如何寫書面表達(dá)終結(jié)PPT教案

1、如何寫書面表達(dá)終結(jié)如何寫書面表達(dá)終結(jié)第1頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)成分使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的第2頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的第3頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)整體而言，基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的第4頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)內(nèi)容缺少連貫性,信息未能清楚地傳達(dá)給讀者第5頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)內(nèi)容不連貫,信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者第6頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)詞匯詞匯, ,句型句型 （高級(jí)）和（高級(jí)）和語(yǔ)法多樣化（較復(fù)雜）語(yǔ)法多樣化（較復(fù)雜） 1.覆蓋了所有的覆蓋了所有的要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn) 2. 應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯詞匯 3. 有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊要要點(diǎn)點(diǎn)

2、全全連連接接詞詞第7頁(yè)/共46頁(yè) 書面表達(dá)的評(píng)分依據(jù)之一就是內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)書面表達(dá)的評(píng)分依據(jù)之一就是內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 應(yīng)逐個(gè)地完整無缺地把內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)列出來應(yīng)逐個(gè)地完整無缺地把內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)列出來(一般為一般為58個(gè)要點(diǎn)個(gè)要點(diǎn)) 建議: 2審題;10左右形成初稿;5左右反復(fù)檢查;修飾潤(rùn)色，5左右抄寫。 明智之舉:不把書面表達(dá)放在最后Practice第8頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)是記敘文、說明文、議論文還是應(yīng)用文？是寫書信、通知、日記、還是便條？提供材料的方式是通過文字描述還是圖畫或表格 寫什么時(shí)間發(fā)生的事？是寫你還是寫我？還是我們、他們？例如：假如你是李華，該用什么人稱？第9頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)v注意句子與句子之間過渡要自然注意句子與句子

3、之間過渡要自然,可加上適當(dāng)?shù)谋硎静⒘?、遞進(jìn)、因果、轉(zhuǎn)折等關(guān)系的連詞可加上適當(dāng)?shù)谋硎静⒘小⑦f進(jìn)、因果、轉(zhuǎn)折等關(guān)系的連詞,使語(yǔ)言更加流暢使語(yǔ)言更加流暢 第10頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)，just as(正如)， on one hand on the other hand(一方面另一方面)等。第11頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)舉例for example/instance; such as ; that is ; namely等第12頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)大忌生造的句子或詞語(yǔ)來開頭大忌生造的句子或詞語(yǔ)來開頭第13頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)大忌結(jié)尾畫蛇添足大忌結(jié)尾畫蛇添足第14頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)1. What do you think, can you tell

4、 me.?2. The discussion didnt get a conclusion. Whats your opinion? 廢話廢話第15頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)書法不好書法不好 怎么辦？怎么辦？v一筆一劃，工工整整的書寫一筆一劃，工工整整的書寫,包括標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)包括標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào) 都要都要 認(rèn)真對(duì)待！認(rèn)真對(duì)待！第16頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)v 要有獨(dú)到之處，要有獨(dú)到之處，要想獲得高分就要想獲得高分就 應(yīng)在正確表達(dá)的應(yīng)在正確表達(dá)的 基礎(chǔ)上寫出自基礎(chǔ)上寫出自 己的特色，寫出己的特色，寫出自己的自己的“亮亮”點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)。第17頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)第18頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)避免重復(fù)第19頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)kitchen. In the bedroo

5、m there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. （句型多樣化，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合 ）避免重復(fù)第20頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)也可使用變換句型第21頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)變換句型第22頁(yè)/共46頁(yè).A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well. (一般陳述句)B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well. (感嘆句)變換句型第23頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)B: On arriving/his arrival, please give me an e-mai

6、l.(高級(jí))變換句型第24頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)10) A: I can achieve my goal in this way.B: Only in this way can I achieve my goal.變換句型第25頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)little girl knows so many things.(一般)B: What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.(高級(jí))使用從句第26頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)使用從句第27頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)If Ben hadnt driven too fast on his way to Florida,

7、 he wouldnt have had a traffic accident.使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣第28頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)第29頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)點(diǎn)：易于理解等缺憾：英語(yǔ)氛圍不濃等結(jié)論：第30頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)第31頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)第32頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)第33頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)第34頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)第35頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)第36頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)用適當(dāng)?shù)脑~填空用適當(dāng)?shù)脑~填空andas wellor elseEitherorNot only but also ; Either or ; and as well ; but ; or else第37頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)First of allthenfourthlyfirstly ; thirdly; nex

8、t; finally按順序進(jìn)行敘述第38頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)1.If anyone against the plan, pleaselet me know.2.The main subjects I studied at school including Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer.3.When I arrived Hong Kong, my mother was there waiting me.4.There are 50% students think concel the 7-day long holiday

9、 is wrong.改正下列句子改正下列句子50% of the students think concelling the 7-day long holiday is wrong.第39頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)變換句型變換句型If you go through the gate, youll find the entrance to Bear Country. (一般一般)Go through the gate, and youll find. (高級(jí)高級(jí))I got up late this morning, otherwise I could have caught the early bus. (

10、高級(jí)高級(jí))I got up late this morning. I didnt catch the early bus. (一般一般)The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. (高級(jí)高級(jí))When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (一般一般)第40頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)I wont believe what he says. (高級(jí)高級(jí)) No matter what he says, I wont believe. (高級(jí)高級(jí))I happened to have met him. (一般一般) It happened that I had met him. (高級(jí)高級(jí))Practice第41頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)computersAs a childshowed his strong interestaroused his great curiosity.Practice第42頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)the front of the school. There are many trees in and around the schoolPractice第43頁(yè)/共46頁(yè)P(yáng)r