上海中考英語作文專題指導講課教案

1、上海中考英語作文專題指導精品文檔上海中考英語作文專題指導一、中考英語作文寫作模式一一“四審四注意”寫作法“四審”：一審標題文體格式。這樣可以為下面的寫作，如人稱、時態(tài)、內(nèi)容、格式等奠定基礎(chǔ)；二審人稱。如是以第一人稱I或we為主還是以第二人稱you或第三人稱she, he,it或they為主;三審時態(tài)。一般而言，寫作時文章應(yīng)多以現(xiàn)在時（包括一般現(xiàn)在時、一般將來時、現(xiàn)在完成時和現(xiàn)在進行時）或過去時（一般宜用一般過去時和過去進行時）為主，切忌時態(tài)混亂；四審內(nèi)容。如有提示，應(yīng)盡量按照所給提示來寫，不可偏題亂發(fā)揮，可將有關(guān)內(nèi)容提煉分解成幾句展開敘述，不可遺漏，這是很重要的一點，一般文章按who, whe

2、n, where, what, how, why 等要素展開?！八淖⒁狻保阂蛔⒁馊绻恼聸]有給出開頭結(jié)尾，一定要寫開頭結(jié)尾。當然，開頭和結(jié)尾的方式不能太落于俗套，要有一定的新意，一般一兩句即可，結(jié)尾要點題，有所立意；二注意句式要富于變化，不能通篇只有一種句式或句式過于單調(diào)，否則即使無語言和內(nèi)容錯誤也難得高分，如可適當運用if, when, although等狀語從句，Ithink / I hope / I believe that等賓語從句，如用定語從句必須有絕對把握；三注意適當運用連接詞，如 on one hand, on the other hand; whaS more; however

3、等，這樣使文章更有層次、更富邏輯性，若語言和內(nèi)容沒問題，做到第二、三項“注意”就很有希望拿組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。四注意善于運用有把握的詞匯和句型，盡量運用課本所學詞句，堅決避免不正確的“中國式英語"，更不能亂”發(fā)明。般一篇文章能用8個左右的好短語或句 式已很不錯。最后需要提醒考生的是，中考作文要取得高分，詞數(shù)不能太少也不能太多，筆者覺 得，以80詞左右為宜。另外，書寫一定要認真、工整，以免造成不必要的失 分。二、中考英語作文常見語言錯誤調(diào)查分析1.時態(tài)錯誤錯誤類型中文疆誤表達時態(tài)錯誤他在這兒已經(jīng)7 年九她常給我們講故 事。stories.He has been since 7 years.Sh

4、e often tell正確表達He has been liere fur 7 years*She often 【elk us stories*2.時間狀語錯誤錯誤 類型中文錯誤表達正嵇表達誤用去年春天 今晚 明天下午4點last yeur spring today's night; this night toinorjo afienioon at 1 o'clocklast spring tonighl; this evening;il 4 o clock turiK>m>w aflernoon多余一天下午 在下個月 明天上午one day afternoonin

5、 next monthin / on tomorrow inurningone afternoonnext month tomorrow morning3.名詞單復數(shù)錯誤中文錯誤表達正確表達些信息somesonic inlonnalion真有趣!Whai a greai fun!What great fun!三份工作three worksthree pieces of work / Lhree jobs4.動詞誤用誤型中文錯誤表達正確表達分詞 錯誤看見某人正在做 某事有某人在做某事對感興趣see sb, did sth.there be sb- doing sth.bo interesting

6、 insee sb. doing sth.there he sh. doing sth.be interested in不定 式錯仗使某人做某事 請某人來希望某人做make sb. io do sth. ask sb. uomehope sb, to do make sb. do sth.ask m Lu cunie hope sb. will / can do want / wish sb. to do .用詞 不當參加活動join activiiicstake part in / join in activities缺少 動詞我很高興口 他很累。very happy. He very li

7、red.1 am verj h;ippy. He is very tired.5.語態(tài)錯誤錯誤中文錯誤表達正確表達誤用 主動它是上海制造的1 她叫海倫3 某物能用Il made in Shanghai.She called Helen.Nlh. can useIl is made in Shanghcii, She is (called) Helen, slh. can be used誤用這書好賣。 難說The book is sold well.It is luird lo be saitl.Great changes have Jbten lakeJi pljce inShanghai.T

