寫作節(jié)日課件(37頁PPT)

1、Writing 中考英語專題復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)1.了解寫作的篇章技巧，使文章具有整體性. 2.掌握常用的連接詞或句型,令作文更有靈氣.3.通過學(xué)和練提高寫作的技巧和自信.學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)第1頁，共37頁。一、考試要求 書面表達(dá)考查學(xué)生綜合運用英語的能力，特別是表達(dá)和傳遞信息的能力。根據(jù)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)要求，初中階段書面表達(dá)要求學(xué)生圍繞所給的文字信息、大意和要求，用自己所掌握的語言進(jìn)行表達(dá)，所寫內(nèi)容要切中題意、文理通順、語言準(zhǔn)確、結(jié)構(gòu)完整、層次分明、段落清晰、體裁正確、格式規(guī)范書寫工整、拼寫和語法正確，大小寫和標(biāo)點無誤，詞數(shù)符合要求。二、評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)一檔（8-10分)：內(nèi)容切題、層次清楚、語言流暢、基本無語言表達(dá)錯誤。二

2、檔 (6-7分）：內(nèi)容切題、層次比較清楚、語言比較流暢、語言表達(dá)錯 誤較少。三檔（4-5分）：內(nèi)容基本切題、層次不夠分明、語言表達(dá)錯誤較多。四檔（1-3分）：有一定內(nèi)容，但語法錯誤較多。（注意書面表達(dá)語法錯誤全卷扣分不得超過2分；單詞拼寫錯誤全卷扣分不得超過2分)Step 1.要求與標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第2頁，共37頁。1、不知道怎樣寫2、不知道寫什么3、寫出的句子不正確（人稱時態(tài)不對，語序不對）4、不會寫 Step 2.寫作難點第3頁，共37頁。 Traditional Chinese festivals (中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日):the Spring Festivalthe Lantern Festivalthe

3、 Qingming Festivalthe Dragon Boat Festivalthe Mid-autumn Daythe Chongyang FestivalTopic 第4頁，共37頁。the Spring FestivalWhen is it?in January or FebruaryWhat do you think of it?In my opinion,/ I think the festival is exciting/ important/ meaningful/ interesting/ amazing/ great/ I feel happy/ excited/ ch

4、eerful/ pleased/ 第5頁，共37頁。What do people usually do?clean the houseput up chunlianput up chuanghuabuy new clothesshoot off fireworks第6頁，共37頁。get together and have a big dinnervisit relatives and friends/pay a New Year call（拜年）get lucky money第7頁，共37頁。the meaning of the Spring Festivalring out the old

5、 year and get new（辭舊迎新）give the best wishes to othersget together第8頁，共37頁。 The Spring Festival is the biggest and traditional festival in China. It usually comes in January or February. Its time to ring out the old year and get new. People usually buy new clothes for children and themselves. We also

6、 clean our houses carefully before it comes. At the same time, we put up chunlian on the doors and chuanghua on the windows. Its time to get together. Everyone goes home to get together, though someone is far away from home. The most important is people must have a big dinner together. Its interesti

7、ng and exciting for us to shoot off fireworks to celebrate the new year. Besides, we must visit relatives and friends and say “Happy New Year” to them. Whats more, children often get lucky money from their elders. They feel very happy. The Spring Festival is time to ring out the old year and get new

8、. Its time to get together and give the best wishes to our relatives and friends. Its cheerful time.The Spring Festival第9頁，共37頁。 The Spring Festival is the biggest and traditional festival in China. It usually comes in January or February.(P1) Its time to ring out the old year and get new. People us

9、ually buy Its time to get together. The most important is people must have a big dinner together. We must visit relatives and friends and say “Happy New Year” to them. Children often get lucky money from their elders. They feel very happy.(P2) The Spring Festival is time to ring out the old year and

10、 get new. Its time to get together and give the best wishes to our relatives and friends. Its cheerful time. (P3) Time and feelings秘訣一：三段式結(jié)構(gòu) ActivitiesMeanings Step 3.寫作技巧指導(dǎo)Activities(P2)Meanings (P3)Time and feelings(P1)Main ideas要點第10頁，共37頁。 The Spring Festival is the biggest and traditional festi

