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1、2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,1,2017年初中英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)交流,書面表達(dá),2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,2,一、學(xué)生寫作時(shí)的常見問題,1.審題不清,文體不對(duì) 2.要點(diǎn)不全,條理不清楚 3. 離題細(xì)節(jié)過多,文章冗長(zhǎng) 4.語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤(名詞單復(fù)數(shù),動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài),代詞、介詞的使用,主謂一致,中式英語(yǔ)現(xiàn)象) 5.單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤 6. 書寫不規(guī)范,卷面不整潔,滿分率低,普遍學(xué)生得分率較低,怎么辦?,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,3,一、日常教學(xué)中自己寫作教學(xué)的感悟與嘗試,三、書面表達(dá)的復(fù)習(xí)建議,二、近年書面表達(dá)的簡(jiǎn)要分析,四、高頻話題寫作指導(dǎo),2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,4,日常教學(xué)中
2、自己寫作教學(xué)的感悟與嘗試,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,5,英語(yǔ)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)規(guī)定:初中畢業(yè)生英語(yǔ)寫作技能要達(dá)到能夠運(yùn)用所學(xué)語(yǔ)言知識(shí)與技能進(jìn)行信息溝通、再現(xiàn)生活經(jīng)歷、描述周圍事物、發(fā)表意見和觀點(diǎn)的能力。,一、英語(yǔ)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)對(duì)英語(yǔ)寫作技能的要求,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,6,(一)、活用教材的素材,培養(yǎng)學(xué)生創(chuàng)造性思維。 (二)、增加積累,要求學(xué)生收集在平時(shí)的閱讀 中摘錄好詞好句。 (三)、 加大課外閱讀量。,二、寫作教學(xué)的感悟與嘗試,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,7,(一).活用教材的素材,培養(yǎng)學(xué)生創(chuàng)造性思維,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,8,1在聽“Listening”的過
3、程中提高寫作能力,聽是語(yǔ)言的輸入,寫是語(yǔ)言的輸出。新教材每單元都有大量的聽力材料,這為語(yǔ)言的輸出做好了鋪墊。在聽力教學(xué)中,可以讓學(xué)生復(fù)述聽力材料,同時(shí)還讓他們寫在作文本上,也可以自己設(shè)計(jì)寫作任務(wù),請(qǐng)學(xué)生根據(jù)聽力內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作(編對(duì)話、作報(bào)告等方式)。,“以聽促寫”,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,9,例如:Unit6 Im going to study computer science(八年級(jí) 上 Section A 1b)),Girl: What do you want to be when you grow up? Cheng Han : I want to be a teacher.
4、Girl: Are you going to move to Beijing? Cheng Han: No, Im going to move to Shang Hai. Girl: And how are you going to become a teacher? Cheng Han: Well, Im going to learn how to teach children. Girl: When are you going to do start? Cheng Han: Im going to finish high school and college first.,2017年初中英
5、語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,10,例如:Unit6 Im going to study computer science(八年級(jí) 上 Section A 1b)),Why,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,11,在聽完聽力后,老師可設(shè)計(jì)簡(jiǎn)單的任務(wù): My dream,I am going to be a teacher when I grow up. Because I love children very much, I believe I can get on with them. I will teach them how to read carefully and how to play h
6、appily. I think its very happy to stay with children. How am I going to be a teacher? First :I must study hard and do well in all my lessons at school. Second: when I finish high school and college ,I am going to learn how to teach children. Shanghai is a beautiful city, I am going to move to Shangh
7、ai. I am looking forward to achieving my beautiful dream.,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,12,2在說“Speaking”的過程中提高寫作能力,學(xué)生口語(yǔ)句型結(jié)構(gòu)和表達(dá)方法是他們學(xué)習(xí)寫作的基礎(chǔ)。在對(duì)話的教學(xué)中,除了聽錄音、對(duì)話、表演和編寫相似的對(duì)話外,還可以要求學(xué)生把對(duì)話改寫成一段短文,這樣就要求學(xué)生在變成短文的過程中,注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、人稱和前后的邏輯關(guān)系,從而為寫作打下基礎(chǔ).,“以說促寫”,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,13,例如:八年級(jí)上Unit1( Section A 2d對(duì)話), Lisa告訴Mandy自己玩了長(zhǎng)時(shí)間電腦
8、感到不適,然后Mandy給出建議,在對(duì)此對(duì)話的認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)之后, 教師應(yīng)有意識(shí)地設(shè)計(jì)小作文: 你的朋友Jack由于長(zhǎng)時(shí)間玩電腦游戲,現(xiàn)在頭痛、眼睛不舒服、腰背酸痛,并且睡不好覺。寫一篇短文介紹一下他的情況,并給出你對(duì)他的建議。,Jack is my friend. He likes playing computer games very much. He often sits in the same way for too long without moving. Now he has a headache, sore eyes and a sore back. He doesnt sleep w
