初三中考英語作文模板好詞好句總結(jié)講義教案(精心整理含范文)

1、學(xué)員編號(hào)： 學(xué)員姓名：年 級(jí)： 輔導(dǎo)科目：課時(shí)數(shù)： 學(xué)科教師：課程主題：作文授課時(shí)間：學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)作文題材及思路梳理教學(xué)內(nèi)容、專題知識(shí)梳理一、中考作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)以下為上海中考英語作文官方評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn):作文評(píng)價(jià)基本要求內(nèi)容（8分）內(nèi)容切題、充實(shí)、不寫廢話；意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、準(zhǔn)確、完整語法（8分）語言基本正確；用語規(guī)范、無或少見語法錯(cuò)誤；拼寫、大小寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確結(jié)構(gòu)（4分）詞匯和句式句型運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)自如；文中有值得肯定的好句型和表達(dá)形式2015年上海中考英語作文總分為 20分；1 .內(nèi)容分8分。內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚完整。2 .語言分8分。學(xué)生需用語規(guī)范，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，無或少見語法錯(cuò)誤，詞匯拼寫正確，句型使用

2、恰當(dāng)。首先是字 數(shù)，少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。3 .組織結(jié)構(gòu)分4分，也就是我們常說的文采分。根據(jù)學(xué)生使用復(fù)雜句型/單詞和諺語/俗語的情況來加分。（8+8+4原則不變）（一）內(nèi)容：7-8分：內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。5-6分：內(nèi)容基本切題，意思大致連貫，表達(dá)基本清楚、但不夠完整。2-4分：內(nèi)容不夠切題，意思不夠連貫，表達(dá)不夠清楚、有些離題。0-1分：文不對(duì)題，表達(dá)不清。（二）語言：詞數(shù)：每少5個(gè)字扣0.5分，以此類推。只寫出個(gè)別單詞、詞不成句不給分。拼寫：每錯(cuò)扣0.5分，同一錯(cuò)誤不重復(fù)計(jì)數(shù)。語法：同標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、大小寫：每兩處錯(cuò)誤扣0.5分，但扣分總和不超過 1分。（三）組織結(jié)構(gòu)：內(nèi)容充

3、實(shí)、上下文連貫、用語規(guī)范、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、無語法錯(cuò)誤；詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，多見好句型 和習(xí)慣表達(dá)用語者，可給 4-3分。內(nèi)容充實(shí)、不寫廢話；上下文連貫、用語規(guī)范、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、無或少見語法錯(cuò)誤；詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，多見好句型和習(xí)慣表達(dá)用語者，可給 2分。一般情況下，內(nèi)容和語言累計(jì)得分在15分以上者（含），方可得到1-2分組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。內(nèi)容和語言在15分以下者，如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表達(dá)，可酌情考慮給1分組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。通篇句型、句式單一、詞匯貧乏者，即使無語法錯(cuò)誤，一般也不予給組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。（四）詞數(shù)：詞數(shù)不足30個(gè)者，乂分以8分為限；詞數(shù)不足40個(gè)者，乂分以11分為限；詞數(shù)不足50個(gè)者，Z分以1

4、4分為限；（以上3點(diǎn)應(yīng)結(jié)合內(nèi)容和語言各項(xiàng)綜合考慮。）詞數(shù)在50 59個(gè)之間者，每少5個(gè)扣0.5分；只寫出個(gè)別單詞、詞不成句者，則給 0分。實(shí)際評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：1 .Globalscoring 整體評(píng)分：很多老師其實(shí)不是每個(gè)部分分項(xiàng)評(píng)分，很多情況時(shí)閱讀完第一句第二句在腦海里給出一個(gè)大致的該學(xué)生的起評(píng)點(diǎn)，12+, 15+, 10+,所以首句很重要，首句以及后面的一句會(huì)對(duì)該起評(píng)點(diǎn)多少有一定作用；2 .字?jǐn)?shù)問題：中考一般 60字作文，80-90最佳60字以下/直接扣內(nèi)容分扣分 3-4分；3 .要點(diǎn)問題：根據(jù)要求如果以下要點(diǎn)僅供參考，不包括不會(huì)直接扣分，不要受到要點(diǎn)干擾。但實(shí)際考生中， 不包括任何一條得高分非

