讀寫任務(wù)概括中易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)分析與點(diǎn)評(píng)

1、Summary writing 1典型錯(cuò)誤1. 提高文章的理解能力，準(zhǔn)確把握原文要點(diǎn)，并把其寫進(jìn)概括中。The writer was lack of confidence when he was young. So his mother encouraged him to participate in an English speech contest ,which changed his life and make him understand the importance of confidence.概括要點(diǎn)不齊全2注意人稱，記敘文中要用第三人稱轉(zhuǎn)述。 I was lack of conf

2、idence before. So my mother encouraged meto take part in an English speechcontest, which changed my life and make me realize the importanceof confidence.沒(méi)有正確使用概括中的人稱典型錯(cuò)誤2. 3要用簡(jiǎn)練的語(yǔ)言概括 The passage indicates that fresh water is becoming less and less because of the increasing number of people and the i

3、ndustriesSome scientists are trying to keep water from being polluted.People also dig deep wells, collect rainwater or distill sea water to get more fresh water. （47 words)使用太多細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容而不是用概括的語(yǔ)言 典型錯(cuò)誤3. 4 那怎樣精“兵”裁“員”，使語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練呢？Skill One: 用單詞代替短語(yǔ)I didnt go to the party owing to the fact that I was very busy.I

4、 didnt go to the party I was very busy.because5Skill Two: 用短語(yǔ)代替句子1.During the past four years when he studied at college, he seldom watched TV. During the past four years he seldom watched TV. 2.When you are crossing the road, you must be careful.When the road, you must be careful.at collegecrossing

5、6 The passage indicates that fresh water is becoming less and less because of the increasing number of people and the industriesSome scientists are trying to keep water from being polluted. People also dig deep wells, collect rainwater or distill sea water to get more fresh water. Lets correct it! P

6、eople of some nations have taken action to save and get more fresh water.population7要避免引用原文的詞句，用自己的語(yǔ)言概括。 Fresh water is becoming scarce, but more and more is needed because of the increasing number of people and the industries. We must find new ways of saving it or producing it, and some nations hav

7、e worked on the problem.(38 words)過(guò)多引用原文詞句典型錯(cuò)誤4. 8 那怎樣換“湯”不換“藥”， 用自己的語(yǔ)言概括呢？ Skill One: 用同、近義詞或詞組替換 2.Plastics have been usedmany conventional materials. eg:Plastics have taken the place of many conventional materials. 1.Plastics have many conventional materials.replaced in place of9 Skill Two: 用不同的句

8、式替換It is important for all of us to learn a foreign language. _ a foreign language is important for all of us.Learning10Lets correct it! work out Fresh water is becoming scarce but more and more is needed because of the increasing number of people and the industries. We must find new ways of saving

9、it or producing it, and some nations have worked on the problem.taken action11Lets correct it! Fresh water is becoming scarce but more and more is needed because of the increasing number of people and the industries. The world fresh water with the of the population.growth is short of 變換詞句12第3份 讀寫任務(wù)Write down the summary of the passage.(about 30 words) Now comes your turn!13 Last Tuesday, a student called Alan Reed went to a bank to take some money. He was given double the money he asked, but he returned the extra money to the bank