9、ell at night, so he feels tired every day. I think he should take breaks away from the computer. He shouldnt use the computer for a long time. He should do eye exercises to relax his eyes .And he should go to bed early at night. I think if he has a good rest, he will feel well soon.,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講
10、座,14,3在讀“Reading”的過程中提高寫作能力,“以讀促寫”,(1)仿寫,(2)續(xù)寫,方法一:精復(fù)習(xí),巧仿寫,方法二:重復(fù)述,巧仿寫,寫“讀后感”,遷移新話題,閱讀中提高寫作能力,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,15,T:When did the story happen ? S:At 9:00 am. T:Where did the story happen? S:OnZhuanghua Road T:Who was in the story? S: The bus driver, passenger, an old man , a woman T:What happened t
11、o the old men? S: The old man had a heart problem and should go to the hospital. T: What did the bus driver do ? S: The bus driver saw an old man lying on the side of the road, he stopped without thinking twice. He expected the passengers to get offThe passenger agreed to go with him. Some passenger
12、s helped him to move the man onto the bus T:How was the result? S:With the help of the bus driver and the passengers.the old man was saved on time by the doctor.,首先,結(jié)合教材設(shè)計(jì)了revision環(huán)節(jié),將本節(jié)寫作課所涉及的“5W,1H”句式和寫作所需素材進(jìn)行了高強(qiáng)度快節(jié)奏的問答操練,讓學(xué)生盡可能地獲取下階段寫作教學(xué)中所需的信息,完成“輸出”前的“輸入” 。,(1)仿寫,方法一:精復(fù)習(xí),巧仿寫,例如八年級(jí)下冊(cè)Section A 3a談
13、論一名司機(jī)及時(shí)救一位老人的故事。,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,16,其次,帶著學(xué)生一起對(duì)剛才的revision環(huán)節(jié)進(jìn)行梳理總結(jié),與學(xué)生一起將剛才凌亂的字詞、句子串起來形成了如下材料 : At 9:00 am yesterday,the bus driver saw an old man lying on the side of the road when he went along Zhuanghua Road.,最后,引導(dǎo)學(xué)生變換人稱,進(jìn)行整體感知,反復(fù)朗讀。 My father is a bus driver. His name is Wang ping. He is a kind
14、 man, He always likes helping others. At 9:00 am yesterday ,he saw an old man lying on the road when he was going along.He stopped.got off and askedhe knewtoldexpectedagreed with,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,17,方法二:重復(fù)述,巧仿寫,教師可以要求學(xué)生開展“復(fù)述接力”活動(dòng),通過這一系列活動(dòng),學(xué)生理解并掌握了文章中的重點(diǎn)單詞、詞組和句法的用法。 “復(fù)述接力”: At 9:00 a.m yesterday,the
15、 bus driver saw an old man lying on the side of the road when he went along Zhuanghua Road. 讓學(xué)生根據(jù)要求對(duì)原文從不同角度、不同人稱、不同活動(dòng)形式進(jìn)行再創(chuàng)造, 這是培養(yǎng)學(xué)生寫作能力的一條有效途徑。 My father is a bus driver. His name is Wang ping. He is a kind man, he always likes helping others. At 9:00 am yesterday ,he saw an old man lying on the ro
16、ad when he was going along.He stopped.got off and askedhe knewtoldexpectedagreed with,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,18,在閱讀教學(xué)中, 可以讓學(xué)生記錄下復(fù)述課文的內(nèi)容、 寫 “讀后感” 等,通過本單元的話題討論來提升,深化學(xué)生的寫作能力。 From the story , I was deeply moved .,(2)續(xù)寫,遷移新的話題 Helping others makes me happy,Should we help them when people need help?,2017年初中英語(yǔ)
17、中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,19,選自學(xué)生作業(yè),2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,20,Should we help them when people need help?,選自學(xué)生作業(yè),2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,21,4.利用圖片“picture”培養(yǎng)學(xué)生發(fā)散思維能力 (討論-分組寫作-小組間的互改-展示 ) 本教材圖文并茂, 材料豐富, 借助于每個(gè)單元相關(guān)話題中的圖片來激發(fā)了學(xué)生用口、筆來表達(dá)思想的欲望。教師可以讓學(xué)生先看課本上的圖片進(jìn)行分組討論,然后進(jìn)行完整的復(fù)述,最后,讓每個(gè)人寫出相應(yīng)的作文。,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,22,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,23,A:Y