5、常少。所謂Guided Writing提示，是給學(xué)生擴(kuò)展思路的。4 .特殊案例：白卷。分，與本文無任何關(guān)系的作文6分為最高分（這點(diǎn)每年考試也會(huì)有微調(diào)）5 .總體印象分是一把雙刃劍。不能為了寫總體印象分，用所謂難詞，結(jié)果發(fā)生語法錯(cuò)誤，扣語言分，還要扣總體印象分。6 .評(píng)卷流程：電腦閱卷2人一組，組長臺(tái)上監(jiān)控。兩人分值不能相差太大4分（僅供參考），超過額定分值退回重新批改（僅供參考）°閱卷速度其實(shí)閱卷者每天有一定的閱卷量，真正停留在每個(gè)考生的閱卷時(shí)間其實(shí)還是有限的，但一定是充足的。教師每天在完成大量閱卷工作后，也會(huì)有一定的審美疲勞，所以首句最好能出彩。（供參考）教師實(shí)際閱卷重點(diǎn)：1、首句

6、：首句出錯(cuò)，印象非常糟糕2、連接詞/邏輯（結(jié)構(gòu)清楚）3、尾句4、內(nèi)容/例子5、模版使用/套題近5年上海中考作文分析2011 年Write at least 60 words about the topic" I ' m a member of （以 我是 的員”為題，寫篇不少于60字的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）提示：你可以作為任意興趣小組或社團(tuán)的一員，或者作為家庭、班級(jí)、社區(qū)的一員，寫出你的經(jīng)歷、感受等。Use the following points as reference:Are you glad to be a member of ?jpceciipWhat do yo

7、u do in it?How do you feel as such a member?2012 年99. Write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation （根據(jù)所給情景寫一封不少于60 詞的信）Suppose you are Joe. Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too much about the result.What do you think? Try to offer her some advice.（

8、假如彳是Joe,你的好朋友 Betty因?yàn)檫^于在意考試結(jié)果而感到焦慮。請(qǐng)給她寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶?，并給她一些建議。）（注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)任何姓名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分 。）2013 年99. Write at least 60 words about the topic "How to protect myself 以 如彳保護(hù)自己”為題，寫一篇不少于 60 詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。 ）提示：自我保護(hù)石青少年需要掌握的重要技能。請(qǐng)談?wù)勀阍谏钪性鯓舆M(jìn)行自我保護(hù)（可結(jié)合生活中的 某一個(gè)情景或具體事例，如：面對(duì)災(zāi)難如何自救，如何預(yù)防受騙或侵害，如何避免生活中的意外，等等。

9、）Phrases for reference （一下短語僅供參考） ： ask.for helpcalm downin dangerpreventfrom（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）2014 年VII. Writing （作文）（共 20 分）88. Write at least 60 words about the topic"This time next的刎匕時(shí)”為題，寫一篇不少于 60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）你是否想象過，明年此時(shí)，你的生活會(huì)發(fā)生怎樣的變化？你對(duì)自己或他人有怎樣的期待？你能為此做些 什么？）（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)

10、任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）The following sentence patterns are for reference only.（以下句型僅供參考 ）?I hope to /I hope that.?Perhaps I will.? It will be exciting / necessary / terrible to .2015 年VII. Writing （作文）（共 20 分）94. Write at least 60 words on the topic “ Iwant to invent _" （以“我想要發(fā)明 "為題，寫一篇不少于

11、60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）（注意：1、在答題紙上將題目補(bǔ)充完整。 2、短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）The following is for reference only.（以下表達(dá)僅供參考）? It can be used to It will be exciting/necessary/helpful to在2016的中考備考過程中，需要1 .訓(xùn)練學(xué)生寫句子和運(yùn)用詞匯的能力；2 .訓(xùn)練學(xué)生如何根據(jù)問題構(gòu)思文章內(nèi)容；3 .根據(jù)文章題目提高自己的立意；4 .半命題作文趨勢(shì)比較明顯，需要加強(qiáng)學(xué)生的自我想象及立意組織能力二、專題精講Is stress a bad

