專題五　短文改錯

1、專題五 短文改錯題組一Proofreading 1(2019河北石家莊二模)I went to buy some traditional Chinese medicine on last Sunday. Just before leaving the drugstore, I noticed that some foreigners seems to have difficulty communicate with the assistant. I went over to ask if I needed. The assistant told me that she couldnt make

2、 herself understand about how to boil the mixture correctly. Learning that I could give them the hand, they were relieved. Without some trouble, I translated that the assistant wanted to say. Both sides expressed thanks to me. I was delighted to help other. More importantly, as a Chinese, I felt pro

3、udly to see foreigners try traditional Chinese medicine.答案I went to buy some traditional Chinese medicine last Sunday. Just before leaving the drugstore, I noticed that some foreigners seemsseemed to have difficulty communicatecommunicating with the assistant. I went over to ask if I needed. The ass

4、istant told me that she couldnt make herself understandunderstood about how to boil the mixture correctly. Learning that I could give them thea hand, they were relieved. Without someany trouble, I translated thatwhat the assistant wanted to say. Both sides expressed thanks to me. I was delighted to

5、help otherothers. More importantly, as a Chinese, I felt proudlyproud to see foreigners try traditional Chinese medicine.解析考查介詞。此處last Sunday作時間狀語不需介詞,故去掉介詞on?？疾閯釉~的時態(tài)。根據(jù)語境可知,此處指發(fā)生在過去的事情,故將seems改為seemed?？疾榉侵^語動詞。have difficulty (in)doing sth.為固定句型,故應(yīng)把communicate改為communicating?？疾閯釉~的時態(tài)和語態(tài)。此處指我走過去問我是否被需

6、要,根據(jù)語境,事情發(fā)生在過去,且從句的主語為I,故應(yīng)添加was?？疾榉侵^語動詞。understand與herself為被動關(guān)系,故將understand改為understood?？疾楣谠~。此處give sb. a hand為固定用法,故將the改為a?？疾椴欢ù~。without表否定意義,some常用于肯定句中,any常用于否定句或疑問句中,故將some改為any?？疾槊~性從句。此處引導(dǎo)賓語從句,且賓語從句中缺少say的賓語,而that引導(dǎo)賓語從句并不充當(dāng)成分,故將that改為what?？疾榇~。此處指“其他人”,應(yīng)用others,other表示“其他的”,故將other改為others。

7、考查形容詞?？吹酵鈬藝L試傳統(tǒng)的中藥,我感到驕傲。felt為系動詞,后面應(yīng)用形容詞作表語,故將proudly改為proud。Proofreading 2(2019東北三省三校一模)You must have heard about Dolly and have been amazed by the first cloned animal. But here came a problem:should we clone humans? When being asked about this question, a large number of people which are interest

8、ed in the topic hold the view that its beneficial to clone humans. Therefore, some other people, me including, are against this idea. Cloning humans can bring negative effects and wrong informations. In the first place, they may not be treated equal as normal people, which I believe will make him su

9、ffer a lot. In second place, human cloning may lead in some social disorder, and it is quite dangerous.答案You must have heard about Dolly and have been amazed by the first cloned animal. But here camecomes a problem:should we clone humans? When asked about this question, a large number of people whic

10、hwho/that are interested in the topic hold the view that its beneficial to clone humans. ThereforeHowever, some other people, me includingincluded, are against this idea. Cloning humans can bring negative effects and wrong informationsinformation. In the first place, they may not be treated equalequ

11、ally as normal people, which I believe will make himthem suffer a lot. In second place, human cloning may lead into some social disorder, and it is quite dangerous.解析考查動詞的時態(tài)。此處需要用一般現(xiàn)在時,而非一般過去時,所以將came改為comes?？疾榉侵^語動詞。people與ask為被動關(guān)系,且根據(jù)句意可知不是表示正在被問,所以將being去掉?？疾槎ㄕZ從句。先行詞為people,指人,所以應(yīng)當(dāng)用who或that來引導(dǎo),而不是

