我的短文改錯(cuò)

1、Proof ReadingProof Reading 短文改錯(cuò)短文改錯(cuò)朝陽縣實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)朝陽縣實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué) 王頂舉王頂舉 2015年東北三省三校高三第一次聯(lián)合模擬考試年東北三省三校高三第一次聯(lián)合模擬考試 Yesterday I stepped into a restaurant for lunch. As I was waiting my order to come, I noticed the old man in a wheelchair roll himself over to a table. No one and me seemed to notice him. I got up and g

2、o over to his table and asked if that I could get him something to drink. He smiled and said, “Thank you. You are generously. Id like any orange juice, please.” When I was getting ready to leave, I walked by he old mans table to saying goodbye. He thanked me again and told me I had made his days, co

3、ming over and helping him out . I gave him a hug and told him he gad made my day, either.短文改錯(cuò)的要求短文改錯(cuò)的要求 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。 修改修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線()，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞一詞； 2. 只允許修改10處，多者

4、(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。 Yesterday I stepped into a restaurant for lunch. As I was waiting my order to come, I noticed the old man in a wheelchair roll himself over to a table. No one and me seemed to notice him. I got up and go over to his table and asked if that I could get him something to drink. He smiled a

5、nd said, “Thank you. You are generously.foranbutgenerouswent Id like any orange juice, please.” When I was getting ready to leave, I walked by the old mans table to saying goodbye. He thanked me again and told me I had made his days, coming over and helping him out . I gave him a hug and told him he

6、 gad made my day, either.somesaydaytoo 2015年東北三省三校高三第一次聯(lián)合模擬考試 Yesterday I stepped into a restaurant for lunch. As I was waiting for my order to come, I noticed a old man in a wheelchair roll himself over to a table. No one but me seemed to notice him. I got up and went over to his table and asked if

7、 that I could get him something to drink. He smiled and said, “Thank you. You are generous. Id like some orange juice, please.” When I was getting ready to leave, I walked by the old mans table to say goodbye. He thanked me again and told me I had made his day, coming over and helping him out . I ga

8、ve him a hug and told him he gad made my day, too.多詞多詞少詞少詞錯(cuò)詞錯(cuò)詞合計(jì)合計(jì)201111810201211810201311810201411810全國(guó)新課標(biāo)卷）全國(guó)新課標(biāo)卷） 如何做短文改錯(cuò)題 1、從句子的角度分析：從句子的角度分析：（1）查時(shí)態(tài)是否一致）查時(shí)態(tài)是否一致 I remembered her words and calm down.calmed （2）查主謂是否一致）查主謂是否一致 1、Anyone may borrow books and it cost nothing tocosts （3）查指代是否一致）查指代是否一致

9、 1、I used to love science class-all of them-classes （4 4）查上下文修飾語是否）查上下文修飾語是否一致一致 1、We study quite a few subject. 2、It was very kind for them to meet me.subjects of 5 5）查行文邏輯是否一）查行文邏輯是否一致致 1、 It is a very important exam but I cant afford to fail it.and/so 2、從從詞性詞性的角度分析的角度分析 冠詞冠詞 名詞名詞 代詞代詞 形容詞形容詞 副詞副詞

10、 動(dòng)詞動(dòng)詞（非謂語動(dòng)詞，情態(tài)動(dòng)詞等）（非謂語動(dòng)詞，情態(tài)動(dòng)詞等） 介詞介詞 連詞連詞 etc 2015年東北三省三校高三第一次聯(lián)合模擬考試年東北三省三校高三第一次聯(lián)合模擬考試 Yesterday I stepped into a restaurant for lunch. As I was waiting for my order to come, I noticed a old man in a wheelchair roll himself over to a table. No one but me seemed to notice him. I got up and went over

11、to his table and asked if that I could get him something to drink. He smiled and said, “Thank you. You are generous. Id like some orange juice, please.” When I was getting ready to leave, I walked by the old mans table to say goodbye. He thanked me again and told me I had made his day, coming over a

