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1、高二英語(yǔ)精選作文專習(xí)題訓(xùn)練20 X X年央視春晚的廣告收入創(chuàng)新高,但節(jié)目中的植入廣告引發(fā) 了熱議。最近,某網(wǎng)站舉行了一次習(xí)題為“對(duì)今年春晚植入廣告的態(tài)度”的調(diào)查,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下餅圖( pie chart )所示信息用英語(yǔ)寫一篇 短文,并提出你自己的看法。注意:1 對(duì)所給提示,不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使行文連接。2詞數(shù)150 左右。開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3植入廣告:product placementF estival G ala has set records for T V commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated dis
2、cussions due to product placement in the programmes.T he opinions on this topic vary from person to person. O ne in four think there is so muchof product placement that lots of people feel unsatisfied when they watch the programmes.And 10%of the people think product placement in the programmes great
3、ly ruins the image of C C T V , beause it will leave a bad impression on audience in and outside C hina. B esides, nearly one third of the people hold the opinion that it s hard to relate the product placement to the programmes, making the audience feel uncomfortable.H owever, there are 15% of the p
4、eople who think it is helpful for the development of C C T V . A nd the rest think there is no need for us to be so strict with product placement. A fter all, it ' s very natural.P ersonally, the product placement is really disgusting and C C T V should try to avoid it.本文總體構(gòu)造非常清晰,作者通過(guò)整合拼圖,談?wù)搶?duì)待廣告
5、的兩大觀點(diǎn),最后陳述自己的觀點(diǎn),除此之外,作者在選詞造句上也下了一番工夫。在開頭,中間以及最后的結(jié)尾處,優(yōu)美、地道的句式屢見(jiàn) 不鮮,一些高級(jí)詞匯互相響應(yīng),熠熠生輝,值得其他學(xué)生借鑒。T he 20X X S pring F estival G ala has set records for T V commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes.According to the pie chart, we can see 15
6、%of the surveyed people think it ' s difficult to develop C C T V without the product placement, because it can provide enough money. At the sametime, 20%of them think the product placement is presented in the progamme in a natural way.O n the other hand, the rest of the people are against the m
7、oveand they have their own reasons. Nearly one third of them say the product placement has little to do with the programmes,nd 10% ofwhich reduces their interests in the programmes.the people hold the idea that the disadvantage that it ruins the image of C C T V outweighs its advantage. B esides, a
8、quarter complain there are too much product placement in the programmes.As far as I ' m concerned, even if it s common to see product placement, I don ' t think it should appear in some programmes of art and culture.本文反映出作者對(duì)英文寫作極強(qiáng)的駕馭能力,首先作者能夠很好地審習(xí)題,通過(guò)圖表找準(zhǔn)信息,并且將文章構(gòu)造安排地很合理,讓讀者一目了然,再次, 作者在語(yǔ)言方面極
9、具天賦,從開始的一個(gè)without的強(qiáng)調(diào)句,到非限制性定語(yǔ)從句,及后來(lái)Spring Festival Gala has set records for T V commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes.As is shown in the pie chart, 20% of the people surveyed think it acceptable, for the product placement appears
10、 in the programmes naturally. A nd 15% of them consider it necessary for CCTV to makemoneyfrom product placement, which is of great benefit to the development of CCTV itself.H owever, among the people surveyed, more than one third of them complain that the product placement has nothing to do with th
11、e programmes. 25%of them even feel hurt seeing so much of it. Furthermore, the rest 10%hold the view that great harm has been done to the image of C C T V .F rom the chart we can draw a conclusion that most of the people surveyed are against product placement in the programmes. 1nmy opinion, product
12、 placement nowadays is almost unavoidable, but it should not damage the art of the show and should take the audience s feelings into account.(二)你班同學(xué)開展了一場(chǎng)“司機(jī)醉駕是否應(yīng)該處罰乘客”的討論。請(qǐng) 你根據(jù)下表提I ' m writing to tell you about the discussion we ' ve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a
13、 drunken driver should be punished.A small part of the students approve of it for the reason that on one hand, this punishment can decrease the amount of the traffic accidents. O n the other hand, it can improve the safety of passengers and drivers. B esides, avoiding riding in a car driven by a dru
14、nken driver is not only responsible for us, but also for the driver and pedestrians.H owever, the majority of the students are strongly against this punishment in that they think it hard for passengers tojudge whether the driver has drunk or not. What' s more, even the passengers know the driver
15、 has drunk, if the driver doesn t accept their advice, it s unfair to punish the passengers.P ersonally, I think people who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished because the public s safety is the most important.作者分三個(gè)段落來(lái)完成此篇書面表達(dá),先說(shuō)明少數(shù)人贊成的觀點(diǎn),接著說(shuō)明多數(shù)人反對(duì)的觀點(diǎn),最后給出作者自己的觀點(diǎn),并說(shuō)明理由。構(gòu)造緊湊,要
16、點(diǎn)全面,作者觀點(diǎn)鮮明,理由具有說(shuō)服力。文章中作者 使用了大量的高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)構(gòu)造,為文章增添了色彩。on one hand,on the other hand, besides, however, what s more, personally 等過(guò)渡詞增強(qiáng)了文章的流暢性。I ' mwriting to you about the discussion w ve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished.T he minority of the
