辭典第147天2018年8月16日

1、（2018/816：1461一寫作（2018/816：1461一寫作由于其圖畫出題的特點(diǎn)，在文章論證展開時(shí)，有時(shí)候就未必是暢所欲言的。以2005年考題章從孝順老人，履行職責(zé)進(jìn)入論述最為合理。而2014年考題中，圖畫為母親和兒女彼此支角度寫母女的彼此關(guān)愛，由此對比，同樣涉及養(yǎng)老話題，2014年寫作題目的寫作略大于2005年的寫度二、 寫作風(fēng)格體裁的寫法可以嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、也可以體現(xiàn)出散文雜文風(fēng)格，甚至可以進(jìn)行社會 和批評，這樣同樣一篇文章，出現(xiàn)的特點(diǎn)就不一樣。這種較為 的寫作對于考生至少產(chǎn)生以下三種影響當(dāng)然這么出題也有其“ ”的一面，那就是由于題目看似簡單，很多考生就會越寫越 多、越寫越快。最終寫得越多，

2、則錯誤越多；而寫得越快則控制不住自己的 ，論證層次可能 。五個(gè)角度對作 綜合評定?？忌形鸫鎯e幸心理，希望用幾個(gè)模板句就能通過 h ctureh ctureontheleft,ayoungbeautifulwomanwasmovingsteadilyforward alongaroad,holdingherdaughtershand. heotherdrawing,thirtyyearshas elapsed,andthewomansbeautyfadesasshegetsolder.B heerfulandhealthy, she re s on her daughter for a hap

3、py retirement.Mutualsupportmeansmentalcomfortandspiritualbackup.Whenachildisyoung, hisparentsprovidehimwithdailynechasfoodandclothes,guaranteeing by loneliness, depresandanxiety.Soitistheirchildrensresponsibility to extend their helhandsandshowtheirabidingloveandgenuinesincerity. his way, their pare

4、nts,heiryearsofsettingsun,arelesslikelytosuffer fromthementalnolong heshadowofsolitudeandTowit,thecornerstoneofahouseholdischildrensfilialfidelity,which is synonymous with responsibility, obligation, love and devotion.(173 h ctureh ctureontheleft,ayoungwomanwasmovingsteadilyforwardalonga road,holdin

5、gthehandofherdaughter. heoneontherightside,thirtyyears haselapsed,andthewomansbeautyfadesasshegetsolder.Butshelookscheerful, because she can rely on her daughter for a happy retirement.Love is mutual and lasting.nks to this noble feeling, children receive material support and mental security until t

6、hey growotheiradulthood.However, when they stnto maturity, their parents have beenhe twilight years.t dispels old peoples solitude, depresandanxiety.Withloveanddevotion, wi blessing,theirsoulsarenot orment he kingdomofThepriceofloveisabovetherubies,anditisthemightiestofthemightiest. For an elder, it

7、 is a gentle rain from heaven, blessing those who receive it. Probably,themostrom heworldwouldbethefact twestaytogether untiltheoldage.Sup esuchamomentwhentheoldwoman hispictureabove coulddonothingb rouchinawheelchair,withhereyeshalfclosedandina halfsleep.Shecouldstill,inherlosingconsciousness,heara

8、farawayvoice, “Dont be afraid, Mum! Im your daughter.”(248 了物質(zhì)支持和情感保障，直到他們步入成年。但是當(dāng)他們步入成 時(shí)刻，他們的父母卻已經(jīng)到了落日之年。這時(shí)，成年 的關(guān)愛就好象明媚的陽光，會驅(qū)走老人的孤獨(dú)、壓抑和郁們的 在天國不會痛苦?！啊?. 寫作模式三：假設(shè)考生單詞量有限，那么是不是就無法寫好2014年的作文呢？考生不以用通俗易懂的詞匯，以較少的字?jǐn)?shù)寫出 2014 年的考題cture on the left, there stand a child and her mother.he other picture,thechildh