8、he book sells welL ll is hard to say.Great charmcs have krtakenplaceinShanghai.被動上海史生了很大 變化：構(gòu)成 錯誤正在建造一座橋.上周我們看到了 劉翔A bridge is been hui Id inn.Liu Xiang is seen by us Iasi week.A bridge is being hui 11Liu Xiang was seen by us last week.6.詞性誤用錯誤 類型中丈錯誤表達正確表達她的英語很好：Her English is very well.She is gH&g

9、t;d al Englisli. /喃、/ adv.努力學習沿著楚直地走獨自地做某事work hardlygo straighdy alongdo sth. lonely adj.)Iler English is very work hard go slraighi along do sLh. alojtegood.adv. / v我乘車去上學1 by bus Io school,I go ro school by on a bus.bus /prep./ adv.地M公里彳遠 is kilometres far Irorn .is kilometresIron】awayprep./ y.過馬

10、路acn>s% ihe si reelgo across i cross the streetmifn./ adv.第一.第二 第三The first The second The third First (Firstly)Second (Secondly)Tliird (Thirdly)兒/ odj.在北部in the norihcmin the northm / V.他感謝了我白He I hanked【"/ fnr me.He thanked / thankful to me.was7.介詞誤用類型中文錯誤表達正確表達誤用在村莊附近 對*,有良效 在老師的幫助下 熟悉某人/

11、某事 大聲地 在陽光F讀書nearby the village have a good effed io under ihe teacher help familiar with sb./ to sth, with a loud voice read under the sunnear the illagc have a gixid efftei on with the teacher's help familiar to sb. / with sth. in a loud voice jead in ihe sun多余到那兒在某人回家的路上為人無服務(wù)anived at Ihere,

12、gar id thereon one's way to home serve lor ihe peoplearrived / reached / gor thereon one's wav homeserve ihe people8.某些搭配和慣用法誤用中文錯誤表達正確表達價格便宜心The price is cheap.Ilieprice is low.請你做Pleast you do Please do .*他告訴我Hetold me whetherHe told me (that她15歲口She i$ fifteen ycars age. 1 She is fifteen-

13、 vear-okl.JShe ia Fifteen. / She is a girl nt IS, / She is fifteen years old. / She is a 15- year-oid girl.我花了 10元買書一1 cost / spcni 10 yuan lo bux ihc book.Ilie bunk cost me 10 yuutr / 1 spent 10 yuan (im buying / on the book.F中考英語總復習專項訓練題寫作專項訓練A.中考英語熱門寫作話題1.關(guān)于學習Write a passage of at least 60 words

14、about the topiCHow to learn English well (以“怎樣學好英語”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。)Use the following points as a reference.以下內(nèi)容供參考) When did you start learning English? (in . / . years ago) How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day .) What is difficult to learn

15、? (listening, grammar .)2 .關(guān)于興趣Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topiCMy interest”.（以 “我的興趣” 為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.以下內(nèi)容供參考） What is your interest? Why do you like it so much?3 .關(guān)于寫事Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topi （Unforgetta

16、ble memories（以“難忘的回憶”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.以下內(nèi)容供參考） What is your unforgettable memory? Why do you think it is unforgettable?4 .關(guān)于計劃Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topi CMy plan for summer holiday”.（以“我的暑期計劃”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the fo

17、llowing points as a reference.以下內(nèi)容供參考） What are you going to do during the coming summer holiday? Give at least two points.5 .關(guān)于朋友Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topiCMy good friend ”.（以 “我的好朋友”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.以下內(nèi)容供參考） Who is your good

18、friend? What do you often do with him or her? Why do you regard him or her as a good friend?6.關(guān)于寫人Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topiCMy English teacher".（以 “我的英語老師”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.以下內(nèi)容供參考） Who is your English teacher? Do you like

19、 him or her? Why do you like him or her?7.關(guān)于英語Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topid“changed my ways of learningEnglish”.（以“我改變了我學習英語的方式”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文， 標點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.以下內(nèi)容供參考） How did you learn English in the past? Why do you change your ways of lear

20、ning English? How do you learn English now?8.關(guān)于旅行Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topi （An unforgettable trip”.（以 “次難忘的旅行”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.以下內(nèi)容供參考） Where did you go? What did you do during that trip? Why do you think it is unforgettable?9

