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1、英語寫作技巧英語寫作技巧 v一、詞匯選擇一、詞匯選擇標新立異標新立異v二、結構造句二、結構造句與眾不同與眾不同v三、布局謀篇三、布局謀篇獨具匠心獨具匠心 1一一.在寫作中在寫作中“較高級詞匯較高級詞匯”的使用主要是指使用的使用主要是指使用大綱大綱上沒有的詞語、上沒有的詞語、使用通過構詞法變化來的新詞、使用同（近）義詞或反義詞等來代替常見使用通過構詞法變化來的新詞、使用同（近）義詞或反義詞等來代替常見詞語。詞語。v1）這棟房子在芳草街的一棟樓上。vA: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.vB: The flat situates in a b

2、uilding on Fangcao Street.v分析：is in是常見詞語，而situates in則是大綱上沒有的，屬于高級詞匯。v2）在周末我們做很多作業(yè)。vA: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.vB: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.v分析：B句在表達時沒有使用過于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由大綱詞匯end加后綴-less變化來的。v3）洗澡間和廚房都很好。vA: The bathroom and the kitchen are

3、 good.vB. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.v在表達要點時，B句使用了well-furnished，這比good語氣強，也顯得生動。v在造句時，“較高級詞匯”如能運用貼切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一個，也會使你的作文顯示出與眾不同。2v2.使用一些強勢句式，如強調句、感嘆句、倒裝句等，增強語句的表現(xiàn)力。如：v 3）阿福救了我妹妹。vA: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)vB: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(強調句式)v4）我們看到莊稼和蔬菜長勢喜人很是高興.vB

4、: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感嘆句)vA: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陳述句)3在造句時，既要使句子生動，又要使其簡明扼要在造句時，既要使句子生動，又要使其簡明扼要 v1.使用與人不同的表達方式，特別是提倡打破漢語句子結構的束縛而重組的句子更受歡迎。v1）唐山曾在二十世紀八十年代發(fā)生過一次大地震。vA: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.v

5、B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.v大多數(shù)同學使用了there be結構，這是對的，但是B句卻摒棄了常見句式，另辟蹊徑而使用了“主語+謂語+賓語”結構，且使用了terrible，hit/strike這樣的詞匯，更是難能可貴的。43.3.句式多樣，復雜得體。在寫作中應避免使用相同長度的相同句型，而句式多樣，復雜得體。在寫作中應避免使用相同長度的相同句型，而應注意句式的變化，如長短句結合，簡單句、并列句與復合句共用，還應注意句式的變化，如長短句結合，簡單句、并列句與復合句共用，還可使用簡化句等；一些較復雜的結構如獨立

6、主格，分詞結構等也可使用?？墒褂煤喕涞龋灰恍┹^復雜的結構如獨立主格，分詞結構等也可使用。下面的表達中下面的表達中A A句簡單句多，而且多處使用句簡單句多，而且多處使用there bethere be結構，顯得單調、乏結構，顯得單調、乏味，而味，而B B句就有自己的特色句就有自己的特色 v5 5）這是一套）這是一套2525平方米的住房，住房里面有臥室、有洗平方米的住房，住房里面有臥室、有洗澡間、有廚房；臥室里有床、沙發(fā)、桌子和椅子等。澡間、有廚房；臥室里有床、沙發(fā)、桌子和椅子等。vA: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a A: Its a fl

7、at of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.there is a sofa, a desk

8、 and a chair as well.vB: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. 5vOpin

9、ions are divided on the question.Opinions are divided on the question.v60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where believe a public park shoul

10、d be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build keep some people away. What is more,

11、 it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.vOn the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because yo

12、u need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.v1 1）該文使用）該文使用Opinions are divided

13、.Opinions are divided.作交代句，開門見山，隨后兩個段落均使作交代句，開門見山，隨后兩個段落均使用了主題句（見黑體字部分），使全文結構緊湊，表達嚴謹。用了主題句（見黑體字部分），使全文結構緊湊，表達嚴謹。v2 2）在表述要點時范文還對要點出場順序作了調整，如）在表述要點時范文還對要點出場順序作了調整，如40%40%的同學認為應收門票，的同學認為應收門票，但不宜過高但不宜過高 ，前部分作為主題句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：，前部分作為主題句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：They They suggestedsuggested，howeverhowever，fee

14、s should be charged low.fees should be charged low.這樣就分清了輕重緩急，主題突這樣就分清了輕重緩急，主題突出，條理清楚。出，條理清楚。v3 3）范文使用了）范文使用了andand，what is morewhat is more，howeverhowever等連詞，在段落之間使用了等連詞，在段落之間使用了on the on the other handother hand（說明前后兩個觀點是相悖的），這些連接手段的運用加強了句子之間、（說明前后兩個觀點是相悖的），這些連接手段的運用加強了句子之間、段落之間的聯(lián)系，使文章表達連貫，渾然一體。段落之間的聯(lián)系，使文章表達連貫，渾然一體。v4 4）范文在第二段為說明不收門