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1、 2008年奧運(yùn)會(huì)剛剛落幕，一家英文報(bào)刊在其網(wǎng)站上征集奧運(yùn)會(huì)后如何綜合利用體育場(chǎng)館的建議。假設(shè)你叫李華，是該報(bào)的一名讀者，請(qǐng)給該報(bào)編輯部寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕慕ㄗh和理由 內(nèi)容包括： 向公眾開放，用于健身 租給體育公司，創(chuàng)造經(jīng)濟(jì)效益 開辟成旅游景點(diǎn)，吸引游客 Dear editor, I am Li Hua, a reader of your paper. 第1頁(yè)/共31頁(yè)內(nèi)容語(yǔ)法思想框架-組織結(jié)構(gòu)要點(diǎn)全，拓展有度，有效連接詞，作文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊；流暢準(zhǔn)確，復(fù)雜語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)，高級(jí)詞匯，多種句型開放能引起讀者的共鳴,靈魂第2頁(yè)/共31頁(yè) 1.單詞拼寫或用錯(cuò)：Give you some advise I just

2、 provide you my own suggests.They can attact visitors.advicesuggestionattract第3頁(yè)/共31頁(yè)2.時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)問題時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)問題 We may given it to the PE company. We may give it to the PE company.3. 主謂一致問題主謂一致問題 The sport stadiums is very great and is highly spoken of by the foreigners. The sport stadiums are very great and ar

3、e highly spoken of by the foreigners.4. 逐字翻譯問題逐字翻譯問題 The stadiums can open to people for do exercise use.The stadiums can be opened to people for doing exercises.第4頁(yè)/共31頁(yè)5. 詞性混淆問題詞性混淆問題It can creative money.It can create/bring in money.Many people can use them to strong our body.Many people can use

4、them to strengthen our body.6. 介詞短語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用問題介詞短語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用問題I am writing to make some advice for how to make full use of the sports stadium.I am writing to make some advice on how to make full use of the sports stadium. 第5頁(yè)/共31頁(yè)7.句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整Only make full use of them does it make sense .Only by making full

5、use of them does it make sense The 29th Olympic Games which hosted in Beijing were held successfully.The 29th Olympic Games which were hosted in Beijing were held successfully.第6頁(yè)/共31頁(yè)1. 審題審題2. 列提綱列提綱/要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)3.連詞成句連詞成句4.連句成篇連句成篇5. 潤(rùn)色修正潤(rùn)色修正6. 定稿定稿體裁體裁時(shí)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài) 結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)構(gòu)要求要求字?jǐn)?shù)內(nèi)容第7頁(yè)/共31頁(yè)信息信息2信息信息3信息信息4開頭開頭正文正文結(jié)尾結(jié)尾體

6、裁體裁人稱人稱時(shí)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài) 要求要求結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)構(gòu)字?jǐn)?shù)字?jǐn)?shù)內(nèi)容內(nèi)容一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)Para.1Para.1Para.2Para.2Para.3Para.3抓要點(diǎn)抓要點(diǎn), 120個(gè)左右個(gè)左右信息信息1信息信息50808年奧運(yùn)會(huì)剛剛落幕年奧運(yùn)會(huì)剛剛落幕. .征集奧運(yùn)會(huì)后如何綜合利征集奧運(yùn)會(huì)后如何綜合利用體育場(chǎng)館的建議用體育場(chǎng)館的建議. .你想寫一些建議你想寫一些建議. .向公眾開放，用于健身向公眾開放，用于健身總結(jié)，意愿總結(jié)，意愿書信格式書信格式租給體育公司，創(chuàng)造經(jīng)濟(jì)效益租給體育公司，創(chuàng)造經(jīng)濟(jì)效益開辟成旅游景點(diǎn)，吸引游客開辟成旅游景點(diǎn)，吸引游客第一第一,三人稱三人稱第8頁(yè)/共31頁(yè)08年奧運(yùn)會(huì)剛剛落幕.

7、征集奧運(yùn)會(huì)后如何綜合利用體育場(chǎng)館的建議.你想寫一些建議 開頭開頭信息信息10808年奧運(yùn)會(huì)剛剛落幕年奧運(yùn)會(huì)剛剛落幕. .征集奧運(yùn)會(huì)后如何綜征集奧運(yùn)會(huì)后如何綜合利用體育場(chǎng)館的建議合利用體育場(chǎng)館的建議. .你想寫一些建議你想寫一些建議. .Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some adviceContribute some suggestions to you.Collect some adviceHow to use/make use of /make the best of the stadiums.After the Olym

8、pic GamesAfter Beijing hosted the 29th Olympic Games .The 2008 Beijing Olympic/ were over/finished/held successfully in Beijing.第9頁(yè)/共31頁(yè)向公眾開放，用于健身.租給體育公司，創(chuàng)造經(jīng)濟(jì)效益.開辟成旅游景點(diǎn)，吸引游客 .Use it as/be used for/as; take it as; open it forPlaces of interest/tourist attractionsAttract tourists/appeal to visitors/ b

