Unit4 作文訓(xùn)練- 高一英語(yǔ)人教版（2019）必修第一冊(cè)

2019年人教版高一英語(yǔ)必修一unit4作文訓(xùn)練應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作假設(shè)你是來(lái)自美國(guó)的湯姆，你從電視新聞上得知你朋友王林所在的城市發(fā)生了地震。請(qǐng)你給王林寫(xiě)一封信，內(nèi)容包括：1.詢(xún)問(wèn)王林及其家人是否安好；2.得知該地震的影響：6人死亡，500多人受傷，20人失蹤，200多所房子坍塌；3.愿意盡最大努力提供幫助。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右(信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearWangLin，Yourssincerely，Tom概要寫(xiě)作[寫(xiě)作方法]1.定位——查找核心信息通過(guò)閱讀定位語(yǔ)篇的核心信息，包括核心單詞，核心短語(yǔ)和核心句子。(句子為主，以單詞和短語(yǔ)為輔)2.改寫(xiě)——用自己的語(yǔ)言改寫(xiě)信息在核心信息的基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行語(yǔ)言表達(dá)形式的改寫(xiě)，對(duì)原文的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)形式盡可能實(shí)現(xiàn)大規(guī)模的改變。改寫(xiě)過(guò)程中，原則上字?jǐn)?shù)不超過(guò)原句，不改變?cè)牡倪壿嫿Y(jié)構(gòu)，充分考慮語(yǔ)句壓縮。3.核查——添加關(guān)聯(lián)詞，檢查句子的連貫性核查句子的連貫性。核查標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)法、連接詞及字?jǐn)?shù)，優(yōu)先考慮使用較短的連接詞，如：but，then，later等。【實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練】[典例示范]閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。We’vereachedastrange—somewouldsayunusual—point.WhilefightingworldhungercontinuestobethematterofvitalimportanceaccordingtoarecentreportfromtheWorldHealthOrganization(WHO)，morepeoplenowdiefrombeingoverweightthanfrombeingunderweight.It’sthegoodlifethat’smorelikelytokillusthesedays.Worse，nearly18millionchildrenundertheageoffivearoundtheworldareestimatedtobeoverweight.What’sgoingon?Wereallydon’thavemanyexcusesforourweightproblems.Thedangersoftheproblemhavebeendrilledintousbypublic-healthcampaignssince2001andthemessageisgettingthrough—uptoapoint.Inthe1970s，F(xiàn)inland，forexample，hadthehighestrateofheartdiseaseintheworldandbeingoverweightwasitsmaincause.Notanymore.Apublic-healthcampaignhasgreatlyreducedthenumberofheartdiseasedeathsby80percentoverthepastthreedecades.MaybethatexplainswhythepercentageofpeopleinFinlandtakingdietpillsdoubledbetween2001and2005，anddoctorsevenoffersurgeryofremovingfatinsideandchangetheshapeofthebody.Nowonderitranksastheworld’smostbody-consciouscountry.Weknowwhatweshouldbedoingtoloseweight—butactuallydoingitisanothermatter.Byfarthemostpopularexcuseisnottakingenoughexercise.Morethanhalfofusadmitwelackwillpower.Othersblamegoodfood.Theysay：it’sjusttooinvitinganditmakesthemovereat.Somealsoblametheirparents—theirgenes.Butunfortunately，theparentsarewrongedbecausethey’renormalinshape，orratherslim.It’sasimilarstoryaroundtheworld，althoughpeoplearerelativelyunlikelytohavetriedtoloseweight.Parentsareeagertoseetheirkidsshapeup.DoasIsay—notasIdo.[解題思路]第一步：定位Part1：1.Morepeoplenow______________________________________thanfrombeingunderweight.2.It’sthe_______________________that’smorelikelyto_______________________thesedays.Part2：3.The_______________________oftheproblemhavebeendrilledintousby_______________________.4.InFinland，apublic-healthcampaignhasgreatly_______________________thenumberof_______________________deathsby80percentoverthepastthreedecades.Part3：5.MaybethatexplainswhythepercentageofpeopleinFinland_______________________doubledbetween2001and2005.6.Weknow______________________________________________—butactuallydoingitisanothermatter.Part4：7.Others_______________________goodfood.8.It’sasimilarstoryaroundtheworld，althoughpeoplearerelatively______________________________________________第二步：改寫(xiě)1.要點(diǎn)1和2合并：Goodlifeismorelikelytokillusandmorepeoplenowdiefrombeingoverweight.改寫(xiě)：Goodlifebecomes_______________________andmorepeoplenowdiefrombeingoverweight.2.要點(diǎn)3和4合并：Peoplehavegraduallyrealizedthedangersofbeingoverweightthroughpublic-healthcampaignssince2001andthenumberofheartdiseasedeathshasbeengreatlyreducedinFinland.改寫(xiě)：Since2001peoplehavegradually_______________________thedangersofbeingoverweightthroughpublic-healthcampaignsandpeople_______________________heartdiseasehasdroppedinFinland.3.要點(diǎn)5和6合并：_____________________________________________________________________改寫(xiě)：Manypeople______________________________________________4.