18、ou dont look well. Your face looks a bit red. B: Yeah, and my head feels very hot. What should I do? A: Maybe you have a fever. You should take your temperature. B: Yes, youre right.,should 應(yīng)該 情態(tài)動(dòng)詞,后接動(dòng) 詞原形,Conversation 1,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,24,友誼類:A friend is easier lost than found. A friend in need i
19、s a friend indeed. 學(xué)習(xí)類:A good beginning makes a good ending. A good beginning is half done. Its never too old to learn. 時(shí)間類: Time is money . Never put off till tomorrow what may be done today. Time and tied wait for no man. 環(huán)保類: Earth is our home, you rely on green. Save the earth, Our Only Home. As
20、 we know , water is very important to man.,(二).增加積累,要求學(xué)生收集在平時(shí)的閱讀中摘錄好詞好句。,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,25,健康類:Health is happiness.健康就是幸福。 An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 勵(lì)志類: Failure is the mother of success. Where there is a will, there is a way. Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it. You h
21、ave to believe in yourself. Thats the secret of success. 其它: Practice makes perfect. (熟能生巧),2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,26,除教材外,盡量多用閱讀淺顯易懂的報(bào)刊、雜志,豐富課外閱讀,這是加強(qiáng)學(xué)生英語(yǔ)寫作能力的有效途徑。在平時(shí)的閱讀中強(qiáng)調(diào)文章結(jié)構(gòu)的嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)和互為鋪墊烘托的作用,對(duì)課本中的文章列出文章主線和優(yōu)美詞句,讓學(xué)生有積累語(yǔ)言素材的習(xí)慣并體會(huì)語(yǔ)言的美麗和邏輯完整性。,(三).課外閱讀,(四).培養(yǎng)寫日記的好習(xí)慣,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,27,近年書面表達(dá)的簡(jiǎn)要分析,2017年初中英語(yǔ)
22、中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,28,一、云南省歷年英語(yǔ)中考作文題:,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,29,二、書面表達(dá)命題特點(diǎn): 1、體裁以記敘文(夾議夾敘考查頻率高)、應(yīng)用文為主進(jìn)行考查。 2、寫作的話題,貼近學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)、生活實(shí)際,體現(xiàn)人文關(guān)懷,注重學(xué)生的真實(shí)體驗(yàn)和內(nèi)心世界,符合學(xué)生的年齡特點(diǎn)和生活實(shí)際,力求做到讓學(xué)生“有話可說,說真話;有情可抒,抒真情”,給了學(xué)生自由發(fā)揮的空間,有利于他們表達(dá)自己的真實(shí)感受, 3、寫作的主題體現(xiàn)情感、態(tài)度、意志、責(zé)任、價(jià)值觀。 4、試題貼近當(dāng)時(shí)的教育新聞和熱點(diǎn),有一定的實(shí)效性; 5、寫作所需的時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般過去時(shí)、一般將來時(shí)。 6、人稱以第一二人稱為主。,
23、2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,30,三、中考英語(yǔ)作文??荚掝},1.人物故事(自己、家庭、朋友、老師、個(gè)人變化、個(gè)人感受等) 2.假日旅行 3.校園生活(春游、校規(guī)、科目、學(xué)習(xí)困難等) 4.課外生活(家庭生活、家務(wù)勞動(dòng)、個(gè)人愛好等) 5.計(jì)劃愿望 6.節(jié)假日活動(dòng)(志愿者活動(dòng)、過去經(jīng)歷) 7.環(huán)境保護(hù) 8.健康生活(疾病、食品健康等) 9.情感表達(dá)(與人分享、關(guān)愛他人) 10.安全問題 11.觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,31,書面表達(dá)復(fù)習(xí)的建議,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,32,一、考前書面表達(dá)強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練原則: 1、從簡(jiǎn)易、基礎(chǔ)話題開始,吃透“三個(gè)一般”的時(shí)態(tài)寫作訓(xùn)練
24、,為后續(xù)的寫作做好鋪墊。 My life 10 years ago My life My life in 10 years 2. 強(qiáng)化中考主要體裁的寫作訓(xùn)練 (1)人物描寫 (2)一件事的描寫 (3)夾議夾敘體裁寫作,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,33,3、從“分類過關(guān)”開始,逐一把關(guān),舉一反三,觸類旁通,聯(lián)動(dòng)訓(xùn)練。 (1)描述過去發(fā)生的事件 (2)描寫未來計(jì)劃發(fā)生的文章 (3)通過記敘一件事情,體現(xiàn)或表達(dá)某種情感 (4)建議、鼓勵(lì)或感謝 4.引導(dǎo)學(xué)生學(xué)會(huì)寫作過程的遷移,從而實(shí)現(xiàn)同一素材、話題用于不同的寫作題目中。,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,34,My English teac
25、her 我的英語(yǔ)老師 I like my English teacher very much. She is Miss Green. She is young. She has beautiful and a pair of big eyes. We often find something from her eyes, such as happiness, sadness and so on. As a teacher, she loves teaching and she is strict with us. Sometimes I fear her a little. Miss Gree
26、n is kind to us. After class, she often talks with us. She tells us all the things in the world. She gives us not only knowledge but also many other things. This is my English teacher. I like my English teacher. 根據(jù)這篇文章要求會(huì)寫My mother My friend I cant forget the people等相關(guān)的文章。,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,35,How t
