2022屆高考書面表達寫作指導(dǎo)之觀點議論篇-課件(32頁PPT)

1、首 頁末 頁觀點議論篇單詞solution n. 解決方法 harmful adj. 有害的advantage n. 優(yōu)勢 disadvantage n. 不利因素doubt n. 懷疑 value vt. 重視 & n. 價值equal adj. 平等的 possibility n. 可能性limited adj. 有限的 obviously adv. 顯而易見地confidence n. 自信 opposite adj. 對立的condition n. 條件 cause n. 原因 & vt. 引起短語have difficulty (in) doing sth. 做某事有困難in my

2、opinion 就我看來agree with sb. 同意某人be beneficial to 對有好處have a preference for 偏愛in a sense 從某種意義上seize the opportunity 抓住機遇一、話題詞匯Step 1 素材累積第1頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁開頭引人入勝1. As an old saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. 俗話說,患難見真情。2. Last Monday, students in our class had a heated discussion on wheth

3、er we should make friends on the Internet. 上周一,我們班的同學(xué)就我們是否應(yīng)該在網(wǎng)上交友進行了一次熱烈的討論。3. It goes without saying that time is money. 時間就是金錢,這是一個不言而喻的事實。 篇中精編細(xì)織1. Personally, I am for the second point of view. 就個人而言,我贊同第二種觀點。2. A person cant live alone without others assistance. 沒了他人的扶持幫助,一個人不可能獨自生存。3. Understa

4、nding is the most important communication between parents and children. 在父母與孩子溝通方面,理解是最重要的。二、話題句型第2頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁收尾簡練到位1. Without hard work and perseverance, one can hardly achieve his goals. 沒有努力和持之以恒,一個人是不大可能實現(xiàn)目標(biāo)的。2. In a word, as students, we must put study in the first place. 總之,作為學(xué)生,我們應(yīng)該把學(xué)習(xí)放在首位。

5、3. Without knowledge, a man is only good for nothing no matter in modern times or in the future. 無論是現(xiàn)在還是將來,一個缺乏知識的人什么都適應(yīng)不了。第3頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁. 在我看來,他們所說的也有道理。_2.有些樂于靠近大自然的人選擇居住在農(nóng)村。_3. 現(xiàn)代社會里,多數(shù)人似乎沒有手機就不能活了。_三、仿寫練習(xí) From my point of view, what they said is reasonable as well. Those who love to get close t

6、o the nature choose to live in the countryside. In modern times, it seems that most people cannot live without mobile phones.第4頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁Step 2 遣詞造句一、句型講堂否定句在英語中,表示否定意義的句子被稱為否定句。 否定是修辭的一種重要形式。 否定句常見的形式有直接否定、間接否定、全部否定、部分否定、雙重否定等。This is more than you can understand!用 more than 表示含蓄否定Neither of us

7、came here before!用 neither 表示全部否定Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.否定的主語+否定的表語:雙重否定表示強烈的肯定語氣第5頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁二、強化訓(xùn)練(一) 單句改錯。下列每個句子中均有一處錯誤,請找出并修改。1. Thats anything but truth.2. The juice is too sweet to drinking.3. No one agree with him.4. No cigarette are harmless.5. I have no interest in both

8、of the book._true_ drink_agrees_is_books第6頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁(二) 寫作必備。請將下列中文句子譯為英文。1. 這個小山村的風(fēng)光實在是太美了。 (感嘆) _2. 電腦游戲?qū)ξ覜]有什么吸引力。 (attract)_3. 作為年輕的一代,我們應(yīng)該勇于迎接一切挑戰(zhàn)。 (challenge)_4. 不管發(fā)生什么,他總是對未來持樂觀態(tài)度。 (be optimistic about)_5. 我不愿意參加這場比賽的理由如下。 (as follows)_ What beautiful scenery the small mountain village has!

9、Computer games have few attractions for me.As the young generation, we should be brave enough to meet all the challenges.No matter what happens, he is always optimistic about the future. The reasons why I am unwilling to take part in the competition are as follows.第7頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁三、短文改錯以下短文共有10 處語言錯誤

10、,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 Recently we had made a discussion about what to create a nice environment of campus. First all, we should use proper words, behave politely and thought for others. If we want to live and study happy,we should respect teachers, unite other students and help each other.

