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1、大學(xué)英語四級考試寫作講座內(nèi)容提要v四級寫作應(yīng)達(dá)到的水平v四級作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)v作文條理性及相關(guān)句式v寫作模板寫作一般要求寫作一般要求我能填寫常見表格如注冊表、申請表、問卷調(diào)查表等。我能寫給或回復(fù)他人祝賀卡、生日卡、邀請信、便條、短信、通知等。我能寫出簡單的指示語、個人廣告、社團(tuán)海報、個人簡歷等。我能簡要地描述個人經(jīng)歷、發(fā)生的事件、讀過的故事、觀看的影片、喜怒哀樂等情感,寫出或回答個人或公司的信函、電子郵件、傳真等。我能就一定話題或提綱在30分鐘內(nèi)寫出不少于120詞的短文,內(nèi)容基本完整、中心思想明確、用詞恰當(dāng)、語意連貫。我能在一般寫作或應(yīng)用文寫作中恰當(dāng)使用相應(yīng)的寫作技能。評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)2:不切題。條理不清
2、,思路紊亂,語言支離破碎。5:基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚,連貫性差。大部分句子均有錯誤,且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯誤。8:基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚,文字勉強(qiáng)連貫;語言錯誤相當(dāng)多,其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯誤。11:切題。表達(dá)思想清楚,文字連貫,但有少量語言錯誤。14:切題。表達(dá)思想清楚、文字通順,連貫性較好?;緹o語言錯誤,僅有個別小錯。注:白卷,作文與題目毫不相關(guān),或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表達(dá)思想,則給0分。字?jǐn)?shù)不足以應(yīng)酌情扣分:(1)如題目中給出主題句、起始句、結(jié)束句,均不得計入所寫字?jǐn)?shù)。(2)只寫一段者:0 4;只寫兩段者:0 9。(指規(guī)定三段的作文)條理性作文是主觀性題,要想得高分我們必須把評卷老
3、師考慮進(jìn)去。評卷老師的時間很短(每份卷子的作文只有一兩分鐘就要閱完),用first of all, second, to begin with, after that, next, more important, at last等短語,可以使閱卷老師一眼就看出你作文的條理性。 增加條理性的常用句式表層次,遞進(jìn):Furthermore,Whats more,AlsoNext,Besides,Moreover,In addition , Last but not least, 增加條理性的常用句式表因果; Therefore, Consequently, because of / thanks t
4、oThus, is due to/owing toOn this account,Since/asAs a result, As a consequence, 增加條理性的常用句式表總結(jié): In summary, In a word, In conclusion, In short, To sum up,Generally speaking,增加條理性的常用句式表轉(zhuǎn)折,對比,比較;ComparedwithA,B ThereisastrikingcontrastbetweenthemOnthecontrary,Whereas,By contrast, Despite the fact thatN
5、evertheless,even thoughOn the contrary,However,On the one hand, On the other hand,Otherwise 增加條理性的常用句式表示事實、現(xiàn)狀 Wecannotignorethefactthat NoonecandenythefactthatThere is no doubt that. Thisisaphenomenonthatmanypeopleareinterestedin However,thatsnotthecase 增加條理性的常用句式表舉例:vTotakeasanexample, vOneexamplei
6、svAnotherexampleisvForexample, 增加條理性的常用句式其他:vAs far as I know 據(jù)我所知 vAs far as.is concerned 就而論 vAs the saying goes 俗話說 vIt has been proved that. 已經(jīng)證明 vIt is estimated that. 據(jù)估計 vIt is believed that. 人們相信 vIt is considered that. 大家認(rèn)為 vIt is hoped that. 人們希望 vTherefore we should realize that. 因此我們應(yīng)當(dāng)明白
7、 vAbove all 最重要的是 vAfter all 畢竟 vFinally, we hope that. 最后,我們希望 vIt may be confirmed that. 可以肯定 vTherefore, we have the reason to believe that因此,我們有理由相信 常用閃光高分詞v認(rèn)為,主張argue/ claim/ believe/ maintain/ hold thatv考慮 takeinto consideration; consider; ponder; think over; reflect on/ uponv下結(jié)論,斷定come to the
8、 conclusion; arrive at the conclusion; draw the conclusion; conclude; judgev獲得,贏得,取得 acquire, obtain, attain, reap, gain, procurev支持,贊成 approve of, in favor of, uphold, stand by ones side, agree withv提倡 advocate, recommendv反對,抵制 oppose, object to, be against, resistv重大的,有決定性的 profound, significant,
9、eventful, vital, crucial, critical, decisivev運用,使用 optimize, make full/best use of, employ, utilize, apply當(dāng)前,目前 nowadays, at present, currently, presently表達(dá),說 voice, convey, express, deliver, communicate適應(yīng) be adapted to, be accustomed to, be adjusted to 阻礙,阻止 hinder, curb, hamper, restrain, prevent,
10、 ward off, avoidv好處,優(yōu)點 advantage, merit, benefitv壞處,缺點 disadvantage, defect, flaw, drawback, deficiencyv參加 participate in, take part in, attend, go in for, engage inv集中精力于,專心于 focus (ones attention) on, center on, concentrate on, set ones mind onv依賴,依靠 depend/rely on, lean onv取決于 it depends onv努力做,盡
11、力做 attempt to, make efforts to, endeavor to, manage to v進(jìn)步,成就,成績 advancement, achievement, accomplishment, feat, fulfillmentv除外 apart from, in addition to, along withv開展,實施,做 practice, carry out, enforce, conduct, performv強(qiáng)調(diào),重視,突出 lay/place emphasis on, attach emphasis to, stress on, highlightv優(yōu)秀的 o