27、o face difficulty?,I was weak in English two years ago. I always failed in English exams,. But I thought I could study it well as long as I tried my best to study it, so I didnt give up studying but studied harder at it. I listened to the teacher more carefully and took notes in class. I spoke and r
28、ead it as much as possible. I finished homework on time. I asked the teacher for help. Finally, I made great progress and succeed in the final exam.,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,36,可遷移到以下題目中來,Happiness I should say thanks to An unforgettable thing My favorite person I never forget A real friend ,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作
29、文講座,37,How to,Its important for us toBut how can we do it. Here are a few opinions. Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, Finally (First, then ,Next, Besides, Whats more, At last) In a word In shortAll in all, We should I think believe If youwe,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,38,How To Get On Well With Classmates,Its very
30、important to get on well with classmates. If you can get on well with them, It can take us happiness and warmth. It can make our life colorful and lively. (第一段 總體闡述文章主題觀點(diǎn)及價(jià)值)There are some advice for you.(過渡句,進(jìn)入正題) Firstly, Learning to communicate with classmates is necessary I think you should be b
31、rave enough to express your ideas, you should be active in group work in class and try to talk with your classmates at break. Secondly. Being friendly and helpful is also very important. If you want to get on well with your classmates, dont forget to say hello when you meet them. When your classmate
32、s are in trouble, you should help and encourage them to face difficulties. Finally. Share happiness and success with your classmates together. When you share your experience, happiness, even success to others, youll get more happiness and youll lean from each other. (分三點(diǎn)闡述建議) In a word, we should va
33、lue friendship, we should get on well with classmates.(結(jié)尾:首尾呼應(yīng),進(jìn)一步確定主題觀點(diǎn)),2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,39,Making friends is a very important part of our life. Friends can give you a lot of help.,Firstly, if you are in trouble, you can turn to your good friends for help. Secondly, you can play with them and hav
34、e a good time. In short, we need friends. Thirdly, what is the true friendship? Some people think friends are people whom they can play with. However, I think a friend in need is a friend indeed. A true friend not only shares your happiness but also shares your trouble and worry.,In short,I wish to
35、make as many friends as possible, and I will try my best to make myself a good friend to others. Helping friends can make me happy.,How to make friends ?,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,40,范文: How to protect eyes? 如何保護(hù)眼睛? Everybody understands how important the eyes are! But how to protect the eyesight is still a
36、 problem among us students, or many of us. If you want to protect the eyes , you should pay attention to the following points: Firstly, you should not keep your eyes working for a long time. After you have studied for a long time, you had better have a rest by looking in the distance. Secondly, you
37、should keep your books a foot from your eyes when you read them. Dont read in a poor light or in the sun. Dont read in a moving bus or in the bed. Thirdly, doing eye exercises every day in order to keep good eyesight.,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,41,二、總復(fù)習(xí)階段抓好寫作環(huán)節(jié),1. 在詞匯復(fù)習(xí)中滲透寫作,2. 在語(yǔ)法復(fù)習(xí)中滲透寫作,3.在聽寫小測(cè)中滲透寫作,4. 批改和
