2023屆新高考英語寫作精講和模板3建議信-(教案)

專題0L3建議信2023屆新高考英語寫作精講+寫作模板【典題解讀】（2017.北京卷）你的英國(guó)朋友Jim所在的學(xué)校要組織學(xué)生來中國(guó)旅行，有兩條線路可以選擇：“長(zhǎng)江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim來信希望你能給些建議。請(qǐng)你給他回信。內(nèi)容包括：1.你建議的線路；.你的理由；.你的祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于50：.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,Yours,LiHua【解讀】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信。題干只提供了三個(gè)比擬詳實(shí)的要點(diǎn):你的英國(guó)朋友Jim要來中國(guó)旅游、“長(zhǎng)江之行”和“泰山之旅”擇其一給出建議以及你的祝愿。其余的要點(diǎn)（你建議的線路、你建議的理由）都比擬籠統(tǒng)，需要考生將這兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)具體化，方能順利完成寫作任務(wù)。寫作時(shí)，可以運(yùn)用三段式來表達(dá)：第一段：點(diǎn)明寫信之目的（知道你要來中國(guó)旅游）；第二段：建議的線路及其理由（相對(duì)來說選擇“長(zhǎng)江之行”比擬容易寫些）；第三段：你的祝愿?！敬鸢浮俊伴L(zhǎng)江之行”DearJim,Pmhappytoreceiveyourletterandknowyou'recomingtoChina.OfthetwotripstotheYangtzeRiverandMountTai,botharehighlyrecommended.Personally,IpreferthetouralongtheYangtze,thelongestriverandoneofthemotherriversofChinesecivilization.YoucanlearnalotaboutthehistoryofChinaandChinesepeople.Moreover,thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing,withmanywell-knownsightseeingspots.That'swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzewillbeabetterchoice.Hopeyou'llhaveagoodtimeinChina.Yours,LiHua【答案】“泰山之旅”DearJim,I'mmorethandelightedtoknowthatyouarepayingavisittoChina.AsfarasI'mconcerned,goingtoMountTaiisabetterchoice.Firstofall,thesceneryofMountTaiisextremelybeautiful,whichhasattractednumeroustouristseveryyear.Besides,MountTaiisnotonlyasighttovisit,butalsoboaststraditionalChineseliterature.Manyfamouspoetswrotepoemstopraiseit,manyofwhichhavebeencarvedontherocksalongthepaths.Inaddition,climbingthemountainisnotonlygoodforyourphysicalhealthbutalsobringsyoulotsofcourageandendurance.Afterreachingthetop,youcanenjoythefantasticsunrisetillthemorning.It'ssuchamust-seeplacethatyouwon'tbedisappointedwhenyougothere.Hopemysuggestionswillbeofsomehelp.Wishyouagoodtime.Yours,LiHua【寫作點(diǎn)撥】建議信是向?qū)Ψ教岢鲎约旱暮侠斫ㄗh的信件。建議信一般分為三類：一是給熟悉的人就有關(guān)方面主動(dòng)提供建議；二是對(duì)別人寫信向你求助的回復(fù)，就其遇到的某個(gè)問題提出看法、建議等；三是寫給某個(gè)組織或機(jī)構(gòu)的信，就改進(jìn)服務(wù)等方面提出建議或忠告。建議信要盡量簡(jiǎn)潔明確，理由充足，具有合理性和說服性。具體的說：第一段：寫信的背景/原因/目的；第二段：闡述建議內(nèi)容及理由：第三段：希望自己的建議被采納/對(duì)對(duì)方有所幫助/表達(dá)期望和祝愿?！境Ｓ盟夭摹縔ouhaveaskedmeformyadviceon/withregardtohowto…，andIwilltrytomakesonicsuggestionshere.你關(guān)于如何……詢問我的建議，那么我就在這里給出一些建議。I'moveijoyed/verygladtoreceiveyourletter/e-mailaskingfbrmyadviceonhowto...很高興收到你的來信/郵件，信上詢問我關(guān)于如何……NowTmwritingtogiveyousomeadvice/suggestions/tipsonhowto...現(xiàn)在，關(guān)于如何……的問題，我寫信給你提些建議。I'msorry/feelsorrytohearthatyouarehavingtrouble...andIwouldliketoofferyouthefollowingtips.很遺憾聽說你在……方面有困難，因此我想給你提如下一些建議。Suchproblemsarequitenormal.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpful.這樣的問題是很正常的。可能下面的建議會(huì)有一些幫助。Iamwritingtoexpressmyvicws/sharcwithyousomesuggestionsconcerning...我寫信是想表達(dá)/與你提供我對(duì)……的看法/建議。