李青 英語(yǔ)寫作公開課

1、 WritingArgumentation Li Qing On December 24th , 2014教學(xué)目標(biāo)教學(xué)目標(biāo)n知識(shí)目標(biāo)知識(shí)目標(biāo)：讓學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)如何構(gòu)思一：讓學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)如何構(gòu)思一篇議論文，以及用所學(xué)知識(shí)正確的篇議論文，以及用所學(xué)知識(shí)正確的表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。n能力目標(biāo)能力目標(biāo)：培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)表：培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)表達(dá)及寫作能力。達(dá)及寫作能力。n情感目標(biāo)情感目標(biāo)：教育學(xué)生關(guān)心生活，熱：教育學(xué)生關(guān)心生活，熱愛(ài)學(xué)習(xí)。愛(ài)學(xué)習(xí)。高考作文高分卷的特點(diǎn)高考作文高分卷的特點(diǎn) ( 五美五美 )n外在美外在美：第一印象很重要！書寫清：第一印象很重要！書寫清楚，字母勻稱，詞、行間距適當(dāng)，楚，字

2、母勻稱，詞、行間距適當(dāng)，卷面整潔。卷面整潔。n結(jié)構(gòu)美結(jié)構(gòu)美：有合理的段落層次，多為：有合理的段落層次，多為3段式，條理清晰；每段都有每段段式，條理清晰；每段都有每段的主題。的主題。n詞匯美詞匯美：詞匯反映你知識(shí)貯存量的多少，詞匯反映你知識(shí)貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語(yǔ)水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。也是衡量英語(yǔ)水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。likebe fond of / be addicted to helpdo sb a favor / lend sb a hand n句式美句式美：運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)倪\(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)母呒?jí)句式結(jié)構(gòu)高級(jí)句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝而生輝

3、。n銜接美銜接美：使用恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂们‘?dāng)?shù)倪B接詞連接詞，對(duì)寫一篇，對(duì)寫一篇有有“英語(yǔ)味英語(yǔ)味”的文章很重要，能使文章的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、條理清晰。上下銜接自然、條理清晰。 你校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)部要組織一次英語(yǔ)辯論賽，你校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)部要組織一次英語(yǔ)辯論賽， 就就“是否應(yīng)該縮短中學(xué)生在校時(shí)間為是否應(yīng)該縮短中學(xué)生在校時(shí)間為8小時(shí)小時(shí)”這這一論題進(jìn)行辯論，請(qǐng)你作為一論題進(jìn)行辯論，請(qǐng)你作為正方正方代表，寫一份代表，寫一份發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.保證充足睡眠保證充足睡眠 2. 提提高學(xué)習(xí)效率高學(xué)習(xí)效率 3. 增加自主學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間增加自主學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間 注意：注意： 1.詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右左

4、右2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫節(jié)，以使行文連貫 3. 辯論稿的開頭已為你寫好辯論稿的開頭已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。 As a senior high student, I strongly recommend that n第一步第一步 認(rèn)真審題認(rèn)真審題(analyze the requirements) n第二步第二步 謀篇布局謀篇布局(draw up an outline)n第三步第三步 聯(lián)句成篇聯(lián)句成篇(organize the sentences)n第四步第四步 錦上添花錦上添花(get the article polished up)n第五步第五

5、步 查漏補(bǔ)缺查漏補(bǔ)缺 (check the mistakes)審主題審主題 審體裁審體裁審人稱審人稱審時(shí)態(tài)審時(shí)態(tài) 審要求審要求I recommend, reasons:students can gain more time to sleep; increase the students study efficiency; students can have more flexible timethe time students devoted to studying in schoolargumentationthe first ( I/we )the present and future t

6、enseWriting ModelFirstParagraphMy opinionMiddle ParagraphreasonsLast Paragraphsummary邏輯角度邏輯角度 合適的過(guò)渡性詞匯合適的過(guò)渡性詞匯時(shí)間順序時(shí)間順序?qū)ΨQ順序?qū)ΨQ順序轉(zhuǎn)折順序轉(zhuǎn)折順序遞進(jìn)順序遞進(jìn)順序因果順序因果順序條件順序條件順序表示總結(jié)表示總結(jié)first, second, then, finallyfor one thing, for the other thingbut, however, while, though, otherwisewhats more, besides, in addition,

7、worse stillbecause, since, as, thanks to, as a result as long as, on condition that, if, unlessin a word, altogether, all in all, in generalschool should reduce students study timeto eight hours a day. the time students devoted to studying in school should be reduced to eight hours a day. 高級(jí)句式離不了高級(jí)句

8、式離不了I strongly recommend that school should shorten the time, during which students are kept in school, to eight hours.It is urgent to carry out the measure.高級(jí)句式離不了高級(jí)句式離不了If the time is reduced, we can have more time to sleep. Only by reducing the time of school can we gain more time to sleep.短語(yǔ)遠(yuǎn)比從句

9、俏短語(yǔ)遠(yuǎn)比從句俏1. Compared with a long boring school day, students will be happy with the change.2. Cutting the school time will give us more time which can be controlled by ourselves. 巧用分詞巧用分詞從句要用得妙從句要用得妙 More and more students feel tired and sleepy during the classes because of the lack of sleep, which w

10、ill do harm to their health and study. First of all / Firstly, More and more students feel tired and sleepy during the classes because of the lack of sleep, which will do harm to their health and study. Whats more / Secondly, In addition / Thirdly,合理過(guò)渡離不了合理過(guò)渡離不了Writing Time:Group work ( Four student

11、s)Show Time:What do you think of these ?too crowdedin a messgo off topicpunctuation？paragraph？Dont copy the reading comprehension！The composition we all like best!Great minds think alike!Beautiful writing!Beautiful vocabularies! I strongly recommend that the time students devoted to studying in scho

12、ol should be reduced to eight hours a day. The main reasons accounting for it are as follows. Beautiful sentences!作文五檔：（ 從教師閱卷印象角度劃分）n漂漂亮亮 （2125分）n有模有樣 （1620分）n馬馬虎虎 （1115分）n稀里糊涂 （610分）n一塌糊涂 （05分）Lets enjoy some excellent compositions!Works of excellenceWorks of excellenceWorks of excellenceWorks of excellenceWorks of excellenceFive Steps for writing:nAna