要點(diǎn)7和8合并：_____________________________________________________________________改寫(xiě)：_____________________________________________________________________第三步：核查_(kāi)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【練一練】第二節(jié)概要寫(xiě)作(滿(mǎn)分25分)閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Howmanyofuscouldgoaweekwithoutourcellphone？Doyouevenbothertomemorizephonenumbersanymore？Technologyhasmadelifesoconvenientforus.However，wehavetofacefacts：Technologyhasmadeuslazyanddependent.What’sthepointofgettingup，takingashower，gettingdressed，anddrivingtothemovieswhenyoucanjustsitonthecouchandfireupNetflix?We’veallbeentherebefore.You’reonthefenceaboutwhetherornotyouwanttogetoutanddosomething，butthensomethingcomesoveryou.YoustartlookingaroundatyourPS3andlaptop，thenrealizeyoucanhavejustasmuchfunstayinginthehouse.Isitevenpossibletogetlostanymore?Igetthefeelingthatwe’regettingcloserandclosertothedaywhenpeoplewon’tevenbeabletoreadpapermapsanymore.Therearealreadyalotofyoungadultsthathavenoideahowtonavigate(導(dǎo)航)throughtheirowncitieswithoutusingaGPS.BeingabletoprintoutcompleteturnbyturndirectionsforwhereyouneedtogoonMapQuestprettymuchkilledtheneedforamap.WehaveallGoogledsomethingthatwewerecompletelyembarrassedwedidn’tknowtheanswerto.AccordingtoGoogle，“Howtotieatie”getsover500，000searchesamonth.Exactly，aquicksearchonGooglewillbringupinstructionalYouTubevideos，blogposts，andPDF’sthatshowyouhowtodoanything.Somuchforbeingselfsufficient.Runningerrands(跑腿)usedtotakeupentireSaturdaymornings.Bythetimeyougothome，youweretiredandjustwantedtorelax.WellthankstoonlineshoppingandserviceslikePeapod，runningyourownerrandsisathingofthepast.I’mdefinitelypartoftheproblemherebecauseIloveonlineshopping.ButIcanadmitthatithasmademesomewhatlazy.【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】文章話(huà)題：現(xiàn)代技術(shù)讓我們變得懶惰和依賴(lài)文章結(jié)構(gòu)：總——分要點(diǎn)可能用到的詞匯和句型1.無(wú)須離開(kāi)家就可以?shī)蕵?lè)thereisnoneedto...；leavethehouse；forentertainment2.無(wú)論到哪里我們都用到GPSwithouttheaidof...3.谷歌是我們學(xué)習(xí)的家園moreover；behometo；seemto4.網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物讓生活更加便利shoppingonthenet；getaroundexhaustedly_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________應(yīng)用文【參考范文】DearWangLin，Howareyoudoing？WhenIwatchedthenewsonTV，Ilearnedthataterribleearthquakehappenedinyourcity.Iwasreallyconcernedaboutyouandyourfamily.I’msosorrytohearaboutthedisaster.Itcausedsixdeathsandleftmorethanfivehundredpersonsinjured.What’sworse，20personsweremissingandovertwohundredhousesfelldown.Ihopethatnoneofyourfamilymemberswasinjured.Pleasedon’tbeworried.Everythingwillbefine.Ifyouneedanyhelp，pleaseletmeknow.Asoneofyourbestfriends，IwilldowhatIcantohelpyou.Yourssincerely，Tom【實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練】第一步：定位Part1：1.Morepeoplenowdiefrombeingoverweightthanfrombeingunderweight.2.It’sthegoodlifethat’smorelikelytokillusthesedays.Part2：3.Thedangersoftheproblemhavebeendrilledintousbypublic-healthcampaignssince2001.4.InFinland，apublic-healthcampaignhasgreatlyreducedthenumberofheartdiseasedeathsby80percentoverthepastthreedecades.Part3：5.MaybethatexplainswhythepercentageofpeopleinFinlandtakingdietpillsdoubledbetween2001and2005.6.Weknowwhatweshouldbedoingtoloseweight—butactuallydoingitisanothermatter.Part4：7.Othersblamegoodfood.8.It’sasimilarstoryaroundtheworld，althoughpeoplearerelativelyunlikelytohavetriedtoloseweight.第二步：改寫(xiě)1.要點(diǎn)1和2合并：Goodlifeismorelikelytokillusandmorepeoplenowdiefrombeingoverweight.改寫(xiě)：Goodlifebecomesthekillerofourhealthandmorepeoplenowdiefrombeingoverweight.2.要點(diǎn)3和4合并：Peoplehavegraduallyrealizedthedangersofbeingoverweightthroughpublic-healthcampaignssince2001andthenumberofheartdiseasedeathshasbeengreatlyreducedinFinland.改寫(xiě)：Since2001peoplehavegraduallybecomeawareofthedangersofbeingoverweightthroughpublic-healthcampaignsandpeopledyingofheartdiseasehasdroppedinFinland.3.要點(diǎn)5和6合并：Manypeopletookdietpillstoloseweightthoughweknowwhatweshouldbedoingtoloseweight.改寫(xiě)：Manypeopletooksomene