2020版新高考英語(yǔ)二輪提分教程文檔：寫(xiě)作部分專(zhuān)題二考點(diǎn)通關(guān)第1講

---專(zhuān)題二考點(diǎn)通關(guān)第1講？應(yīng)用文一 電子郵件寫(xiě)作點(diǎn)撥V英文電子郵件與英文書(shū)信的寫(xiě)法和格式大體相同，但也有不同之處。英文電子郵件一般由以下五部分組成：.標(biāo)題欄這是英文書(shū)信中沒(méi)有的。標(biāo)題欄中有“收件人”“抄送”和“主題”三個(gè)框。在“收件人”框中填寫(xiě)收件人的電子郵件地址。如要將郵件同時(shí)發(fā)送給多人，可在“抄送”框中填入其他人的電子郵件地址。在“主題”框中簡(jiǎn)要地概括郵件的內(nèi)容，可以用一個(gè)單詞，如 Greetings(問(wèn)候)，也可以用短語(yǔ)，如Personalinformation(個(gè)人情況)，還可以是一個(gè)內(nèi)容完整但語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)短的句子。.稱(chēng)呼語(yǔ)如果是同學(xué)或親朋好友間的郵件，可以直呼其名，如Mike；但如果是發(fā)給老師、長(zhǎng)輩或上級(jí)，最好在稱(chēng)呼前加上稱(chēng)謂或職位。職位可用Doctor,Professor等，如ProfessorLi。男性用Mr;女性用Miss(未婚)，Mrs(已婚)，Ms(不知婚否)。.正文大多數(shù)電子郵件篇幅短小，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)單明了。如果是寫(xiě)給不熟悉的人，一般要先進(jìn)行自我介紹；反之，則可直接進(jìn)入正題。要多使用短句、簡(jiǎn)單句，少用或不用長(zhǎng)句。一是便于閱讀，再者使意思清楚。如果內(nèi)容很長(zhǎng)，可就重點(diǎn)部分做些介紹，而把詳細(xì)內(nèi)容以“附件”的形式發(fā)出。.結(jié)尾客套語(yǔ)英文書(shū)信的信尾客套語(yǔ)常用“Bestwishes!”“Goodlucktoyou!”等，而電子郵件通常很簡(jiǎn)明，如Best,Thanks,Your舜。.落款直接寫(xiě)發(fā)件人的姓名即可，且與客套語(yǔ)對(duì)齊。葡句模板.段首常用語(yǔ)(1)ThankyouforyourletterofDec.15th…(2)I'mglad/pleasedtotellyouthat...(3)Iamverygladtohavereceivedtheletteryousentmetwoweeksago.(4)ThanksforyourinvitationtotheChristmasparty.(5)Howareyougettingalongwithyourstudy?2.話(huà)題引入常用語(yǔ)(1)I'mgladtotellyousomethingabout...(2)AsfarasIknow/amconcerned/cansee...3.段尾常用語(yǔ)(1)Pleasewritetomesoonandtellmeaboutyour...(2)I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.(3)Withkind/bestregards/wishes.(4)Apromptreplywouldbegreatlyappreciated.4.電子郵件格式樣例Tozjhta@163,netFrom：/汕163.netSubject：anEnglishspeechconiesiHhJina+Ilowarcyougoingrecently?AnEnglishspeechcontestwillbrheldinourschoolat3：30pmonOct.10th.YouarcgoodalEnglishandyouhavegreatabilitytoexpressyourselfinEnglish,Soyoushouldtakeanactivepartinthecontest,Iathsureyouwillwintheawardifyoumakesonicpreparationsbeforethecontest.Although1don'tdowellinEnglish-IdliketojoininandHiveatry.Pleasecontactmeassoonaspossible.YourstLiHua輔助式V假定你是李華，正在教你的英國(guó)朋友 Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)封郵件告知下次上課的計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容包括：.時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；.內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩(shī)；.課前準(zhǔn)備：簡(jiǎn)要了解唐朝的歷史。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。［審題謀篇通思路］本題要求考生以李華的身份寫(xiě)一封電子郵件告知正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的英國(guó)朋友Leslie下次上課的計(jì)劃?？