英語中考英語總復習--書面表達含解析

1、（英語）中考英語總復習-書面表達含解析一、英語書面表達1 .你有沒有因為沒能好好管理時間而影響了學習的經(jīng)歷？請你寫一篇文章談談這件事及你的看法。內(nèi)容包括：1.你沒完成學習任務的經(jīng)歷（事情，原因及后果）；2.針對如何管理好時間給出幾點建議。作文要求：1.短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。3.詞數(shù)80個左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。Once, I couldnt make good use of time and it had a bad influence on mystudy.【答案】 Once, I couldnt make good use o

2、f time and it had a bad influence on my study.I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also

3、upset.How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.【解析】 【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式

4、和短語，為文章增色不少，如 make good use of, last weekend ， how to do ， play a game a kind of， spent more time on ， forget to do ， in the end , be angry with , be going to do , on the paper , put up 等。而特殊非謂語動詞結構 Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. 和 I think we should make a weekday plan. /We shoul

5、d write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next.等復雜從句結構的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學習 中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性， 也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的

6、作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理 后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得 到較高的分數(shù)。2.假定彳是David,來自美國，你的 QQ好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者，他來 信向你了解有關這方面的情況。請認真閱讀下面的郵件，并根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和實際用英語 回復，可以有適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。To: HYPERLINK mailto:davidwoodlandschool davidwoodlandschoolFrom: HYPERLINK mailto:limingsunshi

7、neschool limingsunshineschoolSubject: VolunteeringDear David,out it.I m writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. I intere sted in it very much. I m going to do some this summer vacation. But I know little abCould you help me answer the following questions?

8、Why do you want to be a volunteer?What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students?Do yoihave any problems with volunteering?If my parents don t allow me to do so, what should I do?I m looking forward to hearing from you soon.Best wishes,Li Ming注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右?；貜托诺拈_頭和結尾己經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；.回復中不得提及真實的人名、校

9、名等相關信息。Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. Im glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【答案】Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. Im glad you would like to be a volunteer.

10、Now let me answer your questions.I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environ

11、ment and so on.It s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can balance my study and work. If your parents don t allow you to volunteer, you should have a goodtalk with them. Try to let them understand you.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Look

12、ing forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，給好友 Li Ming回信，介紹暑假做志愿者的情況。結合所給材料， 可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主 要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如： Im glad;-we can； It s OK to , If your parents don t allow you tyou should-. ,- I hope 等句式的應用。寫 作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。點睛：本文結

13、構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭為你想要成為一名志愿者而感到高興，接下來介紹 我們可以從事的志愿者工作以及志愿者工作帶來的一些問題，最后我希望你喜歡志愿者工 作。止匕處 would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。.書面表達每年的4月23日是世界讀書日，這個紀念日的意義在于推動更多人去閱讀。假如你校將開 展讀好書，促成長”活動，請你根據(jù)這項活動的主題，向全校

14、同學發(fā)出倡議。讀書的意義.獲取知識，開闊視野.使人愉悅，益于學習. （自由發(fā)揮）現(xiàn)狀.作業(yè)多，無良好讀書習慣.不知道讀什么書，不會選擇倡議（至少兩點）注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；.短文須包括所有要點，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順;.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關信息。Dear classmates,Reading is very important in our daily life.Let s start reading now!【答案】 Reading is very important in our daily life .First

15、of all, reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books . It can also help to open up a whole new world to us . Second, reading will/can make us clever and happy . It is good for our study and it can help us grow up . Third, reading can help us think more and further and make our life

16、 more colourful However, there is usually so much homework for us to do that we dont have enough time for reading . Moreover , some of us dont have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet .In my opinion , our school can have aReading Weekonce a te

17、rm . Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library We must spend more time reading some useful books. As a result, we can have a better future .Lets start reading now!【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語， 例如 first of all, all kinds of books , help to do , be good for, more