11、 We should also treat and understand others with more patience. Besides, we should keep our schoolyard clean, that helps to make our body health. Finally, we need to make efforts to create a family environment full of love and the warmth. Apart from communicating with our parents,we can also help th

12、em do what we can. _ have_which_ how _ healthy _ think _ happily of第8頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁 In my opinions, environment protection depends on the efforts making by everyone. 剖析第一處:hadhave。 考查動詞的時態(tài)。 根據(jù)時間狀語 recently 可知,這里使用現(xiàn)在完成時,故had 改為 have。第二處:whathow。 考查疑問詞。 根據(jù)句意可知,最近我們討論了如何創(chuàng)造一個好的校園環(huán)境,故 what 改為 how。第三處:Firs

13、t 后加 of。 考查介詞。 first of all 是固定短語,意為“首先”, 故 first 后加 of。第四處:thoughtthink。 考查情態(tài)動詞。 情態(tài)動詞should 后面加動詞原形 think,故 thought 改為think。第五處:happyhappily。 考查副詞。 副詞修飾動詞study, 故 happy 改為 happily。_opinion made第9頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁第六處:thatwhich。 考查定語從句。 這是一個非限制性定語從句, 故 that 改為 which。第七處:healthhealthy。 考查形容詞。 形容詞作賓語補足語,故

14、health 改為 healthy第八處:warmth 前的 the 去掉。 考查冠詞。 warmth是一個抽象名詞,所以這里不使用冠詞,故the 去掉。第九處:opinionsopinion。 考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)。 in my opinion 是一個固定短語,意為“在我看來”,故 opinions 改為 opinion。第十處:makingmade。 考查非謂語動詞。 efforts 跟make 之間是被動關(guān)系,這里使用過去分詞作定語,故 making 改為 made。第10頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁Step 3 謀篇布局一、案例展示英語高考原創(chuàng)題書面表達 假設(shè)你是李華,現(xiàn)在越來越多的人進行網(wǎng)

15、上購物,網(wǎng)購有優(yōu)勢也有弊端。 請你寫一篇短文談?wù)勀銓W(wǎng)上購物的看法。 要點如下: 1. 網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)勢; 2. 網(wǎng)購的弊端; 3. 你對網(wǎng)購的態(tài)度。 注意:1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。_第11頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁二、審題立意審題定位1. 文體:議論文2. 主題:對一種現(xiàn)象進行議論3. 要點:網(wǎng)購優(yōu)勢+網(wǎng)購弊端+自己的態(tài)度4. 要求:詞數(shù) 100 左右,增加細(xì)節(jié)以使文章充實、連貫5. 人稱:第三人稱為主6. 時態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時為主技巧點撥1. 根據(jù)要點的多寡以及要點間關(guān)系的密切程度和邏輯關(guān)系劃分段落,確定段落間要點的分布,以使文章段落結(jié)構(gòu)及段內(nèi)句間結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。

16、2. 適時地采用倒裝句、強調(diào)句、帶非謂語的復(fù)合句等來強化情感的表達。3. 鑒于文體需要,關(guān)系密切的要點,可使用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)或者復(fù)合句來表達,以突出其間關(guān)系的緊密性。4. 注意語句間的銜接,適當(dāng)使用過渡性詞語或獨立結(jié)構(gòu)。第12頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁要點整合1. 描述網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點:列舉上網(wǎng)購物帶來的好處。2. 描述網(wǎng)購的缺點:列舉上網(wǎng)購物的不足之處。3. 陳述自己的觀點:全面看待這個問題,有好處,有缺點,但好處遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)多于缺點?？蚣軜?gòu)建第一段:許多人喜歡網(wǎng)購,網(wǎng)購正變得更加流行。 一般來說,它的優(yōu)點如下:網(wǎng)購不僅方便而且可以節(jié)省很多時間,我們可以用這些時間做其他更重要的事。第二段:然而,網(wǎng)購的消極面也

17、是比較明顯的,這招來了很多批評。 缺點之一就是我們對我們買的物品的質(zhì)量無把握。 還有就是有些人在網(wǎng)購時被人騙。第三段:從上面的分析來看,網(wǎng)購的好處要遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)多于缺點。 因此,它還會越來越流行。 因此,網(wǎng)購愛好將使生活更加精彩和有意義。 據(jù)報道,網(wǎng)店更多了,越來越少的人去超市買東西了。第13頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁斟詞酌句1. 陳述網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點:Nowadays many people prefer to shop online,which is becoming more popular. Generally speaking, its advantages can be seen as foll

