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題型分類大搞定這一步，穩(wěn)穩(wěn)上6.5分 -第①種 題Discussbothviewsandgiveyour討論雙方觀點(diǎn)，并且給出你的個人意見第①種 題Discussbothviewsandgiveyour我認(rèn)為給出清晰的個人觀點(diǎn) 重點(diǎn)個人觀點(diǎn)里必須明確體現(xiàn)A和B之間的關(guān)系，這也決定 段的展開順第一種情況：一方弱一方強(qiáng)(一般通過強(qiáng)化和弱化來得出偏向結(jié)第二種情況：兩個觀點(diǎn)必須共存 第三種情況：取決于（取決于的內(nèi)容必須 段擴(kuò)展內(nèi)容相關(guān)這個題目里的兩個觀點(diǎn)都有道理，但是你有一定的偏向。在介紹段預(yù)告你的觀點(diǎn)偏向，然后 段按照弱-強(qiáng)的順序依次展開結(jié)尾段的時候結(jié) 段的擴(kuò)展內(nèi)容來強(qiáng)化強(qiáng)，弱化弱弱強(qiáng)觀點(diǎn)的的結(jié)構(gòu)安一句話引出爭論或者背景事實(shí)+Ontheone 段—順著題目展開弱的觀點(diǎn)(TS是現(xiàn)成的Ontheother 段—順著題目展開強(qiáng)的觀點(diǎn)(TS是現(xiàn)成的Somepeoplebelievefamouspeople'ssupporttowardsinternationalaidorganizationsdrawstheattentiontoproblems,whileothersthinkcelebritiesmaketheproblemsseemlessimportant.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.Itisquitecommonthatmanycelebrities,likemoviestarsandfamousathletes,participateinactivitiesheldbyinternationalaidorganizations.Opinionsaredividedonhowtheirsupportaffectstheseactivities.Ibelievethatfamouspeople’sinvolvementincharitableeventscan yattractmoreattentionandprovidemorehelptotheproblems.Ontheonehand,therehasbeenaconcernthattheimportanceofcharitableactivitiesmaybeweakenedwiththepresenceofmanyfamouspeople.ThisisbecausefansofthemoviestarsortheNBAlegendsmaypaymoreattentiontohowtheiridolsdressthemselvesorwhethertheyareinthecenterofthestage.Whatisworse,tabloidsleadreaderstothegossipsorscandalsofthecelebritiesinsteadofhowmuchtheycontributetohel peopleinneed.Thisexplainswhymanypeopleworrythatfamouspeoplemayhaveanegativeeffectonthecharitableactivitytheyparticipatein.Ontheotherhand,advocatesofcelebrities’supporttowardsworldwidepressingissuesbelievethattheyhavesuchsignificantinfluenceonmillionsofpeoplefollowingtheiraccountsonsocialmedia,suchas .Whenthesefamouspeopledeliveraspeechinafundraisinggalaormakeadonationtoanorganizationtowardsassistingneedypeopleinthirdworldcountries,theirfollowersmaycontributetheirownefforttocombatingthesameproblems.Forexample,in2015,hundredsofsportsstarsandNobelPrizewinnerswhotookpartinaseriesofactivitiesnamedtheIceBucketChallengesuccessfullypromotedawarenessofthediseaseALSandencourageddonationstoresearch.ally,myviewisthatwhiletheattentionofthepublicmaybedrawnfromtheeventitselftothestarstheyareinterestedin,thisusuallylastsforashortperiodoftime.Supportfromthesefamouspeople,inthelongterm,willplayasignificantroleinarousingpeople'sawarenesstowardstheissuesthatneedtobeTaskSomepeoplebelievethatteachingchildrenathomeisbestforachild’sdevelopmentwhileothersthinkthatitisimportantforchildrentogotoschool.Discusstheadvantagesofbothmethodsandgiveyourownopinion.Theargumentoverwhetherlearningathomeoratschoolisbetterforchildrenhasnotbeensettledyet.Whereashomeeducationoffersbetterprotectionwithindividuallearningandopportunitiesforfamiliestobond,schoolshaveasuperiorrangeofmaterialandhumanresources.Ultima y,Ithinktheschoolexperienceisbestforchildren.Thereareseveraladvantagesforchildrenwholearnathome.Firstlytheycanspendmoretimewiththeirparentsandsiblings.Manysocialproblemsareassociatedwithfamiliesnotspendingenoughqualitytimetogether.Teachingchildrenathomealsoprovidesthemwithanindividualisedlearningenvironment.Instructioniscustomdesignedandmovesatthechild’sownpaceandinaccordancewithhisorherindividuallearningstyle.Finally,homeschoolingprotectschildrenfrombulliesandotherswhomightbeabadinfluence.–三個點(diǎn)，各有解釋，Ontheotherhand,theschoolenvironmentalsooffersadvantagesforchildren.Schoolsencouragechildrentosocialisewiththeirpeersandlearnhowtocopewithgossip,bullyingandpeerpressure.Inaddition,childrenwillreceivebettertuitionacrossarangeofdisciplines,asschoolshaveteacherswhoaretrainedinspecialsubjects.Whatismore,schoolsprovidebetteraccesstophysicalresourcessuchassportsequipment,musicalinstrumentsandlibrarybooks.