快速提升高考英語作文的方法

1、高考英語寫作小技巧：快速提升高考英語作文的方法一. 首先看一下高考閱卷老師如何評分。拿到你的作文，批卷老師大概讀一下，會在心中確立一個等級，一等是21 分到25 分，二等是 16 分到 20 分，三等是 11 分到 15 分.最要命的是，一旦老師心中確立了你的等級，就不愿意再更改了! 也就是說，接下來細看你作文寫得好壞，也只是在相應等級內變動了!二. 如何提升作文檔次1. 簡單的改用一些單詞也會有意向不到的效果：如用 extraordinary代替 very: 十個人九個用 very 而你用 extraordinary， 那你不就與眾不同了嗎 .用 significant代替 importan

2、t用 as a consequence 代替 as a result用 therefore代替 so, 舉個例子， i got up early，therefore i was late.寫文章還是應該寫一些實際的東西，不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實詞，少用虛詞。我這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說一個很好的時候，不應該之說 nice 這樣空洞的詞，應該使用一些諸如generous，humorous，interesting，smart，gentle ，warm-hearted ，hospital之類的形象詞。簡單的替換一下，水平立刻顯現(xiàn)出不一樣了2. 善用連接詞把短句改長句如，

3、一個句子 +逗號+however+另一個句子，這里面however 是沒有實際意義的，就是表轉折，但你可以用這招把兩個簡單句捏在一塊啊! 短句子成長句了 !都希望寫下很長的句子，像個老外似的，可就是怕寫錯，怎么辦，最保險的寫長句的方法就是這些，可以在任何句子之間加and，但最好是前后的句子又先后關系或者并列關系。比如說：i enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的，我們可以用一個超級句式：not only the furcoat is soft ，but it is also warm.其他連接詞：表遞進關系，用furtherm

4、ore”， what is more”表轉折： however/but 但是表對比： not that but that 不是而是 / one hand.on the other hand一方面另一方面 / unlike與不同 /not so much .as 與其不如表目的： for the . 為了表因果： therefore因此，所有 / so 所以表例證： for example表假設： if 如果表讓步：although 雖然 ( 注意：后不可接 but! 雖然但是不可這樣連用 )/of course 當然 /clearly顯然 相關過渡語1) 表示時間順序： first， then

5、 ， afterwards， meanwhile ， later，first of all ， finally， at last2) 表示空間順序： near ， next to ， far from， in front of ， on the left，on one side 3) 表示比較、對照： like， unlike， such as， but ， however ， on the other hand， on the contrary， nevertheless， otherwise 4) 表示因果關系： because ， for ， as a result， therefore

6、， thus 5) 表示遞進關系： besides ， what s more ， what was worse ， moreover ，furthermore ， in addition， on top of6) 表示并列關系： and， as well as， also 7) 表示總結性： in general ， in a word， in short ， on the whole， to sum up， in brief， to conclude3. 巧妙修改句式舉個例子，我不光唱歌，而且跳舞怎么說?i not onle sing ，but also dance，改動一下， not o

7、nly do i sing，but also dance.倒裝句 !i think that. 賓語從句，老師批10 張卷子看到 8 張里面有 i think that不煩嗎 ?如果一定要用賓語從句的話換一種說法：i have a thought that.別看只改動了一點，同位語從句!同樣 i hear that 誰都會用，不過同樣誰都會用最好不要用! 厲害一些的人會用：it is reported that.牛人會用 there is a piece of news that 同樣的意思，但明顯比i hear that要帥!還有一種用并列巨額代替定語從句，不僅可以用來湊字數(shù)，還很醋。舉個例

8、子，我喜歡玩籃球， 然后籃球有很多種特點， 就可以把這些特點用定語從句的形式并列出來：i love basketball， which is.， which is.， which is.還有種用法叫后置定語有人感覺挺難吧，其實記住個例子就行了， 穿著比基尼的女孩 a girl who wears a bikini，變成 a girls wearing a bikini就行了，這就是后置定語，很簡單吧最終的目的都是為了讓作文與眾不用，讓閱卷老師眼前一亮!三. 高考英語作文寫作時的注意事項1. 減少誤拼高考答題時， 盡量別出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫錯誤， 要是比較長的單詞拼錯了還好說，那種最簡單的單詞千萬不要拼