11、val in China. It usually comes in January or February. Its time to ring out the old year and get new. People usually buy new clothes for children and themselves. We also clean our houses carefully before it comes. At the same time, we put up chunlian on the doors and chuanghua on the windows. Its ti

12、me to get together. Everyone goes home to get together, though someone is far away from home. The most important is people must have a big dinner together. We often shoot off fireworks to celebrate the new year. We must visit relatives and friends and say “Happy New Year” to them. Children often get

13、 lucky money from their elders. They feel very happy. The Spring Festival is time to ring out the old year and get new. Its time to get together and give the best wishes to our relatives and friends. Its cheerful time. 內(nèi)容要點包括： 1. 節(jié)日時間 2. 節(jié)日活動 3. 節(jié)日意義1.要點齊全可適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充2.表達(dá)清楚流暢3.語言無錯誤秘訣二：要點原則第11頁，共37頁。 ,秘訣三：

14、邏輯 關(guān)聯(lián)詞 Its time to ring out the old year and get new. People usually buy new clothes for children and themselves. We also clean our houses carefully before it comes. At the same time, we put up chunlian on the doors and chuanghua on the windows. Its time to get together. Everyone goes home to get to

15、gether, though someone is far away from home. The most important is people must have a big dinner together. We often shoot off fireworks to celebrate the new year. Besides, we must visit relatives and friends and say “Happy New Year” to them. whats more, children often get lucky money from their eld

16、ers. They feel very happy. 關(guān)聯(lián)詞作用：文章更通順并符合邏輯第12頁，共37頁。關(guān)聯(lián)詞Link1.表示并列或遞進(jìn): and, as well as, bothand., not onlybut also.2.表示選擇: or, eitheror. 3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折: but, however, though, after all 4.表示因果: because, so5.表示條件: if, 6.表示列舉: for example, for instance, such as, like7.表示順序: First,. Second,. Third,. Firstly,. S

17、econdly,. Thirdly,. First of all,. Then,. Next,. Finally,.8.表示強(qiáng)調(diào): also, besides, whats more, in fact 9.表示結(jié)論: In a word,.10.個人總結(jié)：In my opinion,. I think.常用第13頁，共37頁。 The Spring Festival is the biggest and traditional festival in China. It usually comes in January or February. Its time to ring out the

18、 old year and get new. People usually buy new clothes for children and themselves. We also clean our houses carefully before it comes. At the same time, we put up chunlian on the doors and chuanghua on the windows. Its time to get together. Everyone goes home to get together, though someone is far a

19、way from home. The most important is people must have a big dinner together. Its interesting for us to shoot off fireworks to celebrate the new year. Besides, we must visit relatives and friends and say “Happy New Year” to them. Whats more children often get lucky money from their elders. They feel

20、very happy. The Spring Festival is time to ring out the old year and get new. Its time to get together and give the best wishes to our relatives and friends. Its cheerful time.秘訣四：語 法重點關(guān)注：時態(tài)，人稱, 名詞/動詞的單復(fù)數(shù)第14頁，共37頁。1.It usually come in January or February. 2.Its time to ring out the old year and gets

21、 new. 3.we on the doors puted up chunlian. 4.Everyone is go home to get together. 5.we shoot off fireworks is interesting and exciting 6.I best/very like the Spring Festival. 7.They are feel very happy7.They feel very happy.動詞錯誤6.I like the Spring Festival best/very much.漢式英語 5.Its interesting and e

22、xciting for us to shoot off fireworks.句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯誤 4.Everyone goes home to get together.人稱錯誤 3.We put up chunlian on the doors .語序錯誤 2.Its time to ring out the old year and get new.動詞用法錯誤 1.It usually comes in January or February.時態(tài)錯誤 常見錯誤第15頁，共37頁。 1.The Spring Festival is the biggest and traditional fes

23、tival in China. 2.It usually comes in/on 3.Its time to (ring out the old year and get new). 4.People usually do We also 5. It is interesting/exciting/ for us to 6. Everyone goes home to get together with their family though someone is far away from home. 7. (activity 1). Whats more/ Besides/ In addi