12、 thing?（建平西校 2015第一學(xué)期月考） Use the following points1. Someone is afraid of stress. How about you?2. Is stress a bad thing? What 's your view? Give at least two reason 范文1When people talk about stress, some of them are afraid of it. However, I 'm not afraid of stress. In my opinion, stress is n

13、ever a bad thing because it can easily become positive if we deal with it properly . Apart from that, the more stress you have, the more attention you pay to a thing . With the help of stress, you are able to finish your work more seriously and better. We oughtn't to give up when we are under st

14、ress. Instead, we should be more powerful and confident to face the challenges in our life. 日校得分8+8+2=18 分析： 本文內(nèi)容切題，回答了題目中的 2個(gè)問題，表達(dá)清晰。8分 學(xué)生需用語規(guī)范，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，無語法錯(cuò)誤，詞匯拼寫正確，句型使用恰當(dāng)，字?jǐn)?shù)合理。8分學(xué)生文采分。文章使用了條件句；the+比較級(jí)，the +比較級(jí)句型；短語 with the help of, be able to do, give up等，長短句結(jié)合，文采分2分。范文2As grade nine students, we ar

15、e all under great stress. Some are afraid of stress while others are not. I'm not afraid of it for I can release stress properly. Stress is a bad thing, however, everything has two sides and stress is not an exception. In my opinion, if someone doesn 't have any stress. He/She may not focus

16、on study. If he/she has so much stress that can't sleep well and study efficiently. It will be terrible. Therefore, we should figure out a way to copy with the situation.日校得分8+6+0=14 分析：本文內(nèi)容切題，回答了題目中的 2個(gè)問題，表達(dá)清晰。8分 文章出現(xiàn)幾處明顯語法錯(cuò)誤：1 if條件句與后面的結(jié)果分成了2句，2. So.that結(jié)果狀語從句無主語3. Copywith the situation用語不恰當(dāng)。

17、根據(jù)每錯(cuò)一個(gè)語法扣0.5分，得分6學(xué)生文采分。語法扣分基本不得文采分。學(xué)生常見語法錯(cuò)誤分析：1 .時(shí)態(tài)混搭：常見一般過去時(shí)出錯(cuò)，記敘文可能需要用過去時(shí)來描述更為恰當(dāng)2 .人稱前后不一致：第一人稱單復(fù)數(shù)和第二人稱的混合使用3 .固定搭配出錯(cuò)：如 help sb with sb的介詞搭配，上文里的 copy with 使用不當(dāng)4 .從句使用不當(dāng)：比較容易出現(xiàn)賓語從句的時(shí)態(tài)問題等5 .主謂，單復(fù)數(shù)，拼寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)等一、專題知識(shí)梳理1 .中考英語寫作無論是議論文還是記敘文，在具體寫作過程中我們不妨按如下順序進(jìn)行。2 .確定寫作中心。根據(jù)中心，能夠擴(kuò)展的材料有哪些。要避免寫那些與中心內(nèi)容無關(guān)緊要的細(xì)節(jié)3 .

18、圍繞中心，列出寫作提綱。提綱一定要包含所提供的情景要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)要盡量使用自己熟悉的詞匯與句型。4 .根據(jù)字?jǐn)?shù)多少，擴(kuò)展成篇。擴(kuò)展的內(nèi)容一定要緊扣主題，千萬不要寫那些與主題不相關(guān)的內(nèi)容。擴(kuò)展時(shí)要注意短文的字?jǐn)?shù)，要寫夠8090個(gè)英語單詞，以避免由于字?jǐn)?shù)不夠引起的扣分。如何列提綱：例： Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic How to find happiness :（ 以“How to find happiness ” 為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。

19、）Use the following points as a guide.（短文必須包含以下要點(diǎn) ）What's your view on happiness?Do you agree with the saying, “ Moneys happiness." ? give two reasons ）How do our students find happiness in our study and life ?中文提綱：1. Beginning :你認(rèn)為開心是什么開心對(duì)我們來說很重要2. Main body 說明觀點(diǎn)：認(rèn)同金錢就等于開心嗎?原因一 開心不能用錢買發(fā)現(xiàn)開心方