12、utstanding, brilliant, remarkable, distinguished, excellentv實現(xiàn),完成 achieve, accomplish, fulfill, completev把看作,當(dāng)作 regardas, consideras, look onas, treat/view asv珍惜,重視 cherish, treasure, attach importance tov完全的,徹底的 sheer, utter, thoroughv解釋 account for, illustrate, clarifyv起作用 play a role/part in, per
13、form, function, servev證實,證明 testify, confirm, verify, turn out事實上 in practice/reality/effect, as a matter of fact, virtually, actuallyv顯示,表明 point out, indicate, demonstrate, reflect, manifestv縮短,減少 shorten, cut downv減少,削弱 reduce, decrease, diminish, lessenv方法, 手段 method, approach, means, measure, m
14、odev提高 improve, increase, enhance, raise, elevatev建立 build, set up, put up, found, establish, constructv遭受 suffer from, be subjected to, encounterv在我看來,就我而言 in my view/mind/belief, as far as I can see, as far as I am concernedv想到,想出 come up with, cross ones mind, occur to sb.v需要 call for, require, d
15、emandv遵守 abide by, observe, conformv易于,傾向于 tend / incline to, be inclined to, be prone to, be likely to, be liable to v熟悉,知道 be acquainted with, be familiar with, be informed ofv解決,處理 solve, resolve, settle, deal with, cope with, manage, work onv必要的,不可缺少的 indispensable, essentialv影響 affect, impact,
16、have effect onv意識到 be aware of, be conscious of寫作模板寫作模板v對立觀點型對立觀點型/辯論型辯論型v說明原因型說明原因型 v解決問題型解決問題型 對立觀點型對立觀點型/辯論型辯論型A 一個校園或社會現(xiàn)象/問題B有人認(rèn)為X 是好事,贊成X, 為什么?有人認(rèn)為X 是壞事, 反對X,為什么?C我的看法。 對立觀點型對立觀點型/辯論型辯論型 Nowadays, more and more people become concerned about the social/economic/environmental problem/phenomenon t
17、hat 出現(xiàn)的現(xiàn)象或問題. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public./ With the development of society, more and more X have come into being.) 說明這種現(xiàn)象的情況或舉例子. There is a hot debate going on arguing whether they are good for the public or not(, especially for college students). Each coin has two si
18、des. As for such a question, different people hold different opinions. Some believe that支持X 的第一個原因。(On the one hand,)They also argue that 支持X 的另一個原因。However, there is an opposite voice, which claim that反對X 的第一個理由. (On the other hand,)They firmly point out that 反對X 的第二個理由. As far as Im concerned, I h
19、old the belief that the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages, because說明原因.I suggest we should建議.對立觀點型對立觀點型/辯論型辯論型e.g. 2008.6. 真題真題Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Recreational activities. You should write at least 120 words and you
20、should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 娛樂活動多種多樣 2. 娛樂活動可以使人們受益,也可能有危害性 3. 作為大學(xué)生我們的看法對立觀點型對立觀點型/辯論型辯論型范文: With the dramatic development of society and the improvement of peoples living standard, more and more recreational activities are c o m i n g i n t o b e i n g
21、. S o m e p e o p l e may go to KTV with their friends on weekends to get relaxed after five days intense work. Meanwhile, others might choose to surf the internet to kill time and appreciate vast resources on the internet. Everything has two sides just like a coin, and entertainment is no exception
22、. Different people hold different opinions on recreational activities. On the one hand, amusement activities can enrich peoples lives and broaden peoples horizons. On the other hand, some people may waste their time if they fail to approach recreation properly. As far as college students are concern
23、ed, I hold the belief t h a t t h e a d v a n t a g e s o f r e c r e a t i o n a l a c t i v i t i e s o v e r w e i g h t h e d i s a d v a n t a g e s , b e c a u s e we can take advantage of the benefits to relax ourselves and learn many things out of school. We should always keep the following
24、words in mind: it is essential to be self-disciplined and stay away from the n e g a t i v e i n f l u e n c e s f r o m r e c r e a t i o n a l a c t i v i t i e s .對立觀點型對立觀點型/辯論型辯論型2009.6. 真題真題Free admission to museums1. 越來越多的博物館免費開放的目的是什么?2. 也會帶來一些問題3. 你的看法v2006年年12月英語四級作文月英語四級作文v1、許多人喜歡在除夕夜觀看春節(jié)晚
