaboutmebecauseiwassofaraway andthatmymotherwouldnotsleepifsheknew however itoldtheminterestingstoriesandhowiwasenjoyingbrazil asaresult everybodyknewthetruth istillthinkthethatitwastherightthingtodo unfortunately but would therefore nobody them 短文改錯的解題技巧 2 逐句閱讀 改正 關(guān)注句子的結(jié)構(gòu) 注意一些常考點短文改錯要做好 常見類型應記牢 名詞愛考 數(shù) 與 格 冠詞常會 錯 多 少 動詞兩態(tài)和搭配 非謂 情態(tài)莫錯了 從句多考引導詞 形 副錯用兼比較 介詞多半考搭配 代詞錯 漏想周到 動詞形 名詞數(shù)還要注意形和副非謂語 細辨別介詞短語要牢記 alimerick 五行打油詩 代詞格 細領(lǐng)悟句子成分多分析冠詞連詞常光顧邏輯錯誤須關(guān)注 名詞愛考數(shù)與格 2012海南 fromthetimeiwasaboutfouruntiliwasaboutsix idestroyedeachofmytoy 2012浙江 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