2019-2020學年高中英語Unit4EarthquakesSectionⅤWriting—如何寫新聞報道教案（含解析）

1、學必求其心得，業(yè)必貴于專精section writing - 如何寫新聞報道文體感知新聞報道是記敘文的一種，其特點是以事實為依據，對人的經歷或事實給予明確的、實事求是的報道.寫作規(guī)范題目要求星光中學(xingguang high school)近期舉行了一次登山活動.假定你是學校英語報記者，請寫一篇短文，報道此次活動。內容包括：1時間與地點:4月10日,大青山(daqing mountain)；2活動的過程;3你對于這次活動的評論。注意：可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。第一步：審題謀篇一、審題1體裁:記敘文；2話題:報道活動；3人稱:第三人稱；4時態(tài)：敘述事件用一般過去時；評論用一般現在時。二、

2、構思第一段:點出活動的時間、地點、人物和目的；第二段:描寫活動的過程；第三段：談談對活動的認識.第二步:詞匯推敲1take_outdoor_exercise參加戶外運動2set_off_for 動身去某地3in_high_spirits 情緒高漲4fall_behind 落在后面5be_of_great_benefit_to 對很有益處6organize_a_mountain.climbing_activity 組織爬山活動7enjoy_fresh_air 享受新鮮空氣8get_close_to_nature 接近大自然第三步：句式鍛造1為了鼓勵同學們參加戶外運動，我們學校于4月10日組織了登

3、山活動.in_order_to_encourage_the_students_to_take_outdoor_exercise,_our school organized a mountain。climbing activity on april 10.2我們幾百個人參加了這項活動。hundreds of us took_part_in this activity.3有些人落后了。some fell_behind。4其他的人愿意來提供幫助。others would come and offer_help.5我們沐浴在陽光下。we were bathed_in sunshine。6我們高興得歡呼

4、跳躍。we jumped and cheered with_joy.7.這不僅讓我們接近了大自然，從沉重的學業(yè)中得以放松,也增強了我們的友誼.it not only got us close_to nature and gave us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us。第四步:句式升級8用定語從句合并1、2句。in order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a m

5、ountain.climbing activity on april 10, which_hundreds_of_us_took_part_in.9用when合并3、4句。when_some_fell_behind,_others_would_come_and_offer_help。10用非謂語動詞合并5、6句。bathed_in_sunshine，_we jumped and cheered with joy.11用倒裝句改寫第7句.not_only_did_it_get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school

6、work， it also promoted the friendship among us。第五步：妙筆成篇_參考答案：in order to encourage students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountainclimbing activity on april 10， which hundreds of us took part in。it was a fine day. at 8 am, we gathered at the foot of daqing mountain and set off for

7、 the top in high spirits。 all the way we were chatting， singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery。 when some fell behind, others would come and offer help. about 2 hours later, we all reached the top。 bathed in sunshine， we jumped and cheered with joy.the activity is of

8、great benefit to us。 not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work， but also promoted the friendship among us。 what a wonderful time！寫作提升假設你是李華,是校英文報“環(huán)球實事”欄目組的小編輯，日本港口城市熊本發(fā)生了連續(xù)的地震，請根據下列要點寫一篇報道。1地震的基本信息：前震：2017年4月14日晚上21點26分；震源深度11千米.主震：2017年4月16日凌晨1點25分；震源深度10千

9、米。2傷亡情況：至少40人死亡、上千人受傷、大量建筑倒塌起火、許多人搬出他們的家。3祝愿災區(qū)早日重建.注意:1詞數:100左右；2可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。提示詞匯:熊本市 kumamoto前震foreshock主震 main shock答案:the kumamoto earthquakes are a series of earthquakes, including a main shock which struck at 01：25 am on april 16,2017， at a depth of about 10 km， and a foreshock earthquake at

10、 9：26 pm on april 14, 2017, at a depth of about 11 km。 the two earthquakes killed at least 40 people and more than one thousand people got injured。 with so many buildings falling down and catching fire， a great number of people have moved out of their homes。 we hope that people in the disaster area

11、can lead a normal life and have their beautiful homes rebuilt soon。增分佳句1陳述事實常用的句型：（1）a terrible storm hit/struck japan.強風暴襲擊了日本。（2)it was a cool autumn night when the accident happened.事故發(fā)生在一個涼爽的秋夜。（3）with the help of the rescue team， people who were trapped in the flood were saved。在救援隊的幫助下，困在洪水中的人們得救了。2陳述觀點常用的句型：clearly/obviously/in my opinion/it seemed that people were shocked。顯然/在我看來/似乎人們震驚了。3揭示原因常用的句型：because of/as a result of/thanks to the help of the army