廣東高考基礎寫作

1、廣東高考基礎寫作廣東高考基礎寫作上周，我們以上周，我們以“誰是你的偶像誰是你的偶像”為題，在為題，在2600名學生中進行了一次調查名學生中進行了一次調查(survey)。以下。以下是調查數據：是調查數據： 1調查時間、調查問題以及調查對象；調查時間、調查問題以及調查對象； 2男女生在以明星為偶像方面的差異；男女生在以明星為偶像方面的差異； 3“父母父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差異；在男女生偶像中的排序差異； 4男女生在以偉人為偶像方面的異同；男女生在以偉人為偶像方面的異同； 5你的偶像及理由。你的偶像及理由。07年廣東卷年廣東卷廣東高考基礎寫作 你很榮幸地成為你很榮幸地成為2008北京奧運會的一

2、名志愿北京奧運會的一名志愿者，負責編寫奧運比賽項目的英語介紹。者，負責編寫奧運比賽項目的英語介紹。 【寫作內容】：請根據以下中文提綱，編寫【寫作內容】：請根據以下中文提綱，編寫射擊項目的英語介紹：射擊項目的英語介紹：背景：射擊最初只是生存工具，背景：射擊最初只是生存工具，19世紀末才世紀末才發(fā)展成為一項體育運動。發(fā)展成為一項體育運動。1896：第一次成為奧運項目：第一次成為奧運項目1904：中斷：中斷1928：中斷：中斷1932：重回奧運會：重回奧運會1968：第一次允許婦女參加奧運射擊比賽：第一次允許婦女參加奧運射擊比賽現狀：穩(wěn)步發(fā)展，現狀：穩(wěn)步發(fā)展，1896奧運會只有三項射擊奧運會只有三項

3、射擊項目，現今有項目，現今有17項。項。08年廣東卷年廣東卷廣東高考基礎寫作1、寫作題材貼近考生的學習和生活。、寫作題材貼近考生的學習和生活。2、信息點多，必須用、信息點多，必須用5句話表達。句話表達。3、信息呈現方式多為表格、圖表等。、信息呈現方式多為表格、圖表等。4、以翻譯為基礎、注重考察表達能力。、以翻譯為基礎、注重考察表達能力。廣東高考基礎寫作廣東高考基礎寫作1.1.寫好簡單句寫好簡單句簡單句的五種基本句型：簡單句的五種基本句型：1 1）主語）主語+ +不及物動詞不及物動詞 (S+V)2 2）主語）主語+ +及物動詞及物動詞+ +賓語賓語 (S+V+O)3 3）主語）主語+ +系動詞系

4、動詞+ +表語表語 (S+V+P) 4 4）主語）主語+ +及物動詞及物動詞+ +雙賓語雙賓語 (S+V+O+O)5 5）主語）主語+ +及物動詞及物動詞+ +賓語賓語+ +賓補賓補 (S+V+O+C)廣東高考基礎寫作Ex : 改正下列病句并指出基本句型。改正下列病句并指出基本句型。 My favourite subjects including English and Chinese. Last week we hold a discussion about this topic. The future life will become more and more better. The f

5、ire destroied their houses.5. He spends two hours to study English every night._應改為應改為include_應改為應改為held_應改為應改為better and better_應改為應改為destroyed_應改為應改為studying廣東高考基礎寫作6. He cost ten dollars for the book.7. He felt confused，he didnt know what to do.8. He watched TV for a while before went to bed.9. S

6、he is confidence and patience.10. In his opinion, get fat is a terrible thing._應改為應改為paid_應改為應改為. He_應改為應改為going_應改為應改為confident and patient_應改為應改為getting fat廣東高考基礎寫作2 2、如何做到句式靈活？、如何做到句式靈活？1)1)并列句并列句2)2)復合句復合句 ( (定語從句、狀語從句、名詞性從句定語從句、狀語從句、名詞性從句) )3)3)強調句型強調句型4)4)非謂語動詞非謂語動詞5)5)倒裝句倒裝句6)6)其他句型及結構其他句型及結構

7、廣東高考基礎寫作Ex:按要求改寫下列句子。按要求改寫下列句子。1) English is widely used in the world. Most business letters are written in English. (合并為并列句合并為并列句) English is widely used in the world and most business letters are written in English. 2) People thought of some ways to solve the problem. These solutions didnt work. (

8、合并為并列句合并為并列句) People thought of some ways to solve the problem but these solutions didnt work.廣東高考基礎寫作3) I suggest that you visit the Great Wall. It has a history of more than two thousand years. (合并為定語從句合并為定語從句) I suggest that you visit the Great Wall, which has a history of more than two thousand

9、years.July 11 has been named the Sailing Day in our country since 2005. Zheng He began his famous voyage on July 11. (合并為定語從句合并為定語從句) July 11, when Zheng He began his famous voyage, has been named the Sailing Day in our country since 2005. 廣東高考基礎寫作5) I will not be able to meet you at the airport. I

10、have some experiments to do that day.(合并為狀語從句合并為狀語從句) I will not be able to meet you at the airport because I have some experiments to do that day.6) The problem was complicated. He solved it in only two hours with a computer. (合并為狀語從句合并為狀語從句) Though the problem is complicated, he solved it in only

