2020中考英語(yǔ)作文熱點(diǎn)素材范文11 環(huán)保

2020中考英語(yǔ)作文熱點(diǎn)素材熱點(diǎn)11環(huán)保熱點(diǎn)預(yù)測(cè)環(huán)保無(wú)疑是今年的火爆熱點(diǎn)之一，它為我們的生活帶來(lái)了很大的影響。今天，選擇的2020年中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作預(yù)測(cè)話題是：環(huán)保。預(yù)測(cè)題目】一)人人都提倡低碳生活，環(huán)保節(jié)能，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)出為環(huán)保所做的五件事。要點(diǎn)提示：1．自己騎自行車上學(xué)。在家使用節(jié)能燈(energy-avinglamp)。減少淋浴時(shí)間。將用過(guò)的課本留給下屆學(xué)生。5．自帶購(gòu)物袋。【參考范文】Onepossibleversion:Wecangotoschoolbybikeoronfoot.Weshoulduseenergy—savinglamps.Spendlesstimewhenwearetakingashoweras—possibleaswecan.Don'tthrowawaytheusedtextbooksandleavethemtothestudentsoflowergrades.5.Bringourownbagswhenweareshopping.【解析】試題分析：該文題目給出了一些要點(diǎn)，要求你寫(xiě)出為環(huán)保所做的五件事。我們要做的就是把這些要點(diǎn)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子表達(dá)出來(lái)，實(shí)際上就是個(gè)漢譯英練習(xí)。要注意符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣，合乎語(yǔ)言規(guī)范。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這些句子表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，合乎英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)規(guī)范。(二)當(dāng)今，低碳生活(low-carbonliving)的理念已深入人心，植樹(shù)造林、節(jié)能減排、環(huán)保出行等已成為人們的自覺(jué)行為。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇90詞以上的短文，談?wù)勀阚`行這種綠色環(huán)保生活理念的做法與心得。內(nèi)容要求：低碳生活的重要性是什么？你為過(guò)低碳生活付出了怎樣的努力？你對(duì)全民踐行低碳生活有何期待？【參考范文】Low-carbonliving,agreenandhealthylifestyle,isbecomingmoreandmorepopular.Itcanhelpchangetheglobalwarminggreatly.Tolivealow-carbonlife,Iwalkedorrodebikestoschooleveryday.InmydailylifeImanagedtosaveelectricityandwater.AndIoftenkeptintouchwithfriendsbywritingemailsinsteadofusingaprinter.Ioftenplantedtreeswithmyfamilyonweekends.Ihopethatmoreandmorepeoplewillrealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectionandpracticethelow-carbonlifestyle.【解析】試題分析：本文介紹的是低碳生活的重要性及我為低碳生活做的努力。首先要用正確的格式去寫(xiě)，會(huì)用一些短語(yǔ)，會(huì)仿照課文的句子寫(xiě)出正確的英語(yǔ)句子，注意用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)及將來(lái)時(shí)，用第一人稱來(lái)敘述。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】短文用了不定式表示目的，如：Tolivealow-carbonlife,Iwalkedorrodebikestoschooleveryday等，最后還用hope+that從句寄予了期待。具題再現(xiàn)（一）保護(hù)環(huán)境，人人有責(zé)。假如上周日為保護(hù)環(huán)境，你校師生開(kāi)展了一些活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面所提供的信息寫(xiě)一篇日記。出發(fā)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)：早上八點(diǎn)，學(xué)校門口目的地/交通工具：市區(qū)附近的一個(gè)小鎮(zhèn)/校車所帶物品：在校自制的有關(guān)環(huán)保的海報(bào)和傳單活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：上午：貼海報(bào)，發(fā)傳單，宣傳環(huán)保知識(shí)下午：撿垃圾、塑料袋，打掃街道，種花，植樹(shù)要求：時(shí)態(tài)正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；生詞：leaflets傳單，environmentalprotection環(huán)保；詞數(shù)：70詞左右（文段首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）【參考范文】Sunday,March6SunnyTodayI‘mveryexcitedbecauseIdidalotofthingswithmyclassmatesandteacherstoprotectourenvironment.Wemettheschoolgateateighto'clockinthemorning,beforewewenttoasmalltowninourschoolbus.Wetookthepostersandleafletsmadeatschoolwithus.Theresomestudentsputuppostersonthewallsandhandedoutleafletstothepeoplewhopassedusinthemorningandotherstalkedabouttheenvironmentprotectiontothepeople.Intheafternoonwecollectedlitterandpickedupplasticbags.Besides,wealsocleanedupthestreetsandplantedtreesandflowers.Atsixintheeveningwecamebackhome.Ifeltverytiredbuthappy.Ithinkifeveryonecantakepartinprotectingtheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemorebeautiful.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。本文要寫(xiě)的材料比較具體，我們要做的就是運(yùn)用正確的

