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HeadStuckinaPumpkin2021.01浙江高考英語讀后續(xù)寫解讀

HeadStuckinaPumpkin2021.012021.01浙江高考英語續(xù)寫HeadStuckinaPumpkincharacteranalysisReading→characteranalysis→plotanalysisWriting→plotdesign→languageaccumulation→twosamples2021.01浙江高考英語續(xù)寫HeadStuckina1Reading-characteranalysis1.Inthepumpkinfield,Icompetewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin2.Unfortunatelyweforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides,butIwasdeterminedtoprovemypoint.3.I'munsurenowwhyIthoughtforcingmyheadinsidethepumpkinwouldsettlethematter,butitseemedtomakeperfectsenseatthetimetheauthor:competitive;eagertowintherace/provehimselfasabiggerbrother1Reading-characteranalysis1.2Reading-plotanalysisBackgroundinformation(para.1):Afamilytradition_______kidspickoutthelargestpumpkinandcarryithome.Incitingincident(para.2):To__________Jason,Idecidedtoforcemyheadintothepumpkin.Risingaction&Climax(para.3):Ifinallymanagedto_________myheadintothepumpkinbutgotstuck.wherebeat/defeatsqueeze2Reading-plotanalysisBackgro1Writing-plotdesignFallingactionandresolution(para.1):

Denouement(para.2):heroes'actions/

feelings/wordsmedo:trytopullawayfromthepumpkinfeel:physically-uncomfortable

emotionally-embarrassedmyfamilydo:laughatme/helpmegetoutfeel:amusedpossibleversions:Igotstuckinanotherobject(originaltext)myHalloweenreflections(aneventforfunandjoy)1Writing-plotdesignFallingac2LanguageAccumulationAbout“measures”搖頭|shake/thrash/jerkone'shead往上推|pullthepumpkinup猛拽|drag/tugat/heaveon/haul(用刀)劃破|pierceahole/makeacut/slicethepumpkin(用硬物)敲擊|crush/pound/hammer/batter(南瓜)裂開|burstintwo/crackopen/

OR|(humorous)bedissectedintwo

2LanguageAccumulationAbout“m2LanguageAccumulationAbout“embarrassment”(可參考本人公眾號相關(guān)推文)臉頰(耳朵)發(fā)燙|one'scheeks/earsburn臉紅|one'sfaceflush/blush(totherootsofone'shair)OR|apalepinkcreepsoverone'sneckOR|adeepblushcomesupoverone'scollarOR|asuddenflushspreadsoverone'scheeks冒汗|sweatcomeoutinafinedewOR|sweatburstoutintinybeadsOR|greatdropsofsweatstandoutonone'sbackOR|sweatstandoutinbeads2LanguageAccumulationAbout“e2LanguageAccumulationAbout“embarrassment”(可參考本人公眾號相關(guān)推文)支支吾吾地說|stammeroutafewwordsOR|stutterareplyOR|fumbleforanexplanation說不出話來|belostforwordsOR|wordsfail/escape/evadesb原地轉(zhuǎn)圈|rotate/spinonthespot