9、錯! 扣的不是一分的問題，有可能影響到等級。2. 注意卷面清爽，不要涂涂改改現(xiàn)在高考改卷，是把每一塊分類用掃描儀掃描放到電腦里面。比如作文那一塊，會被單獨掃出來， 放在電腦里以后， 改卷的人看著投影儀上呈現(xiàn)出被放大了的段落，同時給出心里的分數(shù)，按下想給的分數(shù)。幾個人的分數(shù)會根據(jù)系統(tǒng)判斷，差別不大的話取平均值。差別大了，才會拉評分組組長來看。( 依舊是被屏幕放大了的字 ) 。所以，字寫得好壞，一旦被放大，差別就不那么大了，最主要的是讓改試卷的看得清爽，眼睛不累。同時注意的是，最好不要涂涂改改，不然看起來覺得很不舒服，很麻煩。只要注意卷面清爽，就可以了。四：最后分享一些可替換使用的單詞1.occu

10、r 替換 think ofsuddenly i had an idea that someone had broken into my house. an idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.it occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.2.devote 替換 spendhe spends all his spare time in reading. he devotes all his spare time to reading.3.seek 替換

11、 want / look forthey sought ( wanted ) to hide themselves behind the trees.4.average 替換 ordinaryi m an average ( ordinary ) student.5.but 替換 verythe film we saw last night was very interesting. the film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.the film we saw last night was anything but boring.

12、6.seat 替換 siton his way to school ， he found an old lady seated (sitting) by the road，looking worried.7.suppose 替換 shouldhe is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.8.appreciate 替換 thankthank you very much for you help. we appreciate your help very much. / your help is much appreciated.9.th

13、e case替換 truei don t think it is the case ( true ).10.on 替換 as soon asas soon as he arrived ， he began his research. on his arrival， he began his research.11.due to替換 because ofhe arrived late due to ( because of ) the storm.12.cover 替換 walk/readafter covering (walking) 10 miles， we all felt tired.1

14、3.contribute to替換 be helpful/usefulplenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to english study. plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to english study.14.round the corner 替換 coming soon/ nearby the summer vacation is round the corner ( coming). do you have any plans? li ming studies in

15、 a school round the corner (nearby)e to light替換 discoverthe family were so pleased when they discovered the lost jewels. the family were so pleased when the lost jewels came to light.16.have a ball替換 have a good time/ enjoy oneselfafter visiting the workshop， we went back to school. every one of us

16、had a ball ( had a good time )e up with替換 think ofjack is very clever. he often comes up with ( thinks of ) new ideas.18.set aside替換 savesome students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.19.be of + n. 替換 adj.the products are of high quality (very good ) and are sold

17、 everywhere in china.20.refer to 替換 talk about/of， mentionthe professor you referred to (talked about ) is very famous.滿分作文2016新課標1 卷作文題目假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職， 已寫好申請書和個人簡歷 （resume） 。給外教 mr jenkins 寫信，請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format ）注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右;2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，已使行文連貫。dear ms jenkins,i am li hua, i am writing

18、to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and i also want you to do me a favor. in order to get some practical experience, i am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. i have already finished my job application and personal resume. but this is the firs

19、t time that i have written an application and the personals resume, so i dont even know if there are something to pay attention to. so, i m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. i will be very grateful if you can help me.looking forward to your reply. and id be really thankful.y

20、ours,li hua2016新課標2 卷作文題目假定你是李華，你校攝影俱樂部（photography club）將舉辦國際中學攝影展。請給你的英國朋友peter 寫封信。請他提供作品。信的內容包括：1主題：環(huán)境保護；2展覽時間；3投稿郵箱： . 注意：1詞數(shù) 100 左右；2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。dear peter,our school photography club is going to hold an international high school student photography show. the theme of the show is environme

21、ntal protection. it will start from june 15th and last three weeks. any students who is interested in welcome to participate. i know you take good pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. i remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visit

22、ed our school. this is surely a good chance for more people to see them. if you want to join, you can send your photos to.hope to hear from you soon. yoursli hua2016新課標3 卷作文題目假定你是李華， 與留學生朋友 bob約好一起去書店， 因故不能赴約。 請給他寫封郵件，內容包括： 1. 表示歉意； 2. 說明原因； 3. 另約時間。注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。dear bob,i m so

23、rry to say that i cannot go to the bookstore with you on friday afternoon. i have just found that i have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. i hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. shall we go on saturday morning? we can set out early so that we ll have more time to r

24、ead and select books. if its convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. if not, let me know what time suits you best. i should be available any time after school next week.yours,li hua2015新課標1 卷作文題目【作文題目】假定你是李華，你校英文報“外國文化”欄目擬刊登美國節(jié)日風俗和中學生生活的短文。請給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿，要點如下：1欄目介紹。2稿件內容；3稿件長度：約

25、 400 詞匯4交稿日期： 6 月 28 日前注意：1詞數(shù) 100 左右；2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫的；3開頭語已為你寫好 。dear peter,i d like to ask you to write an article for our school s english newspaper.the “foreign cultures section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. it carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures

26、of their home countries. would you please write something about the culture in your part of the united states? and we would especially welcome articles about how americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of american high school students. you can write anything relevant so long as it

27、s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. could we have your article before june 28?i m looking forward to hearing from you.yours,li hua譯文：彼得，你好！我想讓你為我們學校的英文報紙寫篇文章。我校報紙的 “外國文化” 專欄非常受學生的歡迎。 專欄里刊登的是外國朋友寫的有關他們國家文化的一些文章。 你愿意寫一些有關你在美國居住地區(qū)文化的東西嗎？我們非常歡迎有關美國人怎樣慶祝節(jié)假日和美國高中學生生活的文章。你可以寫任何與之相關的有趣的和

28、富有知識性的內容，400 詞就可以了。你能在6 月28 日之前交稿嗎？我期待著收到你的來信。此致李華2015新課標2 卷作文題目【作文題目】假如你是李華，計劃和同學去敬老院（nursing home ）陪老人們過重陽節(jié)（ the double ninth festival）。請給外教露西寫封郵件，邀她一同前往，內容包括：1出發(fā)及返回時間；2活動：包餃子、表演節(jié)目等。注意：1詞數(shù) 100 左右；2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 結語已為你寫好。dear lucy,i d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nurs

29、ing home next saturday for the double ninth festival. it is the day for the elderly in our culture. well go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. we ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. we should be back ar

30、ound 4 oclock in the afternoon. if you are able to come with us, please let us know and well wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.looking forward to your reply.yours,li hua譯文：露西，你好！我想邀請你下周六與我們一起去附近的敬老院過重陽節(jié)。在我們的文化中， 重陽節(jié)是老人的節(jié)日。 我們將去敬老院和老人們一起包餃子、做蛋糕。我們也將和他們一起唱歌、跳舞、玩游戲，度過一段快樂的時光。我們希望這些活動會讓他們快樂。我

31、們應該在下午四點左右返回。 如果你能和我們一起去的話， 請告訴我們，我們會在早上九點在校門口等你。期待你的回復。此致李華2014新課標 2 卷作文題目【作文題目】一家英語報社向中學生征文，主題是“十年后的我”。請根據(jù)下列要求和你的想象完成短文。1家庭；2工作；3業(yè)余生活。注意：1詞數(shù) 100 左右；2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3開頭語已為你寫好。i often imagine what my life will be like in the future. i think my life will be very different in ten years. i will be twe

32、nty-eight years old by then. i will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. i hope i will work in a computer company as a program designer. i ll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. ill do a good job in whatever i do. in my free time, ill continue to take regular exercise,

33、such as swimming, running and various ball games. on my holidays, ill travel around the world. in a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.2013新課標1 卷作文題目【作文題目】 假定你是李華。 請你給筆友 peter 寫封信， 告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會， 帶去他想要的那幅中國畫， 同時詢問他是否可以接機。 信中還需說明：李明：高個子，戴眼鏡航班號： ca985到達： 8 月 6 日上午 11:30注意：1. 詞數(shù) 10

34、0 左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。dear peter,how are you doing?i m writing to tell you that my uncle li ming is going to your city for a conference, and ive asked him to bring you the chinese painting youve asked for before.also, id like you to do me a favor. would you please meet my uncle at

35、the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to theu.s.? thank you in advance!his flight number is ca985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, august 6. my uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. and he will be in a blue jacket.looking forward to your reply.yours,li hua2013新課標 2 卷

36、作文題目【作文題目】假定你是李華，自制了一些中國結(chinese knot) 。給開網(wǎng)店的美國朋友 tom寫封信，請他代賣，要點包括：1. 外觀( 尺寸、顏色、材料 )2. 象征意義3. 價格注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭已為你寫好。dear tom,how are you doing? i wonder if you could sell some chinese knots for me. i made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. they l

37、ook really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. inchina, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. people can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. they are only 12.99 us dollars each. if anyone wants to know more about

38、the knots, let them write to me. also, do let me know if you need further information. thank you!li hua2012新課標 1 卷作文題目【作文題目】假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知一個國際中學生組織將在新加坡(singapore) 舉辦夏令營，歡迎各國學生參加。請寫一封電子郵件申請參加。內容主要包括：1. 自我介紹 (包括英語能力 )2. 參加意圖 (介紹中國、了解其他國家)3. 希望獲準。注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 郵件開頭和結尾已為你寫好。滿分作文

39、一dear sir or madam,im li hua, a middle school student fromchina. i read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the internet and i am interested in it. i know that you welcome students from different countries and id like to take part in it. ive been learning english for 10 years