18、ows.Not only is it convenient for us to shop online but also it helps save much time, with which we can do more other important things.2. 陳述網(wǎng)購的缺點:However, its negative aspects are also apparent, leaving a great deal of criticism.One of the disadvantages is that we are not sure whether the goods we b

19、uy are of good quality.Whats worse, as is often the case, some buyers are cheated while shopping online.3. 表達作者的觀點:Through the above analysis, I am convinced that the positive aspects of shopping online far outweigh the negative ones, which will strengthen its popularity.Therefore, with this trend d

20、eveloping, shopping online will make our life more colorful and meaningful.As is reported in the newspapers, more online shops have been opened and fewer and fewer people buy what they need in the local supermarkets.第14頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁三、妙筆生花 豐富的詞匯和多樣的句型,是從眾多作文中脫穎而出的關(guān)鍵。積累高級詞匯,學(xué)會運用多種句型,你的作文才能出類拔萃。詞匯與短語pr

21、efer to do sth. 更喜歡做某事 generally speaking 一般來說it is convenient to do sth. 做某事方便 a great deal of criticism 大量批評be of good quality 優(yōu)質(zhì) be convinced that 相信outweigh 超過 strengthen its popularity 使越來越流行with this trend developing 隨著這種潮流發(fā)展make ones life more colorful and meaningful 使某人的生活更加多彩和有意義句型與表達Nowada

22、ys many people prefer to shop online,which is becoming more popular.句中 which 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句, to shop online 為不定式作賓語。第15頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁Not only is it convenient for us to shop online but also it helps save much time, with which we can do more other important things.not onlybut also引導(dǎo)倒裝句,起到強調(diào)作用,with which 引

23、導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。One of the disadvantages is that we are not sure whether the goods we buy are of good quality.that 引導(dǎo)表語從句,whether 引導(dǎo)賓語從句。Through the above analysis, I am convinced that the positive aspects of shopping online far outweigh the negative ones, which will strengthen its popularity.that 引導(dǎo)賓語從句,

24、which 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。As is reported in the newspapers, more online shops have been opened and fewer and fewer people buy what they need in the local supermarkets.as 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句,放在句首,what 引導(dǎo)賓語從句。第16頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁四、寫作達人第17頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁四、寫作達人第18頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁第19頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁Step 4 經(jīng)典再現(xiàn)一、考題回放湖南省醴陵二中 、醴醴陵四中2017

25、2018 學(xué)年 目前中學(xué)生中,家長陪讀之風(fēng)盛行,有的家長甚至不惜辭職或者請長假。 你們班上就這一話題進行了討論。 請根據(jù)以下要點介紹討論的結(jié)果并簡要闡述自己的觀點。 注意:1. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行 文連貫; 2. 詞數(shù) 100 左右。_ 第20頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁二、思路點撥 本篇書面表達要求同學(xué)們介紹討論的結(jié)果并簡要闡述自己的觀點,屬于觀點議論文。 根據(jù)題目要求,可把文章分為三大部分。 首先開篇要介紹班上所討論的話題,引出下文,此部分應(yīng)略寫,不宜過長;然后分別敘述兩種不同的觀點及其原因,此部分可以分為兩段敘述,應(yīng)靈活運用英語知識,采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來;最后要闡

26、述自己的觀點及理由,此部分不應(yīng)和題目給出的要點完全重復(fù),要采用適當(dāng)?shù)谋磉_觀點的連接詞和過渡詞,以使行文連貫。 寫作時還要注意時態(tài)、語態(tài),結(jié)構(gòu)上主次分明,詳略得當(dāng)。ieconomic pressure 經(jīng)濟壓力 mental stress 精神壓力accompany sb. 陪伴某人 quit the job 辭職in favor of sth. 支持某事 whats more 另外in addition 此外 on the other hand 另一方面第21頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁ieconomic pressure 經(jīng)濟壓力 mental stress 精神壓力accompany sb.

