【中考備考金鑰匙】2015中考英語(yǔ)壓軸題精編專題(含解析)專題35提綱作文

1、【中考備考金鑰匙】2021 中考英語(yǔ)壓軸題精編專題含解析專題35英語(yǔ)作文之提綱作文【2021 年福建省龍巖市中考】英語(yǔ)課上，老師向同學(xué)們介紹了2021 年度“最美孝心少年的感人事跡，你深受感動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一那么日記，寫(xiě)出自己的感受。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)及要求：說(shuō)明自己將向“孝心少年學(xué)習(xí)；你將在日常生活、學(xué)習(xí)中做些什么來(lái)孝敬父母；詞數(shù)： 80 左右。開(kāi)頭局部已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。提示詞可選用：learnfrom,respect,carefor,do some housework,studyhard Monday, June 30SunnyThis morning,our Englishteachertol

2、dus somestoriesabout “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2021.【答案】Monday, June 30SunnyThis morning,our Englishteachertoldus somestoriesabout “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2021 . I was deeply moved. Those teenagers set us a good example in respecting and caring for parents.I used to

3、 make my parents unhappy and now I feel ashamed about it. I think I should learn from them. I will help do some housework and take good care of my mum and dad when they are ill. I will try my best to study hard so that I can enter thekey high school in our city. I hope I can become a filial piety yo

4、uth like them. (88 words)【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】 這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如:setan examplefor為樹(shù)立典范；used to do sth 過(guò)去常常做某事；take care of 照顧； tryones best to do sth盡力做某事；強(qiáng)調(diào)句式It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)怎么樣 等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié), 牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ), 寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,讓文章更出彩。 考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文?！?021 年湖南省婁底市中考】請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)Zhang Ying的一些表現(xiàn)的提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，把她介紹

5、給你的外國(guó)朋友Mary。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junkfood forbreakfastQuarrel(爭(zhēng)吵 ) with herIn classAsk some questionsclassmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateWatch TV or play computerIn the eveningHelp her parentswithhouseworkgames formore thanan hour要求： 1、語(yǔ)言要通順，表

6、達(dá)要正確。2、文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。3、詞數(shù)不少于60 個(gè)英語(yǔ)單詞。4、文章開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)?！敬鸢浮縊ne possible version Dear Mary,I m very glad to introduce(介紹) my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a14-year-old girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning.In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. Aft

7、er school she alwaysexercises(fora longtime).Aftersuppershe helpsher parentswithhousework.(She is really a good girl. )But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk foodfor breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesntgo home on time and she always watches TV or

8、plays computer games for more than anhour intheevening.(Thismakes herparentsunhappy.)IthinkZhang Ying isa very good girl. Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】試題分析： 這是一篇提綱類作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。寫(xiě)作中注意將張穎的情況介紹清楚。根據(jù)材料可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱進(jìn)行表達(dá)，寫(xiě)作中主語(yǔ)時(shí)態(tài)及 主謂一致等問(wèn)題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語(yǔ)句通順。 為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文在寫(xiě)作中使用了很

9、多固定句式，如： be glad to do sth 快樂(lè)做某事； a lot of 許多； get up起床等。本文中時(shí)間詞如After supper， Sometimes， in the evening等的巧妙使用，使得本文看起來(lái)邏輯清楚，條理清楚。在學(xué)習(xí)中，我們應(yīng)注意總結(jié), 牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ), 寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性, 更富有條理 .考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文【2021 年內(nèi)蒙古包頭市、烏蘭察布市中考】假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡相應(yīng)位置用英語(yǔ)給你的美國(guó)筆友Jim 寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，告訴他以下事情：感謝他給你寄來(lái)的那些書(shū)。你非常喜歡它們，每晚睡前都會(huì)讀幾頁(yè)。請(qǐng)他下次來(lái)信

10、時(shí)給你介紹一些美國(guó)的節(jié)日。非常盼望與他面對(duì)面交談，所以希望他明年夏天能來(lái)你的家鄉(xiāng)。你愿意作他的導(dǎo)游。你們可以一起參觀一些有趣的地方。順便問(wèn)一下，這些天他是否在電視中看世界杯?？记绊氈何闹胁坏贸霈F(xiàn)涉及考生真實(shí)信息的人名、地名等內(nèi)容?？蛇m當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。詞數(shù) 70 110，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：郵寄： mail/post v 導(dǎo)游： guide n 世界杯： the World Cup Dear Jim,How is it going?【答案】Dear Jim,How is it going?Thankyou formailingthebooks tome. Ilik