9、asgrownuptobeayoungwoman,whotakesholdofhermother s arm.Clearly, sheisreadytocarriesoutherduty oftakingcareofhTh cture lsus ttruelovebet nparentsandchildrenisdeepand great.Themajorreasonistparentsaffordthesechildrenlivingcostandraise themup.timeenergy. So when they are getting old, their children are

10、 suptheirfamilyandmoralobligation,improvetheseoldpeopleslivingstandards, and give them a happy retirement.hisi e,itisadvised tthegrown-upchildrenenhancetheirawareness oftakingcareoftheirparents.Itisimportant ttheyshowrespecttotheold peoplesideasandpayattentiontotheirmentalsus.By ngso,thesechildren c

11、an truly take their responsibility and give their parents a happy life.（178 建議成狀態(tài)。這樣做，這狀態(tài)。這樣做，這4. 寫作模式四：甚至可以寫成國家養(yǎng)老和社會養(yǎng)老的關(guān)心，只不過很少有考生敢于這樣 寫。所謂的“ 高考作文”模式。h ctureontheleft,ayoungwomanwasmovingsteadilyforwardalonga road,holdingthehandofherdaughter. heoneontherightside,thirtyyears haselapsed,andthewomansb

12、eautyfadesasshegetsolder.Butshelookscheerful, because she can rely on her daughter for a happy retirement.Behindtheseeminglyrom picture,thecartoonisttendstoignoretheother sideofaso lproblem, tis,itisunrealistictoleaveoldpeopleshealth andhappinesstotheirchildrensconcern.Afterall,theirsonsanddaughters

13、take upmuchoftheirtimeandenergyontheirwork.Meanwhile,theyhavetocopewith the enseso lcompetitionorsupporttheirfami s. hissituation,how coulditbe sibleforthemtofullytakeuptheresponsibilityoftakingcare oftheirparents?Orsup e tthetwogenerationsliveunderthesameroof.In aneraofsoaringhousepri ,howcoulditbe

14、 siblefortheelderstolivea better-offlife,espe llywhenpeopleofdifferentagesshareinashabbyapartment less n60squaremeters? hispleasantandrom ambience,whereis thedutyofthenational ernment?Isntitroleof t ernmenttoprovide the senior citizens with so l security system, medical insurance and nursing (224 wo

15、rds)和 歸于其 的責(zé)任是不現(xiàn)實(shí)的。畢竟他們的 需要在自己的工作上占用大量時(shí)間和審題和背誦一樣重要： 寫作對于考生的有利之處在于，無論水平高低，大都能在拿到題目后，根據(jù)題目暗示寫出一些內(nèi)容。但是對于只會背、不愛審題、或者 的考生，則很容易出問題。如題目上要求寫孝心、責(zé)任、關(guān)愛，而考生卻寫“ 社會上在160字至200字的寫作要求限定內(nèi)，一般幾個(gè)句子就完成段落要求。寫得越少，反而挑選自己會寫的，回避自己不會寫的。 寫作雖然限定寫作范圍，但是依然留出了不少發(fā)揮的空間?？忌绻?發(fā)現(xiàn)這些空間，就可能將自己會的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮到極致，同時(shí)2014習(xí)。例如在愛心關(guān)注的寫法中就有以下常用詞句可選：1）lendah

16、elhandtowards 之手）；2）providepeople withemotional support andspiritualcomfort,andspiritualbackup（為人們提供情感支持和精神撫慰）3） vethemfromthedifficultsituation(幫助他們脫離困境)；4）endowpeople withoptimism,courageandfaith （賦予人們樂觀、勇氣和信念）；5）strengthen mutual support among different sol groups增強(qiáng)互助（增強(qiáng)不同社會團(tuán)體的互助）；6）consolidateso

17、lstability（增強(qiáng)社會凝聚力）?？偨Y(jié)歸納有兩個(gè)好處：1462“conquer（Ifsubdueagroupofpeople,theyforce. efears（about theingholiday.或者subduelaughterandcheers,subdue1462“conquer（Ifsubdueagroupofpeople,theyforce. efears（about theingholiday.或者subduelaughterandcheers,subdueonesdesire to do something（抑制，什么呢辭典的釋義為以個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)為基礎(chǔ)，而非以事實(shí)為基礎(chǔ)(b

