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1、.1A letter of suggestions .2A letter of suggestions 假如你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你的美國朋友假如你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你的美國朋友Jim對于漢語產(chǎn)生了興趣，來信向你咨詢。請給對于漢語產(chǎn)生了興趣，來信向你咨詢。請給Jim寫寫封回信，內(nèi)容包括：封回信，內(nèi)容包括： 內(nèi)容涵蓋：內(nèi)容涵蓋：1. 學(xué)習(xí)漢語的好處學(xué)習(xí)漢語的好處 2. 提出學(xué)習(xí)漢語的建議提出學(xué)習(xí)漢語的建議 3. 預(yù)祝學(xué)習(xí)成功，并邀請來北京玩預(yù)祝學(xué)習(xí)成功，并邀請來北京玩. Criteria of the composition 內(nèi)容的完整性 結(jié)構(gòu)的清晰性 語言的準(zhǔn)確性 交際的得體性.3D

2、ear Jim,Para1:Para2: Para3:Para4: Yours, Li Hua 根據(jù)要求根據(jù)要求適度開放適度開放美好祝愿美好祝愿誠摯邀請誠摯邀請開門見山開門見山交代事由交代事由Structure . 1.內(nèi)容的完整性：內(nèi)容的完整性：2.交際的得體性：交際的得體性：Learning Chinese can help youYou can/ should /had better doHaving known that you are, I I hope that you cangreeting and writing purposebenefits (3-5 /30-40w)sug

3、gestions (5-8 /50-80w)best wishes and invitation.41 .Writing purpose (Which one is better? why?) . Having known that you are learning Chinese now, I am writing to give you some advice on Chinese learning, which hopefully could be helpful for you. .Having known that you have a keen interest in learni

4、ng Chinese, I am more than delighted and I would like to tell you something about it.2. Benefits _What benefits can you think of? _3. Suggestions _1)What suggestions can you give? _ _Discuss in your group .5 writing purpose Having known that you have a keen interest in learning Chinese, I am more th

5、an delighted and here I would like to share some of my thoughts with you.題目信息：你的美國朋友題目信息：你的美國朋友Jim對于漢語對于漢語產(chǎn)生了興趣，來信向你咨詢。產(chǎn)生了興趣，來信向你咨詢。background informationwriting purpose .語言的準(zhǔn)確性及結(jié)構(gòu)的清晰性：語言的準(zhǔn)確性及結(jié)構(gòu)的清晰性： .6Are they benefits? Chinese is one of the most important language in the world . 1. Chinese is spok

6、en by most of the people in the world. 2. Benefits _What benefits can you think of? _ Therefore, being able to speak Chinese can help you.7 1. take Chinese courses 2. listen to Chinese songs& watch Chinese movies 3. make Chinese friends 4. read Chinese books 5. make a study plan and keep to it 6

7、. practise every day 3. Suggestions _1)What suggestions can you give? _ _.8How to give suggestions in complete sentences? You can/ should /had better do doing sth can help you It is also necessary/ important for you to do It will be helpful if you can It also works if It will be a good idea if What

8、is most important is that Make sentences by using the key words and the structure.91.What is most important is to chat with your Chinese friends. 徐新蕾2. It also works if you try to make more Chinese friends, with whom you can practise your spoken Chinese. 李宇軒Which one is better?.101. Besides, it is n

9、ecessary for you to make a study plan and follow it. Whats more 李清泉2. To attain a high level of fluency and accuracy in a foreign language, you should make a study plan and keep to it. 趙滿怡Which one is better?.11What is the problem? First, youd better set achievable targets. Second, it is also necess

10、ary for you to create a rich language environment. Whats more, it is important that you must know why you are learning Chinese. 趙巖.121. You had better take some Chinese classes. The teachers can create a rich language environment in the classroom. 6鄭聯(lián)2. First of all, it is very important for you to

11、attend Chinese class because the teachers in the class can give you an adequate amount of input conveyed to you through various mediums. 7賈易寧Appreciation .13How many suggestions should you give?How to link the suggestions together?Linkings: To start with Besides In addition Whats more Most important

12、ly,.14 分值分值評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)說明評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)說明第一檔第一檔(13分分-15分分) 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 1內(nèi)容完整，內(nèi)容完整，2條理清楚；條理清楚； 3交際得體，交際得體，表達(dá)時表達(dá)時充分考慮到了交際的需求充分考慮到了交際的需求； 4體現(xiàn)出體現(xiàn)出較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力。完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第二檔第二檔（9分分-12分）分）基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)?；就瓿闪嗽囶}規(guī)定的任務(wù)。內(nèi)容、條理和交際等方面內(nèi)容、條理和交際等方面要求；要求；所用語法和詞匯所用語法和詞匯；語法和用詞方面語法和用詞方面，但不影響理解。，但不影響理解。

13、基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的?；具_(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第三檔第三檔（4分分-8分）分） 未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。，語法或用詞方面的，語法或用詞方面的錯誤影響錯誤影響對所寫內(nèi)容的理解對所寫內(nèi)容的理解未能清楚地傳達(dá)信息。未能清楚地傳達(dá)信息。第四檔第四檔（1分分-3分分未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。寫了少量相關(guān)信息；寫了少量相關(guān)信息；語法或用詞方面錯誤較多，嚴(yán)重影響了對所寫內(nèi)容的理解。語法或用詞方面錯誤較多，嚴(yán)重影響了對所寫內(nèi)容的理解。0未能傳達(dá)任何信息；寫的內(nèi)容與要求無關(guān)。未能傳達(dá)任何信息；寫的內(nèi)容與要求無關(guān)。.15Possible versionDear

14、Jim, Having known that you have a keen interest in learning Chinese, I am more than delighted and I would like to tell you something about it. As we all know, Chinese has become one of the most important languages in the world with the rapid development of China. Therefore, being able to speak Chine

15、se can help you stand out and get ahead both in your college and future career. Here I would like to give you some suggestions on learning Chinese. To start with, it will be of great help if you can take some Chinese courses , which can ensure you an adequate amount of input in Chinese. Besides, you

16、 can make some Chinese.16friends. Being able to communicate with native Chinese frequently is how you improve your spoken Chinese. Whats more, you can set achievable targets, such as listening to Chinese songs and reading Chinese newspapers or magazines to get greater comprehension. I wish you succe

17、ss in Chinese learning and hope you can come to Beijing soon. I am willing to be your guide. Yours, Li Hua .17Dear Jim, Having known that you have a strong interest in learning Chinese, I am more than delighted and here I would like to share some of my thoughts with you. Since Chinese is recognized

18、as one of the oldest languages worldwide which carries the thousand-year history of China, there is no escaping the fact that the learning process will turn out to be rewarding and fruitful. Each character has its own unique story so that what you learn is not only the polished shape and diverse combination of the words but also the hidden culture behind the graceful sentences. .18 In order to start off quite smoothly, you may need to make a learning plan elaborately. By breaking every part in