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1、高品質(zhì)文檔高考英語作文滿分題目:假設(shè)你是李華,你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文,來信請(qǐng)你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖畫提供的信息,寫信介紹住房的情況,并告知住房面積為25平方米,月租500元。注意:1.詞數(shù):100左右:2.參考詞匯:房租Tent(n.).Im very happy to receive your letter, and Im glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fan

2、gcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this

3、 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but Ill try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!All the best!Yours, Li Hua滿分理由本文格式正確,

4、意思表述完整,行文流暢自然。在寫作過程中注意長短句并用,還使用了以which,引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句,從而使文章層次分明,富于變化,不愧為考場佳作。Dear Bob,Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and therere three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a ba

5、throom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please

6、tell me the time you arrive Then IU be able to meet you at the airport, see you.Best wishes !Yours, Li Hua滿分理由2本文格式正確,內(nèi)容完整,表述清楚,銜接緊密流暢,時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)使用準(zhǔn)確,特別是結(jié)尾末段適度的發(fā)揮,既充實(shí)了內(nèi)容,又符合邏輯,成為本文與眾不同的亮點(diǎn)。Dear Bob,How are you these daysIm so glad to know that youll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a

7、 place for you. Now Ive found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. Its just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think i

8、t is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope youll like it. If not, Ill try to find another place for you.Yours,Li Hua滿分理由3本文內(nèi)在邏輯性很強(qiáng),由遠(yuǎn)及近。由外及內(nèi),層次分明,錯(cuò)落有致。同時(shí)讓步狀語從句運(yùn)用得恰到好處,很出彩,再則結(jié)構(gòu)完整,從開頭的問候語到結(jié)尾都很完備。Dear Bob,Im so glad that you are coming to learn Chinese here. Ive already found you

9、 a house near our school. Id like to tell you something about it.You may get on No.ll bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School. The house is near the school. It is about 25 square metres. In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table nea

10、r the window. You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it. There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom. The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen. So you may cook by yourself. The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month. Hope youll enjoy staying here!Yours,Li Hua滿分

11、理由4本文內(nèi)容具體,詳略得當(dāng),表述方式很有創(chuàng)造力和新意,長短句并用,語言結(jié)構(gòu)富于變化,錯(cuò)落有致,順暢圓潤,尤其是情態(tài)動(dòng)詞和分詞的運(yùn)用很獨(dú)到,為文章增色不少。Dear Bob,Im glad to hear from you.Welcome to our city in september. Ive found a suitable house for you. The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one st

12、op.It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. I

13、t will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.Yours,Li Hua2021高考英語滿分作文題目2(上海):描述你在學(xué)校的一次午餐,具體要求如下:詳細(xì)描述用餐的情況簡要表述你對(duì)這次午餐的感受這是一篇簡單卻需要挖掘的文章,因?yàn)槿绻皇敲枋鲇貌颓闆r,顯然缺乏深度,夸夸其談,流于表面。學(xué)生拿到這樣的題目需要仔細(xì)考慮用餐背后的東西。比較容易想到的話題是食物浪費(fèi)、用餐衛(wèi)生、餐桌禮儀等。在創(chuàng)作范文中,筆者另辟蹊徑,通過大多數(shù)同齡人用餐時(shí)的匆忙來襯托我的悠然自得,凸

14、顯出在緊張的高中學(xué)生生涯中,能夠留有一片心靈凈土,通過飲食來調(diào)節(jié)情緒,更好地面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn),表現(xiàn)出樂觀的人生態(tài)度。此文結(jié)構(gòu)簡單,文筆清新,語言精準(zhǔn),并運(yùn)用了高中階段常見的語法結(jié)構(gòu),不失為一個(gè)很好的作文模板,供學(xué)生借鑒。滿分范文:The instant the bell indicating the endof the last class rang, out of theclassroompoured all students but one。Unlikemy peers, I was in no hurry tomake a run for the school canteen, to rush

15、through lunch and to return to the classroomfor homework. I arrived at the canteenwhen amassive queue had formed.Waitingformy turn patiently, I smelled the aroma ofthe appetizing food. Greasy as some dishesmight be, thewide range of food preparedby the schoolwas superior in nutritional val-ue to tha

16、t foundelsewhere.The typical schedule of a highschooleris extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch breakis a rare timewhen overworked students canwind down and enjoy the pleasure providedby the flavorful food. Imake it a point topampermy taste buds by savoring every littlebit of taste in food.What I us

17、ually like todo over lunch is have amindless conversa-tionwith a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses along the bonebreaking journey through high school. Werounded off our lunch with a dessert, re-freshed and satisfied。 Come to think of it, it is not the foodbutmy attitude toward

18、s life that affordsmepleasure and empowersme in facing up tovarious challenges.(219words)高考英語滿分作文精選:假設(shè)你叫王明,昨天收到了筆友David的e-mail,得知他不久要到北京來學(xué)習(xí)中文。他想了解如何學(xué)好中文。請(qǐng)你用英文給他回復(fù)一封e-mail,介紹學(xué)習(xí)中文的體會(huì)和方法,提出你的建議,以及表達(dá)你幫助他學(xué)好中文的愿望?!緷M分例文】Dear David,Im glad youll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. Its difficult for you because its quite different from English. Yo

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