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1、2020年高考英語作文范文匯總及解析全國卷一你身邊值得尊敬的人+理由學校舉行作文比賽以你身邊敬愛或愛戴的人為題, 寫一篇短文參 賽。內(nèi)容包括:1、受到敬愛、愛戴的人的簡介;2、說明理由。、/、4、1、廣注息:1、詞數(shù)100左右;2、可以適當 增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫;3、結束語已為你寫好。寫作指導:審題注意點:1 .最好寫自己身邊尊敬或愛戴的人,名人,抗疫英雄應該不算身邊的 人吧?2 .簡介最好包括外貌,職業(yè)等基本情況,但要簡明扼要,不宜拓展太 多,畢竟要點2才是重點。3 .充分拓展尊敬的理由,要點2是文章的body。有理有據(jù),使人信 服。4 .文章標題和第一句話已經(jīng)給出,注意銜接和緊扣標題。T
2、he people I respectThereare many people respectable around us. The people I respect most is my aunt, acharming woman of medium built, who was born into a rich family and received a good education. Now she is an excellent doctor and specializes in internalmedicine.As we all know, COVID19 broke out in
3、 March of this year in Wuhan city, which was in urgent need of doctors and nurses.Every one across our country was so frightened at the epidemic that nearly none dared to go to Wuhan city. However, at this crucial moment, it was my aunt that risked her life to do voluntary work without hesitation, w
4、hich amazed me so much. I show great respect for her not only because of her courage but also due to her selfless contribution to our homeland. Besides, she doesn't care about money as well as fame but cares for others. Her life attitude also makes a great difference on me.All in all, my aunt se
5、ts a good example for me. And I do learn a lot from her. That's the reason why I respect her most.全國卷二上周末,你和同學參加了一次采摘活動。請你為班級英語角寫一篇短 文,介紹這次活動,內(nèi)容包括:1 .農(nóng)場情況;2 .采摘過程;3 . 個人感受注意 :1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右;2. 題目已為你寫好。題目 :My WeekendMy WeekendOrganized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to HopeFarm to
6、 help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. The farm is situatedat the foot of a mountain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We wereattracted by the beautiful scenery. There are different kinds of fruit treesas well as a variety of animals.On arriving, we saw red ripe peaches hanging on the tre
7、e. Using basketsand ladders, We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color,then those that were ripe and soft. I couldn t wait to take a bite, and thsweet juice went down my throat.I was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature. Not only would Ibe able to experience fruit pi
8、cking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!【詳解】第一步:根據(jù)提示可知,上周末,你和同學參加了一次采摘活動。 請你為班級英語角寫一篇短文,介紹這次活動。內(nèi)容包括:1.農(nóng)場情況;2. 采摘過程;3. 個人感受。第二步: 根據(jù)寫作要求確定關鍵詞(組), 如: pick peaches, is situated,beautiful scenery, fruit trees ,a variety of animals, Using baskets and ladders, take a bite, be grateful for, get close
9、 to nature, feast on the sweetness.第三步:根據(jù)提示和關鍵詞(組)進行遣詞造句,注意主謂一致和時 態(tài)問題。本文用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。第四步:連句成文,注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接和過渡, 書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰,保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。【點睛】范文內(nèi)容完整,語言規(guī)范,語篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當。作者在范 文中使用了較多高級表達方式,如Organized by the student union, agroup of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last we
10、ekend.和 Using baskets and ladders!用了f語動詞; We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft.運用了 定語從句; Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness運用了連詞 not only-but和倒裝句。全文中沒有中式英語的句式,顯示了很高的駕 馭英語的能力。另外,文章思路清晰
11、,層次分明,上下旬轉換自然, 為文章增色添彩。全國卷三假定你是李華,你和同學根據(jù)英語課文改編一個短劇, 請你寫一封郵件給外教miss Veans請他指導你們。郵件內(nèi)容包括1 .情節(jié)簡介2 .指導內(nèi)容,3 .商定時間和地點。參考范文Dear Miss Veans:I am Li Hua, and I'm writing to ask if you could help me and my classmates in changing our text into a short play.Our play will be based on the text "horse"
12、;. The text tells a story of a king and an artist. In the story, the king asked the artist to draw him a beautiful horse. But the artist misunderstood the king, and in the end the king forgave him because of his effort. My classmates and I are struggling with the lines of the play, as we always stum
13、ble over pronounciations. We will have a rehearsal next Wednesday afternoon in the school hall, and I hope you can come and give us some advice. Please consider our request. I look forward to your reply.Sincerely Li Hua北用卷第三部分:書面表達(共兩節(jié),35分)第一節(jié)(15分)假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你們學校英語戲劇俱樂部外籍 指導教師Jim因疫情滯留英國。復學在即,作為俱