12、nd helping him out . I gave him a hug and told him he gad made my day, too.錯(cuò)誤類型錯(cuò)誤類型統(tǒng)計(jì)統(tǒng)計(jì)（全國(guó)新課標(biāo)卷）全國(guó)新課標(biāo)卷） 動(dòng)動(dòng)詞詞非非謂謂語語名名詞詞形形和和副副代代詞詞介介詞詞連連詞詞冠冠詞詞其其它它合合計(jì)計(jì)201121111211102012211121101102013111211211020143011211110逐句找錯(cuò)逐句找錯(cuò)詞詞，錯(cuò)在那里？，錯(cuò)在那里？動(dòng)詞動(dòng)詞形形，名詞名詞數(shù)數(shù)還要注意還要注意形形和和副副代詞代詞格格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟介詞介詞短語短語須關(guān)注須關(guān)注冠詞連詞冠詞連詞常光顧常光顧非謂語，非

13、謂語，細(xì)辨別細(xì)辨別一、動(dòng)詞形一、動(dòng)詞形 主要包括兩類錯(cuò)誤：動(dòng)詞的主要包括兩類錯(cuò)誤：動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài)和和語態(tài)語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤，以及錯(cuò)誤，以及主、謂不一致主、謂不一致的錯(cuò)誤。的錯(cuò)誤。2011全國(guó)新課標(biāo)卷全國(guó)新課標(biāo)卷 ： I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last .felt2012全國(guó)新課標(biāo)卷全國(guó)新課標(biāo)卷 ： When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said,2011全國(guó)新課標(biāo)卷全國(guó)新課標(biāo)卷 ： but the only clothes I had was thos

14、e I had on. tore 一、動(dòng)詞形一、動(dòng)詞形were 二、名詞數(shù)二、名詞數(shù) 1可數(shù)可數(shù)名詞單、復(fù)數(shù)形式名詞單、復(fù)數(shù)形式的用法錯(cuò)誤的用法錯(cuò)誤 2不可數(shù)名詞錯(cuò)用了復(fù)數(shù)不可數(shù)名詞錯(cuò)用了復(fù)數(shù)【2012全國(guó)新課標(biāo)全國(guó)新課標(biāo)】 ：From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. toys 【2012全國(guó)新課標(biāo)全國(guó)新課標(biāo)】 It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. luggage二、名詞數(shù)二、名詞數(shù)三、還要注意形和副三、還

15、要注意形和副1主要指該用形容詞的地方用了副詞主要指該用形容詞的地方用了副詞,該用副詞的地方用該用副詞的地方用了形容詞，了形容詞，2該形容詞或副詞修飾什么該形容詞或副詞修飾什么,形式是否正確形式是否正確,是原級(jí)、比是原級(jí)、比較級(jí)還是最高級(jí)較級(jí)還是最高級(jí) 。3一些副詞的互換，如一些副詞的互換，如however和和besides等等2013新課標(biāo)新課標(biāo)II ： Interesting, it had a connection with the British porcelain(瓷器瓷器) industry. Interestingly【2012全國(guó)全國(guó)I】 That wont be easy, I

16、 know，but we have to start anywhere. anyhow【2012全國(guó)新課標(biāo)全國(guó)新課標(biāo)】 I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive（好斗的）（好斗的）. . less三、還要注意形和副三、還要注意形和副四、非謂語，細(xì)辨別四、非謂語，細(xì)辨別 這是考查最多的錯(cuò)誤形式之一。主要有以這是考查最多的錯(cuò)誤形式之一。主要有以下幾種方式下幾種方式1現(xiàn)在分詞、過去分詞現(xiàn)在分詞、過去分詞互換互換；2動(dòng)名詞動(dòng)名詞和和動(dòng)詞原形動(dòng)詞原形互換；互換；3不定式不定式to的有無等的有無等

17、【2012全國(guó)新課標(biāo)全國(guó)新課標(biāo)】 ： I must make my toys to last. 2008遼寧卷：遼寧卷： We all enjoyed this precious day greatly , remember the time we spent together and the people they were familiar with.remembering【2012重慶卷重慶卷】 Gradually, I became interesting in biology . interested四、非謂語，細(xì)辨別四、非謂語，細(xì)辨別五五、 代詞代詞格，格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟細(xì)領(lǐng)悟1人稱人稱代