煞譃槿蝸?lái)寫(xiě)：第一段：表達(dá)問(wèn)候，說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信的目的——詳細(xì)告訴一些事情。第二段：介紹下次上課的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；內(nèi)容是學(xué)習(xí)唐詩(shī)；需要做的課前準(zhǔn)備是簡(jiǎn)要了解唐朝的歷史。第三段：希望早點(diǎn)收到回復(fù)。［修訂提升爭(zhēng)高分］DearLeslie,Howiseverythinggettingalongwithyou?I'mwritingtotellyousomethingindetail.Tostartwith,IintendtostressthatwearegoingtostartournextlessoninClassroom8oftheTeachingBuildingat10amnextFriday用what弓I導(dǎo)的名詞性從 句 改 寫(xiě)：1.Tostartwith,whatIintendtostressisthatwearegoingtostartournextlessonJnClassroom_8_oftheTeachingBuilding__at_10_amnextFriday.舞力口過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)：2.What'smoreBesides/Inaddition/Moreover),inordertohavemuchknowledgeofChineseculture,itisofimportanceforyoutobeawareofthecontent,Tangpoetry.ThereisnodoubtthatyouaresupposedtoknowaboutthehistoryoftheTangDynastyinadvanceanditwillmaketheclassgosmooth咽含which弓I導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句的復(fù)合句改寫(xiě)：3.There_is_no_doubt_that_you_are_supposed_toknowabout_thehistory_of_the_TangDynastyjn_advance,whichwill_maketheclassgosmoothly.)I'dappreciateitifyoucouldreplytomyletteratyourearliestconvenience.Yours,LiHua應(yīng)用文二建議信

官作點(diǎn)撥建議信是寫(xiě)信人向收信人對(duì)某事提出的建議和忠告。建議信可以是寫(xiě)給個(gè)人，也可以是寫(xiě)給某個(gè)組織或機(jī)構(gòu)。信的內(nèi)容要包括寫(xiě)信的原因、建議的內(nèi)容、提出建議的理由。建議信要寫(xiě)得簡(jiǎn)明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說(shuō)服力。具體寫(xiě)作步驟一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly,secondly,thirdly或tobegin/startwith,then,later,lastbutnotleas侍依次陳述建議，具體為：第一段：表明寫(xiě)作意圖。陳述事由，簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己，注意語(yǔ)氣。第二段：應(yīng)該首先肯定對(duì)方的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后指出需要改進(jìn)的地方或針對(duì)具體情況提出具體的建議或忠告。注意千萬(wàn)不要讓對(duì)方認(rèn)為是在投訴，而不是在提建議。第三段：對(duì)提出的建議進(jìn)行總結(jié)。要注意有禮貌，使對(duì)方容易接受。畫(huà)句模板1 71.段首常用語(yǔ)(1)Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...(2)Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions..表達(dá)建議常用語(yǔ)(1)Ithinkthemostsuitable...foryouis...(2)Iwouldliketosuggestthat...(3)You'dbetter.../It'sbetterto...(4)AsfarasIamconcerned.../Inmyopinion...(5)Foronething...;foranother...(6)IfIwereyou,Iwould...(7)Itseemstomethatyoucould段尾常用語(yǔ)(1)Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...(2)Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.(3)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.(4)Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.