廣東省創(chuàng)新方法與決策管理系統(tǒng)重點(diǎn)

1、Unit 5 Writing如何寫(xiě)游記一、什么是游記？游記，顧名思義，就是記游，也就是對(duì)一次出行、游覽、參觀等的記錄。在這里，游的含義有多種：游歷、游玩、游覽、參觀、訪問(wèn)、考察等。二、游記的分類(lèi)：記敘型游記；抒情型游記；寫(xiě)景型游記；說(shuō)理型游記。不管哪種游記，都是通過(guò)對(duì)自然風(fēng)光、風(fēng)景名勝、城市景觀、景觀中的人與事進(jìn)行描繪，來(lái)達(dá)到記事、抒情、說(shuō)理等目的。三、游記的寫(xiě)作方法1. 游記中的線索要有一條合理的線索貫穿其中，這條線索也可以說(shuō)是寫(xiě)作的順序。2. 游記中的主體主體指的是做這件事的人或者集體。對(duì)游記中的主體的點(diǎn)明有多種方式，一般在一開(kāi)始就點(diǎn)明。3. 游記中的寫(xiě)景人是主體，景是客體。要有選擇，有重

2、點(diǎn)的寫(xiě)景物。對(duì)重點(diǎn)景物，要注意詳細(xì)描寫(xiě)。寫(xiě)出它們的位置、大小、動(dòng)態(tài)、靜態(tài)、顏色等。游記中的景物描寫(xiě)最好配合文章的主題。4. 游記中的地點(diǎn)：說(shuō)明游覽或參觀的地點(diǎn)。5. 游記要分清主次：重要的行程、有特色的景觀、對(duì)表現(xiàn)文章主體有重要作用的事物等，要重點(diǎn)描寫(xiě)，其他的則應(yīng)一筆帶過(guò)，或者干脆不寫(xiě)。6. 略寫(xiě)前后，情、理、景相結(jié)合開(kāi)頭交代清楚時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物，結(jié)合議論或抒情的方式寫(xiě)下自己的感受。這樣寫(xiě)的文章有頭有尾，讀起來(lái)給人一個(gè)完整的印象。這樣寫(xiě)的文章融情于景，使外在的自然風(fēng)光與作者內(nèi)心的特殊感受相結(jié)合，從而能更強(qiáng)烈地打動(dòng)讀者。1. 寫(xiě)游記所用詞匯：travel across, on the way,

3、by train/ bus, pass through, all the way, arrive, from.to, scenery, mountain, rivers, ocean, tower, stadium, restaurant, sigh.2. 表示感想的詞匯：excited, afraid, terrified, worried, tired, pleased, happy, impressed, surprised, amazed, satisfied.3. 句式：Itskilometers fromtoWithin kilometers of.Its about .kilom

4、eters northeast of.is close toIt is / lies in / to / on the east ofWe visited , which isWhen we arrived in, we sawWe spent.visiting.寫(xiě)作任務(wù)：根據(jù)要求寫(xiě)一段游記，內(nèi)容包括：寫(xiě)作任務(wù)：根據(jù)要求寫(xiě)一段游記，內(nèi)容包括：1. 地點(diǎn)：地點(diǎn)： 加拿大加拿大 （Toronto-Montreal)2. 人物：人物： My cousin and I 3. 乘火車(chē)一路看到很多風(fēng)光乘火車(chē)一路看到很多風(fēng)光4. 穿過(guò)層巒疊嶂的群山，看到灰熊、山羊穿過(guò)層巒疊嶂的群山，看到灰熊、山羊5. 經(jīng)過(guò)

5、小麥種植區(qū)經(jīng)過(guò)小麥種植區(qū)6. Thunder Bay 是位于加拿大中心的港口，船只往來(lái)如梭是位于加拿大中心的港口，船只往來(lái)如梭7. 在在Toronto登上登上CN Tower看了尼亞加拉瀑布看了尼亞加拉瀑布8. 參觀體育館，游覽唐人街，并在那里就餐參觀體育館，游覽唐人街，并在那里就餐9. 在蒙特利爾，看到用法語(yǔ)寫(xiě)的標(biāo)牌、廣告在蒙特利爾，看到用法語(yǔ)寫(xiě)的標(biāo)牌、廣告10. 下午逛商店下午逛商店11. 想再次參觀想再次參觀寫(xiě)作思路：1. 人稱(chēng)：第一人稱(chēng)2. 時(shí)態(tài)：多用一般過(guò)去時(shí)3. 要點(diǎn)：(1) travel across Canada(2) saw many things of Canada(3)

6、passed through the Rocky Mountains and saw wild scenery, a grizzly beer and some goats(4) a wheat-growing area(5) a port in the centre of Canada(6) ships can come all the way(7) went up the CN Tower, saw the mist from Niagara Falls(8) visited stadium, Chinatown, had dinner there(9) saw sighs and ads

7、 in French(10) spent the afternoon in shops(11) would like to go back for another visit(1) My cousin and I traveled across Canada by train.(2) We saw many things from the train on the way across.(3) We passed through the Rocky Mountains and saw wild scenery, a grizzly beer and some goats.(4) Canada

8、is empty in the centre, which is a wheat-growing area.(5) The city of Thunder Bay is a port in the centre of Canada.(6) ships can come all the way to the top of the Great Lakes.(7) In Toronto, we went up the CN Tower and saw the mist from Niagara Falls.(8) We visited covered stadium.(9) We saw China

9、town and had dinner there.(10) We saw sighs and ads in French.(11) We spent the afternoon in shops.(12) There is so much to see and do on one trip, so we would like to go back for another visit.構(gòu)思謀篇文章開(kāi)頭：介紹人物、地點(diǎn)、事件：my cousin and I travel by train across Canada乘火車(chē)所見(jiàn)：Rocky Mountainswild scenery, a griz

10、zly beer and some goatswheat-growing areaa port CN TowerIn Toronto: Niagara Falls, stadium, Chinatown sighs and ads in FrenchIn Montreal: old Montreal spent the afternoon in shops結(jié)尾： so much to see and do 表達(dá)“沒(méi)看夠，希望再來(lái)”的愿望: would like to go backWhat we saw in Canada My cousin and I traveled across Can

11、ada by train from west to east. We saw many things form the train on the way across, and in the cities of Toronto and Montreal. Some of the most important and interesting things that we saw are included in this report. We passed through the Rocky Mountains on the train, and saw wild scenery, a grizz

12、ly bear and some goats. Canada is very empty in the centre, which is a wheat-growing area. The city of Thunder Bay is a port in the centre of Canada. Ocean ships can come all the way to the top of the Great Lakes. In Toronto, we went up the CN Tower and saw the mist from Niagara Falls. We visited th

13、e covered stadium, which is the home of several famous basketball teams. We saw Chinatown and had dinner at the Pink Pearl restaurant. When we arrived in Montreal the next day, we saw many sighs and ads in French. Then we went to Old Montreal and sat in a buffet restaurant beside the St Lawrence River. We spent the afternoon in shops and visiting artists in their workplaces. There is so much to see and do in Canada on one trip. We saw only a few things, but