18、ased opinionandideasandnotonfacts.tisbasedonfactsisobjective.的14644）第4subside學(xué)過的decrease同的，decreasesubside這一下子命中了廣大考生 門”，即在一些問題的看法上，偏偏就不知道自己的想法是什么這樣說也許大家接受不了，那么 換一個(gè)說法：你的范文是背誦的，從根本上就是去接受別人的想 法，而不是自己的想法，既然想法不是自己的，哪里來的“ ”呢？2）即使大家知道自己的想法是什1）首先要列舉事的結(jié)論（opinion）考博寫作 還好一些，有時(shí)候?qū)?you mustsupport your opinion w

19、ith facts or ex les. 考 研寫作 則比較“泛泛”，只提到 giveyourcomment, retth cture，既不說要求說理，也 從事實(shí)出發(fā)，那是客觀啊(objective)， 14655）第5Theresnosubstitute for（無星Onethingsubstitutesforanothertaketheplace比辭典中的substituteviolentfordialoguesubstituteforB，就可以將兩個(gè)首先容易寫反，其次就是即使掌握了substitute兩個(gè)名詞也不好選，對于想詞能力較差的同學(xué)，可能是看得懂，但是不見得做得到。這種情況下，可

20、以考慮使There be 句型：Education can provide youwiththetheory,buttheresnosubstituteforpracticalexperience. （教育提供了理論，但當(dāng)進(jìn)入到14655）第5Theresnosubstitute for（無星Onethingsubstitutesforanothertaketheplace比辭典中的substituteviolentfordialoguesubstituteforB，就可以將兩個(gè)首先容易寫反，其次就是即使掌握了substitute兩個(gè)名詞也不好選，對于想詞能力較差的同學(xué)，可能是看得懂，但是不見

21、得做得到。這種情況下，可以考慮使There be 句型：Education can provide youwiththetheory,buttheresnosubstituteforpracticalexperience. （教育提供了理論，但當(dāng)進(jìn)入到theresnosubstitutefor很多subtletyisthequalityofbeingnotimmedia yobviousornoticeable,and therefore difficult to describe. 即語言中那些不太引人矚目的細(xì)節(jié)，如果能發(fā)現(xiàn)這些細(xì)節(jié)就好了， Butforthesakeofourchildre

22、nandourfuture,wemustdomoretocombatclimatechange. Now,itstrue tnosingleeventmakesatrend.Butthefactisthe12hottestyearsonrecord haveallcome helast15.Heatwaves,droughts,wildfires,floods-allarenowmore ense. Wecanchoosetobe ve tSuperstormSandy,andthemostseveredroughtindecades,andworstwildfiressomes eshave

23、everseenwerealljustafreakcoincidence.OrwecanEducationcanprovideyouwithmethodologybutthereisnosubstitutefordiligence（教同理，上句也可以套寫為: A teacher can provide you wit owledge, skills or even the methodologybuttheresnosubstituteforyourowndiligence （在公司的經(jīng)營策略里，沒 能替代誠信Parentscanprovidechildrenwithfoodclothesan

24、dmoneybuttheresnosubstitutefor the economic independence of these young people. （家長可以為孩子提供食品、衣服和錢，但 辭典例句：Thepain(Catherinessobsubsidedfeeling，后者是感情。在英語中其他表示感 彩的詞也可以和 subside o 者椅子上的狀況(tosinkorsettledown oasofasitsubside oa 看出來了吧，這其實(shí)是講環(huán)保的，背下來吧14666）第6 看出來了吧，這其實(shí)是講環(huán)保的，背下來吧14666）第6 實(shí)還是讀 MyfellowAmerican

25、s,Americahasnevercomeeasy.Ourfreedom,our democracy,hasneverbeeneasySometimeswestumble;wemakemistakes;wegetfrustratedor discouraged.Butformore ntwo dredyearswehaveputthosethingsasideandplacedour collectiveshouldertothewheelofprogresstocreateandbuildandexpandthe sibilities ofindividualachievement;tofr