(5)Iwillbereadytodiscussthismatterinfurtherdetail..建議信格式模板Dear Iam.Yoursuggestionsonare.Asisknowntoall,.MysuggestionsareasfollowsFirstly,.(Peoplecan.)Secondly,.(Tomakeeconomicprofits,.)Thirdly,.(Manyofthem.)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoufurther./Yourkindconsiderationofmysuggestionswillbehighlyappreciated.Goodluckwithyour.Yourssincerely,LiMing輔助練7假定你是李華，你的好友王芳喜歡打排球，但老師和家長(zhǎng)都極力勸她放棄打排球，全身心投入高考。為此，她非常糾結(jié)和郁悶。請(qǐng)你給她寫(xiě)一封建議信，幫她解決這個(gè)困擾。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。［審題謀篇通思路］本文要求考生以李華的身份給好友王芳寫(xiě)信，幫助她解決關(guān)于“是否放棄打排球”的困擾?？煞譃槿蝸?lái)寫(xiě)：第一段：表示聽(tīng)到王芳的麻煩感到難過(guò)，表明自己很樂(lè)意給對(duì)方提出建議。第二段：提出三條建議：（1）理解老師和家長(zhǎng)；（2）減少打排球的時(shí)間而不是徹底放棄；（3）合理安排時(shí)間，找到學(xué)習(xí)和愛(ài)好之間的平衡。第三段：表達(dá)祝愿。［修訂提升爭(zhēng)高分］DearWangFangIamsorrytohearthatyouaretroubledbysomething.Youarefacedwithaproblem.AndIamgladtogiveyousomeadviceonit.（用定語(yǔ)從句合并為何：1.AndIamgladtogiveyousomeadvice_on_theproblem（that/which）_you_are_faced_with.）Asyousaid,yourteachersandparentssuggestyougiveupplayingvolleyballsothatyou'llhavemoretimepreparingfortheCollegeEntranceExamination.（添力口過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)：2.First/First_of_all）,youshouldunderstandyourteachersandparents,whojustwantthebestforyou.Second,Ithinkyoushouldreducethetimespentplayingvolleyballinsteadofgivingitup.Third,youshouldarrangeyourtimeproperly.Aslongasyoucankeepabalancebetweenyourstudyandhobby,yourteachersandparentswillsurelynobeagainst（用高級(jí)詞匯替換：3.object_to）it.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua應(yīng)用文三申請(qǐng)信官作點(diǎn)撥V申請(qǐng)信有很多種，有求職申請(qǐng)信、加入某組織的申請(qǐng)信、報(bào)考申請(qǐng)信、學(xué)位申請(qǐng)信或留學(xué)申請(qǐng)信等。寫(xiě)申請(qǐng)信時(shí)要注意言簡(jiǎn)意賅，語(yǔ)氣誠(chéng)懇禮貌，要避免浮夸。如果是留學(xué)申請(qǐng)或獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金申請(qǐng)，要注意提供以下信息：寫(xiě)明申請(qǐng)學(xué)校和專(zhuān)業(yè)，介紹個(gè)人履歷，索取對(duì)方學(xué)校相關(guān)信息，附上個(gè)人經(jīng)歷等材料。申請(qǐng)信一般都包括以下幾個(gè)部分：申請(qǐng)的原因，具備的條件，懇請(qǐng)所申請(qǐng)單位考慮自己的申請(qǐng)并表示謝意，期望回復(fù)。具體為：第一段：說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信的目的，介紹自己的身份，對(duì)所申請(qǐng)職位或?qū)W位的單位或院校的了解以及自己將會(huì)為對(duì)方所作的貢獻(xiàn)，信息的來(lái)源等，這一段要寫(xiě)得簡(jiǎn)短而又能吸引收信人的注意力。第二段：介紹自己的學(xué)歷或工作經(jīng)歷，本人的個(gè)性，已經(jīng)取得的成績(jī)，說(shuō)明為何對(duì)這一職位或?qū)W校感興趣以及對(duì)未來(lái)的打算等。第三段：表示感謝和期待對(duì)方優(yōu)先考慮自己的申請(qǐng)，以求得面試等機(jī)會(huì)。這段尤其要注意語(yǔ)氣應(yīng)禮貌、自信。有句模板V1.說(shuō)明應(yīng)聘原因常用語(yǔ)(1)Ilearnedfromsb./thenewspaperthatyourcompanywantedtohire...