38、講評(píng)中提升寫作,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,42,按教材順序,先復(fù)習(xí)每單元的詞匯 再整合本單元話題相關(guān)的詞、詞組和句子,加大積累量,九年級(jí) Unit 1 話題:Learning how to learn Talk about how to study,by reading aloud / by taking notes develop good learning habits the secret to language learning memorize sentence patterns look up the words in the dictionary review what
39、 we have learned / . . .,Practice makes perfect. Knowledge comes from questioning. There are some good ways to learn English. If you do this, youll make great progress. / . . .,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,43,如: 復(fù)習(xí)主格、賓格、物主代詞時(shí),寫作:“My friend” 復(fù)習(xí)一般將來時(shí),寫作:“My dream” 復(fù)習(xí)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),寫作:“Toms day” 復(fù)習(xí)“There be”句式和介詞,寫作:“My r
40、oom”,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,44,詞、詞組的聽寫 + 摘抄本上的句子的聽寫或默寫。,3.在聽寫聽力中滲透寫作,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,45,學(xué)生互改、老師批改、面批面改多種做法,也可幾種方法結(jié)合使用。,兩人或四人小組,互相批改 修改后上交,老師,選出好、中、差 找出普遍性問題和典型錯(cuò)誤,課上,學(xué)生先改錯(cuò) 講評(píng)總結(jié) 范文(也可以是學(xué)生的習(xí)作),2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,46,三、書面表達(dá)的解題步驟,審,列,加,連,寫,查,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,47,審要求、審文體、審時(shí)態(tài)、審人稱、,審,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,48,列,理清思路,
41、列出提綱,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,49,加,加首尾,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,50,開篇段的寫作技巧: 1.點(diǎn)題法: Its very important for us . My name is I have a . Different people have different ideas aboutThere are Now, Ill tell you an interesting a special 2.設(shè)問法: Do you have? Whats ? Why do we learn?How do you know.? 3.諺語(yǔ)式開頭 例如 “The Value
42、of Time” 一文可以這樣開頭 A proverb says “Time is money”, but I think time is even more important than money. Why? Because when money is spent, we can get it again. However, when time is gone, it will never return. Thats why we must value our time. “How to face the difficulty?”一文可以這樣開頭 As the saying goes: “
43、Nothing is impossible if you put you heart into it”, 4.下定義式開頭 通過對(duì)文章要討論的問題,尤其是人們不太熟悉的主題進(jìn)行釋義來引出論題此法易于點(diǎn)明主題,多用于說明文或議論文。 例如 “honesty”一文的開頭可以這樣:Honesty means speaking the truth and being fair in act. Honesty is a good habit.,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,51,5.交代目的式開頭 在文章的開頭就點(diǎn)明作者的寫作目的,直入主題。 例如 “Language of communicati
44、on”一文的開頭可為: In order to master the skill to express yourselves in speaking and writing from the spoken and written words of others. No matter what you want to say, language is the most important skill you have to master. 6.數(shù)據(jù)式開頭 在開頭引用一些調(diào)查統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)據(jù)把問題擺在讀者的面前,然后加以分析,借以提出主題。例如 “Childrens Crimes” 一文的開頭可為: Ac
45、cording to the local newspaper, each year there are about ten thousand children make kinds of crimes , and the number is still growing . 7.故事式開頭 文章一開始就講一個(gè)你自己或他人生活中的一個(gè)故事,用生動(dòng)而讀者熟悉的趣事把讀者吸引住,漸而引向主題。例如: “The right use of money” 一文可以這樣開頭: When I was a little girl, in my eyes ,money was a wonderful thing.
46、It meant candies, toys and beautiful thing. Now , I have grown up, I find that so many adults love money more than children. 8)環(huán)境式開頭 在文章的開頭,先把人物,事件,環(huán)境以及事件發(fā)生的時(shí)間,地點(diǎn)或背景描述清楚,以此引出主題。例如 “My first day at school”一文可以這樣開頭: September 1st,2005 was my first day at Hongxing Middle School. Everything was new to m
47、e. There was a song in my heart and cheer on my face.,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,52,1.因果型: So I think As a result. For this reason 2.歸納型: On the whole In a word To make a long story short.Finally, I hope Remember thatFrom what has been said above, we can seeWe can conclude thatI want to make a final point 3.
