2020湖北宜昌市中考英語一輪寫作指導(dǎo)課件話題9-飲食與健康(共23張PPT)

1、話題九：飲食與健康能力篇 美 文 欣 賞 情 景 呈 現(xiàn) 熱 身 寫 作 美 文 欣 賞 We dont always get our hopes and dreams，希望有時(shí)會(huì)落空，夢(mèng)想有時(shí)會(huì)破滅，And we dont always get our own way，我們不能一切隨心所愿，In nature, in others, in yourself；自然中的，別人中的，你自己的；And believe in the love of friends, family, and humankind.請(qǐng)相信，美來自朋友、家庭乃至全人類的融融愛意。全民參與建設(shè)“健康中國2030”。下周，你校英

2、語社團(tuán)將要舉辦一場(chǎng) “健康人生，從食開始”的英語演講比賽。假設(shè)你是李華，將參與這次活動(dòng)，準(zhǔn)備一篇演講稿，談?wù)勗鯓颖３诛嬍辰】?。建議內(nèi)容包括：1.對(duì)健康飲食要有正確的態(tài)度；情 景 呈 現(xiàn) 2避免快餐，外賣食品；3減少學(xué)習(xí)壓力，多做運(yùn)動(dòng)；4不要熬夜。要求：1包含全部要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2語言通順，條理清晰，字跡工整；3詞數(shù)80100。文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Good morning, everyone.Today, Im very happy here to share my opinion about health with you._ _1keep healthy 保持健康2most im

3、portantly最重要地3have a good attitude towards對(duì)有好的態(tài)度4to ones disappointment令某人失望 5avoid too much pressure避免太多的工作壓力6be harmful to對(duì)有害的7of great help很大的幫助8stick to堅(jiān)持1Most importantly, Secondly, Whats more, .Besides, Lastly, 2We should We shouldnt 3 is of great help.4Staying up late is 5 is harmful to our h

4、ealth.6But to our disappointment, many students 7If we stick to the advice, 本篇書面表達(dá)的話題是飲食與健康，可以從以下方面去構(gòu)思本篇作文： 1遵從英語作文的基本結(jié)構(gòu)：三段論。開頭總寫：健康的重要性；中間分述：根據(jù)提示的四個(gè)方面提出建議分寫：怎樣才能保持健康； 結(jié)尾點(diǎn)題：好的飲食習(xí)慣，健康的生活。2寫好英語作文的重點(diǎn)：審題：審人稱(第一、二、三人稱)，本篇為表述自己對(duì)飲食健康的觀點(diǎn)和建議，應(yīng)為第一人稱；審時(shí)態(tài)(過去時(shí)、現(xiàn)在時(shí)、將來時(shí))，本篇為客觀事實(shí)，應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。3注意高級(jí)詞匯、層次詞的運(yùn)用，這可以使得行文連貫，條理

5、清晰。 Good morning, everyone.Today, Im very happy here to share my opinion about health with you.Good health helps us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in the future.But what can we do to keep healthy？(主題句)Most importantly, we must have a good attitude towards health and build healthy eat

6、ing habits.(拓展句)The better we get into good eating habits, the happier our life becomes.Secondly, we should avoid fast food.(拓展句)But to our disappointment, many students like it, which is harmful to health. 1三段論結(jié)構(gòu)，條理清晰，行文有序。開頭：But what can we do to keep healthy? 引出主題與下文；正文：分述，涵蓋要點(diǎn)，條理清晰； 結(jié)尾：點(diǎn)明主旨，體現(xiàn)主題

7、。2下劃線的短語均為高級(jí)詞匯的靈活運(yùn)用，體現(xiàn)了作者扎實(shí)的英語基本功底，提升了作文的高度。3Most importantly，Secondly, Whats more等詞語的運(yùn)用，使整篇作文啟承轉(zhuǎn)和、過渡自然。4本篇書面表達(dá)句式靈活多變，長短錯(cuò)落有致，可以足夠的吸引閱卷老師。熱 身 寫 作 假設(shè)你是李華，本周的英語角主題是：“健康飲食，幸福生活”，請(qǐng)你為英語角寫一篇發(fā)言稿，分享你對(duì)此主題的觀點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容包括： 1.健康的飲食習(xí)慣對(duì)我們來說很重要；2.有些同學(xué)不吃早餐，很多同學(xué)喜歡吃垃圾食品；3.注意飲食平衡，多吃蔬菜水果；4.平時(shí)要多參加體育鍛煉。要求：1包含上述全部要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2文中不得出現(xiàn)

8、真實(shí)的人名和校名；3詞數(shù)80100。文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考范文Healthy body gives us a healthy future.As students, how do we keep healthy?First of all, its important and necessary for us to have good eating habits. We should say “no” to junk food. It can increase the risk of health problems. And we should eat fresh vegetable

9、s and fruits every day and meat is needed, too. Secondly, it is said that most of students do not eat anything at all in the morning. It is very bad. Breakfast is the most important meal for people. And we need to eat lunch, dinner as well as breakfast every day. Besides, sports play an important role in our daily life. Exercise can improve our abil