18、詞代詞主格主格I, you, he, she, it, we, you, they賓格賓格me, you, him, her, it, us, you, them2物 主物 主代詞代詞形容詞性形容詞性 my, your, his, her, its, our, their名詞性名詞性mine, yours, his, hers, its, ours, theirs3 反身代詞反身代詞myself, yourself, himself, herself, itself, ourselves, yourselves, themselves4 指示代詞指示代詞this, that, these, t

19、hose, such, some5 疑問代詞疑問代詞who, whom, whose, which, what, whoever, whichever, whatever6 關(guān)系代詞關(guān)系代詞that, which, who, whom, whose, as7 不定代詞不定代詞one/ some/ any, each/ every, none/ no, many/ much, few/ little/ a few/ a little, other/ another, all/ both, neither/ either2011四川卷四川卷 ： The doctor gave him some m

20、edicine and told him to take them before he went to bed. 【2013陜西卷陜西卷】 ： We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. itour五五、 代詞代詞格，格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟細(xì)領(lǐng)悟 主要考查習(xí)慣搭配方面的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，其主要考查習(xí)慣搭配方面的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，其錯(cuò)誤表現(xiàn)形式主要有三種：錯(cuò)誤表現(xiàn)形式主要有三種：多詞、少詞和搭多詞、少詞和搭配錯(cuò)誤。配錯(cuò)誤。in Sunday afternoon catch a sight oflose my heart in hurry aon六、介詞短語需關(guān)注六

21、、介詞短語需關(guān)注【2012全國(guó)新課標(biāo)全國(guó)新課標(biāo)】 ： My father said, Thats it. No more toys to you. for2011重慶卷重慶卷 This is the first time that Ive been away my family for such a long time. from六、介詞短語需關(guān)注六、介詞短語需關(guān)注1冠詞的冠詞的誤加和漏用誤加和漏用2不定冠詞與定冠詞以及零冠詞不定冠詞與定冠詞以及零冠詞的用法區(qū)別的用法區(qū)別(包括包括 a 與與 an 的區(qū)別的區(qū)別)3冠詞在一些習(xí)語中的冠詞在一些習(xí)語中的固定搭配固定搭配 a七、冠詞連詞常光顧七、冠

22、詞連詞常光顧2011全國(guó)新課標(biāo)卷全國(guó)新課標(biāo)卷 I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. 連詞常光顧（1）并列連詞并列連詞短文改錯(cuò)對(duì)并列連詞的考查主要涉及短文改錯(cuò)對(duì)并列連詞的考查主要涉及and, but, or, so 等幾個(gè)表示并列、轉(zhuǎn)折、選擇、等幾個(gè)表示并列、轉(zhuǎn)折、選擇、因果等關(guān)系的詞語。嚴(yán)格說來，這類錯(cuò)誤因果等關(guān)系的詞語。嚴(yán)格說來，這類錯(cuò)誤主要屬于行文邏輯的錯(cuò)誤。主要屬于行文邏輯的錯(cuò)誤。2011全國(guó)新課標(biāo)卷全國(guó)新課標(biāo)卷 I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag. and 連詞常光顧（2）

23、從屬連詞從屬連詞短文改錯(cuò)對(duì)短文改錯(cuò)對(duì)從屬?gòu)膶龠B詞的考查主要涉及連詞的考查主要涉及不同不同從句引導(dǎo)詞的使用從句引導(dǎo)詞的使用1在定語從句中，在定語從句中，which和和that2名詞性從句中的名詞性從句中的what和和that3狀語從句中的連詞用法錯(cuò)誤等狀語從句中的連詞用法錯(cuò)誤等2012全國(guó)新課標(biāo)卷全國(guó)新課標(biāo)卷 But before long they began to see which was happening.what 短文改錯(cuò)應(yīng)注意的問題短文改錯(cuò)應(yīng)注意的問題 四不改四不改: :標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不改。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不改。大小寫不改。大小寫不改。詞序錯(cuò)誤不改。詞序錯(cuò)誤不改。在綱外生詞不改。在綱外生詞不改。

24、 2014年高考英語課標(biāo)卷年高考英語課標(biāo)卷II短文改錯(cuò)短文改錯(cuò) My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didnt need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day. My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classro