初中英語(yǔ)作文輔導(dǎo)Changes_in_my_hometown2

1、凱里博思教育學(xué)生英語(yǔ)作文輔導(dǎo) 優(yōu)秀作文選 1. my hometown my hometown(_), which is in the southeast of (_), (_)province, is a very beautiful town. let me tell you my beautiful hometown. my grandmother tells me:more than thirty years ago, my hometown was just a small and poor town, the people there didn't have enough

2、food or clothes，they led a hard life. but now, people have found a lot of ways of making money. people don't worry food or clothes any more. in the past, the people from village got into the street on foot. now ,they can take buses or drive their own cars to go work. in old days, they lived in t

3、heir old houses, now most of them have new houses and have color tv sets, cell phones, personal computers and so on. people's living condition have improved a lot. great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past thirty years indeed. we can see tall buildings, factories, schools, hospit

4、als and new roads everywhere.i love my hometown. i must study hard to make it build more beautiful.點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一篇優(yōu)秀習(xí)作。作者首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的地理位置，是個(gè)美麗的地方。第二段采用對(duì)比和排比的手法，描寫(xiě)家鄉(xiāng)的過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在，形成明顯的對(duì)比，可以看出家鄉(xiāng)變化之大。 結(jié)尾段前后照應(yīng)，提出希望，文章嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，中心突出。 2.changes in my hometown many changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. it used to

5、be a beautiful small town. there was a river running around the hometown,we could see all kinds of fish swimming in the clear water. in my hometown we could also see many trees here and there, the air was very fresh. good environment made us happy. however, with the development of the industry, lots

6、 of trees have been cut down. now we can see tall buildings and factories everywhere. air and water pollution is becoming more and more serious. i love my hometown very much. we must do something useful to stop pollution and make our hometown even more beautiful.點(diǎn)評(píng)：作者通過(guò)對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的變化，采用對(duì)比的手法，描寫(xiě)家鄉(xiāng)過(guò)去是個(gè)環(huán)境優(yōu)美的小鎮(zhèn)

7、，現(xiàn)在雖然是高樓林立、工廠遍布，但污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重，暗示人們重視。結(jié)尾一段緊扣主題，提出號(hào)召，控制污染，把家鄉(xiāng)變得更加美麗。 本文多種時(shí)態(tài)與句式的運(yùn)用，使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，自然。現(xiàn)在完成時(shí) many changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. “there be"句型的使用，被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)運(yùn)用 lots of trees have been cut down. 比較級(jí)的使用air and water pollution is becoming more and more serious等等。整篇文章寫(xiě)得較為成功，若能把家鄉(xiāng)變

8、化描寫(xiě)得詳細(xì)些那更好了。 3、great changes in my hometownmore than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town. most of people were farmers. there were few factories. the people didnt have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. they had a hard life .great changes have taken place in the p

9、ast twenty years . the people have found a lot of ways of making money . now there are many tall buildings . they are very beautiful . roads are wide and clean . people can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work . many people have cell phones and personal computers. peoples living conditio

10、ns have improved a lot . thanks to the governments efforts . my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful .4、save the earthhow to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world .its our duty to protect our environment . no matter where we live , we should do something

11、 to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy . we can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. we should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields. we shouldnt leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places . we must

12、nt pick the flowers or step on the grass in public. if everyone tries his best to protect the environment , the world will become much more beautiful and our life willbe better and better .5、improve our environmentgood environment can make people feel happy. to improve the environment means to quali

13、fy our life . what should we do to improve our environment ?we should plant more trees . and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers , lakes and fields . whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into a dustbin . dont spit in public place

14、s . dont draw on public walls . its our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy .6、pollution around usin recent years our life is becoming better and better. but our environment is becoming worse and worse. its very bad for our life. now many people have air-conditioners and cars, they produce (give o

15、ff ) waste gas. more and more trees are being cut down. there are so much sand on the earth (leaving only sand ) . we often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes. water in the river is quite dirty. we havent enough clean water to drink in cities. now we are in danger. its very necessary and

16、important to protect the environment well. i think if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful , and our life will be better and better .7、make our world more beautiful !protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans . it

17、s our duty to take care of the nature around us . animals and plants are our best friends ., and we should share the world with them . we shouldnt kill wild animals , and we must protect forests because they are animals home . we must plant more trees and grass , they can make the world greener . th

18、e more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have . lets do our best to make the world beautiful.8、keep our school cleanwe are studying in this school. it is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. it is not good to spit in public places, such as in the library, in the class. we shouldnt lea

19、ve rubbish here and there. dont draw pictures on the wall, they influence the look of our school . we should keep the classroom clean and tidy. and we should do some cleaning often. if everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school, im sure our school will be more beautiful .9、my coun