40、, and i speak fluent english. what is more, ili be able to tell students from other countries aboutchinaand learn about their countries as well. i hope i will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.looking forward to your reply!regards,li hua滿分作文二dear sir or madam,my name is li hua, a middle sc

41、hool student fromchina. ive learned on the internet that your summer camp, which is going to be held insingapore, is round the corner. i am really interested in it.i, who am active and enjoy various activities, hope to take part in it very much. i know the ability of communication is of great import

42、ance and i can speak english quite fluently. in addition, in your camp, there are so many students from different countries. therefore, i can communicate with the students from different parts of the world. not only can i introducechinato them, but i can know more about their countries as well.i m l

43、ooking forward to your reply.regards,li hua滿分作文三dear sir or madam,i m li hua, a middle school student fromchina. i have learnt the news on the internet that you are going to hold a summer camp insingapore, which i am fond of for a long time. i have been looking forward to being able to not only tell

44、 the students from different countries something aboutchina, but learn about some other foreign countries as well.besides, i am good at english in school, especially spoken english. last year, i won the first prize in an english speech contest. i also hope to make some contributions to the friendshi

45、p between countries.so i am eager to be accepted as a member of your summer camp.regards,li hua2012新課標2 卷作文題目【作文題目】 假定你是李華。 你班同學決定為小明舉辦生日聚會。請你寫信邀請外教 susan參加，要點包括：1. 時間：周五晚 8 點至 9 點2. 地點：學生俱樂部3. 內容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戲等4. 要求：備小禮物注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右，開頭語已為你寫好 ;2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3. 答案必須寫在答題卡相應的位置上。滿分作文一hi, susan,were

46、 throwing a surprise party for xiaomings birthday. wed like to invite you to the party. we want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. well gather at the students club at 8 pm this friday, after the evening classes. and its going to last about an hour. we each will prepare a little p

47、resent. when he comes, well light the candles and sing happy birthday together for him. then the cake will be cut and well sing songs and play games. itll be nice to see how excited he will be. im sure youll have a good time at the party, too.yours,li hua滿分作文二hi, susan,we re throwing a surprise part

48、y for xiaomings birthday. i hope you can come and join us if it is convenient to you. the party will take place on friday evening from 8 p.m. to 9 p.m. at the students club. during the party, well sing “happy birthday ” to him with the candles on. i am sure xiaoming will be very happy and moved. aft

49、er that, we ll cut the birthday cake prepared for him in advance and share it together. whats more, we decide to play some games afterwards. by the way, dont forget to prepare a little gift when you come. i am sure well enjoy ourselves together.we are looking forward to your coming.yours,li hua滿分作文三

50、hi, susan,we re throwing a surprise party for xiaomings birthday. i hope you can come and attend it from the bottom of my heart. the party will be held at the students club from 8 p. m. this friday and it will last about one hour. now that it is a surprise for xiaoming, youd better prepare a little

51、gift when you come. the party will begin with a “happy birthday ”song, wishing xiaoming happy and healthy. when the song is over, we will enjoy the delicious birthday cake. besides, well play some games for pleasure. i am sure everybody will have a good time and regard it as an unforgettable experie

52、nce.yours,li hua2011新課標1 卷作文題目【作文題目】假設你是李華，正在一所英國學校學習暑期課程，遇到一些困難，希望得到學校輔導中心（learning center）的幫助。根據(jù)學校規(guī)定，你需書面預約，請按下列要點寫一封信：1本人簡介；2求助內容；3約定時間；4你的聯(lián)系方式（ email ：；phone：12345678）。注意：1詞數(shù) 100 左右；2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3結束語已為你寫好。dear sir / madam,im li hua, a chinese student taking summer courses in your university.

53、 im writing to ask for help. i came here last month and found my courses interesting. but i have some difficulties with note-taking and i have no idea of how to use the library. i was told the learning center provides help for students and im anxious to get help from you. i have no class on tuesday

54、mornings and friday afternoons. please let me know which day is ok with you. you may email or phone me. here are my email address and phone number: ; 12345678.look forward to your reply.yoursli hua2011新課標 2 卷作文題目【作文題目】假定你是李華，你所喜愛的global mirror周報創(chuàng)刊五周年之際征集讀者意見。請你依據(jù)以下內容給主編寫封信，內容主要包括：1說明你是該報的忠實讀者2贊賞該報優(yōu)點

55、：1) 兼顧國內外新聞2) 介紹名人成功故事3提出建議：刊登指導英語學習的文章注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右，開頭語己為你寫好；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。dear editor-in-chief,congratulations on the 5th anniversary of global mirror!i m a regular reader of your newspaper. i like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. first, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, i can learn all important things that have happened during the week. equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person c