24、tion, (activity 2). 8. It is our duty to respect the traditions and make Chinese culture known to the world. 9.I like best/very much. 秘訣五：亮點 萬能句型Useful sentence patterns: 第16頁，共37頁。第17頁，共37頁。秘訣六：書寫工整美觀第18頁，共37頁。十二字秘訣：結(jié)構(gòu)+要點+邏輯+語法+亮點+書寫解密四：書面表達(dá)的技巧structure +key points +logic +grammar +shiny points + h

25、andwriting第19頁，共37頁。假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國筆友Maria對中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)很感興趣,希望你給她寫封信介紹中秋節(jié)。信中應(yīng)包含以下要點：1. 中秋節(jié)是中國重要的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日之一；2. 中秋節(jié)的時間是每年的農(nóng)歷八月十五（August 15th of the Chinese lunar calendar(農(nóng)歷)；3. 人們在中秋節(jié)吃月餅，賞月并把祝福送給親人和朋友；4. 自己對中秋節(jié)的認(rèn)識與節(jié)日的意義。注意： 1. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 覆蓋所有要點；可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。Step 3.Writing practice第20頁，共37頁。

26、3.Its time to 4.People usually do We also The beginning The body The ending 8.Its time to 9.It is our duty to and make Chinese culture known to the world. 10.I think its 11.I Like best/very much1.The Festival is 2.It usually comes in/onThe structure of the article (文章的結(jié)構(gòu)）6.(activity 1). Whats more/

27、Besides/ In addition, (activity 2).5.It is interesting/exciting/ for us to 寫作關(guān)鍵： 1. 先布局構(gòu)思，提煉出要點（節(jié)日時間活動與意義）。 2. 靈活運用常用句型，使文章富于變化，增加感染力。 3. 有條理，少錯誤，盡量使用簡單的、熟悉的句子來表達(dá)。 4. 書寫工整，完成后認(rèn)真檢查。7.Everyone goes home to get together with their family though someone is far away from home.第21頁，共37頁。Dear Maria, Im ver

28、y happy that you are interested in Chinese culture, especially the festivals. Now Let me tell you something about the Middle Autumn Festival._Yours,Li Hua第22頁，共37頁。 短文通順完整，能包含所有要點，表達(dá)清楚流暢，語言基本無誤。9-10分短文較通順完整，表達(dá)基本清楚，語言有少量錯誤。7-8分能寫明基本要點，短文不夠通順完整，語言有較多錯誤，但表達(dá)尚能達(dá)意。5-6分僅能寫明部分要點，短文不完整，語言有較多錯誤，影響意思表達(dá)。3-4分僅能寫

29、出與文章有關(guān)的單詞或短語。0-2分Step4 展與評第23頁，共37頁。假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國筆友Maria對中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日端午節(jié)很感興趣，希望你給她寫封信介紹端午節(jié)。信中應(yīng)包含以下要點：1. 端午節(jié)是中國重要的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日之一；2. 端午節(jié)的時間是每年的農(nóng)歷五月初五；3. 人們慶祝端午節(jié)是為了紀(jì)念中國古代偉大的詩人屈原；4. 人們在端午節(jié)吃棕子、賽龍舟；5. 自己對中華民族傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日的認(rèn)識。注意： 1. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 覆蓋所有要點；可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。Homework第24頁，共37頁。Dear Maria,Im very happy that

30、 you are interested in Chinese culture, especially the festivals. Now Let me tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival._Yours,Li Hua第25頁，共37頁。五、作文一般框架：要點+結(jié)構(gòu)+邏輯+語法+亮點1.要點：實際上中考英語寫作就等于兩個字，翻譯！因為中考英語寫作一般會給出幾個要點，要求必須在文章中有所體現(xiàn)。文章寫的再好，只要缺少要點就會扣分。所以要點，也就是文章的第二段內(nèi)容，要做到全，圍繞中心。2.結(jié)構(gòu)：中考最流行的結(jié)構(gòu)就是三段式，深受各地區(qū)中考英