扭絞雙手|wring(wrung)one'shands搓手|rubone'shands如坐針氈|sitonepinsandneedles|sitonthorns2LanguageAccumulationAbout“e2LanguageAccumulationAbout“physicaldiscomfort”不能呼吸|canhardlybreatheOR|feelshortofbreathOR|almostchoketodeathOR|feelsuffocating/stiflinginthesmallarea頭暈?zāi)垦spin/rotateonthegroundOR|sufferfromdizzyspellsOR|feelgiddyanddisoriented聲音沉悶|one'svoicemuffled/smothered/stifled2LanguageAccumulationAbout“p2LanguageAccumulationAbout“violentlaughs”1.One'slipstwitchwithamusement2.beconvulsedwithlaughter3.dissolveintogiggles4.roar/explode/hootwithlaughter,shakinginone'schair5.laughone'sheadoff6.laughoneselfunderthetable7.rollintheaisle/onthefloor8.creaseuplaughing/creasesbup9.splitone'ssideslaughing2LanguageAccumulationAbout“v2LanguageAccumulationAbout“offsth/awayfromsth”NEUTRAL:break/pullawayfrom...getridof/rid...of...free...from...HUMOROUS:disengage...from...|divorce...from...dislodge...from...|disconnect...from...disentangle...from...|extricate...from...2LanguageAccumulationAbout“o2LanguageAccumulationAbout“socialnetwork”迅速走紅|goviral(取消)關(guān)注|(un)followsb發(fā)送/轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)|post/repost/retweet喜歡/點贊|like/give...athumb-up加/解除好友|(un)friendsb分享|share...with回復(fù)|replyto評論|commenton/leaveacomment評論蜂擁而至：Commentsflood/sweepinbeflooded/deluged/inundatedwith...2LanguageAccumulationAbout“s3Sample1Itwasfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Alleffortstodivorcemyheadfromthepumpkinweretried,butinvain.Astimetickedby,Ifeltdizzyduetoalackofoxygenandheapedontothefloor.Jason,stilltremblingwithlaughterintheseat,finallyhadapangofconscienceandcalleddadforhelp.Uponseeingthepumpkin-headed“monster”,dadparticipatedinthechorusofjeersbutsoonsnatchedaknife,gentlypokeditthroughthetopofthevegetableandthentoreitopen.Thesuddeninfluxoffreshairleftmepanting,anormalshadeofcolorgraduallyreturningtomypallidface.Iliftedmypumpkin-pulp-coveredeyelids,scannedtheroomandsawthreefacescontortedbyguffawandmumstillholdingthecamera,which,unfortunately,hadrecordedeverything.3Sample1Itwasfiveorsix3Sample1ThatvideowaspostedtheMondaybeforeHalloween.Notlongafteritwasuploaded,itsoaredtothetopof“most-watched”shortvideos.Thousandsleftcomments,sharingtheirownstoriesoftheirbodypartsbeingcaughtinsmallundesiredplaces.Thenextday,whenIwaswalkingaroundthecampus,Iwassoonrecognizedandaskedtotakeselfies.Withmyfamouspumpkinheadtweetedandretweeted,Itookabiteofnotonlythepiesmadefromthatdissectedpumpkin,butalsowhatitfeltliketobringjoytoothers.Fromthatyearon,afterthefiveofuschildrensoughtoutthebiggestpumpkinsinthefieldandhauledthembackhome,thefirstthingwedidwastometiculouslyandaccuratelyweigheachofthemsoastoavoidanotherhead-in-pumpkinaccident.3Sample1Thatvideowaspos3Sample2Itwasfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Totaldarknessdisorientatingme,Irotatedonthespotandfinallyspunmyselfontothefloor.“Dad!Emergency!Helpneeded!”Jasonroared,laughinghimselfunderthetable.Dadrushedoutandimmediatelyjoinedhissecondsoninrollingontheground.“Hey,someone'sdyinginhere!”Ifeeblyprotested,myvoicemuffled.Itwasthenthattheywriggledclosertohelpmeunplug.Jasonsatonmylapwhiledadpulledwithallhismight.Thepumpkineasedpastmymouthandthenclimbed,inchbyinch,overthemostdifficultorgan--mynose.Withairsuddenlysuckedin,thevegetabledisconnectedmyheadinahollowsound.Igaspedforair,myeyesrestingonthecamerastilldirectedatme--whichwasnowreducedtoapatheticfigurepiledonthefloor,pumpkinjuicesquirmingdownitscolor-drainedcheeks.3Sample2Itwasfiveorsix3Sample2ThatvideowaspostedtheMondaybeforeHalloween.Themomentitwentonline,itwentviral,delugedwiththousandsofcommentsofvariousversionsof“being-stuck”stories--fingersthroughsmallholes,headsbetweenmetalbarsandevenlegsinwaterpipes.MankindneverceasetosqueezetheirbodypartsintosmallunknownareasinquestofGod-knows-what,dothey?Thenextday,whenIwalkedaroundthecampus,Icouldfeelfingerspointedatmydirection,gigglesbehindsleevesandwhispersinsmallgroups.It'slikeIsuddenlyshottostardom!IfthisincidentwasaTRICKGodplayedonme,ImightaswellregarditasmyTREATforeveryonetohaveanunforgettableHalloween.3Sample2ThatvideowasposHeadStuckinaPumpkin2021.01浙江高考英語讀后續(xù)寫解讀

HeadStuckinaPumpkin2021.012021.01浙江高考英語續(xù)寫HeadStuckinaPumpkincharacteranalysisReading→characteranalysis→plotanalysisWriting→plotdesign→languageaccumulation→twosamples2021.01浙江高考英語續(xù)寫HeadStuckina1Reading-characteranalysis1.Inthepumpkinfield,Icompetewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin2.Unfortunatelyweforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides,butIwasdeterminedtoprovemypoint.3.I'munsurenowwhyIthoughtforcingmyheadinsidethepumpkinwouldsettlethematter,butitseemedtomakeperfectsenseatthetimetheauthor:competitive;eagertowintherace/provehimselfasabiggerbrother1Reading-characteranalysis1.2Reading-plotanalysisBackgroundinformation(para.1):Afamilytradition_______kidspickoutthelargestpumpkinandcarryithome.Incitingincident(para.2):To__________Jason,Idecidedtoforcemyheadintothepumpkin.Risingaction&Climax(para.3):Ifinallymanagedto_________myheadintothepumpkinbutgotstuck.wherebeat/defeatsqueeze2Reading-plotanalysisBackgro1Writing-plotdesignFallingactionandresolution(para.1):

Denouement(para.2):heroes'actions/

feelings/wordsmedo:trytopullawayfromthepumpkinfeel:physically-uncomfortable

emotionally-embarrassedmyfamilydo:laughatme/helpmegetoutfeel:amusedpossibleversions:Igotstuckinanotherobject(originaltext)myHalloweenreflections(aneventforfunandjoy)1Writing-plotdesignFallingac2LanguageAccumulationAbout“measures”搖頭|shake/thrash/jerkone'shead往上推|pullthepumpkinup猛拽|drag/tugat/heaveon/haul(用刀)劃破|pierceahole/makeacut/slicethepumpkin(用硬物)敲擊|crush/pound/hammer/batter(南瓜)裂開|burstintwo/crackopen/

