2016105培養(yǎng)聽說讀寫技能的先決條件是說寫詳解

1、培養(yǎng)聽說讀寫技能的先決條件是說寫【之四】張鐵城2016、10、5發(fā)送中國學(xué)生要重視寫的訓(xùn)練必然會提高說的能力這是我們熟悉的英語教學(xué)大師亞歷山大的主張“ Speaking and writing are the most importantof these skills, since to some extent, they presuppose the other two. ” 譯文:“說與寫在這幾 種能力中，是最重要的，因為在某種程度上，這兩種能力是另外兩種能力的 先決條件?！薄疽姡簛啔v山大 (L.G.AIexander )在新概念英語第二 冊(全英語版 p.viii )】遺憾的是|:我們北

2、京高考的書面表達分數(shù)一直不高。2009年北京英語高考書面表達滿分35分，但是平均分數(shù)只有17.5分，相當(dāng)于100分的50分。第五章新加坡中學(xué)作文準備向真正的英語原著過渡比賽成績公布通知原文及四篇I 一等獎獲獎作文共計2,874個英語單詞（一）一級詞匯統(tǒng)計：1,071 個單詞【在這里，你將看到“全國山河一片紅”。Lookingat her highsmalland full , she waslike an work of art,and I was thewho createdher . Everyfeatureon her face was and . Shewas a. She at he

3、rself , in the .What do you think? ” I asked“t it -s-Thank you so much. You are shebefore intoShe looks good even when she cries! ”1thought with aher of and high up andme . She looked so different from when shefirst came to me. Her and line were a put offbut I managed to them into features that were

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6、haveyet another successful record under my . However , there was one case, where the endresult wasn t so.It was at the beginning of my I had justfromschool and Ito be a . Not only because of thebig that I would receive once every month , but the thought of helping people change their lives for the b

7、etter was all too. I wasn t a, but I. Years ofwanted to feel the I get from seeing my patients enjoying their lives after having . Think about the, attention and they would getThus , I and worked hard to become ato a doctorpaid off when I was accepted as anHe was a man, for being the most, andman in

8、 the business . Though he had a near he was always and and never let anyone down He taught me many things and I them like water . I was very to my first but he always reminded me to beMy big came when announced that I was good enough to things on my own. My first patientwas ayoung lady who felt beca

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13、illI wanted to makethere was almost none leftit up to her so but she refused tome . That wasthe worst part .From that experience, I had never toa againMy world was with and I was feeling so downand . Why wouldI want to risk anotherperson s life with myI all patients and stoppedworking . was in me an

14、d came forward to encourage me. I could never forget his words.“You have to pick yourself up from where youfell . Living inwould nother for her in any way .You have to prove yourself to me , and all your future patients that need your help all the people for a right now . They would be so if you cou

15、ld help them , and I know you want to . Come on , this wouldn t be as hard as you think.Take one at a time and I know that you can achieve great things . Just remember what youdid wrong the last time and never do it again.Have in yourself ! ”Thinkingthrough hiswords, I was . Whathesaid was true and

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27、。一個初中學(xué)生居然能夠以 第一人稱的口吻，講述一位青年整形外科醫(yī)生經(jīng)歷失敗，再 次重新站立起來并且取得成功的故事，確實很不簡單。她使 用的一級詞匯|的占全文詞匯總數(shù) 79% 以上，同時使用的詞 匯不僅超出中學(xué)生應(yīng)該掌握的3500 個基礎(chǔ)詞匯，而且還使用了 76個高端詞匯，超出麥克米倫辭典標注的7500個詞匯，占全文詞匯總數(shù) 5.65% ，這說明她不但文學(xué)原著 閱讀量很大，而且模仿文學(xué)原著的寫作能力也非常高。NO.6C第四節(jié)第三篇獲獎作文一等獎2008年新加坡南華中學(xué)作文比賽中三1班Li Yanzhest1 Prize - Secondary Three CategoryLi Yanzhe （3

28、01）“What will my life be like? ” I wondered.As a n ewborn silkworm resti ng in my cozy coco on, my mi nd was filled with curiosity. Won der was the theme of my life. I enjoyed ask ing all sorts of questi ons about life, and equally enjoyed givi ng each of the questi ons my own an swer based on my im

29、agi nati on.Curled in a warm corner of my solitary“ Will the outside world be freez ing and harsh for me? space, I sudde nly felt in secure.“ Will I encounter enemies and be hurt by them in that world? ” Heavily struck by the appalling idea, I started to squirm involuntarily.“ Will I successfully fi

30、nd a comfortable shelter and some food to live on in that world? ”I glanced at the soothing silk around me, unable to control the escalating suspicion which had long been fermenting.That world suddenly seemed very distant and scary to me. An uncanny pang of invincible fear gripped me and threatened

31、to overwhelm me. “That world, ”I murmured, feeling vulnerable.“ That scary world of danger and loneliness - I do not want! ” My fear flared and melted into petulant anger smoldering violently.Under the onslaught of such fear, my interest in an adventurous journey of discovery waned. Gradually, I beg

32、an to repel this outside world. The call of adventure trailed off as I feverishly spun more silk and built a thicker and thicker wall barricading me from the world, until the world disappeared in my mind.I sank into a seemingly eternal state of serenity in my limited space, yet my heart pounded viol

33、ently against my chest, as if fear was determined to deprive me of the original privilege of peace that I had enjoyed. The fear melted into fatigue which penetrated every nerve of my body. Feeling drowsy and listless, I dozed off.I dreamt of the mysterious world which scared me before; I dreamt of l

34、ife and death; I dreamt of my future, my love and my hatred. The dream seemed endless. My brain was on the verge of exploding.The dream did have an end, which was when the unbearable stifling air around me wakened me.No sooner did I open my sleepy eyes than I sensed something wrong around me.The unb

35、roken darkness engulfed me completely, blinded me and upset me. Although I waited for ages, the brightness remained hidden. Not until I bumped into the wall of my chrysalis did I realize that my cocoon had hardened and was no longer cozy. My previous ignorant action of wrapping myself turned out to

36、be a fatuous and harmful way of venting my frustration I hadconfined myself within an airtight silk-made chamber which even light could not pass through.Time flew without stopping while I grew weaker and weaker as if under an insidious curse. Just as I was viciously deprived of my physical strength,

37、 I miraculously retrieved my mental sobriety.“I must escape from this living hell. It is life-threatening! ” The idea of death made me shudder, and the fear started to brew again. It was not the same fear which had made me flinch earlier. Rather, it was a kind of fear which moulded my willpower into

38、 working in overdrive.“I must find light! I must gain freedom! ” The fear was surprisingly transformed into a strong determination and ceaselessly stirred me to struggle out of the confinement of ignorance and cowardice.“I must figure a way to survive! I must face the world! ” My fear rose again and

39、 became a turbulent torrent of motivation.Torrents of motivation were strengthened by a burning desire for survival. It flooded my mind and chased away the initial lingering fear.“ Bang! ”I made my first attempt to break out of the confinement by bumping my body against the wall of the chrysalis. I

40、repeated the attempt a few times in a bid to create an access to the outside world, although I did not know whether this action would reap success.“Bang! Bang! ” I persevered in making a hole. Once. Twice. Thrice I did not stop.Blood streaked down my painful body which was riddled with scalding wounds. Yet, the craving for survival outrivaled the physical affliction. Heedless of my wounds and