31、語寫作閱卷老師的喜愛。為什么呢？因為這種結(jié)構(gòu)十分清晰。“觀點要點總結(jié)”讓人一目了然。三段式的第一段：簡單明了，開門見山，不超過2句話3.邏輯：這里的邏輯實際指的就是邏輯詞。最常用的就是表示遞進(jìn)的，轉(zhuǎn)折的，總結(jié)的邏輯詞等。遞進(jìn)：除了first,second,third,finally等還可以使用高級點的，如firstofall(首先)，inaddition,whatsmore,moreover(都是另外的意思)，inaword,allinall（表示總結(jié)的）。轉(zhuǎn)折：but,yet,however等。真正有經(jīng)驗的閱卷老師會很注意這些邏輯連接詞，因為這些詞體現(xiàn)了這個文章的思路。4.語法：其他幾點都不

32、是硬性的要求，不那樣做不能說是錯，只能說是不好，但是語法卻是硬性的。如，單詞的使用，時態(tài)等。5.亮點：但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇卻用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我堅信正常人都會給B篇高分的。這些高級一點的詞匯，詞組，句型便是我們得到一等文的最有力的絕招。所以，以后寫英語作文要養(yǎng)成一般詞匯限量用的好習(xí)慣。第26頁，共37頁。四、做題步驟：1 審題：審清作文體裁（類型）時態(tài)、人稱等細(xì)節(jié)；2 列提綱（文章結(jié)構(gòu)框架）：分幾段，以及每段大體內(nèi)容；3 寫作：在提綱的基礎(chǔ)上補(bǔ)充要點；4 復(fù)查：2遍1遍看查拼寫、語法、標(biāo)點等問題；2遍不

33、出聲讀查，靠語感檢查語句是否通順、連貫等；5 謄抄：不允許做任何的更改。*總之做到三審：體裁、時態(tài)、人稱；三思：詞匯短語句式；三查：要點、拼寫和語法、連貫。第27頁，共37頁。1.語序錯誤 He often on foot goes home. He every day works hard. I am in Grade 8, Class 5.2. 動詞用法錯誤 I like play basketball. He can sings songs.3. 代詞錯誤 He favorite animals are pandas. He name is Tom. Hes name is Tom.4.

34、 漢式英語 He best likes animal is giraffes. There are three boys are swimming in the river. There is going to have a football match in our school. There are twenty people agree with me. 第28頁，共37頁。5. 時態(tài)錯誤 They go to HK last Sunday.Tomorrow we are meet at the school gate 6. 人稱錯誤 I like pandas because it i

35、s cute. 7. 連接詞的錯誤 Because I was ill, so I didnt go to school that day.8. 搭配錯誤 He is friendly for us.9. 形容詞和介詞的用法錯誤 I often by bike to school. I for your idea.第29頁，共37頁。10. 冠詞錯誤 His mother is worker. You are good boy. 11. 單復(fù)數(shù) I think she is one of the best singer in the world. 12.邏輯關(guān)系混亂 At the age of

36、 seven, his grandfather died.13. 錯詞 belive; fell lonely, 14. 篇章問題等第30頁，共37頁。對于基礎(chǔ)薄弱生1.寫對句式積累，幫助訓(xùn)練孩子們能夠熟練正確地使用簡單句。2.切題（準(zhǔn)確）-內(nèi)容（樸實）-句式（簡單）-詞匯（樸素）-細(xì)節(jié)（正確）第31頁，共37頁。對于優(yōu)秀生1. 寫好2. 切題（準(zhǔn)確）-內(nèi)容（樸實但有新意）-句式（多樣并流暢）-詞匯（豐富并準(zhǔn)確）-細(xì)節(jié)（完全正確）第32頁，共37頁。關(guān)聯(lián)詞LinkStep 3:1.表示并列或遞進(jìn): and, as well as, bothand., not onlybut also.2.表示選擇: or, eitheror. 3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折: but, however, though, after all 4.表示因果: because, so5.表示條件: if, 6.表示列舉: for example, for instance, such as, like7.表示順序: First,. Second,. Third,. Firstly,. Secondly,. Th