20、法一-口,，幫助別人即使窮人也有開心取得成就.父母，朋友美愛3. Ending 我們要保持開心英文提綱：1. Beginning : it is widely accepted thatplays an important part in our life2. Main body :Main reasons>Happiness can't be bought with money.f A poor person who gets lots of love is always happy - Although I don't have much money, I still

21、 have a happy life because I have p parents who always take care of me, friends who always help me and teachers who always encourage me.H Help othersSolutions _ -wWhat's more- -. It's cheerful to make progress and get good marks.3. Ending: Believe it or not, if you try to find happiness, hap

22、piness will be always around you.批注：讓學(xué)生先用中文說下大致思路，然后列在紙上。再把中文翻譯成英語，翻譯時(shí)用盡一切好詞好句。然 后就能成形為一篇英語提綱。最后把英語提綱進(jìn)行拼接，一篇好文章就出爐啦。整理后范文：It is widely accepted that happiness plays an important part in our daily life. It's everywhere if you try to find the beauty around you. There is a saying "Money is hap

23、piness" among many people, but I don't think so. First, happiness can't be bought with money. Secondly, a poor person who gets lots of love is always happy. Although I don't have much money, I still have a happy life because I have parents who always take care of me, friends who alw

24、ays help me and teacherswho always encourage me. It's fun to play with friends. It's cheerful to make progress and get good marks. It's happy to help others. Believe it or not, if you try to find happiness, happiness will be alwaysaround you.議論文： 原因類模板? 第一段觀點(diǎn)：? I think it is adj. to do s

25、th./ I think sth./doing sth. is adj. I have 3/2 reasons for that.? 第二段原因：? First of all, sth./ doing sth. enablesto? What' s more, by doing . I can .? Last but not least, sth. doing sth. is soare that wee to without it/ doing? 第三段總結(jié)：? In a word, those are the reasons why I think it adj. to do? 第

26、三段建議：? In order to/not to，we shonbdt only but also ? Only in this way, can we.學(xué)生范文My Opinion on Using PhoneI think it is useful to use the phone. Here are my reasons.First of all, using phone enables us to communicate with others. What 's more, by using phone I can get to the place I'd like

27、to easily. Last but not least, using phone is so convenient that we can listen to the music to relax ourselves.However, we shouldn 't spend too much time on using phone in order to make good use of phone. In brief, we can benefit a lot from using phone properly.議論文：建議類模板? 第一段觀點(diǎn)：? I think it is a

28、dj.(necessary/ important/)to do sth./ I think sth./doing sth. is adj. .(necessary/important/ To .,(solve this problem) I have 3 suggestions.? 第二段建議：? First of all, it s a good choice to do? What s more, we/youd better doinstead of doing.? Last but not least, we/ you are supposed to do? 第三段總結(jié)：? Only

29、in this way, can we.? Follow my advice, I am sure you/we will學(xué)生范文The Way I Deal with PressureAs a Grade Nine student, it's undeniable that we are under great pressure. However, problems can always be solved if we spend efforts. I ve found some ways to deal with pressure.First of all, it is a goo

30、d choice to listen to music, which can help me get rid of the pressure and make me relaxed,especially when I'm exhausted . What's more, chatting with fridens and parents is a good way as well. I always have a talk with my mother when I 'm under pressure and she can give me some advice.Th

31、ese're my ways to deal with pressure and I think they are quite useful.記敘文：寫事/寫人類模板? I.交代是誰/什么事? A : XXX is the -est person that I have ever met. (2) Whenever I think about him, I cannot but feel? B： doing is the est thing that I have ever done/ it 's since I did sth.However, I will forget t

32、he moments that I spend wh XXX? II.交代經(jīng)過。?It was on（注思時(shí)態(tài)大多應(yīng)該是過去時(shí)）,? III. 經(jīng)驗(yàn)總結(jié)/感想/名言? CD According to my personal experience, I completely understand the meaning of the famous saying:“ .”?After that, I learnt that 學(xué)生范文：The Best Person I KnowOf all the people I ve met, I believe my mother is the best p

33、erson. The reasons are as follows:First of all, she always encourages me to be independent and deal with problems myself. What 's more, she helps me a lot with my study as well. Last week, I got a poor mark in my exam, I was disappointed. She had a talk with me and encouraged me not to give u p.