9、e attraction for visitorsGive to/Rentto/be rented toSport company/companies which organize matches/organizing matchesMake/ create money; bring in money/make more profitsOpen/be opened to the people/public/open them to public.Be used for/as; be made to;Do some exercise/build our bodies/strengthen our

10、 bodies信息信息2信息信息3信息信息4向公眾開放，用于健身向公眾開放，用于健身租給體育公司，創(chuàng)造經(jīng)濟(jì)效益租給體育公司，創(chuàng)造經(jīng)濟(jì)效益開辟成旅游景點(diǎn)，吸引游客開辟成旅游景點(diǎn)，吸引游客正文第10頁(yè)/共31頁(yè) .信息信息5 總結(jié)，意愿總結(jié)，意愿結(jié)尾In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned./from my point of view.I would appreciateI would you will think of /takeinto consideration.第11頁(yè)/共31頁(yè) 開頭開頭信息信息10808年奧運(yùn)會(huì)剛剛落幕年奧運(yùn)會(huì)剛剛落幕. .征集奧運(yùn)

11、會(huì)后如何綜征集奧運(yùn)會(huì)后如何綜合利用體育場(chǎng)館的建議合利用體育場(chǎng)館的建議. .你想寫一些建議你想寫一些建議. .The 2008 Beijing Olympic Games were over/finished.The 29th Olympic Games were held successfully in Beijing.Beijing hosted the 29th Olympic Games with a great success.The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success.Beijing achie

12、ved its dream of hosting the 29th Olympic Games successfully. Collect some adviceHow to use/make use of /make the best of the stadiums.After the Olympic GamesAfter Beijing hosted the 29th Olympic Games .You are collecting some advice on how to make use of the stadiums after Beijing hosted the 29th O

13、lympic Games .I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums after Beijing hosted the 29th Olympic Games successfully.Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some adviceContribute some suggestions to you.I would like to give you some advice.I would like to con

14、tribute the following suggestions to you第12頁(yè)/共31頁(yè) 4.Use it as/be used for/as;take it as;open it forPlaces of interests/tourist attractionsAttract tourists/appeal to visitors/ be attraction for visitors3.Give to/Rentto/be rented toSport company/companies which organize matches/organizing matchesMake/

15、create money; bring in money/make more profits信息信息2信息信息3信息信息4向公眾開放，用于健身向公眾開放，用于健身租給體育公司，創(chuàng)造經(jīng)濟(jì)效益租給體育公司，創(chuàng)造經(jīng)濟(jì)效益開辟成旅游景點(diǎn)，吸引游客開辟成旅游景點(diǎn)，吸引游客正文2.Open/be opened to the people/public/open them to public.Be used for/as; be made to;Do some exercise/build our body/strengthen our bodies2.The stadiums can be opened

16、to the public.The public can build their bodies/strengthen their bodies 3.The stadiums can be rented to sport company which organize matches.It can bring in more money/make more profits4.They can be used as tourist attraction. It can attract many visitors.第13頁(yè)/共31頁(yè) .信息信息5 總結(jié)，意愿總結(jié)，意愿結(jié)尾In my opinion/

17、as far as I am concerned./from my point of view.I would appreciateI would you will think of /takeinto consideration.In a wordFrom my point of view, we should do what we can to make full use of the stadium. I would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration第14頁(yè)/共31頁(yè)P(yáng)ara.1: The

18、29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.Para.2:The stadiums can be opened to the public. The public can build their bodies/strengthen the

19、ir bodies. The stadiums can be rented to sport company which organize matches. It can bring in more money/make more profits. They can be used as tourist attraction. It can attract many visitors.Para.3: From my point of view, we should do what we can to make full use the stadium. I would appreciate i

20、t if you would take my advice into deep consideration第15頁(yè)/共31頁(yè)P(yáng)ara.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.Para.1: I hear you are

21、collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums after the 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. Here I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.第16頁(yè)/共31頁(yè)P(yáng)ara.2:The stadiums can be opened to the public. The public can strengthen their bodies.

22、The stadiums can be rented to sport company which organize matches. It can bring in much more profits. They can be used as tourist attraction. It can attract many visitors.Para.2: First of all, the stadiums can be opened to the public.The public can strengthen their bodies. Secondly,The stadiums can

23、 be rented to sport company which organize matches. It can bring in much more profits. last but not least, They can be used as tourist attraction. It can attract many visitors.First of all Firstly,To begin with,In addition,Besides,Moreover,Whats moreFinally,Whats worse,第17頁(yè)/共31頁(yè)使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞邏輯角度邏輯角度合適的過(guò)渡