Itismypleasure/Fmgladtoofferyousomeadvicc/suggestionsonlyfbryourreference.我很高興給您提一些建議，。Youhaveaskedmefbrmyadvicewithregardto...andIwilltrytomakesomeconstructivesuggestions.你就……向我尋求建議，我會(huì)盡力提一些建設(shè)性的建議。I'mmorethangladtooffermyadviceforyourreference.我非常樂意提供我的建議供你參考。Iwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestionshere.我將盡力在這里提出一些有益的建議。Mysuggestionsareasfollows./Herearcafewsuggestions./Thefollowingaremysuggestions.我的建議如下。Hopemyadvice/suggestionscanbeofsomehelp.Ifthereisanythingelse1coulddo,pleaseletmeknow.希望我的建議能有所幫助。如果還有什么我能做的，請(qǐng)告訴我。Inmyopinion,youhadbetter/youmightaswell/youaresupposedto...在我看來，你最好/不妨/應(yīng)該……It,sagoodidea/awisechoiceto…這是一個(gè)好主意/明智的選擇Ithinkthemostefficientway(ways)is(are)to.…我認(rèn)為最有效的方法是Itmakessenseto…做有意義。...isalsoagoodchoice,whichwouldhelp也是一個(gè)很好的選擇，這將有助于Itwillbemuchmoreconvenientforyouto…做對(duì)你來說更方便。Ifsagoodideaforyouto…做對(duì)你來說是個(gè)好主意。Withallthefactorstakenintoconsideration,I'msureyouwill...Wishyouallthebest!將所有這些因素考慮到，我相信你會(huì)……。祝你一切順利！Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful.我希望你會(huì)覺得這些建議很有用。Ihopemysuggestionsabovemaybenefityou.我希望我的建議對(duì)你有所裨益。Iwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.我愿意與你討論這個(gè)問題，以進(jìn)一步了解細(xì)節(jié)。Hopeyouwillmakesufficientprogressin...soon.希望你能在很快取得長(zhǎng)足的進(jìn)步。Iamfullyconvincedthatusethetips/suggestionsaboveandyouwillgainbenefit.我完全相信，使用上面的技巧/建議，您將受益匪淺。Ibelieveitwouldbebeneficialifyoucouldfollowmysuggestions.我相信如果你能聽從我的建議，那將是非常有益的。I'msureyoucanmakeawisedecision.我相信你會(huì)做出明智的決定。Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposais/suggestionspractical/uscful/helpfui.我希望這些建議/意見/看法對(duì)你實(shí)用/有用/有幫助。Iwillbeglad/wouldappreciateitifyouwill/couldtakemyadvice/suggestionsintoconsideration.如果你能考慮我的建議我將非常高興/我將不勝感激。Iwillbemorethanhappyloseeimprovementsinthisregard.如果這方面有所改善我會(huì)很開心的。I'mlookingforwardtoyour...我期待著收至ij你的?！灸０鍢?gòu)建】模板一Iamdelightedtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon（有關(guān)內(nèi)容）.I'mmorethangladtooffermyadviceforyourreference.（或者：Iamglad/sorrytohearthat（有關(guān)內(nèi)容），and（Astohowto）,Iwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestionshere.）Togetstarted/Tobeginwith,youhadbetter/youmightaswell/youarcsupposedto（建議一）.Besides/Additionally/What'smore,it'sagoodidea/awisechoiceto（建議二）.Lastbutnotleast/Moreover/Atlast,Ithinkthemostefficientway（ways）is（are）to（建議三）.Withallthefactorstakenintoconsideration,Tinsureyouwill（成功解決問題）.Wishyouallthebest!（或者：Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismailerwithyoutofurtherdetails.Wishyouallthebest!）（或者：Ihopemysuggestionsabovemaybenefityou.Hopeyouwillmakesufficientprogressin（某方面）soon.Iamlookingforwardto...）Yours,LiHua【模板運(yùn)用】一（2022?新疆烏魯木齊市八中高三階段練）假如你是李華，剛參加完高考且取得優(yōu)異成績(jī)。你的朋友王東今年讀高三感到讀書壓力大，晚上睡不著，寫信向你求助，希望你能給一些建議讓他能夠順利度過高三學(xué)習(xí)生活。內(nèi)容包括：1.相信自己的老師，提高課堂聽課效率；2.課后合理安排時(shí)間，提高解題效果；3.盡可能抽空鍛煉，樹立信心。