讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)句型積累準(zhǔn)確的動(dòng)作和神態(tài)描寫(xiě)10句

1、讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)中準(zhǔn)確的動(dòng)作與神態(tài)描寫(xiě)10句|品讀原著燦爛千陽(yáng)|分級(jí)原著讀寫(xiě)素材關(guān)于不可寬恕的時(shí)代，不可能的友誼以及不可毀滅的愛(ài)。燦爛千陽(yáng)再次以阿富汗戰(zhàn)亂為背景，時(shí)空跨越三十年，用細(xì)膩感人的筆觸描繪了阿富汗舊家族制度下苦苦掙扎的婦女，她們所懷抱的希望、愛(ài)情、夢(mèng)想與所有現(xiàn)實(shí)的失落。通過(guò)對(duì)人物個(gè)性化的行動(dòng)、動(dòng)作的描寫(xiě)，來(lái)揭示人物性格。動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)在文學(xué)作品中塑造人物很重要。人物是在言行中站起來(lái)的。學(xué)會(huì)了描寫(xiě)動(dòng)作，也就學(xué)會(huì)了“用事實(shí)說(shuō)話”，就可以把內(nèi)容說(shuō)清楚了。在描寫(xiě)動(dòng)作時(shí)，注意的問(wèn)題：1描寫(xiě)動(dòng)作時(shí)，不能太籠統(tǒng)2抓住特征，準(zhǔn)備運(yùn)用動(dòng)詞3與主題無(wú)關(guān)的動(dòng)作不要寫(xiě)4養(yǎng)成細(xì)致觀察的習(xí)慣，勤奮練習(xí)神態(tài)描寫(xiě)的作用：1.表現(xiàn)

2、人物內(nèi)心世界2.刻畫(huà)人物性格，反映人物品質(zhì)3.更加突顯人物個(gè)性使作文給人真實(shí)感,人物造型栩栩如生,使文章生動(dòng)形象1Nanacollapsingsuddenly,herbodytightening,becomingrigid(僵硬的),hereyesrollingback,herarmsandlegsshakingasifsomethingwerethrottling(壓制)herfromtheinside,thefroth(泡沫)atthecornersofhermouth,white,sometimespinkwithblood.描述可憐的Nana發(fā)病時(shí)的狀態(tài)：herbody-tighten

3、ing,becomingrigid(僵硬的)；hereyes-rollingback；herarmsandlegs-shaking；thefroth(泡沫)atthecornersofhermouth-white,sometimespinkwithblood.作者從Nana身體的各個(gè)部位進(jìn)行描述，給人以真實(shí)感,人物造型栩栩如生,使文章生動(dòng)形象。2WhenMariamspoke,hisattentionwasalwaysfocusedonthelecture.Henoddedslowlyandsmiledwithalookofgratitude,asifhehadbeengrantedagrea

4、tprivilege.本句描述了師生的關(guān)系和諧，其中在描述老師傾聽(tīng)Mariam講話時(shí)的神態(tài)特別形象：noddedslowlyandsmiledwithalookofgratitude描寫(xiě)動(dòng)作時(shí)，為了讓動(dòng)作更豐滿，更靈動(dòng)，可以適當(dāng)運(yùn)用副詞，介詞短語(yǔ)等來(lái)補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明。比如本句中：noddedslowly；根據(jù)情景我們還可以用noddingquickly等等。s再比如，在表達(dá)微笑的時(shí)候，本句中smiledwithalookofgratitude=smilegratefully；根據(jù)情景，還可以有smilebroadly,開(kāi)懷地笑。milecharmingly迷人地笑.smilecunningly狡猾地笑

5、。smilepleasantly令人愉快地笑smilefaintly微微一笑；等等。lookingather3“Isthatwhatyouwant?”MullahFaizullahsaid,withhissoft,wateryeyes.對(duì)老師講話時(shí)的神態(tài)描寫(xiě)：眼睛lookingatherwithhissoft,wateryeyes4Whenshelaughed,shecoveredhermouthwithafisttohidethebadtooth.娜娜笑的時(shí)候的神態(tài)描寫(xiě)：coveredhermouthwithafisttohidethebadtooth.用拳頭蓋住她的嘴巴以掩飾她糟糕的牙齒，

6、體現(xiàn)了她愛(ài)美，又不太自信的神態(tài)。5Shewaiteduntilherlegswerestiff(堅(jiān)硬的).Thistime,shedidnotgobacktothekolba.Sherolledupthelegsofhertrouserstotheknees,crossedthestream,and,forthefirsttimeinherlife,headeddownthehillforHerat赫拉特(阿富汗西北部城市)用動(dòng)作表達(dá)她內(nèi)心的掙扎與果敢：waiteduntilherlegswerestiff(堅(jiān)硬的)rolledupthelegsofhertrouserscrossedthes

7、tream,headeddownthehill6Finally,onThursdays,allshecoulddowassitagainstawall,withhereyesgluedtothestream,andwait.IfJalilwasrunninglate,aterriblefrightfilledherbitbybit.Herkneeswouldweaken,andshewouldhavetogosomewhereandliedown.等候父親的神態(tài)描寫(xiě)：withhereyesgluedtothestream體現(xiàn)了她的渴望;aterriblefrightfilledherbitby

8、bit;Herkneeswouldweaken;.gosomewhereandliedown用具體的身體反應(yīng)與動(dòng)作表達(dá)她的恐懼與焦慮。7Alookofconfusioncrossedthegirlsface.Then,aflashofrecognition.Therewasafaintsmileonherlipsnow,andthegirlsaidquickly,“Waithere.”神態(tài)的細(xì)微變化：先是Alookofconfusioncrossedthegirlsface然后aflashofrecognition.之后是afaintsmile最后是thegirlsaidquickly.一連串

9、的神態(tài)變化，細(xì)微的表情特寫(xiě)，最后輔以動(dòng)作。就像是看電影。8Sheswungherfeetoverthesideofthebedandhurriedover.Shekissedhishandasalwaysandhiseyebrows.一連串的動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)：swung-hurriedoverkissedhiseyebrow這一連串的動(dòng)作將瑪麗亞姆對(duì)父親到來(lái)的熱情與愛(ài)表達(dá)出來(lái)了。9Jalilseyesliftedslowly,metMariams,pausedforamoment,thendropped.Heopenedhismouth,butallthatcameoutwasasingle,painedsigh.細(xì)膩的神態(tài)描寫(xiě)：父親Jalil的反應(yīng)：Jalilseyes-liftedslowly-metMariams-pausedforamoment-dropped-openedhism