(2)Iwastoldthat...(3)Ihavejustreadinthenewspaperthat...(4)Iamwritingtoinquireopportunitiesfor介紹個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷和優(yōu)勢(shì)常用語(yǔ)(1)NowI'dliketointroducemyselftoyou.(2)Mynameis....I'm...yearsold.I'm...cmtall.(3)Igraduatedfrom...Universityin2003.(4)Ilikeswimming,singinganddancinginmysparetime.(5)IworkhardandIcangetalong/onwellwithothers.(6)I'mgoodatEnglishandmyspokenEnglishisfairlygood.⑺IcanunderstandJapaneseandIcantalktoforeignersinJapanesefreely.(8)Iamcurrentlystudying...(9)Iwouldbeinterestedin...(10)Mymainspecialtyis表示感謝，表達(dá)決心，請(qǐng)求答復(fù)并提供聯(lián)系方式常用語(yǔ)(1)Thankyouverymuch.(2)Thankyouforyourconsiderationofmyapplication.(3)Ifyouagreewithme,I'llworkhardandtrytobea(n)…(4)Iamavailableforaninterview...(5)Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou.(6)Ifyouagreewithme,pleasewritealettertomeorphoneme.Iliveat...⑺Mytelephonenumberis申請(qǐng)信格式模板DearSir/Madam,Iamwritingthislettertoapplyforthepositionthatyouhaveadvertisedin(K紙名稱(chēng))of(T告發(fā)布時(shí)間).Iamfrom.Asa(n),Ihavebeen.Besides,Iwonin.Ifyouconsidermeanappropriatecandidateforthejob,pleasecallmeat.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldgivemeanearlyreply./Thankyouforconsideringmyapplication,andIamlookingforwardtomeetingyou.Yourssincerely,LiMing

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7假定你是李華，請(qǐng)用英文寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信，中請(qǐng)作為“志愿家庭”接待來(lái)你校交換學(xué)習(xí)的英國(guó)中學(xué)生Johnson,內(nèi)容包括：.自我介紹；.家庭條件及個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)；.安排英國(guó)朋友參加的活動(dòng)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：接待家庭hostfamily［審題謀篇通思路］本題要求考生以李華的身份申請(qǐng)作為“志愿家庭”接待來(lái)你校交換學(xué)習(xí)的英國(guó)中學(xué)生Johnson可分為三段來(lái)寫(xiě)：第一段：表達(dá)自己申請(qǐng)成為“志愿家庭”的愿望。第二段：介紹自己家所具備的條件，如父母友好、家的位置便利、自己英語(yǔ)好、便于交流等。第三段：再次表達(dá)自己的申請(qǐng)?jiān)竿?，懇?qǐng)對(duì)方考慮自己的申請(qǐng)并表示感謝。［修訂提升爭(zhēng)高分］DearSir/Madam,Isincerelyhopemyfamilycanhavethehonortobeahostfamily.Myparentsarecaringandfriendly.Ourhomeisnexttothecitycenter,soeasyshoppingaccessandconvenienttransportationareavailable.(改寫(xiě)為定語(yǔ)從句：1.OurhomeJs_next_to_the_dtycenterwhereeasyshoppingaccess_andconvenienttransportationareavailable.)WecanofferoneseparateroomforthestudenthaveagoodcommandofEnglish.Itmakesitpossibleformetocommunicatewithforeignersfreelyindailylife.