英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。我們要好好選用詞匯和短語(yǔ)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文是日記，所以主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用準(zhǔn)確。（二）假如你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生會(huì)主席王東,為了配合環(huán)保教育主題活動(dòng),請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面所給提示,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封倡議書(shū)，內(nèi)容包括：環(huán)保措施和美化城市的措施（各2條）；2.你的希望。1.注意文章的整體連貫；文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.80詞左右。Dearfriends,Inordertomaketheenvironmentmorebeautiful,weshouldWangDongThankyou!WangDong【參考范文】Dearfriends,Inordertomaketheenvironmentmorebeautiful,weshoulddowhatwecantoprotectit.First,weshouldplantmoretreesandflowerstomakeourcitymorebeautiful.Also,alwaysremembernottothrowrubbishorpourwastewatereverywhere.Asweallknow,waterisbecominglessandless.Soit'squitenecessarytosaexample,turnthetapoffafterwashing.Last,butnottheleast,we'dbetterrideabikeorwalkwhengoingoutinsteadofdrivingacar.Inmyopinion,ifeveryonetrieshisbesttoprotecttheenvironment,ourcitywillbecomenicerandcleaner!Thankyou.WangDong【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，寫(xiě)一篇環(huán)保的倡議書(shū)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如:weshouldSoit'squitenecessaryto...,we'dbetter....,ifeveryonetrieshisbestto...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用連詞使文章前后連貫，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系,適當(dāng)?shù)难a(bǔ)充一些保護(hù)環(huán)境的措施。【寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了倡議書(shū)的目的是保護(hù)環(huán)境,接下來(lái)介紹保護(hù)環(huán)境的措施：種樹(shù)不要亂扔垃圾、節(jié)約用水,騎自行車或步行外出,最后闡述自己的觀點(diǎn),要盡力保護(hù)環(huán)境。此處remembernottodosth,asweallknow,turnoff,hadbetter,tryone'sbesttodosth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。(三)假如你是張明,你是學(xué)?！碍h(huán)保俱樂(lè)部”(SavingtheEnvironmentClub)的志愿者。上周六,你們俱樂(lè)部組織了志愿者活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)給你的筆友Ben寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，向他介紹這次活動(dòng)的情況，并談?wù)勀銓?duì)志愿者工作的看法,并注意書(shū)信格式。80詞左右.其內(nèi)容包括：1、介紹自己是環(huán)保俱樂(lè)部的自愿者。2、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容有：張貼海報(bào)、分發(fā)廣告、打掃街道、打掃公園等。3、當(dāng)我們完成所有工作后都感覺(jué)很累,但卻覺(jué)得很快樂(lè)，很有成就感。4、我認(rèn)為做一名志愿者非常不錯(cuò)?！緟⒖挤段摹緿earBen,IamavolunteerinSavingtheEnvironmentClubofmyschool.LastSaturday,Ididsomevolunteerworkwithothervolunteers.Someofusputupposters.Somehandedoutadvertisements.Otherssweptthestreets.Wealsohelpedcleanupthecityparks.Whenwefinishedallthework,wewereverytiredbutfeltveryhappyatthesametime.Ithinkit'sfantastictobeavolunteer.Whatdoyouthinkofvolunteering?Pleasewritebacksoon!Yours,ZhangMing【解析】試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者給你的筆友Ben寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，向他介紹這次活動(dòng)的情況，并談?wù)勀銓?duì)志愿者工作的看法，小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。如Someofusputupposters.Somehandedoutadvertisements.Otherssweptthestreets.Wealsohelpedcleanupthecityparks.Whenwefinishedallthework,wewereverytiredbutfeltveryhappyatthesametime等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。（四）“保護(hù)環(huán)境，人人有責(zé)”，你想成為綠色使者嗎?請(qǐng)行動(dòng)起來(lái)吧！