34、 It is my mother that lets me know that life is always difficult, but we should hold positive attitude towards it.All in all, my mother not only gives me wisdom in my life but also advices me to be confident in my study, she is the best person I know.二、專題精講(1 )范義好句積累：1. It ,s undeniable that.2. Get

35、rid of.3. So.that4. Of all.sb/sth is the +形容詞最高級(jí)+名詞復(fù)數(shù)5. Not only.but also.(2)寫作思路拓展環(huán)保類例題分析：Suppose you are a member of the organization water is life ”. Please write a proposal to all the schoolmates to ask them to save water.Suggested questions:1. Why do we need to save water ?2. How can we save wa

36、ter? At least two ways.Water is Precious / Save Water Right NowThere is no doubt that all the living things need water to survive. However, there is only a little fresh water in the world and many people waste water. Water is so precious that it is time for us to try our best to cherish and save wat

37、er.First of all, we ordinary people can protect water in many ways, such as reusing water, turning off the tap while brushing teeth. What's more, factories should clean the dirty water before pouring it to river. Last but not least, governments are supposed to make laws to prevent sewage from ri

38、vers and lakes and so on.All in all, actions should be taken to save water. I believe the more efforts we can do, the more fresh water we can have in the future.個(gè)人：reusing water; having a bath instead of taking a shower; washing clothes without running water; don 't use fresh waterr to flush the

39、 toiles.政府： clean the dirty water before pouring into river.企業(yè)：making laws減壓類1. Talking with others who are ready to listen to you.2. Doing exercise, like running.3. Having a big meal that can give you a sense of satisfication4. Having a short trip with friends or parents.5. Waliking alone as well a

40、s listening t music.興趣愛好類The best way to make me happyThere is no doubt that we should be happy everytime. In my opinion, the best way to make me happy is to play basketball. First of all, I like sports very much, it can let me forget the stress from study. Secondly, playing basketball is a good way

41、 to keep healthy. Last but not least, playing basketball can not only relax ourselves but also help us to prepare for the basketball exam. All in all, the best way to make me happy is to paly basketball.1. Broden mind and enrich knowledge.2. Make more friends who have the same interest with you.3. K

42、ill time and relax oneself.4. Help you develop an advantage besides study.5. Make school life more meaningful and colorful.寫人/寫事類經(jīng)過及原因： 寫人：1. Help me solve problems and troubles.2. Teach me knowledge and skills.3. Take care of me without asking for anything.4. Encourage me to be confident and give m

43、e a hand when I have difficulty.寫事 同上 Write a composition in at least 60 words on“ An important first in life for me”(寫一篇題為對(duì)我來說非常重要的一次”的小短文，字?jǐn)?shù)不得少于 60字。)提示：每個(gè)人的生活中都有第一次，例如：第一次參與某項(xiàng)活動(dòng)，第一次嘗試做某事情，第一次獲得某種榮 譽(yù)等等。請(qǐng)按題目要求寫出對(duì)你來說很重要的一次。(注意：文中不能出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。)An important first in life for meParticipati

44、ng in ( Taking an active part in=Joining in ) an English contest, for my perspective(=in my opinion) , is an important first for me.I used to be a shy girl who seldom(=hardly=rarely=barely) spoke English in public.When the contest was held(=took place) in school, I mustered up the courage (=was enco

45、uraged) to sign up for (=enter for=go in for) it. Unfortunately(=Luckily) , there are so many competitors that I failed to get(=wasn able to get=didn ' t manage to get=wasn ' t successful inagettinge. Despite my poor performance( Although I didn ' t wellfelt delighted for(=was pleased wi

46、th) the simple reason that I overcame my fear for the first time. To sum up(=All in all) ,taking part in the contest is an important first for me and I will make new attempts to (=do/try my best to) challenge myself in the future.同意短語或句型的轉(zhuǎn)換：Participating in =Taking an active part in=Joining in for m

47、y perspective=in my opinion seldom=hardly=rarely=barely was held=took place mustered up the courage =was encouraged sign up for =enter for=go in for Unfortunately=Unluckily failed to get=wasn ' t able to get=didn ' t manage tosgiecewsfui in gettirtg despite+ 名詞 /代詞=though/although+ 句子 felt d