11、ethem so much thatI read some pagesevery day before going to bed. When you write to me next time, could you tell me something about American festivals such as Thanksgiving Day?I do hope that you can come and visit my hometown next summer. On the one handwe can talk face to face and discuss some prob

12、lems that we are both interested in. On the other hand, I will be very happy to act as your guide and show you around some nice places.By the way, are you watching the World Cup on TV these days?Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】 這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。 如:thanksb forsth 因?yàn)槟呈赂兄x

13、某人； sothat如此以至于；such as 比方； On the one handOn the other hand,一方面另一方面；It is adj to do sth，做某事怎么樣等。學(xué) 習(xí)中注意總結(jié) , 牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ), 寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,讓文章更出彩?？键c(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文【2021 年內(nèi)蒙古通遼市中考】現(xiàn)在養(yǎng)寵物狗已成為很多人生活中的一局部，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文談一談對(duì)養(yǎng)寵物狗的看法，內(nèi)容須含利弊兩方面。提示：養(yǎng)寵物狗可給人帶來(lái)快樂(lè)，消減孤獨(dú)與煩惱，陪伴并幫助家人解決一些困難等。養(yǎng)寵物狗會(huì)占用很多時(shí)間。寵物狗有一定危險(xiǎn)性，有時(shí)會(huì)傷害孩子。另外，它會(huì)給家人和鄰居帶來(lái)噪音，污染

14、周?chē)h(huán)境等。注意：不要將上述所給的提示直接譯成英文，要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮或調(diào)整。詞數(shù)約 80 左右。句首已給出的局部不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)How Do You Like Pet Dogs?Every morning, we can see many kinds of pet dogs led by the persons who walk around. Pet dogs have become a part of their lives. I think【答案】How Do You Like Pet Dogs?Everymorning,we can see many kindsofpetdogs ledby t

15、hepersonswho walkaround.Pet dogs have become a part of their lives. I think keeping pets brings joy to our life.Actually,itisgood to keep pets because petscan playwiththeyoung and accompanythe old. Research also shows that living with a pet helps to relieve peoples pressureand distressand even decre

16、asesthepossibilityofgettingheartdiseases.However, many are against living together with animals. They argue that pets areeasilyinfectedby diseases,which may pass on to humans.Whatsmore, the unpleasantsmell and waste caused by pets are a resource of environmental pollution.So we avoid potential risks

17、 and troubles, we have to make sure that our pets are properly vaccinated and their behaviors are under control.【解析】試題分析： 本文屬于陳述正反方觀點(diǎn)的議論文作文，談?wù)勱P(guān)于養(yǎng)寵物的問(wèn)題。要求中只給出了要點(diǎn)，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多，注意將提示的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容， 可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行表達(dá)，人稱問(wèn)題較為復(fù)雜，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中注意表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)的常用句式，如賓語(yǔ)從句，條件狀語(yǔ)從句等。注意在表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)時(shí)， 連詞的使用。 內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面

18、性；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇范文中出現(xiàn)一些不錯(cuò)的句式和短語(yǔ)，如become a part of成為的一局部； Whats more而且，再說(shuō)；強(qiáng)調(diào)句式，It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)怎么樣；make sure 確保；以及由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié), 牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ), 寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,讓文章更出彩?？键c(diǎn)：提綱作文【 2021 年山東省臨沂市中考】請(qǐng)以“ My favoriteteacher 為題， 根據(jù)以下提示， 用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇不少于60 詞的短文。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。提示 ( 短文

19、須包含以下要點(diǎn)) ：What subject does your favorite teacher teach?What does he/she look like? And how about his/her personal traits(性格 )?Tell a story about how he/she helped you.What do you want to say to him/her when you meet in the future?注意：短文中,老師的姓名請(qǐng)一律使用Mr Wang 或 Ms Wang，不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息,否那么不予評(píng)分。My fa

20、vorite teacher【答案】My favorite teacher is Ms. Wang. She is a 36-year-old woman. But she is tall and has long straight hair.And she often wears black pants and a white shirt. She teaches us English. We all like listening to her. Herclasses are very interesting and creative. Because she has different w