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearWangdong,Yours,LihuaYours,LiHua【答案】DearWangdong,IamsorrytohearthatyouaresleeplessunderthestressofstudyinSeniorThree.Iwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestionshere.Tobeginwith,youaresupposedtobelieveinyourteachersandimproveyourefficiencyinclass.What'smore,itisagoodideatoarrangeyourtimeproperlyafterschool,whichcanenhancetheeffectivenessofyourproblemsolving.Atlast,Ithinkthemostefficientwaysaretotaketimetoexerciseasmuchaspossibleandtobuildupself-confidence.Hopefully,myadvicecanhelpyou.Lookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.Yours,LiHua模板二Dear,Iamdelightedtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon（有關(guān)內(nèi)容）或：Iamhearingabout（有關(guān)內(nèi)容）/1amhearingthat（有關(guān)內(nèi)容）.I'mmorethangladtooffermyadviceforyourreference.Inmyopinion,youaresupposedto（建議）because（理由—）.Additionally,itmakessenseto（理由二）.Moreover,（理由三）isalsoagoodchoice,whichwouldhelp...或：Inmyopinion,youaresupposedto（建議）because（理由一）.Additionally,itwillbemuchmoreconvenientforyouto（理由二）.Therefore,it'sagoodideafbryouto...Iamfullyconvincedthatusethetips/suggestionsaboveandyouwill（以上建議的好處）.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoaccount.或：Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoaccount.Yours,LiHua【模板運(yùn)用】二（陜西省西安中學(xué)2019-2020學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期期中）假如你是李華，你的外教MrGeller計(jì)劃讓8歲的女兒在中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)一門傳統(tǒng)藝術(shù)作為興趣培養(yǎng)，想從書法、剪紙與象棋中選擇，寫郵件尋求你的看法和學(xué)習(xí)建議。請(qǐng)你給他回一封郵件。內(nèi)容包括：1.推薦內(nèi)容及簡(jiǎn)要原因；2.切實(shí)可行的學(xué)習(xí)建議；3.祝福與希望。注意：1.詞數(shù)：80詞左右；2.內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；【答案】DearMrGeller,Iamdelightedtoreceiveyourletteraskingfbrmyadviceonyourplan.I'mmorethangladtooffermyadviceforyourreference.Inmyopinion,youarcsupposedtochooseChinesecalligraphybecauseit'sanaturalcombinationofbeauty,strength,historj,andtechnique.Additionally,aimingatlearningitwell,itmakessensetodevoteherselftolonghoursofpractice.Morcovcr,signingupforacalligraphycourseisalsoagoodchoice,whichwouldhelpherstudyinasystematicway.Iamfullyconvincedthatusethetipsaboveandyouwillgainbenefit.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoaccount.Yours,LiHua【寫作實(shí)踐】一（2022?全國(guó)高三專題練習(xí)）假如你是李華，你的巴基斯坦筆友Muhammad準(zhǔn)備明年來你校做交換生，寫信向你咨詢?nèi)绾螌W(xué)習(xí)中文。請(qǐng)你用英語給他回封電子郵件。內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信的目的；.提出學(xué)習(xí)中文建議；.期待與祝福。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearMuhammad,Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMuhammad,Iamgladtohearthatyouwillbeanexchangestudentatourschoolnextyear.AstohowtoleamChinese,Iwilltrytomakesonicconducivesuggestionshere.Togetstarted,youmightaswelltakeaChinesecoursetolayasolidfoundation.What'smore,itisawisechoicetopickupproperChineseTVprograms.Moreover,Ithinkthemostefficinetwayistomakefriendswithw