24、性詞匯合適的過(guò)渡性詞匯排序關(guān)系排序關(guān)系 并列關(guān)系并列關(guān)系舉例關(guān)系舉例關(guān)系轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系因果關(guān)系因果關(guān)系歸納總結(jié)歸納總結(jié)遞進(jìn)關(guān)系遞進(jìn)關(guān)系first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least and; too; as well as; along with; together withfor example; for instance; like; such as; as to but; however; while; though; on the contrarybecause; since; thanks to; as a result /

25、consequence (of); thus; therefore in a word; in short; to sum up; in conclusionwhats more; besides; to make matters worse; whats worse; worse still; furthermore第18頁(yè)/共31頁(yè) I heard you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums after the 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing

26、 with a great success. Here I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you. First of all, the stadiums can be opened to the public. The public can strengthen their bodies. Secondly, The stadiums can be rented to sport company which organize matches. It can bring in much more profits. la

27、st but not least, They can be used as tourist attraction. It can attract many visitors. From my point of view, we should do what we can to make full use the stadium. I would appreciate it very much if you would take my advice into deep consideration第19頁(yè)/共31頁(yè)二. 使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使句子簡(jiǎn)潔高檔三. 巧用倒裝增強(qiáng)句子表現(xiàn)力四.嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式

28、一.使用較高級(jí)詞匯使文章增加吸引力強(qiáng)調(diào)句With短語(yǔ)復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)定語(yǔ)從句名詞性從句(主賓表同從句)各種狀語(yǔ)從句被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)第20頁(yè)/共31頁(yè) 1. Many people want to visit the stadium . 2. The stadium is useful. Many people are dying to visit the stadium. The stadium is of great value.一.使用較高級(jí)詞匯使文章增加吸引力第21頁(yè)/共31頁(yè) 1.The 29th Olympic Games were successfully ended. It left many

29、stadiums unusedThe 29th Olympic Games were successfully ended, leaving many stadiums unused.二. 使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使句子簡(jiǎn)潔高檔第22頁(yè)/共31頁(yè) 1.we can let stadium make sense Only when we make full use of the stadium 2. The stadiums can be rented to the physical company to create more economic profits. they can be the plac

30、es to appeal visitors to pay a visit.Only when we make full use of the stadium can we let stadium make sense.Not only can the stadiums be rented to the physical company to create more economic profits, but also they can be the places to appeal visitors to pay a visit.三. 巧用倒裝增強(qiáng)句子表現(xiàn)力第23頁(yè)/共31頁(yè) We shoul

31、d take the Olympic stadiums into consideration after Beijing hosted the games successfully. The 29th Olympic Games were ended successfully. we start talking about how to use the stadiums properly for our daily livesIt is the Olympic stadiums that we should take into consideration after Beijing hoste

32、d the games successfully.With the 29th Olympic Games ended successfully, we start talking about how to use the stadiums properly for our daily lives.四. 嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式強(qiáng)調(diào)句With短語(yǔ)復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)第24頁(yè)/共31頁(yè)You can open them for the public. The stadiums can be used to take exercise.You can open the stadiums which can be us

33、ed to take exercise for the public.四. 嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式定語(yǔ)從句各種狀語(yǔ)從句我們鍛煉的越多，我們就越健康。The more exercises we take, the healthier we will become.被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)We should pay more attention to the stadiums.More attention should be paid to the stadiums.第25頁(yè)/共31頁(yè) I heard you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of

34、the stadiums after the 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. Here I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you. First of all, the stadiums can be opened to the public. The public can strengthen their bodies. Secondly, The stadiums can be rented to sport compa

35、ny which organize matches. It can bring in much more profits. last but not least, They can be used as tourist attraction. It can attract many visitors. From my point of view, we should do what we can to make full use the stadium. I would appreciate it very much if you would take my advice into deep

36、consideration第26頁(yè)/共31頁(yè)高考書面表達(dá)各檔次的給分范圍和要求高考書面表達(dá)各檔次的給分范圍和要求第五檔（第五檔（21-2521-25分）分） 完全完成完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù): :l準(zhǔn)確、清楚地表達(dá)了短文的內(nèi)容，要點(diǎn)無(wú)遺漏準(zhǔn)確、清楚地表達(dá)了短文的內(nèi)容，要點(diǎn)無(wú)遺漏l應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯l語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯有少許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡可能使用較復(fù)雜表達(dá)方式語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯有少許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡可能使用較復(fù)雜表達(dá)方式 所致；具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言應(yīng)用能力所致；具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言應(yīng)用能力l有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第四檔（第四檔（16-2016-20分）分） 完成完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù): :l比較準(zhǔn)確、清楚地表達(dá)了短文的內(nèi)容比較準(zhǔn)確、清楚地表達(dá)了短文的內(nèi)容l應(yīng)用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求應(yīng)用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求l語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確，少許錯(cuò)誤主要是因?yàn)閲L試較復(fù)語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確，少許錯(cuò)誤主要是因?yàn)閲L試較復(fù) 雜語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致雜語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致l應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊達(dá)到了預(yù)期的應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作