21、ays of teaching. But she is very strictwith us in everything. She is warm-hearted. We all know she is always ready to help others. When we arein trouble, she can tryher bestto helpus.We all likeher, and she likes us,too.【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】 這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如:be strictwith對(duì) 嚴(yán)格； be ready to do sth 準(zhǔn)備做某事；

22、in trouble 處于困難中； try one s best do to sth 盡力做某事等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié) , 牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ) , 寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文1Subjectsfavorite, do well in2Activitiescompetition, sports3Friendsget on well 4Spare timewash clothes, reading5Planwork hard要求： 1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。2.條理清楚、語(yǔ)句通順、語(yǔ)法正確、書(shū)寫(xiě)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。3.可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。4.詞數(shù)： 80 詞左右。文章開(kāi)頭已給出

23、，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Mom and Dad,How time flies! I miss you very much! I was not used to everything here a fewweeks ago. But now I enjoy my school life.【2021 年湖北省荊州市中考】瑩瑩的父母外出打工了，她到學(xué)校寄宿學(xué)習(xí)。開(kāi)始她感到不習(xí)慣，在老師和朋友們的幫助下，現(xiàn)在學(xué)習(xí)、生活非常好。假設(shè)你是瑩瑩，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提 示給父母寫(xiě)一封信，介紹你的在校情況和今后的打算。Yours, Yingying【答案】Dear Mom and Dad,How time flies

24、! I miss you very much! I was not used to everything here a fewweeks ago. But now I enjoymy schoollife.Wehave ninesubjectsat school.My favoritesubject is history. Its interesting and I can learn a lot from it. With the helpof my teacher, I do better in English. There are many activities at school. L

25、astweek, I tookpartina singingcompetitionand won thefirstprize.I have made lots offriendshere and we geton wellwitheach other.Inmy sparetime,I usuallywash my clothesor do some reading.Sometimes I playsportswithmy friends.Imstronger than before. Dont worry about me. I can look after myself very well

26、and will workharder in the future.Yours,Yingying【解析】試題分析： 這篇短文要求我們就表格內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一封給媽媽的信。表格中給了我們這篇短文的主要內(nèi)容。主要內(nèi)容包括：一是關(guān)于學(xué)科方面，包括你最喜歡的學(xué)科和擅長(zhǎng)的學(xué)科等。二是關(guān) 于活動(dòng)方面，比賽和體育活動(dòng)有什么等。三是交友方面， 你與同學(xué)們相處情況。四是業(yè)余時(shí)間的活動(dòng)， 如洗衣服、 讀書(shū)五是你的方案，如今后要努力學(xué)習(xí)這5 方面的內(nèi)容是我們寫(xiě)作的根據(jù)， 但還需要我們自己去充實(shí)一些內(nèi)容，讓短文更加完整、充實(shí)。 我們需要發(fā)揮想象力，把我們平時(shí)積累的知識(shí)加以運(yùn)用。另外，寫(xiě)作時(shí)，還需注意語(yǔ)句間的銜接要緊密，使文意連

27、貫，表達(dá)流暢。時(shí)態(tài)方面要注意，如Last week, I took part in a singing competition and won the first prize.等，表達(dá)過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情要用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。如I can look after myself very well and will work harder in the future.對(duì)將來(lái)的打算方案要用一般將來(lái)時(shí)?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比擬不錯(cuò)的作文。作者緊緊圍繞要點(diǎn)，向媽媽講述自己的一些情況，并告訴媽媽自己的方案等。表達(dá)要點(diǎn)完整、正確，清晰，語(yǔ)言連貫流暢，有效地傳達(dá)了規(guī)定的信息。 短文中需要作者自己補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容完成得很好，如 I

28、tsinterestingand I can learn a lot from it.等。這些內(nèi)容都比擬符合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比擬好的句型，如How timeflies!I was notused toeverythinghere a few weeks ago.I can look after myself very well and will work harder in the future.等?？键c(diǎn)：提綱類作文?！?2021 四川雅安】 假設(shè)你是一名來(lái)自雅安的中學(xué)生李紅, 今 年 14 歲,暑假你將參加學(xué)校組織的赴北京的夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇在開(kāi)營(yíng)儀式上的