21、.關(guān)于動物Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topiCMy favourite animal ”.（以 “我最喜歡的動物”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.以下內(nèi)容供參考） What's your favourite animal? Why do you like it so much?收集于網(wǎng)絡(luò)，如有侵權(quán)請聯(lián)系管理員刪除10.關(guān)于網(wǎng)上購物Write a passage of at least 60 words about the

22、topi （Online shopping is changing theway of our life（以“網(wǎng)上購物正在改變我們的生活方式”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.以下內(nèi)容供參考） What's your view on online shopping? What are its advantages and dis-advantages? Please give one or two suggestions to your friends if they love online

23、 shopping.11.關(guān)于學科Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topi （My favourite subject”.（以 “我最喜歡的學科”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.以下內(nèi)容供參考） What's your favourite subject? Why do you like it best?12 .關(guān)于變化Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topi （Ch

24、anges in myself'.（以 “我的變化”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.（以下問題可供參考） Have you had any changes in yourself since you came to the middle school? Which are the most important changes? （Give at least 2 examples） What do you think of the changes?13 .關(guān)于節(jié)日Write a passag

25、e of at least 60 words about the topi （The Lantern Festival （以 “元宵節(jié)”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.（以下內(nèi)容供參考） Do you like the Lantern Festival and why do you like it? What do people usually do on the Lantern Festival?B.提示性作文每個人都有自己的夢想，努力堅持終能實現(xiàn)。請根據(jù)下圖及表格中所提供的信息寫一篇文章。Mv

26、 dream has come trueloinL出身貧寒，付不起學費，但一直自學， 考上了大學口2上大學時堅持打零工（part Time job）,并照顧遭遇車禍的父母已；工堅持夢想（follow one's dream"擁有 了自己的農(nóng)場.You你的音想如何實現(xiàn) 你的夢想勤奮學習【要求】1 .所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息，可適當發(fā)揮；2 .介紹Tom,談?wù)勀愕膲粝氩⒆詳M兩點實現(xiàn)夢想的途徑；3 .文章不少于90詞；4 .語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整2015年中考英語總復習專項訓練題（六）參考范文 A. 1. How to learn English we

27、ll English is very important for us. Everyone wants to learn it well. Do you know how to learn it well? Here are my ways: Firstly, I listen to the teacher and make notes carefully in class. I review / go over my old lessons and prepare my new lessons after class.Secondly, I like speaking English wit

28、h my classmates, not only in classroom, but also on the playground. It's important to improve my spoken English.Thirdly, I keep a diary every day to practise my written English.Besides, I often read English newspapers and magazines in order to enrich my knowledge on English culture.2.My interest

29、I have a wide range of interests and enjoy doing many things in my free time. I am a lover of reading. I often read in my spare time. I read many kinds of books and newspaper. I like the stories and news in them very much. There are a lot of knowledge and interesting things as well. I am also a musi

30、c lover. I like all kinds of music. I often listen to the music programmes on radio. Although I cant sing English songs well, I like them a lot. I like sports as well. I often play badminton after classes in the afternoon. I often run in the morning. When I am doing sports, I forget all my trouble a

31、nd worry. Of course, sports can also help me in building my body.In short, I enjoy my life here in school. Reading books, listening to music and doing sports are very helpful to my health and my studies. 3.Unforgettable memoriesHow time flies! Three years passed in a blink. Lots of memories left in

32、my head. Teachers, classmates, hard work and above all friendship stay in mind. Looking back, I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure. Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study. Classmates and friends help me so much. With their help I'v

33、e made great progress. But 'm a careless boy. And I always make mistakes which can be avoided. Senior middle school life is a new beginning and it gives me a chance to overcome my shortcomings. As it is said,“Itnot our abilities that show what we ruly are, it is our choice.-m 01Thehwdaywill also

34、 provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.4.My plan for summer holidayThe summer holiday is coming. We will have plenty of time to enjoy ourselves. But I think we should plan the time carefully. We had better make a list of all

35、 the things we wish to do and try hard to keep a balance between work and play. In the holiday we can do many activities. For example, we can play with friends. We can do different sports. It is also meaningful for us to work as volunteers. Besides, we can do somereading. It can help get us prepared