(合并為一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句：2.Mygoodcommand_of_English_makesJtpossible_for_me_tocommunicate_withforeignersfreely_in_daily_life.)SoIamconvincedthatIwillbeaqualifiedhost.Ifgiventhechance,I'llinviteourguesttojoininmyfamilyget-together.Besides,wecanshowhimaroundthecityandgethimtoknowmoreaboutthereallifeandcultureofChina^為含有現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)的句子：3.Besides,we_canshowhimaroundthecity,gettinghim_toknowmoreaboutthe_real_life_andculture_inChina.)Inaword,I'meagertoprovideanimpressivetripfortheforeignfriend.Ihopeyoucantakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Thankyouinadvance.Yourssincerely,LiHua應(yīng)用文四邀請(qǐng)信寫(xiě)作點(diǎn)撥V邀請(qǐng)信是寫(xiě)信人對(duì)收信人的一種盛情邀約，一般分為正式和非正式兩種，格式與其他信函相同。具體寫(xiě)作步驟如下：第一段：說(shuō)明寫(xiě)作意圖。第二段：具體交代情景，包括受邀請(qǐng)的人、邀請(qǐng)收信人要做什么、地點(diǎn)以及具體的時(shí)間等內(nèi)容，并且強(qiáng)調(diào)受邀人參加的理由。第三段：表示期待收信人的回復(fù)。麗句模板V1.段首常用語(yǔ)(1)Iamwritingtoinviteyouto...(2)Ithinkitwouldbeagreatideaifyoucouldparticipatein...(3)Iwonderifyoucancome...(4)Howwouldyouliketojoinusin…？2.段尾常用語(yǔ)(1)Wouldyoupleasedropmealinetoletmeknowifyoucancometo…？(2)MyfamilyandIwouldfeelveryhonouredifyoucouldcome.(3)Wewouldbelookingforwardtoyourcomingwithgreatpleasure.(4)Iwouldliketomeetyouthereandpleaseletmeknowyourdecisionsoon.3.邀請(qǐng)信格式模板Dear Howiseverythingwithyou?Iamwritingtotellyouthattherewillbea(n)(內(nèi)容)at/in(地點(diǎn))on。寸間).Wewouldbehonouredtohaveyoutherewithus.Theoccasionwillstartat(具體時(shí)間).Thiswillbefollowedbya(n)0一步的安排).Ataround時(shí)間),(另一個(gè)安排).Ringmeupandtellmewhetheryouwillcomeornot,willyou?Ireallyhopeyoucanmakeit.Myphonenumberis.Lookingforwardto.Yourssincerely,LiMing輔助練7假定你是李華，想邀請(qǐng)外教Henry一起參觀中國(guó)剪紙(paper—cutting)藝術(shù)展。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：.展覽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；.展覽內(nèi)容。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。［審題謀篇通思路］本題要求考生以李華的身份邀請(qǐng)外教 Henry來(lái)看中國(guó)剪紙展覽?？煞譃樗亩危旱谝欢危航榻B寫(xiě)信的目的一一邀請(qǐng)外教Henry來(lái)看中國(guó)的剪紙藝術(shù)展。第二段：介紹這次展覽的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和內(nèi)容。第三段：請(qǐng)收信人對(duì)發(fā)出的邀請(qǐng)做出反饋 一一如果感興趣，請(qǐng)給我發(fā)郵件。第四段：表示期盼。［修訂提升爭(zhēng)高分］DearHenry,I'mLiHua.I'mwritingtoinviteyoutoseetheChinesepaper-cuttingexhibition.ItisaChinesefolkartwithalonghistory.TheexhibitionwillbeheldintheCityMuseum,startingfromJune16thandlastingformorethanaweek.Alargenumberofpaper-cutworksbyexpertsthroughoutChinawillbeonshow,andsomeofthemaremadebyfamousartists.