18、and further , so much , spend too much time doing , search the Internet , in my opinion , as a result 等。同時 First of all, / Second, / Third 等時間副詞和 However/ Moreover / As a result 等結構副詞的運 用，既使文章的思路清晰、層次分明，還豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮 點點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容 經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考

19、生不能遺漏要 點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構 以便得到較高的分數(shù)。.（題文）書面表達在中學生機器人大賽上，出現(xiàn)了一種專門照顧老人的新型家用智能機器人，它的主要功能 有：1.定時做飯、洗衣服；2.陪老人聊天、下棋、做運動；.處理緊急情況（如：撥打 120）假如你是該機器人的發(fā)明者，請你介紹這個產(chǎn)品，并談談你的未來設想。要求：1.意思連貫，語句通順；.詞數(shù)80詞左右；短文的開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）.參考詞匯：at a fixed time 定時 emergency 緊急情況ccompany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,

20、Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.【答案】 Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for atten ding our robot show. Now I d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals

21、and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, ifan old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I m sure my ne

22、w invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如thank you for doing , I d like to dointroduce sb. to , all of you , at home , do some washing , at a fixed time ， hav

23、e a chat， play chess do exercise ， deal with ， a great help ， in the future 等。而 Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help theelderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.等非謂語動詞和復雜從句的運用，豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達

24、多樣化，是本文的 最大鳧點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容 經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要 點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構 以便得到較高的分數(shù)。近年來霧霾天氣在中國許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。霧霾天氣引起大家極大的關注。請你用英語寫一篇有關霧霾的短文向?？⒄Z角”投稿，內(nèi)容包括：.霧霾的危害2.霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因（2個）3.應對霧霾的措施（3個）提示：霧霾 smog poisonous有毒的注意：1.詞數(shù)110左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭語已為

25、你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）。In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.【答案】In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which hasaroused great concern among people.Smog has a bad effect on people s health. Many peop

26、le, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.How does it come about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result o

27、f people s burning coal, driving; cars, industry production and so on.What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or sch

28、ool by public transport is a good choice. Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來介紹有關霧霾的情況，題目中給出了寫作的內(nèi)容，我們應將 這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達出來。首先應注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不 能遺漏要點，

29、并注意表達的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可 知，這篇短文應使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，謂語動詞用原形，特別要注意謂語動詞形式要變化， 這是一個寫作的難點。最后要注意英語的表達習慣，英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使 用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應從句子整體考慮，使用恰當?shù)脑~ 匯和句型來表達，語法規(guī)范。還應使用一些較好的句型或者短語，增強文章的表現(xiàn)力。6.書面表達初中就要畢業(yè)了，校報 英語角”欄目向同學們征集畢業(yè)晚會的計劃。假定你是李華，請根 據(jù)要點 寫一封信，說說你的計劃。活動畢業(yè)晚會時間6月28日晚上七點地點學校禮堂school hall參與日全體初三學生和老

30、師活動內(nèi)容1.邀請校長作演講；.互贈禮物送祝福；.各班表演精彩節(jié)目.要求：1.要點完整，可適當發(fā)揮，使句子通順，連貫 ；2.正確使用語態(tài)，語法正確，書寫整 潔。3.80詞左右，開頭結尾己給出，不計入總詞數(shù) ；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和地名。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.Best wishes,Yours Lihua【答案】Dear editor,Im very happy to have the chance to show my plan for

31、the graduation ceremony. The ceremonywill be held in our school hall at 7 o clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. Firstof all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and

32、 blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan. Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達主要是推薦自己的畢業(yè)晚會計劃?！驹斀狻窟@是一篇給材料作文，介紹畢業(yè)典禮活動計劃。結合所給材料，可知本文主要

33、考查一般現(xiàn) 在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構 和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫 作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。7 .假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封保護大象的倡議書。提示：陸地上最大的哺乳動物，可以活到 80歲。目前數(shù)量在減少，因為：1）人們砍伐森林，大象漸漸失去家園；2）人們捕殺大象，獲取象牙。3）應如何保護它們（不少于三條）。要求：1)恰當運用比較級和最高級；2) 80詞左右。倡議書的結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：哺乳動物 mammal;象牙ivoryDear classmates

