中考英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)題作文-交通問(wèn)題及綠色出行課件

1、中考英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)題作文交通問(wèn)題及綠色出行Traffic Problems and Green Commuting中考英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)題作文brainstormway to school AndWay to workOn foot/walk .By bike.By bus.By horse/carriage.By subway.By plane.By train.By boat.How do you go to school/work?brainstormOn foot/walk .By bikTypes of vehciles:bustraincartaxiTypes of vehciles:bustrain

2、cartDiscuss the means of transportation you have used.planesubwaylight railferryDiscuss the means of transportCan you guess the meaning of these two words？ carriage spaceshipCan you guess the meaning of tTraffic AccidentsPage 6Traffic AccidentsPage 6What are the reasons that cause more and more traf

3、fic accidents today? more cars on the road road designs are not clearlack of driver educationtoo many bad and dangerous drivers: not skillful enough, irresponsibleWhat are the reasons that causWhat behaviors can result in traffic accidents?for driversdriving too fast /speedingdriving while on the ce

4、ll phonesrunning the red lightsudden lane（車(chē)道） changingdrunk drivingnot using signal(信號(hào) ）lightsWhat behaviors can result in for pedestrians（行人）running the red lightcrossing the road while listening to the music or using the mobile phone.get over the fence（柵欄）What behaviors can result in traffic accid

5、ents?for pedestrians（行人）running ththe sign of bans 禁止標(biāo)志the sign of bans 禁止標(biāo)志禁止通行No entry禁止駛車(chē)No driving禁止停車(chē)No parking禁止通行No entry禁止駛車(chē)No driving禁止停車(chē)the sign of directions 指示標(biāo)志the sign of directions 指示標(biāo)志單行路（直行）straight-going only允許掉頭Turn around環(huán)島行駛Round about單行路（直行）straight-going only允許掉頭the sign of ca

6、utions 警示標(biāo)志the sign of cautions 警示標(biāo)志事故易發(fā)路段Accidents happen easily注意落石Falling rocks兩側(cè)變窄Road Narrows 事故易發(fā)路段Accidents happen easily注What can we do to avoid the traffic accidents? Education for drivers self-discipline(自律） education for pedestrians self-protectionStrict official management Drive patientU

7、se seat-belt and other safety devices.Do not run red light.What can we do to avoid the trWhat should the pedestrians do ? Crossing with the signal in a crosswalkDont walk on the high way Follow the traffic rulesWalking along a sidewalkRemember the above four pointsWhat should the pedestrians doWhat

8、traffic problems do you know?traffic jamsparking problemsnoise pollutionair pollutionstraffic accidentsWhat traffic problems do you kPage 19How to solve these traffic problems ? Choose green commuting.Drive less, try to choose the public transport. try to walk or ride a bikePage 19How to solve these

9、 traf中考專(zhuān)題作文隨著人民生活水平的提高，開(kāi)車(chē)出行的人越來(lái)越多，交通越來(lái)越擁堵，某中學(xué)英文報(bào)刊的主編邀請(qǐng)你為該報(bào)紙寫(xiě)一篇小短文，呼吁人們綠色出行（Green commuting)內(nèi)容包括：1 如何做到綠色出行？2 作為中學(xué)生，我們?nèi)绾沃С志G色出行？3 說(shuō)說(shuō)綠色出行的重要性及呼吁人們綠色出行。寫(xiě)作要求：1 文中不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)校和本人的真名；2、80詞左右，作文開(kāi)頭已給出，不記入總詞數(shù)。開(kāi)頭：As we know,too much trafiic has caused too many problems.中考專(zhuān)題作文隨著人民生活水平的提高，開(kāi)車(chē)出行的人越來(lái)越多，交內(nèi)容分：7分（1）綠色出行重要性（

10、1分），呼吁（1.5分）（2）如何做到（每條建議1.5分） 4.5分內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)完整且詞數(shù)符合寫(xiě)作要求的作文可以得7分，詞數(shù)在70個(gè)以下的作文在內(nèi)容分上酌情扣分。語(yǔ)言分：8分第一檔：8分 要求：內(nèi)容涵蓋所有的要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯，只有個(gè)別語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。第二檔：67分 要求：內(nèi)容涵蓋絕大多數(shù)要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)清楚，意思連貫，符合邏輯，但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。 第三檔：45分 要求：內(nèi)容涵蓋大部分要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)較為清楚 ,連貫，基本符合邏輯，但有一些語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。第四檔：13分 要求：內(nèi)容涵蓋部分要點(diǎn)，能寫(xiě)出少數(shù)正確句子，但整體表達(dá)不太連貫，且語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多。 第五檔：0分 空白卷或你沒(méi)有相關(guān)內(nèi)容。評(píng)分檔次和要求：