OR|(humorous)bedissectedintwo

2LanguageAccumulationAbout“m2LanguageAccumulationAbout“embarrassment”(可參考本人公眾號相關(guān)推文)臉頰(耳朵)發(fā)燙|one'scheeks/earsburn臉紅|one'sfaceflush/blush(totherootsofone'shair)OR|apalepinkcreepsoverone'sneckOR|adeepblushcomesupoverone'scollarOR|asuddenflushspreadsoverone'scheeks冒汗|sweatcomeoutinafinedewOR|sweatburstoutintinybeadsOR|greatdropsofsweatstandoutonone'sbackOR|sweatstandoutinbeads2LanguageAccumulationAbout“e2LanguageAccumulationAbout“embarrassment”(可參考本人公眾號相關(guān)推文)支支吾吾地說|stammeroutafewwordsOR|stutterareplyOR|fumbleforanexplanation說不出話來|belostforwordsOR|wordsfail/escape/evadesb原地轉(zhuǎn)圈|rotate/spinonthespot

扭絞雙手|wring(wrung)one'shands搓手|rubone'shands如坐針氈|sitonepinsandneedles|sitonthorns2LanguageAccumulationAbout“e2LanguageAccumulationAbout“physicaldiscomfort”不能呼吸|canhardlybreatheOR|feelshortofbreathOR|almostchoketodeathOR|feelsuffocating/stiflinginthesmallarea頭暈?zāi)垦spin/rotateonthegroundOR|sufferfromdizzyspellsOR|feelgiddyanddisoriented聲音沉悶|one'svoicemuffled/smothered/stifled2LanguageAccumulationAbout“p2LanguageAccumulationAbout“violentlaughs”1.One'slipstwitchwithamusement2.beconvulsedwithlaughter3.dissolveintogiggles4.roar/explode/hootwithlaughter,shakinginone'schair5.laughone'sheadoff6.laughoneselfunderthetable7.rollintheaisle/onthefloor8.creaseuplaughing/creasesbup9.splitone'ssideslaughing2LanguageAccumulationAbout“v2LanguageAccumulationAbout“offsth/awayfromsth”NEUTRAL:break/pullawayfrom...getridof/rid...of...free...from...HUMOROUS:disengage...from...|divorce...from...dislodge...from...|disconnect...from...disentangle...from...|extricate...from...2LanguageAccumulationAbout“o2LanguageAccumulationAbout“socialnetwork”迅速走紅|goviral(取消)關(guān)注|(un)followsb發(fā)送/轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)|post/repost/retweet喜歡/點贊|like/give...athumb-up加/解除好友|(un)friendsb分享|share...with回復(fù)|replyto評論|commenton/leaveacomment評論蜂擁而至：Commentsflood/sweepinbeflooded/deluged/inundatedwith...2LanguageAccumulationAbout“s3Sample1Itwasfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Alleffortstodivorcemyheadfromthepumpkinweretried,butinvain.Astimetickedby,Ifeltdizzyduetoalackofoxygenandheapedontothefloor.Jason,stilltremblingwithlaughterintheseat,finallyhadapangofconscienceandcalleddadforhelp.Uponseeingthepumpkin-headed“monster”,dadparticipatedinthechorusofjeersbutsoonsnatchedaknife,gentlypokeditthroughthetopofthevegetableandthentoreitopen.Thesuddeninfluxoffreshairleftmepanting,anormalshadeofcolorgraduallyreturningtomypallidface.Iliftedmypumpkin-pulp-coveredeyelids,scannedtheroomandsawthreefacescontortedbyguffawandmumstillholdingthecamera,which,unfortunately,hadrecordedeverything.3Sample1Itwasfiveorsix3Sample1ThatvideowaspostedtheMondaybeforeHalloween.Notlongafteritwasuploaded,itsoaredtothetopof“most-watched”shortvideos.Thousandsleftcomments,sharingtheirownstoriesoftheirbodypartsbeingcaughtinsmallundesiredplaces.Thenextday,whenIwaswalkingaroundthecampus,Iwassoonrecognizedandaskedtotakeselfies.Withmyfamouspumpkinheadtweetedandretweeted,Itookabiteofnotonlythepiesmadefromthatdissectedpumpkin,butalsowhatitfeltliketobringjoytoothers.Fromthatyearon,afterthefiveofuschildrensoughtoutthebiggestpumpkinsinthefieldandhauledthembackhome,thefirstthingwedidwastometiculouslyandaccuratelyweigheachofthemsoastoavoidanotherhead-in-pumpkinaccident.3Sample1Thatvideowaspos3Sample2Itwasfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Totaldarknessdisorientatingme,Irotatedonthespotandfinallyspunmyselfontoth