20、try lifei like to live in the countryside. i live in a small village. there is a river near it. lots of trees are around my house. i can see a lot of farms and birds. there is less noise. the air here is cleaner and fresher. there are fewer cars. i read aloud early in the morning. when it is getting

21、 dark, the moon is bright in the sky. its very quiet . what a nice place i live in !10、how to learn english wellas we know , english has become an international language. it is more popular than any other language in china . english is widely spoken in the world and it is the most useful language ar

22、ound the world . but how to learn it well ?the best way is to use it all the time . if we can talk in english , think in english we can learn it well . at school , we should learn to hear , speak, read and write carefully . we should spend enough time in practicing english . if we keep on working ha

23、rd at english , we will be able to be good at it one day .11、how i learn englishhello, everyone. it is my honor to talk with all of you about how to learn english well . i like english very much . i always preview and master the main idea of the lesson before class. in class , i listen carefully , s

24、peak loudly and write carefully and take notes if necessary . after class , i do my homework carefully . i watch english movies and listen to english songs . i have booked an english newspaper . its times english post , i can learn a lot from it . i am not afraid of remembering the new words because

25、 i master many good methods . i hope you work hard at english and make progress every day . thats all .12、how i improved my englishwhen i began to learn english, i was poor at it. i was quite worried at that time. later i 1istened to the teacher attentively in class, and made notes carefully. if i h

26、ad any question, i asked my english teacher or my classmates for help. every morning i read the english texts aloud and listened to the english tapes. in the evening, after finishing my homework, i always read some english and magazines.now i am one of the best students at english in my class.13、the

27、 importance of englishenglish is the most widely spoken in the world. its spoken by most people in the usa, great britain, canada, australia, and new zealand. it's also very widely used as a foreign language in many other countries of the world. it's widely used for business between differen

28、t countries. more than three quarters of the information on the internet is in english, too. it is really a bridge to so much knowledge . english is used by travellers and business people around the world. it's one of the world's most important languages as it is so widely used. that's w

29、hy more and more people in china are interested in learning english.english is so useful that we must learn it well . now lets work hard at it and see who learns it faster and better in our class .14、i want to be an inventortvs, telephone, fridges, cars, planes, computers and many other things are i

30、mportant inventions. they have greatly changed our life. many people have their ideas and wishes. they want to invent some new things for the world. i am one of them. i want to be an inventor in the future, inventions can bring fun and happiness to our life and make our daily life more convenient. o

31、ur life will become better and better. now i am a high school student. i will try my best to work hard at my lessons to make my dream come true.15、i want to be a tour guidei want to be a tour guide because beijing will host the 2008 olympic games. there will be many people to come to china from all

32、over the world. most of them dont know chinese. they want to visit many interesting places in china. i can be one of the guides. i can make much money, too. how happy i will be! so from now on , i must study hard. i am going to learn english every day. i will try my best to make it come true.16、i li

33、ke the internetthe internet is playing an important part in our daily life. its very useful. i often search the internet for some information. i can read the latest news, do some shopping, and get all kinds of information from it. i can also download the information that i need and i can send e-mail

34、s and make telephone calls to my friends on the internet. the most important thing is that i am able to study all my lessons on the internet.the internet makes my life more interesting and colorful and it has a wide effect on my study and daily life. i like the internet very much. how about you / wi

35、ll you have a try ?17、the internetthe internet is becoming more and more important to us. without it, we cant do work better. we can go shopping without going out of our houses. and we can listen to music or watch movies on the internet. it can also help a lot with our study. we can learn much knowl

36、edge on different subjects, and get information as soon as possible. but now, some of us work, study or play on the internet for long time, especially for young people to play computer games. its bad for our eyes and health. if we make good use of the internet, it will be our best friends and help u

37、s a lot .18、computercomputer is a wonderful machine. it's a great invention in many years. it develops very quickly. the smallest computer is as big as a note-book. we call it pocket computer. computer becomes more and more important in many ways. it has touched the lives of everyone, even peopl

38、e in faraway villages. it helps us to do with all kinds of information and we get knowledge from it. it can give us a lot fun.19、the importance of waterof all the things we eat and drink, water is the most important. we can live without food for many days, but two or three days without water, usuall

39、y makes people die.however, not all of people understand this. they keep throwing rubbish into the rivers or lakes . some factories even pour waste water into the river. as a result, many rivers and lakes have become so dirty that the water is no longer safe for people to drink .lets do our best to

40、keep the water clean to save ourselves .20、waterwater is very important for our life. every day we use water to drink, too cook and to wash. water is necessary for all plants. they need water to grow. people cant live without water. plants will die without water. it is important to all living things. however, many people pollute lakes and rivers with waste water, so we must stop some people or some factories from wasting water or polluting water and help keep the water clean. at the same time we should save as much water as possible.21、i like sportsi feel that taking exercise is good for ou