其實(shí)，環(huán)保就在我們身邊，例如，拒絕一次性紙杯，隨手關(guān)掉電燈，使用布做的購(gòu)物袋，盡量騎自行車出行請(qǐng)以“HowtoBeaGreenerPerson”為題，寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)環(huán)保的短文，并適當(dāng)發(fā)表你的看法。參考范文】HowtobeaGreenerPersonIt'sourdutytoprotecttheenvironmentaroundus.ThethreeRs—reduce,reuseandrecycle—areimportant.Ithinkwe'dbetternotbuybottlesorboxeswhichpeoplecanonlyuseonce.Weshouldturnoffthelightswhenwearenotusingthem.Wecangiveoldclothestootherstoreusethem.Whenwegoshopping,we'dbettertakeaclothbagratherthanuseplasticbags.Weshouldn'tthrowthingsawayiftheycanbereused,repairedorrecycled.It'simportantforustoprotectanimalsandplants.Wearesupposedtopreventthefactoryfrompouringwastewaterintorivers,lakesandsoon.Ifeveryoneisdoingthat,ourworldwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.【解析】試題分析：環(huán)境保護(hù)的文體是中考常考的主題，對(duì)于本文的寫(xiě)作學(xué)生首先開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山指出保護(hù)環(huán)境是非常重要的，是我們的責(zé)任，可以利用it作為形式主語(yǔ)的句式來(lái)展開(kāi)；然后，對(duì)環(huán)境保護(hù)應(yīng)該如何做進(jìn)行闡述如拒絕一次性紙杯，隨手關(guān)掉電燈，使用布做的購(gòu)物袋，盡量騎自行車出行，保護(hù)動(dòng)植物，防止工廠的排污等，從這幾方面進(jìn)行展開(kāi)論述。句式上可以使用we'dbetter，It'simportantforusto，Wearesupposedto等來(lái)闡述所寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容。最后，一句話進(jìn)行總結(jié)，說(shuō)明如果這樣做世界將會(huì)變得更美m(xù)oreandmorebeautiful?？键c(diǎn)：提綱類寫(xiě)作點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文難度不大，寫(xiě)作條理性要把握好，對(duì)于要做的幾件事情，寫(xiě)的過(guò)程中通過(guò)變換句式和用詞上來(lái)提高語(yǔ)言的美度。在一件事情寫(xiě)完后要用上表關(guān)系的連接詞，或平時(shí)積累的各類表遞進(jìn)、并列的連詞來(lái)是文章富于活力。在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中要多去背誦范文，對(duì)表達(dá)好的句子，短語(yǔ)要進(jìn)行積累，并默寫(xiě)，考試前再集中看一下，這樣做到有備無(wú)患。常用耒迖Someofusputupposters.Somehandedoutadvertisements.Wealsohelpedcleanupthecityparks.wefinishedallthework,wewereverytiredbutfeltveryhappyatthesametime.

Inmyopinion,ifeveryonetrieshisbesttoprotecttheenvironment,ourcitywillbecomenicerandcleaner!Onlybydoingthesesimplethingscanweprotectourenvironmentwell。Withthedevelopmentofindustrialization,moreandmorefactoriesarebuilt.Toprotectourenvironment,thegovernmentbegantolevyataxonthecompaniesandfactories.Lastbutnotleast,wecanshareourideaswithpeopletoletthemjoinus.Tohelpwithit,IpickupthelitterwhenIseeitonthefloor.Besides,IalwayscollectbottlesandIneverforgettoturnoffthelightswhenIleavetheclassroom.Onlyinthiswaycanwelivehappily.13.Ifwedon'tsavewater,thelastdropofwater-dwroipllofbues.atear14.Ihopeeveryonewillcareabouttheenvironment.15.Ibelievewecanmakeourschoolmoreandmorebeautiful.寫(xiě)作棋板Thetopicof①（主題）isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.SomepeoplesayAistheirfavorite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof②（支持A的理由一）Whatismore,③理由二）.Moreover,④（理由三）.WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.Firstly,（支持B的理由一）.Secondly（besides）,⑥（理由二）.Thirdly（finally）,?（理由三）.Frommypointofview,Ithink⑧（我的觀點(diǎn)）.Thereasonisthat⑨（原因）.Asamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.Forme,theformerissurelyawise

