英語書面表達的潤色

1、英語書面表達的潤色句式的多樣選詞特色關聯(lián)詞的使用合理的想象和發(fā)揮 高考英語科考試說明中第五檔（2125分）的給分范圍和要求 覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點； 應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯； 語法結構或詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為盡量使用較復雜結構或較高級詞匯所致；具備較強的語言應用能力； 有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊，完全達到了預期的寫作目的。 全、準、順 、雅一、復雜多樣的句式復合句 倒裝句 強調結構 非謂語 感嘆句 虛擬語氣 獨立主格結構、反意問句、并列句、名言、警句等 2004年廣州一模的書面表達為例 假設你是某中學生英文報的小記者，對中學生課外上網(wǎng)的利弊進行調查采訪。以下是學生們對上網(wǎng)的看

2、法。請你根據(jù)他們的觀點寫一篇簡要的調查報告，并呼吁正確使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)。使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的益處1、資源豐富2、節(jié)省時間3、方便交流和溝通使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的弊端1、內(nèi)容良莠不齊2、沉迷網(wǎng)絡游戲會影響學業(yè)3、過多使用會影響健康1各種復合句1）Theres no doubt that the Internet does us good.2) The majority of students believe that they benefit a lot from the Internet.3) As is known to all, once addicted to the online games, the stu

3、dents no longer concentrate on their studies.4) Helpful as the computer is, some still stick to the opinion that not everything on the internet is good for us students.2. 倒裝句1) Never before could we be exposed to so much information with just a click.2) Only with great care and under proper guidance

4、 will the students improve their studies and enjoy making new friends by surfing the internet.3) With the increasing popularity and convenience that the internet brings, there arises the argument over its bad effects on teenagers. 4) Presented as follows is the result of a recent survey on how stude

5、nts view the Internet. 3. 強調結構1) It is the internet that makes the world much smaller.2) Isnt is the internet that provides people w i t h a m o r e c o n v e n i e n t w a y o f communication?3) The internet does enable people to communicate with each other more easily and quickly.4. 非謂語1） We shoul

6、d try to make proper use of the computer, making it a good partner that benefits our life as well as our study.2) Being absorbed in the games, students may have difficulty in controlling themselves, leaving their homework undone.5. 感嘆句1) How hard some students find it to tear themselves away from co

7、mputer games！2) How convenient it is to use the computer!6. 虛擬語氣1）As more and more students stay up surfing the internet，it is high time that we discussed the problem2) Without the internet, we would not have enjoyed our life so much.3) Some people insist that teenagers be kept away from the interne

8、t.二、選詞特色(2004年廣州一模) do sb good, do sb harm, have ones health damaged , leave ones homework undone, benefit, addicted to, concentrate on, be exposed to, under proper guidance, provide, enable, absorbed in, have difficulty in doing , tear oneself away from, be kept away from , make proper use of, stay

9、 up, act as a two-edge sword, teenagers, as follows等等。三、關聯(lián)詞的使用（1）表時間的：now, then, afterwards, soon, before long, shortly after that, minutes later, just now, just then, suddenly, immediately, the moment, etc. （2）表順序及過程的：first(ly), first of all, second(ly), at first, then, next, at last, finally, etc.

10、 （3）表轉折的：but, yet, and yet, instead, however, although, though, otherwise, or else, in spite of, etc.（4）表結果的：thus, therefore, so, as a result, seeing that, luckily, (un)fortunately, etc.（5）表強調的：first of all, above all. indeed, surely, certainly, of course, after all, at least, at most, etc.（6）表并列的：a

11、nd, also, as well, etc.（7）表遞進的：besides, whats more, in addition, even, once more, what was worse, to make things worse, etc.（8）表解釋或說明的：in other words, that is, that is to say, namely, for example, actually, and so on, such as, personally, believe it or not, to tell you the truth, according to this,

12、for this reason, etc.（9）表比較的：just like, just as, in the same way, more or less, on the contrary, on one hand, on the other hand, while, etc. （10）表總結的：finally, in conclusion, in a word, in general, generally speaking, in short, as you / we know, in the end, in all, etc.2004年廣州一模的書面表達可以用上以下的過渡性詞語: wha

13、ts more ( also, beside, in addition), worse still ( whats worse, to make things worse), however, therefore, as a result, on the other hand, on the contrary, generally speaking等待。 四、合理的想象和發(fā)揮 Last Sunday, our class organized some volunteer activities. Group One went to the Peoples Park to plant trees

14、and water the flowers. Group Two went to the Bus Station to do some cleaning. Group Three went to the street to raise money for the Hope Project. Group Four went to the old peoples home to put on performances. Late in the afternoon we returned home，and we were happy.“流水帳”式，缺少“血”和“肉”。 Last Sunday, ou

15、r class organized some volunteer activities, from which all of us learned a lot. Group One went to the park to plant trees and water the flowers to make it more beautiful. Group Two managed to give the Bus Station a spring cleaning. As a result, it took on a new look. Group Three headed for the stre

16、et and helped to raise money for the Hope Project, so that more people in the poor areas can afford their schooling. Group Four went to the old peoples home and presented wonderful performances, the aged laughing all the time, happier than ever. Late in the afternoon we returned home, worn out, but

17、we were happy to have enjoyed a meaningful day.關聯(lián)詞的使用練習 One day I was walking in the street. I saw a thief stealing a car near a house. I ran to the house. I wanted to tell its owner what was happening.Nobody was there. I decided to shout at the thief and stop him stealing the car. The thief got out

18、 of the car, seized me and threw me to the ground. I got badly injured, my head bleeding all the time. I struggled to stand up. I gave a phone call to the police station. The police turned up and caught the thief.One day I was walking in the street when I saw a thief stealing a car near a house. Wit

19、hout hesitation, I ran to the house in order to tell its owner what was happening, but nobody was there. So I decided to shout at the thief and stop him stealing the car. Suddenly the thief got out of the car, seized me and threw me to the ground. At that time I got badly injured, my head bleeding a

20、ll the time. I struggled to stand up and gave a phone call to the police station. Several minutes later the police turned up and caught the thief.某報紙刊登有人化裝行乞的照片,請你為此寫篇評論,要點為:1.假裝殘疾和無助是欺騙行為 2.行乞原因3影響市容 4.政府應采取措施杜絕此類事件要點分析及發(fā)揮：看到這些圖片感到震驚。這些street beggar本來可以自食其力，卻假裝看起來貧窮、殘疾、無助，與偷竊無異。他們想錢來得容易，怕辛苦。如果我們對他們有憐憫之心，正中其下懷，更多人效仿。不顧自己尊嚴，被人歧視。有損城市現(xiàn)象。政府應采取措施杜絕此類事件 ，幫助真正無助的人選詞與造句：看到這些圖片感到震驚。 shocked/a shock/shocking pictures這些street be