(改 為 定語(yǔ)從句 ：.AlargenumberofpapercutworksbyexpertsthroughoutChinawillbe_on_show,some_ofwhicharemade_byfamousartists.)Thepapercutsareabodifferent(用高級(jí)詞匯替換：2.various)things.Whenwevisittheexhibition(用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞改寫(xiě)：3.Visitingtheexhibition),wewillnotonlyenjoythefolkartworks,butalsolearnalot.Ifyou'reinterestedintheChinesefolkart,pleasee-mailme.Wecanvisittheexhibitionanyday.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua應(yīng)用文五求助信宮作點(diǎn)撥V求助信是針對(duì)自己遇到的問(wèn)題，向別人尋求幫助的信件。一般分三部分： (1)開(kāi)頭部分：先進(jìn)行問(wèn)候，然后說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信的目的； (2)主體部分：詳細(xì)說(shuō)明自己所遇到的困難并t#求幫助；(3)結(jié)尾部分：表示感謝和期盼之情?？淳淠０? V.開(kāi)頭部分常用語(yǔ)(1)Mynameis...I'mwritingtoaskforsomehelp.(2)IhavemetmuchdifficultyinlearningEnglish.(3)Facedwithsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoturntoyouforhelp.(4)Iwonderwhether/ifyoucoulddomeafavor...(5)Inthemeanwhile/Atthesametime,Ibegyouto...sothat...Also,Iwouldlikeyouto...(6)Iwouldlikeyoutointroducesomegoodwaystolearngrammar..結(jié)尾部分常用語(yǔ)(1)I'msurewithyourhelpIcanmakegreatprogress.(2)Iwillappreciateanyofyourhelp..求助信格式模板Dear Mynameis（自我介紹）.I'mwritingtoyoutoaskforsomehelp.Ihavemetmuchdifficultyin（求助內(nèi)容）.First,Ifind（困難1）.Besides,（困又t2）.What'smore,困又t3）.Facedwithsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoturntoyouforsomehelp.Wouldyouliketo倭婉提出請(qǐng)求1）?Inthemeanwhile,Ibegyouto請(qǐng)求內(nèi)容2）sothat（青求目的）.Also,Iwouldlikeyouto（請(qǐng)求內(nèi)容3）.I'msurethatIcanmakegreatprogressing（達(dá)期待）.Yourssincerely,LiHua輔助練7假定你是高中生李華，你們學(xué)校要在三月十日舉辦英語(yǔ)配音比賽 （dubbingcontest）,你想?yún)①?，但是不知道該選什么電影。你給筆友Peter寫(xiě)封郵件，請(qǐng)他推薦。比賽要求：.主題是關(guān)于友誼；.時(shí)間限定在4到5分鐘；.每個(gè)節(jié)目最多6個(gè)角色。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。［審題謀篇通思路］本題要求考生以李華的身份向Peter寫(xiě)信求助，想?yún)⒓优湟舯荣?，卻不知該選什么電影。所以請(qǐng)Peter推薦合適的電影。正文可分為三段來(lái)寫(xiě)：第一段：?jiǎn)柡驅(qū)Ψ讲⒔淮鷮?xiě)信的目的——求助。第二段：說(shuō)明自己遇到的具體困難一一想?yún)⒓优湟舯荣悾遣恢肋x擇哪部電影合適，所以求推薦。第三段：表示感謝和期盼之情。［修訂提升爭(zhēng)高分］DearPeterHowiseverythinggoing?Iamwritingtoyou,hopingtoseekhelp.（用inthehopeof改寫(xiě)：1.I_am_writingtoyoujntbehope_ofseekinghelp.）OurschoolwillholdanEnglishdubbingcontestonMarch10th.Iameagertohaveatry.However,Idon'tknowwhichfilmissuitable.(改寫(xiě)為并歹U句：2.IameagertohaveatrybutIdon'tknowwhichfilmissuitable.)Asamoviefan,wouldyoubesokindastogivemesomerecommendations?Accordingtotherequirements,thethemeshouldbeaboutfriendship.Andeachvideomaylast4to5minutes.傣加過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)：3.What'smoreHnaddition/Moreover/Besides),thereshouldnotbemorethansixcharactersineachvideo.Iwouldreallyappreciateitifyoucoulddomethefavor.