26、eeothernationsfromtyrannyandfear;topromotejustice,and fairness,andequalityunderthelaw,so tthewordssettop rbyourfoundersaremade realforeverycitizenTheAmericawewantforourkidsarisingAmericawherehonestwork isplentifulandcommunitiesstrong;whereprosperityiswidelysharedandopportunityforall letsusgoasfaraso

27、urdreamsandtoilwilltakeusnoneofitiseasy.Butifweworktogether; ifwesummonwhatisbestinus,withourfeetplantedfirmly odaybutoureyescasttowards tomorrowIknowitswithinourreachBe veit.Godblessyou,andGodblesstheUnited S es of America. to be ve heoverwhelming judgmentof scienceand act before its too late. 但是為了

28、 的子孫后代和未來， 須為應(yīng)對氣候變化做 的工作。單一事件并不代表一個(gè)趨勢，這是確1215發(fā)頻繁和嚴(yán)重。 可以選擇相信超級風(fēng)暴“桑迪”（SuperstormSandy）和幾十年里最嚴(yán)重的干旱，以及forthesakeofcombatclimatechangenosingleeventmakesatrend：令我很 的一句話，makeatrend native speakerheatwavesdroughts, wildfiresfloods-all arenow morefrequentand more ense：前 and more enseandwerealljustafreakcoinc

29、idence：如果說“不是偶然的，不是孤立的事件”，可 以說 a freak coincidence, 如果加個(gè) not, 就是否定句，, and were not all just a freak actbeforeitistoolate146714687）第7：such such as用法在講andso on這里應(yīng)該注意such at healmost pushedme over on thestairs. 這個(gè)句子的意思其實(shí)并不太重要，關(guān)是這個(gè)句子的組合方法，仔細(xì)看sucha其實(shí)是Hewasinahurry.Healmostmeoveronthestairs，是兩句話，但是當(dāng)suchat

30、thealmostpushedmeover146714687）第7：such such as用法在講andso on這里應(yīng)該注意such at healmost pushedme over on thestairs. 這個(gè)句子的意思其實(shí)并不太重要，關(guān)是這個(gè)句子的組合方法，仔細(xì)看sucha其實(shí)是Hewasinahurry.Healmostmeoveronthestairs，是兩句話，但是當(dāng)suchatthealmostpushedmeoveronthestairs.是用suchernetprovidespeoplewithsuchtclickofmousebutton,bulkofup-to-d

31、ateinformationisyattheirfingertips.（因特網(wǎng)為人們提供了如此如果erneteducation，Education也可promise，那么如果用suchis寫呢1469suggest有關(guān)的詞，寫出It者It1）Theres no such a thing as+名詞：Theres no such a thing as. The fact istwhat onestomakethebestuseofhisabilities,workdiligentlyandachievehisgoal. （s.Whatwestomakethebestuseourabilities

32、,workdiligentlyandachieveourgoals.寫法不同，但是和1）中的意思一樣，還可以倒過來，將such is our sucs放在段落的尾部，做總結(jié)用。3）suchisso-called+名詞用于段首，表示 ，后面不用寫句子，用動名詞直接列舉：Suchistheir so-calledfilialpietyrefusingtoprovidetheirparentswithfood,clothesandshelter.Due tothesebehaviors,theseseniorpeoplecannotimprovetheirlivingstandardsnordoth

33、eyreceive material support, considerate care and spiritual comfort.怎么寫成功：AmericahasnevercomeeasyOurfreedomourdemocracyhasneverbeeneasy. SometimeswestumblewemakemistakeswegetfrustratedordiscouragedButformore n dredyears,wehaveputthosethingsasideandplacedourcollectiveshouldertothewheel of progress（Ame

34、ricanfreedom, democracysuc s，其余不動）怎么寫美好未來：TheAmericawewantforourkidsarisingAmericawherehonestworkis plentifuland communities strong; whereprosperityiswidely shared andopportunityforalllets us go as far as our dreams and toil will take us（把AmericaChina）怎么寫希望：Butifweworktogetherifwesummonwhatisbestinuswithourfeetfirmly odaybutoureyescasttowardstomorrowIknowitswithinourreach.（不換字，14709）第9suicide這玩