12、which?？疾楦痹~。根據(jù)前后兩句關(guān)系可知,此處是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系而不是因果關(guān)系,所以將Therefore改為However?？疾榉侵^語動詞。me和include為被動關(guān)系,所以將including改為included?？疾槊~。information為不可數(shù)名詞?？疾楦痹~。此處用副詞修飾動詞,所以改為副詞equally?？疾榇~。前文提及they,根據(jù)前后一致原則可知,此處應(yīng)為them,所以將him改為them?？疾楣谠~。此處second是序數(shù)詞,前面需要有形容詞性物主代詞或定冠詞the來修飾。根據(jù)句意可知,此處需要加入the?？疾閯釉~短語。lead to為固定短語,意為“導(dǎo)致”。Proofread

13、ing 3(2018安徽合肥二次質(zhì)檢)Last Saturday our class went hiking in a countryside. We meet at our school gate and set off at 8:00 am. On the way, we were singing and laughing happily while a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole. She felt so frightening and even burst into tears. One of my classmate found a lon

14、g rope and we finally got him out. Fortunately, she didnt suffer seriously injuries, but it seemed that her ankle slightly twisted. We managed to sending her to the nearest hospital. It is an experience well never forget it, though we didnt enjoy ourselves very much that day.答案Last Saturday our clas

15、s went hiking in athe countryside. We meetmet at our school gate and set off at 8:00 am. On the way, we were singing and laughing happily whilewhen a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole. She felt so frighteningfrightened and even burst into tears. One of my classmateclassmates found a long rope and

16、we finally got himher out. Fortunately, she didnt suffer seriouslyserious injuries, but it seemed that her ankle slightly twisted. We managed to sendingsend her to the nearest hospital. It is an experience well never forget , though we didnt enjoy ourselves very much that day.解析考查冠詞。句意:上周六,我們班去了鄉(xiāng)下遠(yuǎn)足

17、。in the countryside為固定短語,意為“在鄉(xiāng)下”,故將a改為the?？疾閯釉~的時態(tài)。根據(jù)上句中的Last Saturday及本句中的at 8:00 am可知本句應(yīng)該用一般過去時,故將meet改為met。考查連詞。句意:在路上,我們開心地又唱又笑,這時一個女孩突然掉進(jìn)了一個深坑里。be doing sth. when.為固定句式,意為“正在做某事,這/那時”。when在該句型中為并列連詞。故將while改為when?？疾樾稳菰~。句意:她感到很害怕甚至突然大哭起來。frightened感到害怕的;frightening令人害怕的。本句表示“感到害怕的”,故將frightening改

18、為frightened?？疾槊~的數(shù)。根據(jù)“One of”可知需將classmate改為classmates?？疾榇~。錯誤處應(yīng)該用her指代上文提到的a girl?？疾樾稳菰~。錯誤處應(yīng)該用形容詞作名詞injuries的定語,故將seriously改為serious?？疾楸粍诱Z態(tài)。her ankle與twist為被動關(guān)系,故本句需用被動語態(tài),因此在her ankle后加was?？疾榉侵^語動詞作賓語。manage后需用不定式作賓語。manage to do sth. 意為“成功做某事”。故將sending改為send?？疾槎ㄕZ從句?！皐ell never forget”為定語從句,先行詞expe

19、rience在定語從句中作賓語,省去了引導(dǎo)詞that或which,it多余,故將it刪除。題組二Proofreading 1(2019四川成都二診)Last year, my friend and I went to visit the Yellow Mountain. We carried two backpacks, that turned out to be pretty heavier for the hike. I was not an experiencing hiker and those endless steps make me want to return to the s

20、afe and comfortable ground. But my friend encouraged me great. “Look, the top is coming closer and closer. We are almost there.” I pulled me together and kept going. After three-hour exhausting hike to the top, but with wonderful sceneries on the way, we got to the top finally. For our pleasure, we