14、樂部負責人,你給Jim寫一封電子郵件,請他推薦一名外籍指導教師,內(nèi)容包括:1 .條件及要求;2 .表示感謝并提醒注意防護。注意:1.詞數(shù)不少于50;2.開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jim ,Yours , Li Hua .分析 這是一篇寫人的信件,要求抒發(fā)自己對人物的觀點并進行 說明.所以用第一人稱來敘述,時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)(敘述影響)和 一般過去時態(tài)(敘述他的生平)為主.內(nèi)容分成三部分:一 開頭打 招呼引出下文;二 內(nèi)容著重介紹人物貢獻及對我的影響;三 結束語.高分句型:1. As for (至于) my favorite figure in Chinese history,
15、it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty Wei Yuan的同位語).至于歷史上我最喜歡的人物,那肯定是魏源,他是清末偉大的思 想家.2. He(主語),in his book(狀語),Haiguo Tuzhi(Maps and Records of the World) (book 的同位語),introduced (謂語)modern technologies and ideas to China (賓語)在他物種起源這本書里,他把現(xiàn)代的技術和觀念帶入我國范文Dear Jim,It's great t
16、o hear from you I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history (點題,說明寫作目的).As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty (高分句型一).He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzh( i Maps and Records of the World) , introduced modern technologies and id
17、eas to Chin a 高分句型二).That opened our eyes to the world In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college, to be a bridge between China and the world (介紹魏源的成就和影響)Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books!Just let me know (表達愿意更進一步幫忙的愿望).Cheers!Yours,Li Hua第二節(jié)(20分)假設你是紅星中學高三(1)班班長李華。居
18、家學習期間,你們班開展了一次以“自律”為主題的調(diào)研活動。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序,寫一篇英文稿件,給你們學校英文網(wǎng)站投稿,記述你在 本次活動中發(fā)現(xiàn)問題并解決問題的過程。注意:詞數(shù)不少于60。提示詞:自律self-disciplineI am Li Hua, the class leader of class one, grade twelve. During the pandemic, students in our class carried out a research about self-discipline. At first, the efficiency of the stud
19、ents were very low, and greatly affect the learning outcomes of students. To solve this problem, me and some of the students met offline for a brainstorm meeting. After coming up with possible solutions, all classmates had an online meeting during which we decided on a specific plan. After carrying
20、out the plan, the study results of all classmates saw obvious increase, and our teacher was happy with the result.上海卷假如你是明啟中學高三學生李華, 前幾日,你邀請你的好友王磊 下周五去郊野公園一起欣賞露天音樂會。 面對天氣惡劣、交通不便等 原因,王磊一直猶豫不決。假如你是李華,請寫一封信說服王磊和你 起參加。(1)請你從解決他的問題( 2)還有音樂會的重要性兩方面寫一篇文章建議他參加這次活動!信件寫作的基本框架Greeting:Use an appropriate greeti
21、ng (Dear Mr/Miss/Mrs/Ms.+last name, orDear + first name)Opening paragraph:Use set phrase to begin your letter and say why you are writing(How are you doing? It was nice to hear from you.etc)Main part:The content of your writingClosing paragraph:State anything you want to emphasize.Use set phrases to
22、 end your letterSignature endings:Yours, all the best, best wishes.議論文的基本框架Introduction :Briefly introduce the topic you're going to discuss.Say how you feel about.Main part: (two paragraphs)Choose two main aspects of the issue and write one paragraph on each.Explain your ideas/points, and give
23、examples if possible.Conclusion:Sum up by stating your overall opinion.同學們只要把這兩個框架融匯起來合理使用,就是本文的基本大綱。示例 1Dear Wang Lei,s still worthIt s been a while since I heard from you. Last time, I invited you to attend the concert which will be held next Friday in the century park. Though you did not reply to
24、 me, the hesitation wearing on your face offered me a glimpse of what was going on in your mind. Maybe it is the recent ghastly weather or the terrible traffic that hinder you from making up your mind. However, as far as I concerned, itefforts.This concert is not a pop music concert but a classic mu
25、sic one where several prestigious symphony orchestras will perform many well-known compositions. It must be a feast for all the audience. Moreover, chances are that we may have an album with performers autographs on it. You should never miss such a fabulous concert!In terms of difficulties you are w
26、orried about, I have already found some solutions. My father will be available on that day so that he can drive us to the scene. I have managed to persuade him to make his promise. In addition, in case of a rainy day, I have prepared two raincoats.I am confident that we will indulge ourselves into t
27、he elegant flow of notes.I am looking forward to hearing your reply.Yours,Li Hua示例 2Dear Wang Lei,How are you doing these days? You ve been hesitated to go with me to the open-air concert in the country park on Friday. It seems to me what s holding you back is the terrible weather and the inconvenie
28、nt transportation, neither of which, in my opinion, is obstacles.Firstly, there is no need to bother with things uncontrollable, suchas the weather condition. We can make plans ahead according to the weather forecasting. If you are not confident with it, we can plan for both rainy day and sunny day.