48、表態(tài)型: I think its too I likedislike.In my opinionFrom this we know. LuckilyNothing is more important than,結(jié)尾段的寫作技巧,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,53,連,指導(dǎo)學(xué)生把寫好的句子根據(jù)事件發(fā)生的先后次序,使用一些表示并列、遞進(jìn)、轉(zhuǎn)折的過渡詞等對(duì)句子進(jìn)行加工,使文章更加自然流暢。,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,54,查,全面仔細(xì)地檢查(緊扣主題,行文邏輯,選詞準(zhǔn)確,語(yǔ)法正確,習(xí)慣表達(dá)是否正確),2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,55,寫,規(guī)范書寫,卷面整潔,字跡清秀,2017
49、年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,56,書寫、卷面 - 一條隱藏的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,57,書寫、卷面 - 一條隱藏的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,58,You should be careful to make friends. You should think much more when you make friends.,She arrived early. She arrived as early as she could.,四、“寫”的技巧 Writing skills,1. 善用高級(jí)詞匯,增加文采,I dont eat junk food. I
50、 stay away from junk food.,I wish you can help me. Im looking forward to your help.,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,59,2. 活用多種句型,表達(dá)靈活,他還小,搬不動(dòng)這么重的箱子。,He is very young. He cant carry the heavy box. He is too young to carry the heavy box. He is so young that he cant carry the heavy box. He is not old enough to carry
51、 the heavy box.,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,60,3. 妙用關(guān)聯(lián)詞,行文流暢,增加層次感,表層次: 1. first, second, third, last but not least 2. firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally 3. to begin with, then, furthermore, finally 4. to start with, next, in addition, finally 5. most important of all, moreover, finally 6. on the one hand, o
52、n the other hand 表轉(zhuǎn)折: but, however, yet, though, although, after all, instead, instead of 表因果: because, because of, so, therefore, thanks to, since, as a result, thus,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,61,表解釋: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact 表遞進(jìn): not o
53、nlybut (also), whats more, whats worse, also, besides, in addition, moreover, furthermore, above all, more importantly 表強(qiáng)調(diào): also, besides, especially, actually 表議論: I think, in my opinion, as far as Im concerned 概括總結(jié): All in all, In a word, In short, In general, Generally speaking, In conclusion, As
54、 for me, As we all know, As far as I know, It goes without saying that,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,62,4. 妙用諺語(yǔ)(proverbs),錦上添花,It is good for us to take exercise.,As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”,As the saying goes, “No pain, no gain.”,We should focus on our study.,It is good fo
55、r us to do more exercises.,As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.”,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,63,Actions speak louder than words. 行動(dòng)勝于空談。 Better late than never. 遲做總比不做好。 Easier said than done. 說起來容易,做起來難。 Failure is the mother of success. 失敗乃成功之母。 Never do things by halves. 切勿半途而廢。 Never say die. 絕不要輕
56、言放棄。 The early bird catches the worm. 早起的鳥兒有蟲吃。 Time and tide wait for no man. 歲月不待人。 Well begun is half done. 好的開端是成功的一半。 Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。 Health is better than wealth. 健康勝于財(cái)富。 . . .,More useful proverbs,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,64,高頻話題寫作指導(dǎo),2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,65,中考前作文訓(xùn)練,1. An
57、unforgettable day/ person/thing 2. Love around me 3. It Changed Me 4. Sharing happiness 5. Growing up happily/healthily 6. My colorful school life 7. I Believe I can do it 8. Face Failure Bravely 9. A Good Teacher in My Eyes 10. peaceful school, happy life,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,66,11. Out-of-class Activ
58、ities/Weekend Activities 12. My visit to_ 13. Learn to Smile 14. I want to thank _ 15. My favorite _ 16. Doing something I can do 17. Friendship is very important 18. Let me tell you how to learn English. 19.How to be happy? 20.The Green city, the Healthy Life,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,67,21.AAn dayweekend
59、22.My plans for the Senior High School 23.My favorite traditional Story 24.How I have changed 25.Music makes me 26. What is beautiful in your mind? 27. Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves 28. Love around me 29. Good Ways in Learning 30. Save Food and Eat Healthily,2017年初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)作文講座,68,31. My future dream 32. How Can We Protect Ourselves 33. When I face to 34. What We Get from Sports 35. How to Deal with the Exam Stress? 36. How to Deal with Difficulties inLearning 37. Refuse to be phubbers (低頭族) 38. A Sunshine Teenager 39. How to Develop Good Habits 40. My opinion on using the mobile
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