29、自我介紹發(fā)言稿。請(qǐng)將該發(fā)言稿寫(xiě)在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。詞數(shù)60 - 90。發(fā)言稿還包括以下要點(diǎn):你愛(ài)好畫(huà)畫(huà) ;課余時(shí)間你喜歡野營(yíng), 喜歡在大自然中畫(huà)植物, 聆聽(tīng)鳥(niǎo)兒的歌唱;你最喜歡的科目是科學(xué) , 希望長(zhǎng)大以后成為一名科學(xué)家;你很快樂(lè)參加夏令營(yíng), 希望你們能成為好朋友?！敬鸢浮緿ear friends,I m very glad to introduce myself to you. My name is Li Hong. Im 14 years old. I live in Yaan. Im interested in drawing. In my free time, I often goc

30、amping,draw some pictures ofplants,and enjoythesingingofbirdsinnature.My favourite subject is Science. I want to be ascientist when I grow up.I feel lucky to join you. I hope we can be good friends.That s all. Thank you for listening.【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文雖然語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)單，但是表達(dá)清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)。考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。8. 【 2021 年山東煙臺(tái)】當(dāng)前，

31、全市各學(xué)校正開(kāi)展“好書(shū)伴我成長(zhǎng)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)活動(dòng)主題并結(jié)合表格中所給信息， 以“ Growing up with good books為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100-120 詞的建議書(shū)，向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出建議。讀書(shū)的益處獲取知識(shí)，增長(zhǎng)見(jiàn)識(shí)，使人快樂(lè)。存在的現(xiàn)象聽(tīng)音樂(lè)，看電視，上網(wǎng)，占用了大局部業(yè)余時(shí)間。發(fā)出建議多讀書(shū)，讀經(jīng)典好書(shū)。向世界傳播中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化。讓讀書(shū)成為我們生活的一局部要求：建議書(shū)應(yīng)包括所有要點(diǎn)；建議書(shū)的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Growing up with good booksMy dear friends,Reading is very important.【答案】My dear fri

32、ends,Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us clever and happier. Our study can be improved ifwe readmore good books.The more we read,themore we willlearn,and thebrighterour future will become.However, some students spend much

33、time inlistening to music, watching TV or goingon lineto playgames. Ittakesmuch oftheirsparetime 。 So Iwould liketosuggest thateveryoneshouldread more books,especiallyread classicsso thatwe can spreadour Chinese traditional culture to the world.Let s start reading now. And let it become a part of ou

34、r life!【解析】試題分析 : 首先我們應(yīng)該注意文章的體裁是應(yīng)用文，那就要注意應(yīng)用文的寫(xiě)作特點(diǎn)和格式。其次要注意時(shí)態(tài)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。再次要注意內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，不要有漏啦。最后要注意條理清晰，語(yǔ)言具有感染力。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文結(jié)構(gòu)完整，條理清晰，首先介紹了閱讀的重要性，然后介紹介紹現(xiàn)在存在的現(xiàn)象，最后發(fā)出建議。短文中運(yùn)用了較好的句式如：The more we read,themore we will learn, and the brighter our future will become.等。為文章增色不少?？键c(diǎn)：提綱類作文。9.【2021 山東濱州】 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息以“ Le

35、arn to express thanks 為題， 用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。背1. 認(rèn)為上中學(xué)時(shí)吃好穿好是應(yīng)該的；景2. 走向社會(huì)后沒(méi)有感恩意識(shí)。感謝社會(huì)提供良好的教育時(shí)機(jī)；感謝父母供養(yǎng)自己上學(xué)；學(xué)會(huì)感恩3. 感謝老師傳授知識(shí)；4. 感謝朋友的支持與鼓勵(lì)。參考詞匯： enter society進(jìn)入社會(huì)，sense of thanks感恩意識(shí)，behavior行為要求： 1. 短文應(yīng)包括所提供的所有內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯；演講稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名及能夠透露你個(gè)人身份的信息；詞數(shù)： 80 詞左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Good morning, boys and girls

36、!The topic of my speech today is“Learn to express thanks . In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.Thank you for your listening!【答案】參考范文一：Good morning, boys and girls!The topic of my

37、speech today is“ Learn to expre.ssWtehafinnkdssome students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school. When they leave school and enter society, they don show any sense of thanks.I think this behavior is not correct. As students, we should learn to express thanks. The society offers us