27、 陪伴某人 quit the job 辭職in favor of sth. 支持某事 whats more 另外in addition 此外 on the other hand 另一方面as far as Im concerned就我而言 I dont agree with the idea that我 不同意這個觀點have a heated discussion about sth. 關(guān)于某事進行了一次熱烈的討論opinions about sth. are different 關(guān)于某事的觀點不一致X% of them think(that)他們中 X%的人認(rèn)為The other X% o

28、f them are against the idea that他們中另外 X%的人不同意這個觀點三、詞句錦囊第22頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁四、補充完整 The other day our class had a heated discussion about whether it was necessary for parents to accompany their children on their studying at school. As for the question, there were two different opinions. 38% of the student

29、s were in favor of the idea that parents should accompany their children on their studying. 1._ (那是因為父母可以做家務(wù)活,比如做可口的飯菜、為他們洗衣服), which allowed students to have more time to study and have a good rest.On the other hand, 62% of the students were against the former viewpoint. In their opinion, parents q

30、uitting theirjobs to accompany students would add economic pressure to the family. Besides, students would be under great mentalstress. In addition, there would be no chance for them to develop their independence.As far as I am concerned, I support the latter opinion. In the long run,2._(學(xué)生不僅要學(xué)習(xí)好,還要

31、學(xué)會獨立生活). That is because parents can do housework such as making delicious dinner and washing clothes for them not only should students study well but also learn to live independently第23頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁 3._ (只有學(xué)會如何獨立生活,學(xué)生才能有機會成長). Only by learning how to live independently can students have the chance

32、to grow第24頁，共32頁。Step 5 佳作研習(xí)一、作文典范佳作研讀 Praising kids is favorable to their development. Im partly for it, but I dont think it wise to tell kids that theyre smart. Instead, they should be praised to be hardworking.The kids told they are smart are more likely to rely on their intelligence and discount

33、 the importance of effort, for which theyll easily develop a fear of failure and do everything to avoid the risk of making mistakes. However, those who are told they are doing well because they work hard will be brave enough to try increasingly difficult problems. Whenever they make mistakes, heyllw

34、ork even harder to learn from them.whenever 狀語從句定語從句+賓語從句+原因狀語從句+adj. enough to do sth.并列句+think 復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)+賓語從句+for過去分詞作定語+be likely to+intelligence+discount +非限制性定語從句+不定式作狀語第25頁，共32頁。 Every word is sending children a message. So remember,do acclaim their efforts and attitudes, rather than justdo 強調(diào)謂語動詞+

35、rather than第26頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁習(xí)題示例 很多人認(rèn)為表揚孩子有利于孩子的成長,但是應(yīng)該表揚孩子聰明,還是該表揚孩子勤奮?請你寫一篇短文發(fā)表自己的觀點。 詞數(shù) 100左右。 _第27頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁一、作文典范研習(xí)以上范文美句,將下列句子譯為英文。我們不該歧視他們,反而應(yīng)該多幫助、照顧他們。2.每次英國下雪,我們都會感到驚訝。3. 一般認(rèn)為,積蓄點錢以備將來之用是明智的。4. 他十分大度地祝賀他的繼任者做出的決定。5. 但愿她能離開,不要再來煩我們了。_ Every time it snows in Britain, we are taken by surpris

36、e. We shouldnt look down upon them; instead, we should try to help them more and take care of them. Its generally thought wise to save some money for the future. He was generous enough to congratulate his successor on his decision. This book is intended for the general readers rather than the studen

37、ts.第28頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁Step 6 仿真模擬 假設(shè)你是李華,上周你們班的同學(xué)就“學(xué)校是否應(yīng)該分快慢班 這一話題進行了熱烈的討論。 以下是討論的結(jié)果。 請你根據(jù)以下的內(nèi)容寫一篇短文: 1. 贊成:學(xué)生能按需討論并解決問題;能根據(jù)學(xué)生的程度安排教學(xué),教學(xué)更高效 2. 反對:在慢班的學(xué)生感覺不被重視;班中缺乏學(xué)習(xí)榜樣的影響 3. 你的看法。 注意:1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫。Task 1Task 2 英 語 中 有 一 句 諺 語:“Practice makes perfect。 假定你是李華,請你根據(jù)你對這句話的理解以及個人經(jīng)驗講述實踐在平時

38、的學(xué)習(xí)生活中的重要性。注意: 1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫; 3. 開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。第29頁，共32頁。首 頁末 頁 Recently, our class had a heated discussion on whether students should be grouped according to their academic performance. Opinions are divided. Some of us are in favor of the idea, thinking thatstudents with the similar learning performance are more likely to exchange their ideas and discuss their problemswith each other. Whats more, its easier for teachers to make lesson plans in a more effective way. However, quite a few of us hold