11、two hours with a computer.廣東高考基礎寫作7) In the past five years, there have been changes in peoples diet. It is a fact.(合合并為名詞性從句并為名詞性從句) It is a fact that in the past five years, there have been changes in peoples diet.8) The weather was fine. We went to visit the ZhongShan Park. (獨立主格結構獨立主格結構) The wea

12、ther being fine, we went to visit the ZhongShan Park.廣東高考基礎寫作9) You should never give up when you are faced with difficulties. (非謂語非謂語+倒裝句倒裝句) Never should you give up when faced with difficulties.10) When a man and a woman meet, the woman first offers her hand. (改為強調句改為強調句) When a man and a woman m

13、eet, it is the woman who first offers her hand.廣東高考基礎寫作11) 眾所周知眾所周知, 吸煙危害健康。吸煙危害健康。（一句多譯）（一句多譯）a. It is known to all that smoking does harm to peoples health.b. As is known to all, smoking harms peoples health.c. Everyone knows that smoking is harmful to peoples health.廣東高考基礎寫作四、如何使文章連貫？四、如何使文章連貫？(過

14、渡詞的使用過渡詞的使用)1) 時間：時間：soon, then, suddenly, meanwhile, before, after, earlier, in the morning, afterwards, later, immediately, next, the other day, nowadays, gradually2) 空間空間: above, below, up, down, under, near, far from, in front of, behind, beside, beyond, on the right/left, around, inside, outsid

15、e, opposite to, next to, on top of, across.廣東高考基礎寫作3) 列舉：列舉：for example, such as, first(ly), second(ly), finally, besides, apart form, for one thingfor another thing 4) 比較比較: like, unlike, on the contrary, in contrast to, on the one handon the other hand, than, not soas, asas, while, similarly, the

16、former, the latter, someothers, onethe other, compared with廣東高考基礎寫作5) 邏輯關系：邏輯關系：a. 并列：并列：and, as well as, alsob. 轉折：轉折：but, however, yetc. 遞進：遞進：besides, apart from, in addition, whats more, furthermore, moreover, to make things worsed. 原因：原因：because, because of, as, since, for that reasone. 結果：結果：s

17、o, therefore, thus, as a result f. 讓步：讓步：though, although, in spite of廣東高考基礎寫作1 1、認真審題、認真審題 2 2、歸納、排列信息點、歸納、排列信息點 3 3、確定短語和句型、連詞成句、確定短語和句型、連詞成句4 4、組句成篇、組句成篇5 5、檢查修改、檢查修改 廣東高考基礎寫作高高 三三 學學 生生 現現 狀狀負擔過重的原因負擔過重的原因每天在校時間每天在校時間約約10小時小時1. 面臨高考；面臨高考；2. 家長期望高。家長期望高。每天作業(yè)時間每天作業(yè)時間3-4小時小時每天娛樂時間每天娛樂時間幾乎沒有幾乎沒有每天睡眠

18、時間每天睡眠時間不足不足某報設有一個求助信箱，請根據以下表中列出的信某報設有一個求助信箱，請根據以下表中列出的信息，以高三學生李華的名義給息，以高三學生李華的名義給Mr. HelperMr. Helper寫一封英文寫一封英文短信。信的開頭和結尾已寫好，不計入五句話。短信。信的開頭和結尾已寫好，不計入五句話。Dear Mr. Helper, Im a senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure._ I am looking forward t

19、o your advice. Yours sincerely, Li Hua廣東高考基礎寫作1 1 體裁格式體裁格式2 2 內容內容3 3 人稱、時態(tài)人稱、時態(tài)4 4 信息點的整信息點的整合和排列合和排列第第1 1步步 審題審題寫信寫信描述高三學生現狀。描述高三學生現狀。第一人稱。一般現在時。第一人稱。一般現在時。6 6項項廣東高考基礎寫作第第2 2步步 整合信息整合信息, , 譯成英語。譯成英語。1) 每天在校時間約每天在校時間約10小時。每天完成作小時。每天完成作 業(yè)時間業(yè)時間34小時。小時。 Every day we stay at school for about ten hours

20、to have lessons. We spend at least three to four hours doing our homework.2) 每天幾乎沒有時間娛樂、消遣。每天幾乎沒有時間娛樂、消遣。 a. We hardly have any time for relaxation. b. Hardly can we find any time to do what we want.廣東高考基礎寫作3) 每天睡眠時間不足，不利于健康。每天睡眠時間不足，不利于健康。 a. We dont have enough time to sleep, which does harm to ou

21、r health. b. We suffer from lack of sleep, which, in the long run, is not good for our health.4) 負擔過重的原因是面臨高考。負擔過重的原因是面臨高考。a. The main cause of our heavy burden is the pressure from the college entrance examination.b. The reason why we are carrying such a heavy burden is that we are facing the colle

22、ge entrance examination.廣東高考基礎寫作5) 父母對我們的期望很高父母對我們的期望很高。 a. Our parents expect too much of us. b. Our parents have high expectations of us. 廣東高考基礎寫作 Dear Mr. Helper, Im a senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure. Every day we stay at school

23、for about ten hours tohave lessons _ spend at least three to four hours doing our homework. _, hardly can we find any time to do what we want. _, We suffer from lack of sleep, which, in the long run, is not good for our health. The reason why we are carrying such a heavy burden is that we are getting the pressure from the college entrance e