牛津深圳版九年級上冊Module 1 Geniuses Unit1 Wise Man in History話題作文期末復(fù)習(xí)VIP

1、書面表達 期末復(fù)習(xí)寶典9A Unit1 Wise Man in History話題作文 你的網(wǎng)友Peter對中國三國時期的歷史很感興趣，請你給他介紹蜀國杰出的軍事家、政治家，發(fā)明家諸葛亮。內(nèi)容提示：1諸葛亮（181-234），劉備有名的謀士，蜀國杰出的軍事家、政治家。2他幫助劉備打了一系列的戰(zhàn)爭，建立了蜀國。3諸葛亮還發(fā)明或改造了一些運輸工具和傳統(tǒng)兵器，是一位出色的發(fā)明家。4. 你對諸葛亮的看法。要求1.條理清晰，意思連貫，語句通順，標(biāo)點正確，邏輯嚴(yán)謹(jǐn); 2.100 詞左右;可適當(dāng)擴展。參考詞匯軍事家military strategist, 政治家statesman，謀士adviser，蜀國

2、the Shu Kingdom，三國時期 the Three Kingdoms period, 兵器weapon， 審題定位體裁和主題：人物介紹中國歷史名人人稱：he時態(tài)：歷史人物一般過去時，個人看法一般現(xiàn)在時段落：三段 Beginning：人物簡介生平，身份（Who was he? ）Body: 個人主要成就。What did he do? / What was his contribution? Ending：對諸葛亮的看法 What do you think of him?Beginning: Who was he?諸葛亮是一名三國時期杰出的軍事家,政治家。Zhuge Liang was

3、 an outstanding military strategist and statesman in the Three Kingdoms period.生平他生于181年，卒于234年，是劉備有名的謀士。(be famous/well-known as.) _Body: 個人主要成就。What did he do? / What was his contribution? 按要點寫作并適當(dāng)拓展：他幫助劉備進行了一系列的戰(zhàn)爭，建立了蜀國。(a series of . / found) _諸葛亮還發(fā)明或改造了一些運輸工具和傳統(tǒng)兵器。（invent, improve, transportati

4、on tools）_要點拓展: 他的空城計大獲全勝。(be successful/ be a great success)_Ending：對諸葛亮的看法 What do you think of him?中國人民認(rèn)為諸葛亮是智慧的化身，他的傳奇故事至今廣為流傳。（be regarded as, be widely known, legendary stories）_他的忠誠和奉獻精神給我留下深刻的印象。（loyalty, dedication, be impressed by）_在我心里，他不僅是一名有智慧的人，還是一名英雄。（in ones mind, not only.but also.）

5、_高分要領(lǐng)：1.嘗試使用復(fù)合句；2. 使用非謂語動詞；3. 使用被動語態(tài)表達使用定語從句：Zhuge Liang, who was born in 181 and died in 234, was an outstanding military strategist and statesman in the Three Kingdoms period.He invented some transportation tools and improved traditional weapons, which made him an excellent inventor.使用非謂語動詞： Being

6、 Liu Beis adviser, he was well-known for his wisdom and loyalty. His plan, later known as the Empty Fort Strategy, was a great success. 使用被動語態(tài)：As we all know, legendary stories about him are still widely known. A number of traditional Chinese idioms are related to him.I was deeply impressed by his l

7、oyalty and dedication. 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)版Zhuge Lliang was an outstanding military strategist and statesman in the Three Kingdoms period. He was born in 181 and died in 234. He was famous as Liu Beis adviser. As a military strategist, he helped Liu Bei fight a series of wars and founded the Shu Kingdom. His plan, l

8、ater known as the Empty Fort Strategy, was a great success. Besides, he was a celebrated inventor. He invented some transportation tools and improved traditional weapons.Zhuge Liang is regarded as a man of great wisdom by the Chinese and legendary stories about him are still widely known. In my mind

9、, he is not only a wise man, but also a hero.高分版 Zhuge Liang, who was born in 181 and died in 234, was an outstanding military strategist and statesman in the Three Kingdoms period. Being Liu Beis adviser, he was well-known for his wisdom and loyalty.He assisted Liu Bei in fighting a series of wars

10、and founding of the Shu Kingdom, he took charge of government affairs, military affairs, which were highly praised. His plan, later known as the Empty Fort Strategy, was a great success. He invented some transportation tools and improved traditional weapons, which made him an excellent inventor. Zhuge Liang is regarded as a man of great wisdom by the Chinese. As we all know, legendary stories about him are still widespread. A number of traditional Chinese idioms are related to him. Till today, We can still read Northern Expedition Memorial written by Zhuge Liang