一）2018年1月1日，我國(guó)開(kāi)始向企業(yè)征收環(huán)保稅。這一舉措引發(fā)重慶人民的關(guān)注。請(qǐng)就此新聞，寫(xiě)一篇評(píng)論。參考要點(diǎn)：政府征收環(huán)保稅有哪些原因；環(huán)保稅開(kāi)征后重慶將會(huì)發(fā)生哪些變化；從個(gè)人角度說(shuō)明應(yīng)為環(huán)保做哪些貢獻(xiàn)。要求：要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)言流暢；2.80—120詞，文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。OnJanuary1st,thegovernmentbegantolevyataxon（征稅）thecompaniesandfactorieswhichcausepollution.PeopleinChongqingpaycloseattentiontoit.參考范文】OnJanuary1st,thegovernmentbegantolevyataxon（征稅）thecompaniesandfactorieswhichcausepollution.PeopleinChongqingpaycloseattentiontoit.Withthedevelopmentofindustrialization,moreandmorefactoriesarebuilt.Whilethefactoriesespeciallyironandsteelfactoriesarebadforenvironment.Toprotectourenvironment,thegovernmentbegantolevyataxonthecompaniesandfactories.Afterthat,therewillbelessandlesspollutionandthecitywillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.Forusstudents,wecandosomethingtotheenvironment.Firstofall,asweallknow,someplacesarelackoffreshwater,sowe'dbettersavewater.What'smore,wecanplanttreesasmuchaspossible.Lastbutnotleast,wecanshareourideaswithpeopletoletthemjoinus.Onlybydoingthesesimplethingscanweprotectourenvironmentwell.【解析】1.題干解讀。本文屬于話題作文，主要講述我國(guó)向企業(yè)征收環(huán)保稅的原因以及這件事情以后重慶的變化。并談一下我們個(gè)人可以為環(huán)保做什么貢獻(xiàn)。注意時(shí)態(tài)的使用，且切記不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并靈活運(yùn)用所學(xué)單詞、短語(yǔ)以及句型，使文章更加生動(dòng)。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。高分亮點(diǎn)：?jiǎn)卧~短語(yǔ)：Withthedevelopmentofindustrialization,比較級(jí)and比較級(jí),especially,bebadfor,todo表示目的，beginto,firstofall,asweallknow,belackof,what'smore,asmuchaspossible,lastbutnotleast,sharesthwithsb等。高分句型：Onlybydoingthesesimplethingscanweprotectourenvironmentwell中“only+狀語(yǔ)"放句首，用半倒裝。【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如Withthedevelopmentofindustrialization,比較級(jí)and比較級(jí),especially,bebadfor,todo表示目的,beginto,firstofall,asweallknow,belackof,what'smore,asmuchaspossible,lastbutnotleast,sharesthwithsb等；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢，如firstofall,what'smore，lastbutnotleast等；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。（二）學(xué)校的英語(yǔ)報(bào)就“爭(zhēng)做校園環(huán)保小衛(wèi)士”話題征文，請(qǐng)你投稿。談?wù)勆钪心愕木唧w做法、環(huán)境保護(hù)的重大意義以及你的環(huán)保倡議。要求：1.詞數(shù)80—100詞；短文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名和校名等信息；開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。提示詞語(yǔ)：collectbottlesturnoffdutymakearealdifferenceGoodenvironmentisimportantforeveryone.【參考范文】Goodenvironmentisimportantforeveryone.Tohelpwithit,IpickupthelitterwhenIseeitonthefloor.Besides,IalwayscollectbottlesandIneverforgettoturnoffthelightswhenIleavetheclassroom.Asstudents,Ithinkit'sourdutytoprotecttheenvironmentofourschool.Andeventhesimplestactivitiescanmakearealdifferencetotheenvironment.SoIsuggestweshouldreusebooksaslongaspossible.Andit'salsoagoodideatotakepartinrecyclingprograms.Ihopeeveryonewillcareabouttheenvironment.Ibelievewecanmakeourschoolmoreandmorebeautiful.解析】試題分析：作文要圍繞要點(diǎn)展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作：具體做法，感受，建議。要符合題目要求，觀點(diǎn)正確，要點(diǎn)齊全。句式多樣，詞匯豐富。語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，具有邏輯性.注意提示語(yǔ)collectbottlesturnoffdutymakearealdifference的運(yùn)用。注意作文的升華，提出環(huán)保的意義?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】Tohelpwithit,IpickupthelitterwhenIseeitonthefloor.Besides,IalwayscollectbottlesandIneverforgettoturnoffthelightswhenIleavetheclassroom.l具體做法最好寫(xiě)上三點(diǎn)，三點(diǎn)之間要有過(guò)渡。過(guò)渡不要頻繁使用first,second,third。這篇文章處理的很好，tohelpwithit,Besides,and。2.注意從句的運(yùn)用，比如時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，定語(yǔ)從句等。（三）今年幾個(gè)世界大國(guó)首腦都參加了八國(guó)峰會(huì)，這次的主題是世界經(jīng)濟(jì)、能源問(wèn)題和氣候變化。經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展離不開(kāi)環(huán)境話題