Unit1Friendshipwriting市公開課金獎市賽課一等獎課件

1、Unit 1 Friendship writing第1頁寫作步驟1. Creating a motivation to write2. Brainstorming3. Mapping4. Outlining5. Drafting6. Editing7. Revising第2頁3/101. Creating a motivation to writehaving a clear purpose or reason to writeThe letter on page 71. What problem does Xiao Dong have? 2. What is Xiao Dong asking

2、 for?1. He is not good at communicating with people and cant make good friends with them. 2. He is asking for some advice to change the situation.第3頁4/102. Brainstorminglisting all the ideas related to the topicIdeasWhy1. to ask people their likes and dislikes1. to find classmates with the same inte

3、rests2. to join in discussions and show interest in other peoples ideas2. to get to know different people and let them see you are friendly第4頁5/103. Mapping3. Mappingorganising useful ideas1. change yoursef be confident always smile say hello to everyone2. improve yourself learn more communicating s

4、kills help people 第5頁4. Outlining首段：開門見山，表明寫作意圖。在本段中，寫信人應該先簡單介紹自己，然后陳說事由，表明寫信目標及原因。Dear Xiao Dong ,Im glad to receive your e-mail. You ask me something about _ (提議主題） The following is my advice.第6頁正文：委婉地提出提議及改進辦法，或提出忠言。First, why not.?If you do this, . Secondly, you should/can.Then/That way, .Thirdl

5、y, it would be a good idea if .By doing this, .第7頁末段：禮貌地總結并期盼對方回復。 I hope you will find these ideas _, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to _.Yours Sincerely, .第8頁5. Draftingwriting according to your mapping In my opinion, you should .My opinion is . I believe we should I dont thi

6、nk its necessary to . I advise you to . We must decide .Im afraid that . I think you should .Dont worry .第9頁6. Editingpeer editing: offering praise and suggestions picking out mistakes self-editing: correcting mistakes improving the letter7. Revisingrewriting your letters第10頁Dear Xiao Dong,Im glad t

7、o receive your e-mail. You ask me something about how to make friends. The following is my advice.第11頁Everyone needs friends, so how to make friends is very important. First, you must be friendly to others if you want to make friends with them. Then, look after others more than yourself. In my opinion, try to make the stranger feel easy. If you have different opinions, you can discuss with others. I dont think its necessary to quarrel with them. 第12頁 Finally, I dont trust those people who leave you when you are in trouble, because a friend in need is a friend ind