高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作備考之讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)：幫助受傷小狗

1、高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作備考之讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)：幫助受傷小狗原題閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)一段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短 文。續(xù)寫(xiě)的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。One late afternoon I went to the park to relax myself. I sat on a bench and leaned back with my legs fully stretched. My eyes fell upon a pair of cute children. They seemed to be elder sister and younger brother, hardly five or

2、six years old, I guessed. I watched them as they involved themselves with childrens usual fun game: hide and seek. Not far away, their mother was reading under a tree, keeping an eye on them from time to time. The kids bright-colored clothes put a barrier to hide and easily one of them was caught by

3、 the other. Then they laughed merrily. I enjoyed their game without being a participant.The next moment, the little girl came running towards me and hid behind the bench. The moment I looked at her, she made a sign, Shh! putting her finger on her lips. I sat straight and acted as if I didnt know any

4、thing. After finishing his count down, the boy searched for the girl here and there. At last, he found her behind me and said, Grace, come out! I saw you.Complaining loudly, the girl shouted, HNo Jack, you cheated. Again you have to find me. This is not done. Go back behind the tree and start counti

5、ng again. The boy turned round and round, clapping his hands and giggling out No, no. I did it. You are caught. They both started pulling each other. Their mother watched them smilingly.Suddenly Grace stopped and pulled her brother towards the fence not far away from the bench where I rested. There

6、on the grass lay a little dog grunting with pain, seemingly injured and homeless.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右：2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。I went over to see what the kids were going to do.寫(xiě)作思路分析從前文可知，一天下午作者到公園放松，偶然遇到五六歲左右的姐弟倆在母親的 陪伴下在公園玩耍。母親在樹(shù)下讀書(shū)，姐弟倆愉快地玩著捉迷藏。在此期間，草地上 躺著的一只受傷的流浪狗引起了他們的注意，接下來(lái)他們會(huì)怎么做呢？根據(jù)續(xù)寫(xiě)段落所給的首句 “I went ov

7、er to see what the kids were going to do.”及前 文最后一段可知，本段應(yīng)該描寫(xiě)姐弟倆如何在現(xiàn)場(chǎng)關(guān)心救助受傷的流浪狗，以及故事 的結(jié)局。姐弟倆最后可以向母親求助，將小狗帶回家護(hù)理；或是同母親一起直接將小 狗送到動(dòng)物醫(yī)院/救助站；作者也可以施以援手，主動(dòng)提出幫助救護(hù)小狗，等等?？傊?， 最后的結(jié)局應(yīng)該是小狗得到妥善安排，如果將其留在原地不管是不合理的。續(xù)寫(xiě)局部 應(yīng)該側(cè)重動(dòng)作、神態(tài)、對(duì)話(huà)等描寫(xiě)?？忌梢杂胁煌嵌鹊暮侠砻鑼?xiě)，但主題思想一 定要表達(dá)關(guān)愛(ài)動(dòng)物的積極價(jià)值觀導(dǎo)向。參考范文I went over to see what the kids were goin

8、g to do.Grace picked up the dog and put it gently on her laps. Then she untied her hair and wrapped its injured leg with her ribbon. Jack quickly fetched some water for the dog. While sitting there, Grace kissed the dog and petted it fondly and Jack whispered a few words to comfort it. Then it was g

9、etting late and their mother called them to go home. Unwillingly to leave the dog alone, the two kids begged their mother, “Please, Mom. Lets take the puppy home and treat it, OK? With their mothers agreement, they went off with the dog delightedly.同學(xué)們的作文作文一第四局部寫(xiě)作第二節(jié)（總分值20分）I went over to see what t

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