17、 students who are for the idea think that it can reduce traffic accidents and promote the safety of traffic. T hey also think avoiding taking a car driven by a drunken driver is an activity responsible for passengers and the driver and other people on the road as well.O n the contrary, the majority
18、of the students are opposed to it. T he first reason they give lies in that passengers havepart fromdifficulty finding whether a driver is drunken.that, even if passengers know that the driver is drunken, it is unfair to punish them when the driver doesn t take their suggestion seriously.In my view,
19、 it ' s traffic security that greatly matters and weshould punish those drunken drivers rather than the passengers.該文的最大亮點(diǎn)是多處使用的復(fù)雜句式,體現(xiàn)作者嫻熟的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)技巧。Be opposed to, take seriously 等高級(jí)短語(yǔ)的使用亦為 文章增添了色彩。過(guò)渡詞on the contrary, apart from, even if,in view, and 等使用較為講究。綜合全文的這些特點(diǎn),該理應(yīng)為一 篇優(yōu)秀精選作文。I ' m writi
20、ng to tell you about the discussion we ' ve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished.T he minority of the students hold the opinion that punishing the passengers helps reduce traffic accidents and increase traffic safety. N ot to ride in a car
21、driven by a drunken driver is not only a responsible behavior for passengers but also for the driver and other people on the road.T he majority of the students, however, disapprove of theidea, stating that it is difficult for commonpassengers to know whether the driver has been drinking or not. What
22、' s more, even if the passenger knows the driver has drunk alcohol and has attempted to persuade the driver not to drive, it is unfair to punish the passenger whenthe driver does not follow the advice.A s far as I am concerned, punishing passengers as well as the drivers is not only unfair but a
23、lso hard to carry out.Y ours sincerely, Li H ua (三)北京大學(xué)20XX年將試行由實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)校長(zhǎng)實(shí)名推薦的招生改革。被推薦的學(xué)生高考成績(jī)可獲得 30分的加分。20XX年11月16日北大公布了 39 所有推薦資格的實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)名單。北大這一舉措在全國(guó)引起了一場(chǎng)劇烈的爭(zhēng)論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給中國(guó)日?qǐng)?bào)寫一will eoll students recommended by high school principalsthis years. T he recommended students will have an extra 30 points added to
24、 their national college entrance exam scores.P eking U niversity ' s move has set off a nationwide debate.O n the one hand, some people in favor of it think thereis no doubt that P eking U niversity ' s moveis a bold attempt of reforming the educational system. I n addition, it is also a gua
25、rantee for outstanding students or those gifted in some aspects that they have a chance to be admitted into first-class universities. B esides, this move will encourage the middle schools to pay more attention to the all-round development of the students.O n the other hand, some think there are a lo
26、t of disadvantages of this move. F irst chances are that some students try to cheat because 30 points is a great lure for them. A lso,it is unfair for most students in many other schools.Personally, we should balance its advantages against its disadvantages. 11 is the college entrance examination th
27、at decides students ' future to a large extent. Sol don ' t think it s a good idea or policy.文章三段式寫作,層次清楚,構(gòu)造清晰,文章中大量地使用了一些高級(jí)詞匯如:reform, guarantee, be admitted into 和 balance against 等,另外,最后一段的精心安排。will eoll students recommended by high school principals this years. T he recommended students
28、will have an extra 30 points added to their national college entrance exam scores.P eking U niversity ' s move has set off a nationwide debate.S upporters hold the opinion that by doing thisP ekingentranceuniversity attempts to reform the current university system bravely. I n addition, the poli
29、cy can makesure that the students who have good qualities or special talents will be eolled by first-class universities. What' s more, it ' s also an effective measure to drive high schools to focus on the students all-round development.O n the contrary, there is another voice. T hese object
30、ors argue that there is no point in carrying out the policy.Firstly, it may lead to cheating.B esides, it ' s against theprinciple that the universities entrance exam is held on an equal basis. S o it 's unfair to other students. A nd they think there is no need to give extra scores to the r
31、ecommended students, most of whom are excellent students.From my point of view, I think it ' s well worth having a try. After all, it ' s a great leap in reforming the current university entrance system.讀完此篇精選作文,心中不禁感慨作者良好的英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言駕馭能力,作者在文中簡(jiǎn)約有序地組織表達(dá)了所有的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),用詞準(zhǔn)確慎重, 所選句式難易交織,固定句式及地道的短語(yǔ)賦予了文章別樣的風(fēng)采, 在文末水到渠成地用了一句it s well worth 表達(dá)了自己的觀點(diǎn),精彩圓滿地完成了寫作目的。U niversity will eoll students recommendedby hig
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