21、also found a hotel that looked very much inviting.答案Last year, my friend and I went to visit the Yellow Mountain. We carried two backpacks, thatwhich turned out to be pretty heavierheavy for the hike. I was not an experiencingexperienced hiker and those endless steps makemade me want to return to th

22、e safe and comfortable ground. But my friend encouraged me greatgreatly. “Look, the top is coming closer and closer. We are almost there.” I pulled memyself together and kept going. After three-hour exhausting hike to the top, but with wonderful sceneriesscenery on the way, we got to the top finally

23、.ForTo our pleasure, we also found a hotel that looked very inviting.解析考查定語從句。根據(jù)句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,此處為非限制性定語從句,所修飾的先行詞為指物的名詞backpacks,所以把that改為which,which在定語從句中作主語?？疾樾稳菰~。根據(jù)語境可知,此處沒有比較的意思,所以應(yīng)用形容詞原級?？疾樾稳菰~。experienced為形容詞,表示“有經(jīng)驗的,經(jīng)驗豐富的”?？疾閯釉~的時態(tài)。根據(jù)文中的時間狀語“Last year”可知,本文講述的是過去的事情,所以應(yīng)用一般過去時?？疾楦痹~。一般用副詞修飾動詞,所以應(yīng)用副詞grea

24、tly修飾動詞encouraged?？疾榇~。根據(jù)該句的主語“I”可知,此處應(yīng)用反身代詞myself。I pulled myself together and kept going.意為“我振作起來,繼續(xù)前進(jìn)”?？疾楣谠~。hike為可數(shù)名詞,前面應(yīng)加不定冠詞,又根據(jù)three-hour的發(fā)音以輔音音素開頭,所以應(yīng)用不定冠詞a?？疾槊~。scenery為不可數(shù)名詞,沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式?？疾榻樵~。此處為固定搭配,to ones pleasure表示“令某人高興的是”?？疾楦痹~。much一般用來修飾比較級,根據(jù)該句可知,此處“very”修飾形容詞原級“inviting”,所以把much刪掉。Proofre

25、ading 2(2019山東濟(jì)南一模)Dear Mr. Brown,We have learned that you were going back to America for the summer vacation. To express our thank for your excellent teaching in our school, we have decided have a party for you. The party which will start at 6:30 on Friday evening in the lecture hall. It will possi

26、ble last an hour. To start with, our monitor will give a speech on behalf of a whole class. Then we would like to invite you to join us and singing some English songs. In the end of the party, we will present you with some gifts and cards, mostly making by ourselves. I believe you will have a good t

27、ime together.Looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely,Frank答案Dear Mr. Brown,We have learned that you wereare going back to America for the summer vacation. To express our thankthanks for your excellent teaching in our school, we have decided have a party for you. The party will start at 6:30 o

28、n Friday evening in the lecture hall. It will possiblepossibly last an hour. To start with, our monitor will give a speech on behalf of athe/our whole class. Then we would like to invite you to join us and singingsing some English songs. InAt the end of the party, we will present you with some gifts

29、 and cards, mostly makingmade by ourselves. I believe youwe will have a good time together.Looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely,Frank解析考查動詞的時態(tài)。根據(jù)語境可知,此處用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時表將來,所以把were改為are?？疾槊~。thank v.感謝;thanks n.感激;謝意?？疾楣潭ù钆?。decide to do sth.表示 “決定做某事 ”?？疾榫渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)。根據(jù)句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,此句為簡單句,which多余,所以應(yīng)刪掉?？疾楦痹~。根據(jù)句子結(jié)構(gòu)

30、可知,此處應(yīng)用副詞possibly修飾動詞last?？疾橄薅ㄔ~。根據(jù)語境可知,此處特指整個班級或者我們整個班級,所以把不定冠詞a改為定冠詞the或者our?？疾閯釉~。根據(jù)該句中的and可知,此處和前面的join并列,所以應(yīng)改為動詞原形。invite sb. to do sth.表示 “邀請某人做某事”?？疾榻樵~。at the end of.表示“在結(jié)束時”,in the end 表示“最后”,單獨(dú)使用,不與介詞of連用?？疾榉侵^語動詞。根據(jù)句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,make與所修飾名詞some gifts and cards為被動關(guān)系,所以應(yīng)用過去分詞made作后置定語?？疾榇~。根據(jù)語境以及該句中的 “