-三個點(diǎn)，各有解釋，但還是建議不寫這Ibelievethatchildrenarebetteroffinaschoolenvironment.Althoughfamilytimeandindividuallearningareimportant,therangeofexpertiseandresourcesthatschoolsoffercannotbematchedinthehome.Schoolenvironmentsmaypresentdifficultsocialsituations,butsotoodoestherealworldandchildrenmustlearntonavigatetheseontheirown. 共存觀點(diǎn)的的結(jié)構(gòu)安用模板從兩個觀點(diǎn)里找出共通的事實(shí)。Inmy清晰明了的一個觀點(diǎn)句(參考下一頁Ontheone 段—展開A觀點(diǎn)(現(xiàn)成的Ontheother (仍然兩句話 ally,先重復(fù)個人觀點(diǎn)，然后強(qiáng)調(diào)兩者各自的重要性Ibelievethatrulesandfreedomplayequallyimportantroles,sotheyshouldco-existinthegrowthofeverychild.Ibelievethatthejointeffortofthe ernmentandindividualsisthekeytoeradicatingenvironmentalproblems.Ibelieveth ombinationofskyscrapersandlow-risebuildingsisanidealstrategyofcityplanning.IbelievethatbothpunishmentsandothermeasuresshouldbeusedtogethertoroadsSomebelievecitiesshouldbuildmorehigh-risebuildings,whileotherssayitisbetterforpeople’slifetorestricttheheightofbuildings.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.Mostmoderncitiesarefacedwiththedilemmaofusingtheirlimitedlandresourcestobuildhigh-riseorlow-risebuildings.Ibelieveth ombinationofbothisanidealstrategyforcityplanning.Increasingthenumberofhigh-risebuildingsisbeneficialtothedevelopmentofcitiesintermsofeconomicgrowthandenvironmentalimprovements.Withregardtotheformer,asskyscraperscansignificantlyincreasethespaceavailableforbusinessandresidence,alargernumberofcompaniesandemployeescanbewellmodatedincities,suchasLondonorNewYork,whi aycontributetomorebusinessactivitiesandbettereconomy.Theotherbenefitofanincreasingnumberoftallbuildingsisthatmoreopenspacescanbesavedforvariouspublicfacilities,suchasparks,squares,andsportsfacilities.Allofthesecontributetoimprovementsincitizens'livingenvironment.Ontheotherhand,peopleinsupportofthe ernmentposingalimitontheheightofbuildingsbelievethatlivinginsuchanenvironmenthasobviousadvantagestotheirday-to-daylife.Firstly,ifthecommunitymainlyconsistsofthreeorfour-storeyresidentialbuildings,eachhouseholdcanenjoymoresunshineandbetterventilationwhichcontributetoliftingpeoples'spiritandimprovingtheirhealth.Inaddition,residentsoflow-risebuildings,whichusuallyarenotequippedwithlifts,areforcedtoclimbstairsonadailybasis.Asaresult,ahealthierlifestylecanbepromotedandpeoplearealsomorelikelytomeettheirInmyopinion,awell-plannedcityshouldgrowverticallywithmoretallbuildingsincentralbusinessdistricts,whileprovidingcitizenswithmorecomfortablecommunitiesbylimitingtheheightoftheirhouses.Inshort,onlybycombiningtallandshortbuildingscanacitybedevelopedinthebestway.TaskSomepeoplethinkthatstrictpunishmentsfordrivingoffencesarethekeytoreducingtrafficaccidents.Others,however,believethatothermeasureswouldbemoreeffectiveinimprovingroadsafety.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.Peoplehavedifferingviewswithregardtothequestionofhowtomakeourroadssafer.Inmyview,bothpunishmentsandarangeofothermeasurescanbeusedtogethertopromotebetterdrivinghabits.Ontheonehand,strictpunishmentscancertainlyhelptoencouragepeopletodrivemoresafely.Penaltiesfordangerousdriverscana adeterrent,meaningthatpeopleavoidrepeatingthesameoffence.Therearevarioustypesofdrivingpenalty,suchassmallfines,licencesuspension,driverawarenesscourses,andevenprisonsentences.Theaimofthesepunishmentsistoshowdangerousdriversthattheiractionshavenegativeconsequences.Asaresult,wewouldhopethatdrivers emoredisciplinedandalert,andthattheyfollowtherulesmorecarefully.Ontheotherhand,(manypeoplebelievethat)safedrivingcanbepromotedinseveraldifferentwaysthatdonotpunishdrivers.Firstly,itisvitallyimportanttoeducatepeopleproperlybeforetheystarttodrive,andthiscouldbedoneinschoolsorevenaspartofanextendedormoredifficu rivingtest.Secondly,moreattentioncouldbepaidtosaferoaddesign.Forexample,signscanbeusedtowarnpeople,speedbumpsandroadbendscanbeaddedtocalmtraffic,andspeedcamerascanhelptodeterpeoplefromdrivingtooquickly.Finally, ernmentsorlocalcouncilscouldreduceroadaccidentsbyinvestinginbetterpublictransport,whichwouldmeanthatfewerpeoplewouldneedtotravelbycar.