38、 a chance to receive good education. And our parents also support us to go to school. Our teachers teach us much knowledge, so we should thank them. We should also thank our friends because they give us courage and support.In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so o

39、n. At present, we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.Thank you for your listening!參考范文二：Learn to express thanks Good morning, boys and girls!The topic of my speech today is“ Learn to expre.ssWtehafinnkdsmost Middle Schoolstudents don t show any sense of. “ThTehyathniknsk t

40、hat they are certain of eating well andwearing fashionable clothes.As Middle School students, we should learn to express thanks. We should thank our parents for supporting us to go to school. And we should express thanks to our hardworking teachers who teach us much knowledge. Besides, our friends a

41、lways give us encouragement and help.In a word, we are lucky in everything. But we should learn to express thanks. In the future, I should study harder to repay our parents and teachers. I should go to my friends to share their happiness and sadness.Thank you for your listening!【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表

42、達(dá)清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)， 多見(jiàn)好句型和習(xí)慣表達(dá)用語(yǔ)考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。10.【 2021 年安徽】 今天是父親節(jié)。 假定你是李華， 請(qǐng)給你的美國(guó)朋友John 寫(xiě)一封電子郵件， 談?wù)勀銓⑷绾闻c父親一起度過(guò)這個(gè)特別的日子。要點(diǎn)如下：表述你與父親間的情感；為父親制作二張卡片；幫助父親做點(diǎn)事；陪父親散步等。注意： 1.詞數(shù) 80-100 ；請(qǐng)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear John,Its Fathers Day today. Its a special day, isnt it?What your plan for Fathers Day? I

43、m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear John,Its Fathers Day today. Its a special day, isnt it?Ithinkwe shoulddo somethingto show our love forour fatherson thisspecial day. My fatherand I are good friends.Whenever I meet withdifficulties,he isalways there, ready to help me.Today

44、I will make a beautiful card for him, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite foodintheevening.Besides,Illtakea walkwithhim afterdinnerand thenplaychess with him, for he likes it very much. I m sure hell be very happy.Whatsyourplan

45、forFathersDay? Im lookingforwardtohearingfrom yon.Yours, Li Hua【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，介紹如何與父親一起度過(guò)父親節(jié)。材料中給的資料比擬全面，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，確定時(shí)態(tài)主要詞匯等問(wèn)題。 結(jié)合材料可知本文主要用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行表達(dá)，寫(xiě)作中， 應(yīng)注意描述的全面性， 盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié), 牢記

46、一些固定句式及短語(yǔ), 寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性, 更富有條理?？键c(diǎn)：提綱作文。11.【2021 年廣東】 假設(shè)你是一名叫李明Li Ming 的中學(xué)生，看了上述故事后，你想表達(dá)自己的看法。請(qǐng)你給欄目編輯寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：你對(duì)其中的哪個(gè)故事感興趣？原因是什么？你對(duì)這個(gè)故事所提及的現(xiàn)象的看法。就該現(xiàn)象提出至少兩條解決問(wèn)題的建議。作文要求：不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。語(yǔ)句連貫， 詞數(shù) 80 個(gè)左右。作文開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，也不必抄寫(xiě)在答題卡上。Dear Editor,I read the stories on BBC Wor

47、ld Have Your Say today, Your, Li Ming【答案】Dear Editor,I read the storiesonBBCWorld Have Your Saytoday.Iam interestedinMikes story, because Ihad the same experiencewhen I traveled in Guangzhou. I cantstand bad mannersin public, either.In fact,Ireallyget angrywhen people jump the queen and smoke in non

48、-smoking areas. I think its wrong tobreak the rulesinpublic.Inmy opinion,we shouldknow more aboutgood manners.On theother hand,we had betterstoppeople around usfrom beingrude. If we cant stop them, we can alwaysask the police or someone like thatfor help.Yours,Li Ming(92 words)【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文內(nèi)容涵蓋了所有的要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的組織上能夠靈活使用簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)自然流暢。同時(shí)， 文章還使用了一些的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，如：am interested in，in public， In fact， In my opinion,以及連接詞 when 、if、because 等，這為文章增色不少。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意積累，掌握一些常用句式及短語(yǔ)的用法，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理?？键c(diǎn)：提綱作文。1