36、 for the new term. I hope all of us will have a wonderful holiday.5.My good friendI have a good friend. Her name is Susan. She is 14 years old. Shefrom America.She s a tall girl with blue eyes and she has long golden hair. She likes doing sports, especially swimming and running. She enjoys reading b

37、ooks and listening to music. What's more, she is very interested in Chinese history and culture. So she often reads books about China. Shes lovely and friendly. She gets on well with her friends. She s also helpful. She often helps me learn English. With her help, I made much progress in English

38、. I "m lucky to have such a good friend.6.My English teacherOur English Teacher Ms Huang, came to our school two years ago. She has been an English teacher for more than 30 years. She works hard and has been a model teacher for many years. She is kind and friendly to us after class, but she is

39、rather strict with us in class. She always encourages us to speak and read more English. She often says, “ Practice makes perfect. " She is good at teaching and tries her best to make every lesson lively and interesting. She often gives us slide shows, teaches us English songs and helps us put

40、on short English plays. She is not only our teacher but also our friend. We all respect and love her. Tomorrow she is going to attend an important meeting, at which she will be given a medal for her advanced deeds.7.I changed my ways of learning EnglishAs an international language, English plays a g

41、reat character in our life. English has become more and more important to us. Therefore, I changed my way of learning English so that I can improve my English ability.In the past, I didn "t listen to English news often. So I changed it. I began to listen to English songs. And I listened to the

42、words of the song carefully in order to learn more words. Everytime when I met the words which I didn't know, I would looked it up in the dictionary. And I always tried to remember it after looking it up. After a month, I found that I knew more words than my classmates.I used to write as few wor

43、ds as I could. No doubt, I changed it.With the help of my friends and my teacher, I tried to write more articles. Finally, I succeeded. I took up writing as a hobby and I will never forget it.I'm glad that I changed my way of learning English. And everything I changed will make me more and more

44、interested in English.8.An unforgettable tripI went to Chongqing in July 22. It is a city which was built near mountains. So people call it Mountain City. In Chongqing, I went to the Red Stone Centre, to see the places which the prisoners lived in the past. It is a terrible and awful trip. There wer

45、e a lot of dogs, and soldiers with guns near the prisons. And most of the prisoners were good men. They didn't want to tell the bad people where the other people were. So they were put into the prison. They lived in very small houses. No good food to eat, no good water to drink. They had only tw

46、enty minutes to stay outside per day but they still said nothing. I think they are the heroes in that century. I will follow their spirit. 9.My favourite animalMy favourite animal is dog. I like it because it can help people in many different ways. Many, many years ago, dogs were already peop le pet

47、s. They lived in caves with people. Dogs were very good helpers. They guarded the caves and kept people safe from danger.Nowadays, dogs are also people pets. But some people are unkind to their dogs. They do not look after them and leave them in the street. We should be kind to dogs. They are our fr

48、iends. They can help us do many things. They help the police catch thieves and find missing people. They also help blind people cross the road safely. 10.Online shopping is changing the way of our lifeAs we all know, online shopping has become more and more popular among people especially the young

49、people. We can buy nearly everything on the Internet. In my view, online shopping has already changed the way of our life. People tend to surf the Internet to buy what they need. I think the advantage of online shopping is its convenience. People only sit in the soft and click the mouse at home to b

50、uy what they want. It can save people a lot of time and money. The disadvantage is that online shopping is not always safe. Sometimes your private information will be let out. So if you love online shopping, please be careful with your personal information and the website so that you can benefit fro

51、m online shopping.11.My favourite subjectEnglish is my favourite subject because English is used widely in the world, especially in Shanghai, a city with so many foreigners. Whats more, I like it because my English teacher is kind and friendly to me.In order to learn English well, I read English alo

52、ud every morning and listen to the teacher carefully in class. After class, I often watch English programmes and keep an English diary every day.In a word, I love English and I will continue to learn it better. 12.Changes in myselfEveryone has changed a little or a lot since the day he came to the m

53、iddle school. So have I. I am no longer a little girl because I am a middle school student now. I think that I have changed a lot. For example, I become more confident and friendly than ever before. I have made a lot of friends and we often have a good time. We help each other and share things together. And I also get rid of some of my bad habits. For example, I used to spend much time on c