2020中考英語復(fù)習(xí)方案第三篇話題寫作妙解話題寫作03休閑活動課件

1、話題寫作(三)休閑活動第三篇話題寫作妙解【典型例題】2019包頭假定你是李華,請給你的筆友Alan寫一封郵件,告訴他今年暑假你將去他所在的城市游玩,并制定了旅行計劃,你想征求他的意見,同時詢問他是否可以接機。郵件還應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容:典例分析Your arrival time10:30 a.m., July 2Your travel plango to a concertgo campingMeans of transport(交通方式) during your visitby bike, by bus一、審圈要點、定時態(tài)、定人稱假定你是李華,請給你的筆友Alan寫一封郵件,告訴他今年暑假你將去他

2、所在的城市游玩,并制定了旅行計劃,你想征求他的意見,同時詢問他是否可以接機。郵件還應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容:Your arrival time10:30 a.m., July 2Your travel plango to a concertgo campingMeans of transport(交通方式) during your visitby bike, by bus二、列列短語,盡可能為習(xí)慣用語go to your city to travel this summer vacationarrive at 10:30 a.m., on July 2meet me at the airportmade

3、 a travel plango to a concertgo campingvisiting some places of interestgoing by air or by train during my visitplease give me some advice三、加定人稱(第一人稱和第二人稱)、定時態(tài)(一般將來時)形成句子(因為漢語習(xí)慣, 學(xué)生容易丟掉主語),形成最基礎(chǔ)的寫作,徹底消除零分或低分作文。Dear Alan,How is it going?Im going to your city to travel this summer vacation.I will arriv

4、e at 10:30 a.m, on July 2.Can you meet me at the airport?I have made a travel plan.I will go to a concert.I will go camping.Im going to visit some places of interest.I dont know if Im going by air or by train during my visit.Please give me some advice.四、連添加過渡句、連接詞;上下文要連貫保證基礎(chǔ)平均分上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條標(biāo)準(zhǔn),因此同學(xué)們

5、應(yīng)把寫好的句子,根據(jù)故事情節(jié),事情發(fā)生的先后次序(時間或空間),使用一些表示并列、遞進等關(guān)系的過渡詞進行加工整理,使文章連貫、自然、流暢。Dear Alan,How is it going?Im going to your city to travel this summer vacation. And I will arrive at 10:30 a.m., on July 2. Can you meet me at the airport? At the same time, I have made a travel plan. Firstly, I will go to a concer

6、t. Then I plan to go camping. Also, Im going to visit some places of interest. But I dont know if Im going by air or by train during my visit. Please give me some advice.Im sure I will have an unforgettable trip with your help.Yours,Li Hua五、美表述地道,句式多變,結(jié)構(gòu)靈活避免Chinglish現(xiàn)象,盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用,以避免重復(fù)和呆板

7、。及時體驗Dear Alan,How is it going?基礎(chǔ)句Im going to your city to travel this summer vacation.升格句Im thinking of taking a trip to your city this summer vacation.發(fā)展句Because its such a beautiful place that, I dream for a long time.基礎(chǔ)句And I will arrive at 10:30 a.m., on July 2. Can you meet me at the airport?升

8、格句I wonder if you will meet me at the airport at 10:30 a.m., on July 2 since its my first time to visit there.At the same time, I have made a travel plan.基礎(chǔ)句Firstly, I will go to a concert. Then I plan to go camping. Also, Im going to visit some places of interest.升格句Including enjoying music at a co

9、ncert, going camping and visiting some places of interest.基礎(chǔ)句But I dont know if Im going by air or by train during my visit.基礎(chǔ)句Please give me some advice.升格句Would you please give me some advice? Either traveling by bike or by bus would suit me fine.Im sure I will have an unforgettable trip with your

10、 help.發(fā)展句Do you have any plans for the coming vacation?六、查典型病例(參見話題一)七、潔書寫定天下!Dear Alan,How is it going?Im thinking of taking a trip to your city this summer vacation,because its such a beautiful place that I dream for a long time. I wonder if you will meet me at the airport at 10:30 a.m., on July 2

11、 since its my first time to visit there. Besides, I have made a travel plan, including enjoying music at a concert, going camping and visiting some places of interest.Would you please give me some advice? Either traveling by bike or by bus would suit me fine.Im sure I will have an unforgettable trip

12、 with your help. Do you have any plans for the coming vacation?Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua2019泰州為豐富初三學(xué)生課余生活,上周末你校組織了一次社會實踐活動。請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示,用英語寫一篇短文,介紹此次活動,并談?wù)勛约旱母邢??；顒觾?nèi)容1.上午游覽人民公園:欣賞美景、歌舞聯(lián)歡、拍照留念;2.下午參觀市民廣場:觀看圖片展,了解祖國和家鄉(xiāng)70年巨變。你的感想1.師生情深,感謝老師和同學(xué)的幫助;2.倍受鼓舞,決心勤奮學(xué)習(xí),報效祖國;3.(考生自己發(fā)揮)。實戰(zhàn)演練要求1.詞數(shù):10

13、0 左右。開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);2.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括內(nèi)容提示中所提供的信息,并可作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮;3.不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯市民廣場 Civic SquareIn order to enrich Junior 3 students after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. _ One possible version:In order to enrich Junior 3 students after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. We are all happy to have a chance to know more about our city. Everyone