31、together ”可知,此處應(yīng)表示 “我們”,所以將you改為we。Proofreading 3(2019河南鄭州第二次質(zhì)量檢測)I used to be a person who hates exercising. But after I started playing baseball,I attracted by the sport. Therefore, I cut down on most of my spare time, like shopping. Though it wasnt the hard process for me, I needed to make more o

32、f an effort than others. I enjoy the feeling of work with my teammates as well as the time we spend it together. There is a proverb that goes, “The process is much beautiful than the outcome.”I am a beginner in this sport. Sometimes people will look down on me, and it doesnt matter. It will only mak

33、e me keep trying. Only with practising over and over again can I catch up with other fantastic player one day. The challenge encourages myself to go on.答案I used to be a person who hateshated exercising. But after I started playing baseball, I ttracted by the sport. Therefore, I cut down on most of m

34、y spare time, like shopping. Though it wasnt thea hard process for me, I needed to make more of an effort than others. I enjoy the feeling of workworking with my teammates as well as the time we spend together. There is a proverb that goes, “The process is muchmore或much后加more beautiful than the outc

35、ome.”I am a beginner in this sport. Sometimes people will look down on me, andbut it doesnt matter. It will only make me keep trying. Only withby practising over and over again can I catch up with other fantastic playerplayers one day. The challenge encourages myselfme to go on.解析考查動詞的時態(tài)。根據(jù)句中的used可知

36、此處應(yīng)用一般過去時,故將hates改為hated?？疾閯釉~的語態(tài)。句意:但是在我開始打棒球之后,我就被這項運(yùn)動吸引了。主句中主語I與attracted之間為被動關(guān)系,故在I與attracted之間加was,構(gòu)成被動語態(tài)?？疾楣谠~。句意:雖然它對我來說并不是一個很難的過程,但是我需要比他人付出更多的努力。此處表泛指,不是特指,故將the改為a。考查非謂語動詞。錯誤處work作of的賓語,所以需用動名詞作of的賓語。故將work改為working?？疾槎ㄕZ從句中代詞的多用。we spend it together作定語修飾the time,省略了關(guān)系代詞which或that,it就是which/t

37、hat作的成分,故將it去掉?？疾楸容^級。此處指過程比結(jié)果更美好。此句中有than應(yīng)考慮使用比較級。故將much改為more或在much后加more?？疾檫B詞。句意:有時人們會瞧不起我,但是沒關(guān)系。前后兩個分句構(gòu)成轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。故將and改為but?？疾榻樵~。通過某種方式或手段做某事用介詞by。故將with改為by?？疾槊~復(fù)數(shù)。句意:只有通過反復(fù)的練習(xí),有一天我才能趕上其他出色的球員們。此處表復(fù)數(shù)概念,故應(yīng)將player改為players?？疾榇~。句意:這個挑戰(zhàn)鼓勵我繼續(xù)堅持下去。題組三Proofreading 1(2019陜西咸陽一模)Cell phones are very conveni

38、ent for students to search for learning information. Beside, they can bring us a lot of funs. However, once addicting to them, we are always wasting time on them where we should study.Last Monday I take my cell phone to school. During a lesson, I was secretly playing with it. Suddenly my teacher was

39、 standing nearby, glared at me. Then, I had to hand it in because it against the school rule. At first I felt very much angry, but later I realized that I was wrong. Thanks for the teacher, I know that the cell phone isnt the necessary part of school life.答案Cell phones are very convenient for studen

40、ts to search for learning information. BesideBesides, they can bring us a lot of funsfun. However, once addictingaddicted to them, we are always wasting time on them wherewhen we should study.Last Monday I taketook my cell phone to school. During a lesson, I was secretly playing with it. Suddenly my