大家試著自己寫一下這個結(jié)尾段閱讀并理解結(jié)構(gòu)TaskCompletinguniversityeducationisthoughtbysometobethebestwaytogetagoodjob.Ontheotherhand,otherpeoplethinkthatgettingexperienceanddevelo softskillsismoreimportant.DiscussbothsidesandgiveyourItisconsideredbysomethatbeingauniversitygraduateisthekeytosecuringagoodjob,whilethereareotherswhothinkthatitisbettertohaveexperienceandsoftskills.Inmyopinion,Ibelievethathavinguniversityeducationisessentialforacademicjobswhilesoftskillsandexperiencearemoreusefulinbusiness.Ontheonehand,manythinkitiseasierformostpeopletofindagoodjobiftheyareuniversitygraduateswithagooddegree.Inotherwords,havingtertiaryeducationputspeopleonestepaheadofotherswhodonotandthiscanbethedecidingfactoringettingagoodjob.Thecompetitiontogetintouniversitiesandtheincreasingnumberofgraduatesshowjusthowsignificantthislevelofeducationisforpeople'sfutureworkopportunities.Ontheotherhand,havingworkexperienceandsoftskills,suchasleadershipskillsandotherinter skills,c sothrowthebalanceinfavouroftheapplicant,accordingtosome.Formanypositionsthereareanoverwhelmingnumberofapplicantsand,therefore,itisoftenthoughtthathavingrelevantexperiencethatlineofworkorhavingacquiredusefulsoftskillsthatcanbevaluabletoacompany,canputoneaheadofthegamewhenapplyingforaposition.Finally,inmyopinion,whetherneedinghighleveleducationorskillsandexperience,dependsonthepositionbeingappliedfor.Takeforexamplelaw,medicineorteaching,itisimpossibletobeconsideredforapositionwithouttherequirededucationalbackground.Incontrast,inbusiness,itwouldbemoreimportantforacandidatetohavesoftskillsandexperienceinthatlineofbusinesssotheycanstepintoapositionwithoutfurthertrainingandbeofimmediatebenefittothecompany.–必須要詳細(xì)解釋的個人觀點(diǎn)段Inconclusion,gettingagoodjobrequiresarelevantbackgroundeitherinexperienceoreducationdependingonthetypeofworkandfield.Peopleshouldmakesuretheyattainthenecessaryskillsordegreesbeforeapplyingforajobinordertobesureofsuccess.–重復(fù)前面的個人觀點(diǎn)discussSomepeoplethinkthatpayingtaxesisenoughtocontributetothesociety.Othersarguethatbeingacitizeninvolvesmoreresponsibilities.DiscussbothviewsandgiveyourPeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutwhetherpayingtaxesistheonlycivicdutytheyshouldtake.Althoughbeingataxpayerhelpsthemtomaketheircontributionsto thesociety,Iwouldarguethattherearemanyothersocialresponsibilitiesforeverymemberofthecommunity.discussSomepeoplethinkthatrobotsareveryimportanttohumans'futuredevelopment,butothersthinkthattheyaredangerousandhavenegativeeffectsonsociety.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.Peoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutwhetherin ligentrobotsarebeneficialtohuman’sfutureorharmfultothesociety.Inmyopinion,whiletheremaybesomeproblemscausedbyusingartificialin ligence,itwillbeincrediblyhelpfulinthefuture.discuss總結(jié)A/B的共同討論點(diǎn)(模板句Somepeoplethinkthatchildrenofbusyparentsshouldbesenttodaycarecentres,whileothersbelievethattheyshouldbecaredforbytheirgrandparents.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.Peoplehavedifferentviewsaboutwhoshouldhelpparentsthataretoobusytotakecareoftheirchildren.Inmyopinion,althoughgrandparentsareabletolookaftertheirgrandchildrenwithsufficientattentionandcare,sendingthemtoakindergartenisawiserdiscuss寫出事實(shí)版—來自題目的事實(shí)或者觀點(diǎn)A和B之間共通的事Somepeoplethink