25、會;、許多人喜歡在除夕夜觀看春節(jié)晚會;v2、但有些人提出取消春節(jié)晚會;、但有些人提出取消春節(jié)晚會; v3、我的看法、我的看法 說明原因型說明原因型 A.出現(xiàn)的現(xiàn)象 B.一些人這樣做的原因;另一些人這樣做的原因;還有一部分人這樣做的原因C. 我的看法/這種現(xiàn)象造成的結(jié)果說明原因型說明原因型 Nowadays, more and more people become concerned about the social/economic/environmental problem/ phenomenon that 出現(xiàn)的現(xiàn)象或問題. (X has increasingly become a com
26、mon concern of the public.) 說明這種現(xiàn)象的情況或舉例子. However,as for the reasons why people , different people have different opinions. Some people in order to . Some people want to so that . And the others have the purpose of As far as I am concerned, effective measures should be taken to . So I suggest 給出建議.
27、 / This phenomenon will lead to 造成什么結(jié)果. Another result is 說明原因型說明原因型e.g. 2007.12.真題真題What Electives To Choose1. 各學(xué)校開了各種各樣的選修課2. 學(xué)生選課有不同的原因3. 就我而言說明原因型說明原因型 With the reform of Chinese higher education, more and more colleges and universities put an emphasis on nurturing students practical abilities.
28、As a result, a variety of elective courses are available for college students of all majors. Certainly, as for students reasons to choose their own electives, different students have different opinions. Some students choose the electives in order to develop practical skills, which are the essential
29、part of college education, and therefore, courses on computer science, marketing, and finance are highly preferred. On the other hand, others may think that liberal education and electives concerning literature, history, and philosophy are the most welcomed. As far as Im concerned, university is not
30、 a place for survival skills, but a palace of knowledge and critical reasoning. Although my major is chemistry, the electives I attend most frequently are English literature, an Introduction to Classic Music, and Different Schools of Western Painting. They really broaden my horizon.說明原因型說明原因型2010.6.
31、 真題Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling 1.如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫2.出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因3.這種現(xiàn)象導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果解決問題型解決問題型 A. 出現(xiàn)了什么現(xiàn)象,造成了問題一、二、三B. 解決的途徑一、二、三C. 我的途徑解決問題型解決問題型 Nowadays, X has increasingly become a common concern of the public, and it might lead to some problems. One obvious problem is that問題1. 問題2 is another
32、problem. The worst result may be 問題3. However, the problems can be dealt with in many different ways. The most common way is 途徑1. Another way is 途徑2. There is still the third choice that 途徑3. As for me, I would like to, because Therefore, I choose to v2008年年12月英語四級作文月英語四級作文vLimiting the Use of Dispo
33、sal Bagsv1. 一次性塑料袋曾被廣泛的使用一次性塑料袋曾被廣泛的使用v2. 造成的問題造成的問題v3. 限制使用塑的意義限制使用塑的意義v2009年年6月英語四級作文月英語四級作文vFree admission to museumsv越來越多的博物館免費開放的目的是什越來越多的博物館免費開放的目的是什么么?v也會帶來一些問題也會帶來一些問題v你的看法你的看法解決問題型解決問題型e.g. 2000.1. 真題真題How I Finance My College Education?Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes t
34、o write a composition on the topic How I Finance My College Education? You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 上大學(xué)的費用可以通過多種途徑解決2. 哪種途徑適合我(說明理由)解決問題型解決問題型 Every year, thousands of young men enter universities and colleges. It has been
35、a problem for some students and their families to finance their college education. In fact, the problem can be dealt with in many ways. The most common way is to get all the money from the parents. If their parents cant afford the fees, students can apply for a loan from the bank. There is still ano
36、ther way. Students can finance their education by doing some part-time jobs in their spare time. As for me, my parents can pay the greater part of the fees for me. So, I wont have a heavy financial burden, and I can focus on my study. I would like to pay the rest of the money by doing a part-time jo
37、b, because although my parents are able to pay all the tuition, I still want to know more about society through my own working experience. Therefore, I choose this way to finance my college education.圖表式作文圖表式作文 A. 說明圖標(biāo)內(nèi)容和顯示的變化B說明原因一二三C預(yù)測發(fā)展趨勢/有什么困難問題,怎么解決圖表式作文圖表式作文 第一句先說明主題是什么。Reading this chart, we