11、內(nèi)容分：7分評(píng)分檔次和要求：認(rèn)真審題，找出文章要表達(dá)的中心。寫(xiě)作第一步審寫(xiě)作第一步審審:隨著人民生活水平的提高，開(kāi)車(chē)出行的人越來(lái)越多，交通越來(lái)越擁堵，某中學(xué)英文報(bào)刊的主編邀請(qǐng)你為該報(bào)紙寫(xiě)一篇小短文，呼吁人們綠色出行（Green commuting)。(80詞左右）內(nèi)容包括：1 如何做到綠色出行？2 作為中學(xué)生，我們?nèi)绾沃С志G色出行？3 說(shuō)說(shuō)綠色出行的重要性及呼吁人們綠色出行。找出關(guān)鍵詞、明確作文要求_ 因開(kāi)頭已給出，決定將呼吁部分當(dāng)作結(jié)尾，其它要求作為正文。審:隨著人民生活水平的提高，開(kāi)車(chē)出行的人越來(lái)越多，交通越來(lái)越用簡(jiǎn)單的句子或短語(yǔ)列出文章要點(diǎn)。列寫(xiě)作第二步用簡(jiǎn)單的句子或短語(yǔ)列出文章要點(diǎn)。列

12、寫(xiě)作第二步 1、開(kāi)頭已給出2、正文（body)分述1）、如何做到？可用句型:We should/can/are supposed to/. We should drive less and try to choose the public transport. We can walk or ride a bike if it is not too far.2）、如何支持？Students can go to school on foot or by bike, try not to take a car列 1、開(kāi)頭已給出列 3）綠色出行的重要性. 可用句型:it can help. /it c

13、an give us可用句子:It can help solve the traffic problems and give us a green life. 3、結(jié)尾總結(jié)（呼吁人們綠色出行）.Green commuting is necessary. Why not come and join us?列 3）綠色出行的重要性. 列We should drive less and try to choose the public transport. We can walk or ride a bike if it is not too far. It can help solve the t

14、raffic problems and give us a green life. As we know,too much trafiic has caused too many problems.Green commuting is necessary. Why not come and join us?a nice heada nice taila nice bodyWe should drive less and try t加加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整?？梢圆扇】偡挚偨Y(jié)構(gòu)或者總分結(jié)構(gòu)，開(kāi)頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡(jiǎn)潔，漂亮。寫(xiě)作第三步：加加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。寫(xiě)作第三步：加加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。首：As

15、we know,too much trafiic has caused too many problems. To solve these problems, we have to do something.尾：Green commuting is necessaryIt can help solve these traffic problems, it will give us a green life.Why not come and join us?寫(xiě)作第三步：加加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。寫(xiě)作第三步：加加正文，使內(nèi)容豐富。We should drive less and try to choo

16、se the public transport. Like the bus, the subway, the train and so onWe can walk or ride a bike if it is not too far.That will help reduce traffic problems.Students can go to school on foot or by bike, try not to take a carIt is good for the environment. And it is good for our health because we can

17、 take some exercise.寫(xiě)作第三步：加加正文，使內(nèi)容豐富。寫(xiě)作第三步：連恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清晰，各個(gè)部分銜接自然。寫(xiě)作第四步：連恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清晰，各個(gè)部分銜接自然。寫(xiě)作1.表示并列或遞進(jìn): and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor;2.表示選擇: or, eitheror;3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore5.表示條件: if , unless6.表示對(duì)比

18、: instead, notbut, on the one handon the other hand;7.表示解釋: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words;8.表示順序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end;9.表示強(qiáng)調(diào): also, besides, whats more, actually, in fact,

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21、and so on. We can walk or ride a bike if it is not too far. That will help reduce these traffic problems. Students can go to school on foot or by bike, try not to take a car. It is good for the environment. And it is good for our health because we can take some exercise. Green commuting is necessary

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23、olve these problems, we have to do something. First, we should drive less and try to choose the public transport. Like the bus, the subway, the train and so on. Second, we can walk or ride a bike if it is not too far. That will help reduce these traffic problems. Students can go to school on foot or

24、 by bike instead of taking a car. It is good for the environment. And it is good for our health because we can take some exercise. Green commuting is necessary.It can help solve these traffic problems and give us a green life. Why not come and join us?寫(xiě)作第五步：As a student,weAt the same time,solve these problemsWe have to do something to美 As we know, too much trafSkill One Make your sentences correctGood good study, day day up.We should do sports a week once.Save the environment is our duty.There is going to have a meeting today.I hope I can come true