48、elighted for=was pleased with看圖說話類Tom' s ChristmasWriting（作文）（共 20 分）94.Write at least 60 words on the topic（以湯姆的圣誕節(jié)為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格 ）湯姆在圣誕節(jié)發(fā)生了什么事？由此他產(chǎn)生了怎樣的感想？請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片進(jìn)行描述。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）The following is for reference only.（以下表達(dá)僅供參考）Strange, disappointedAt midnightThe n

49、ext morningTom's ChristmasChristmas without gifts is like the day without sunshine. December 24th, 2015, in Tom's mind, was the strangest Christmas for the reason that his father didn 't give him a gift. The more he thought it, the more disappointed he felt. At midnight, Tom 's fathe

50、r came into his bedroom quietly and put a pretty gift on the desk. When Tom found the gift the next morning, he couldn't help opening it. He was deeply believed that his father loved him so much and books in it would make his life meaningful and colorful.（3）用于英語結(jié)構(gòu)中的句型推薦：（一）As we all know 款（應(yīng)用議論文

51、居多/記敘文亦可，描述現(xiàn)象類）1. There is no doubt that .（句子）2. There is no denying that.1.1. It is undeniable that.4. It is common knowledge that.（句子）5. It is widely accepted that.（句子/6. It is obvious that.（句子）7. As is well-known to the public that.8. It is generally believed that題1.毫無疑問水在日常生活不可或缺，但鮮少人意識(shí)到淡水正日益減少譯

52、文 a. There is no denying that water plays an important role in our daily life , but few people are awareof thesharp reduce of fresh water.題2:人們普遍認(rèn)為，各種各樣的電子產(chǎn)品給生活帶來了樂趣，但是我不禁懷疑它們是利還是弊呢。譯文 a. It is widely accepted that different kinds of electronic products bring a lot of fun to life, but I doubt whethe

53、rthey do good or harm.譯文 b. It is generally believed that a wide variety of electronic products bring a great deal of fun to life, but I doubtwhether they are beneficial to us or harmful.（二）據(jù).（往往是一件具體的事件議論文）1. It is said that.據(jù)說2. It is reported that.據(jù)才艮道.題.據(jù)報(bào)道，從2015年中考將取消英語。（就我來看，這是不可能。）譯文.It is re

54、ported that English test will be canceled /won't be included in senior high school entranceexaminationfrom 2015. （ From my point of view, it is far from true）（三）with.隨著（常用議論文）1. With the rapid/fast increase/growth of （population）. 隨著（人口）的快速增長2. With the rapid advance/development of （science and

55、technology）,隨著（科技）的飛速發(fā)展 /進(jìn)步，.3. With the great progress of （ science of technology）, . 隨著（科技）的巨大進(jìn)步，4. With the approaching/coming of （ senior high school entrance exam）題：隨著電子書的盛行，青少年的書寫能力日益減弱。、譯文 a. With the wide spread of electronic books, teenagers' writing ability is becoming weaker and weake

56、r.（四）具體話題/問題/ （多見議論文）1. Recently there is a heated discussion/topic about .2. According to a recent survey, .3. The issue/problem/phenomenon of （food health） has arisen public attention/ comes to public attention.題1.最近大家都在討論學(xué)生有無必要上課外輔導(dǎo)班（ tutorial class）譯文：Recently there is a heated discussion whethe

57、r it is necessary for students to attend tutorial classes （or not）題2.隨著校車事故的頻繁，校車的安全性問題引起了公眾的關(guān)注。譯文： With the increase of accidents of school buses （ related to school buses）, the problem of their safety comes topublic attention.（五）圖表作文開頭1. As can be seen clearly from the graph/table/chart,.（趨勢(shì)描寫 /概括性描寫）2. As is shown in the graph/table/chart, .（趨勢(shì)描寫 /概括性描寫）題：以上圖表顯示，學(xué)生的睡眠時(shí)間嚴(yán)重不足。譯文 a: As is shown in the chart above, students are seriously short of sleeping time.（六）記人/寫