初中英語 滬教牛津版 9A U3 Writing 課件

1、2021深圳市初中英語空中課堂九年級(jí)上冊(cè) Unit 3授課教師：卓柔君 June南山實(shí)驗(yàn)教育集團(tuán)園丁學(xué)校WritingLearning ObjectivesTo master some useful expressions about family life;01To know about a Five-star writing process;02To write a short article about your own family life following the Five-star writing process.03CONTENTS1234Lead-inPre-writing

2、While-writingPost-writing01Lead-in1Lead-inEmilys and Jerrys family lifeFamily membersPossessionsHouseworkFamily activitiesRulesLikes most about the familyWrite a short article about your family life.1Lead-inTask02Pre-Writing2Pre-WritingKey informationTopic-related expressionsDraftingEditingBeautiful

3、 handwriting03While-Writing3While-WritingKey informationFamily membersPossessionsHouseworkFamily activitiesRulesLikes most about the familyStep 1 Think about your own family life and fill in the mind map.My family lifeMy mum, my dad, my sister, brother and meA mobile phone, a laptop, etc.3While-Writ

4、ingFamily membersPossessionsHouseworkFamily activitiesRulesLikes most about the familyStep 2 Find out useful expressions from the text on P35 and add them to your mind map.My family lifeMy mum, my dad, my brother, sister and meA mobile phone, a laptop, etc.Topic-related expressionscrowded, dont mind

5、The expressions you find are based on your own situation. You can also use good expressions that you have learnt before.3While-WritingFamily membersPossessionsHouseworkFamily activitiesRulesLikes most about the familyStep 3 Make a rough draft (草稿) based on your own mind map.My family lifeMy mum, my

6、dad, my brother, sister and meA mobile phone, a laptop, etc.crowded, dont mindDraftingWe are a large family. There are five people in my family. They are my mum, my dad, my sister, my brother and me. Although its a bit crowded in our little flat, we dont mind.Also decide on how to put them into prop

7、er paragraphs.3While-WritingStep 4 Improve your writing following the self-editing checklist below.Editing項(xiàng)目問題類型常見錯(cuò)誤單詞拼寫一些易混詞（如housework與homework）語法謂語是否準(zhǔn)確（時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、人稱、數(shù)）主謂不一致 （如My parents is ）通篇一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)詞組搭配介詞等用錯(cuò)名詞單復(fù)數(shù)可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)形式標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)一“逗”到底結(jié)構(gòu)分段通篇一段語篇連貫性無連詞或連詞混用3While-WritingStep 5 Write down your article beauti

8、fully.Beautifulhandwriting04Post-Writing4Post-WritingTask 1 Finish the flow chart below to review the Five-star writing process.Summary & Self-assessmentKey informationTopic-related expressionsDraftingEditingBeautiful handwritingTask 2 Add your own notes to the writing process.HomeworkWrite an article about anoth