41、 teacher was standing nearby, glaredglaring at me. Then, I had to hand it in because it against the school rule. At first I felt very angry, but later I realized that I was wrong. Thanks forto the teacher, I know that the cell phone isnt thea necessary part of school life.解析考查副詞。句意:此外,它們可以給我們帶來許多樂趣。

42、beside意為“在旁邊”,故將Beside改為Besides?？疾槊~。fun為不可數(shù)名詞,沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將funs改為fun?？疾榉侵^語動詞。addicted為形容詞化的過去分詞,意為“沉溺于”,故將addicting改為addicted?？疾槎ㄕZ從句。句意:然而,一旦我們對它們上癮,我們總是把我們應(yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)的時間浪費(fèi)在手機(jī)上。句中先行詞為time,定語從句中缺少時間狀語,故將where改為when?？疾閯釉~時態(tài)。根據(jù)時間狀語Last Monday可知本句需用一般過去時,故將take改為took?？疾榉侵^語動詞。本句中主語my teacher與glare為邏輯上的主動關(guān)系,故用glarin

43、g表主動,作伴隨狀語?？疾橹^語動詞。本句中because為從屬連詞,引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句,主語為it,其后的against為介詞,且主句中用的是一般過去時,故在it與against之間添加was?？疾楦痹~。本句中angry為形容詞原級,very常修飾原級,而much常修飾比較級。故將much去掉?？疾榻樵~。本句中thanks to意為“幸虧;由于”,為固定短語。故將for改為to?？疾楣谠~。句意:多虧了老師,我知道了手機(jī)不是學(xué)校生活必需的一部分。此處表泛指,故將the改為a。Proofreading 2(2019吉林遼源二模)After school, as usual, I went back

44、home. On the bus, I find a woman with a cute baby standing besides me and having difficulty holding on to the grab pole. In spite my own exhaustion, I rose from my seat and gave them away without hesitation to her and the baby. She thanked me several times sincerely, that made me feel extremely prou

45、d. I was realized my little favor could real make a difference to a person who was badly in need of it. Arrived home, I almost forgot my tiredness. I was lost in happinesses because I did a little for a stranger and gained a lot.答案After school, as usual, I went back home. On the bus, I findfound a w

46、oman with a cute baby standing besidesbeside me and having difficulty holding on to the grab pole. In spite my own exhaustion, I rose from my seat and gave themit away without hesitation to her and the baby. She thanked me several times sincerely, thatwhich made me feel extremely proud. I realized m

47、y little favor could realreally make a difference to a person who was badly in need of it. ArrivedArriving home, I almost forgot my tiredness. I was lost in happinesseshappiness because I did a little for a stranger andbut gained a lot.解析考查動詞的時態(tài)。本文講的是“我”在放學(xué)回家的路上發(fā)生的事情,全文基本時態(tài)是一般過去時,故將find改為found?？疾榻樵~。

48、“在旁邊”應(yīng)用介詞beside,故將besides改為beside?？疾楣潭ǘ陶Z。in spite of為固定短語,意為“雖然;盡管”,后為名詞短語作賓語,故在spite后加of?？疾榇~。此處代詞指代上文中的my seat,為單數(shù)形式,故將them改為it?？疾槎ㄕZ從句。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,此處為非限制性定語從句,that不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句,且關(guān)系代詞在定語從句中作主語,故將that改為which?？疾閯釉~的語態(tài)。句意:我意識到我的小恩惠對一個非常需要它的人來說真的能起到作用。主語I與realize之間為主動關(guān)系,因此謂語動詞應(yīng)用主動語態(tài),故將was刪除?？疾楦痹~。修飾動詞make應(yīng)該用

49、副詞形式,故將real改為really?？疾榉侵^語動詞。句意:當(dāng)我到家時,我?guī)缀跬浟宋业膭诶?。用現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語,與I構(gòu)成主動關(guān)系,故將Arrived改為Arriving?？疾槊~的數(shù)。happiness為不可數(shù)名詞,故將happinesses改為happiness?？疾檫B詞。句意:我沉浸于幸福當(dāng)中,因為我為一個陌生人做了一點(diǎn)事但是得到了很多。此處表轉(zhuǎn)折,故將and改為but。Proofreading 3(2019河北衡水一模)I am an animal lover. A few weeks ago, when I went home from school I saw a dog la