34、I believe everyones contribution（貢獻）can make a big difference.Yours, Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in t

35、he forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the l

36、aw to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants.I believe everyones contribution（貢獻）can make a big difference.Yours, Lihua 【解析】【詳解】本文是一封倡議書 倡議大家保護大象。文章共分為三個方面的內(nèi)容，首先描述大象想在所 處的現(xiàn)狀，然后說明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因，最后為了保護的大象我們應該如何去做。時態(tài) 主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。

37、提出倡議時可以使用We can/ We should/ Let s/We d be峰表示建議的句子。寫作時注意不要使用太復雜的句型，以免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，為使句子具有連貫性，可以適當使用連詞。本篇文章內(nèi)容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largestmammals 及 First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級和最高級；Firstly, .Secondly,等詞的使用使文章具有層次性，條理清晰。并且一些連詞的使用，比如so, or,but等也使文章具有連貫性，是一篇不錯的文章。8 .假如你是李華，彳的美國朋友Jack熱愛中國的唐詩宋

38、詞。最近他對母親節(jié)你在博客里發(fā)的游子吟(Song of the parting son)很感興趣，給你寫信想了解該詩，請你根據(jù)以下 提示給他回信：.作者：孟郊.時間：唐朝.內(nèi)容：母親為兒子做衣服.主題：母愛的偉大注意：.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學校名稱；.語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；.詞數(shù)：80-100詞左右，信件的開頭與結尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jack,I m glad hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son .Yours,【答案】Dear Jack

39、,I m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son . NowI m writing to tell you something about it.Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a common matter in dai

40、ly life a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother s lbe. In a word, this short poem has touched many people s hearts.If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.Yours,Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】這是一篇材料作文?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)內(nèi)容可知，這是一篇書信類文章。時態(tài)是一

41、般現(xiàn)在時。人稱是第一人稱和第三人稱。 英語作文一般分為三個部分：第一部分：交代寫信目的 一一朋友Jack熱愛中國的唐詩宋詞。我將給你介紹游子吟(Song of the parting son ) 這首詩。第二部分：文章主體部分具體介紹游子吟(Song of the parting son)這首詩。.作者：孟郊.時間：唐朝.內(nèi)容：母親為兒子做衣服.主題：母愛的偉大第三部分：信的結語一一如果對方有任何問題，可以繼續(xù)問自己，并期待收到對方的來 信。9.近年來，習近平主席提出了實現(xiàn)中華民族偉大復興的中國夢”。學校開展了 夢想少年的主題演講活動，假如你是張明，請根據(jù)以下提供的要點，以 Im a Drea

42、m Teenager為 題，寫一篇80- 100詞的短文，向大家推介自己。(可聯(lián)系實際，適當發(fā)揮)注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名。提示詞語： 1.be good at 2.help.with 3.follow.rules 4.cheer up 5.be popular with.6.volunteer to do something【答案】Im a Dream TeenagerGood morning , dear teachers and friends , I am Zhang Ming . Its great honor for me to make a speech here.

43、As a fifteen-year-old boy , my dream is to be a good teacher . To make my dream come true , I study hard at school and I am good at all my subjects . Also, I am an outgoing and healthy boy who likes football very much , and I really enjoy sports . At school, I always follow the school rules , so I a

44、m popular with my classmates and teachers . On weekends, Id like to help people . For example, I volunteer to visit sick children in the hospital and cheer them up.In a word , I believe that the man who holds his dream will be able to achieve his dream one day. Thats all. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。學校開展夢想少年”的主題演講活動，假如你是張明，要求根據(jù)圖表提示內(nèi)容，以Im a Dream Teenage兩題，寫一篇短文，向大家推介自己。根據(jù)所給出的 材料提示可知文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。首先認真審題， 看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的 表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。在寫作過程中，要將圖表內(nèi)提示信息用英語正確