29、Secondly, mobile navigation apps can help us choose the best way, saving us from the trouble of worrying about the traffic conditions and the subways service time. Lastly, the most important thing is that thisconcert is such a major event that you would regret if you didnBesides, your favorite band
30、will be performing! Wouldn' t it beamazing to see your idols face to face and even get a chance to talk to them!Hopefully you will take my suggestion into consideration. And I looking forward to hearing from you.Best wishes,Li Hua天津卷 書信:介紹成人禮。1 .回顧成長歷程;2 .觀看校友抗疫視頻;3 .自己的感受和未來期望。作文解析:“成人禮”特定表達:1、
31、成人禮:coming-of-age ceremony2、Our ceremony fell on May 16. fall on 在某一天舉行3、 In China the age of 18 means we have grown up. 不能用 18 years old做主語4、During the ceremony, dressed in Hanfu, a traditional dress (costume)of Han Chinese people, we performed/observed a series of rituals. 注意“穿著漢服” “行禮”的表達。5、 We g
32、ot down on our knees/knelt down on the ground to our parents to express our thanks to them for raising us and bringing us up. 注意“下跪 ”的表達。6、 We owe so many thanks to our parents. owe sth. to sb. “欠, 欠恩、欠情”7、 The ceremony is intended to make us understand the meaning ofmaturity and responsibility. be
33、intended to do 旨在素材成人禮coming-of-age ceremony是在少男少女年齡滿18歲時舉行 的象征邁向成人階段的儀式,它標志著告別孩童時代(childhood),進入成年期(adulthood)。在成人禮上,通常都要進行成年宣誓(take an oath to adulthood)。在中國一些地方,成人禮上還流行穿漢服 (traditional Han costumes), 祭拜孑L子(consecrate Confucius等習俗。coming-of-age ceremony就是成人禮,是在少男少女年紀滿18歲 時舉辦的象征邁向成人階段的典禮。男孩要進行cappi
34、ng ceremony(E 禮),女孩要進行hair-pinning ceremony(加笄禮)。舉辦成人禮示意一 個人已經(jīng)come of age成年),在閱歷了 puberty(青春期)之后,實現(xiàn)了 從adolescent倩少年)向youth(青年)的改變。范例:Dear XXXI am glad to receive your email Now I d like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday In the afternoon we held a growing-up ceremony for ou
35、r coming 18-year-old birthday At first we made an oath that as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty for our society from now on Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patiently And our teachers also gave us c
36、ards expressing their good wishes to us Finally we put on wonderful performances singing and dancing We learned a lot from the activity I think it s very important for us I will remember the day in my lifeYoursLi HuaDear XXXdoubt that a rite of passage was pretty significant in people life.Great cha
37、nges have taken place in a rite of passage in China with the changing times. Only a few people take part in the Mitzvah. It is obvious that a rite of passage is far less epidemical than that in the old times. People at age of 18 often wear Han Chinese clothing with serious face and in high spirit no
38、w. A rite of passage represents the independence of children. Besides, even some children would receivegifts and congratulations from their parents and other relatives.In recent days, there is a trend to hold a rite of passage for all 18-year-old children for the hope that children will be more resp
39、onsible and brave in the future.Best wishes,Li Hua江蘇卷BBC拍的杜甫紀錄片,很受外國友人的歡迎。以中國題材紀錄片為寫作話題,要求學生分析中國題材紀錄片受 到外國朋友歡迎的原因。The documentary Dufu made by BBC, which deals with life experience and poetry creation of this great master, wins widespread recognition among foreigners. Its exquisite production also c
40、aptures Lijiang and Suhua's heart.Why does such Chinese documentaries as Dufu appeal to foreigners?Firstly, China's rising international status and groundbreaking development catch the whole world's attention. These curious audiences long to probe the underlying reason behind. Therefore,
41、 they turn to some iconic figures like Dufu for an answer. By exposing themselves to this great poet's life experience, foreign audiences are better acquainted with Chinese political, ideological and economical system, thus gaining a better insight into contemporary China and its rapid growth.Se
42、condly, the high-quality production of BBC also contribute toDufu's popularity. BBC poured tons of effort into translating Dufu's poems, shooting his birthplace and famous historical sites such as Xian and inviting famous British actor Mckellen to cast as Dufu. All these efforts made the ina
43、ccessile poems easily understood by the western audience.To conclude,considering western viewers' curiosity about China as welll as BBC's fine production, the popularity of Dufu among foreigners is no coincidence.浙江卷 假如你是李華。你校愛爾蘭外教Peter因病回國休假。請你給他寫一封電子郵件,主要內(nèi)容包括:1 .詢問Peter近況;2.告訴Peter班級最新消息;3
44、.表達祝愿。注意: 1.詞數(shù) 80左右 ;2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。Dear PeterI am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. How are you feeling now?I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival. As soo
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