38、can find that/ It is obvious in the graph/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies). At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of (多少). What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are (多少) reasons behind the situation r
39、eflected in the graph/table. First of all, play an important role in (第一個原因). Also, leads to (第二個原因). Besides, enables to (第三個原因). From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. The trend described in the graph/table will continue for quite a long t
40、ime (if necessary measures are not taken括號里的使用于那些不太好的變化趨勢). / There are some problems/difficulties in For example, So we should 圖表式作文圖表式作文 2002.6真題真題Directions: For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Student Use of Computers. You should write at least 120 wo
41、rds and baseyour composition on the outline given below: 1.上圖(圖略)所示為1990年、1995年、2002年某校大學(xué)生事業(yè)計算機(jī)的情況,請描述其變化2.請說明發(fā)生這些變化的原因(可從計算機(jī)的用途、價格或社會發(fā)展等方面加以說明)3.你認(rèn)為目前大學(xué)生在計算機(jī)使用中有什么困難或問題圖表式作文圖表式作文 Students tend to use computers more and more nowadays. Reading this chart, we can find that the average number of hours
42、a student spends on the computer per week has increased sharply. In 1990, it has less than 2 hours; and in 1995, it increased to almost 4 hours, and in 2000, the number soared to 20 hours. Obviously computers are becoming more and more popular. Mainly there are three reasons for this. First of all,
43、computers play an important role in many aspects of life. Also, fast development of the Internet leads to greater demands for using computers. We can easily contact with friends in remote places through the Internet. Besides, the price of computers are getting lower and lower, which enables more stu
44、dents to afford them. However, there are some problems. For example, some students spend too much time in playing computer games and forget to study. So we should balance the time between using computers and studying. Anyhow, we will benefit a lot from computers as long as we use them properly.論證句式v
45、表示原因 v表示好處v表示壞處 v表示重要、必要、困難、方便、可能 v表示措施 v表示變化 表示原因 Therearethreereasonsfor Thereasonsforareasfollows Thereasonforisthat 表示好處 Ithasthefollowingadvantages Itdoesusalotofgood Itbenefitsusquitealot Itisbeneficialtous It has a positive effect.表示壞處 IthasmoredisadvantagesthanadvantagesItdoesusmuchharm Itis
46、harmful tousIt has some negative effects. 表示重要、必要、困難、方便、可能 Itisimportant(necessary,difficult,convenient,possible)forsbtodosth Wethinkit important(necessary,difficult,convenient,possible) todosth Itplaysanimportantroleinourlife 表示措施 Weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasures Weshouldtryourbesttoovercome(conqu
47、er)thedifficulties Weshoulddoourutmostindoingsth Weshouldsolvetheproblemsthatweareconfronted with 表示變化 Somechangeshavetakenplaceinthepastfiveyears Agreatchangewillcertainlyappear intheworldscommunications Thecomputerhasbroughtaboutmanychangesineducation 2009年年6月英語四級作文月英語四級作文Free admission to museums
48、1. 越來越多的博物館免費開放的目的是什么越來越多的博物館免費開放的目的是什么?2. 也會帶來一些問題也會帶來一些問題3. 你的看法你的看法Free Admission to Museums(滿分滿分版版)vNowadays, an increasing number of museums are admission-free to visitors home and abroad. The hidden reason behind this is not hard to analyze as theres a growing awareness of the authorities rega
49、rding the urgency of popularization of culture, knowledge and history with every average person in our society. Only with free access to this live database, can most people fully enjoy what museums could offer them.vHowever, free admission to museums might lead to some social problems as well. The most obvious problem is that it might give museums a very heavy economic burden which directly impedes the sustainable development of these organizations. As a result, our government has to work out other ways to collect funds from differ
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