50、in on the roadside. I got closer to see that it was there. I felt shocked when I find it was unable to move. Someone told me that it was hit by the motorcycle. I decided to bring it home and look after it careful. Every day I gave it enough food or water before I went to school. And once I came back

51、 home, I would play it.To its great joy, it is now able to walk with little difficult. My efforts have been paid off.答案I am an animal lover. A few weeks ago, when I went home from school I saw a dog lainlying on the roadside. I got closer to see thatwhy it was there. I felt shocked when I findfound

52、it was unable to move. Someone told me that it was hit by thea motorcycle. I decided to bring it home and look after it carefulcarefully. Every day I gave it enough food orand water before I went to school. And once I came back home, I would play it.To itsmy great joy, it is now able to walk with li

53、ttle difficultdifficulty. My efforts have paid off.解析考查非謂語動詞。句意:幾周前,當(dāng)我放學(xué)回家的時候,我看到一只狗正躺在路邊。 see sb. doing sth.意為“看見某人正在做某事”,此處應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在分詞短語作賓語補(bǔ)足語,故將lain改為lying?？疾橘e語從句。句意:我走近去看為什么它會在那里。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,此處引導(dǎo)賓語從句且在從句中作原因狀語,應(yīng)用why引導(dǎo)該從句,故將that改為why?？疾閯釉~的時態(tài)。句意:當(dāng)我發(fā)現(xiàn)它不能移動時,我感到很震驚。此處敘述的是發(fā)生在過去的事情,故when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句應(yīng)用一般過去時,故將fin

54、d改為 found?？疾楣谠~。句意:有人告訴我它被一輛摩托車撞了。此處泛指一輛摩托車,且 motorcycle是以輔音音素開頭的單詞,應(yīng)用不定冠詞a,故將the改為a?？疾楦痹~。句意:我決定把它帶回家并仔細(xì)地照顧它。此處修飾動詞短語look after,應(yīng)用副詞,故將 careful改為 carefully?？疾檫B詞。句意:每天我上學(xué)前都給它足夠的食物和水。根據(jù)句意可知,此處food和 water為并列關(guān)系,并非選擇關(guān)系,應(yīng)用并列連詞and,故將or改為and?？疾楣潭ù钆?。 play with.為固定搭配,意為“與玩”,故在play后加with?？疾榇~。句意:令我高興的是,它現(xiàn)在可以毫不費(fèi)

55、力地走路了。結(jié)合句意可知,此處指“令我高興的是”。故將its改為my?？疾槊~。句意見上題。此處作介詞with的賓語,且其前有l(wèi)ittle修飾,應(yīng)用名詞,with little difficulty意為“毫不費(fèi)力地”,故將 difficult改為difficulty?？疾閯釉~的語態(tài)。句意:我的努力得到了回報。pay off意為“取得成功;奏效”,為不及物動詞短語,無被動語態(tài),故刪除been。題組四Proofreading 1(2019湖南益陽4月模擬)This morning, I found it was snowing heavily. Attracted by the beautiful

56、 sight, I decided to go out to take some photo. The snow finally stopped at noon, and I couldnt wait go outside with my camera. As I walked on the path in the front of our building, I saw a boy suddenly slip in the snow-covered ground. It was at that moment when I realized what I should do. Immediat

57、ely, I returned home to get a broom but started to sweep the path. I worked so hardly that I sweated a lot. An hour late, the thick snow was cleared away. Looked at the clean path, my neighbors all smiled and gave me thumbs up. I felt very happy that I have done something for my neighborhood.答案This morning, I found it was snowing heavily. Attracted by the beautiful sight, I decided to go out to take some photophotos. The snow finally stopped at noon, and I couldnt wait go outside with m