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua應(yīng)用文六道歉信寫(xiě)作點(diǎn)撥1-5 7道歉信通常是在因自己的過(guò)失或疏忽給別人帶來(lái)了麻煩或損失并發(fā)覺(jué)的情況下，為了向?qū)Ψ奖硎厩敢舛鴮?xiě)的信件。具體寫(xiě)作結(jié)構(gòu)如下：第一部分：表明寫(xiě)作意圖，對(duì)某事表示歉意。第二部分：說(shuō)明道歉的具體原因并做出解釋。第三部分：再次表明歉意，請(qǐng)求諒解，并提出彌補(bǔ)措施。有句模板1 V1.開(kāi)頭部分常用語(yǔ)(1)Iamwritingthislettertoapologizetoyoufor...(2)Iwouldliketoexpressmydeepestapology/regretfornotbeingableto/myfailingto...(3)Irememberweplannedto...butnowbecause...Icannot...withyouasplanned.(4)Imustapologizeforanyinconvenienceitmayhavecausedyou.(5)Iamverysorryformynotbeingableto...duetothefactthat...(6)IregrettoinformyouthatIcannot/amunableto...⑺Imustmakeasincereandhumbleapologytoyoufor結(jié)尾部分常用語(yǔ)(1)Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.(2)Willyoupleaseacceptmyapology?(3)Withapologiesonceagain./Withmanyapologies.(4)Pleaseacceptmysincereapologyfor...oncemore.(5)Isincerelyhopethatyouwillkindlyacceptmyapologies..道歉信格式模板Dear Iamterriblysorrytotellyouthat（陳述需道歉的事由）.NowIamwritingyouthisletterofapologytoshowmydeepregret.Ihopeyouwillunderstandmeandexcusemefor（請(qǐng)求對(duì)方原諒的事由）.Thereasonformydelay/absencewas/isthat（解釋過(guò)失的原因）.Thereforeit'snotinmypowerto（S失導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果）.Isincerelyhopethatyoucanacceptmyapologyandunderstandit.Iwouldappreciateyourallowingmeto（提出彌補(bǔ)措施）.Onceagain,I'msorryforanyinconveniencecausedbyme.Yourssincerely,LiHua輔助練7假定你是李華，與留學(xué)生朋友 Bob約好一起去書(shū)店，因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：.表示歉意；.說(shuō)明原因；.另約時(shí)間。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。［審題謀篇通思路］本題要求考生以李華的身份寫(xiě)一封因?yàn)椴荒馨磿r(shí)赴約而向朋友 Bob表示道歉的郵件，可分為三段來(lái)寫(xiě)：第一段：表達(dá)問(wèn)候，然后說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信的原因——為不能和朋友一起去書(shū)店而道歉。第二段：解釋不能去的原因 忙于準(zhǔn)備即將到來(lái)的期末考試。第三段：再次希望對(duì)方接受自己的道歉，并提出另約時(shí)間的建議 （用商量的語(yǔ)氣提出）。［修訂提升爭(zhēng)高分］DearBob,Howiseverythinggoing?I'mwritingtoexpressmyregretforbeingunabletogotothebookstorewithyounextweekend.(用for弓I導(dǎo)的并列句改寫(xiě):1.1'mwritingtoexpressmyregret,forIwon'tbeabletogotothebookstorewithyounextweekend.)Ifeelterriblysorryaboutitandwantyoutoknowwhathappened.Myfinalexamwillbeheldintwoweeksanditmakesmeworried.(用what弓I導(dǎo)的名詞性從句改寫(xiě)：2.Whatmakes_meworried_is_myfinalexamwhich/thatwillbe_held_in_two_weeks.)SoIhavetomakepreparationsforitatthattime.IappreciatethatyouunderstandtheimportanceoftheexamandImusttrymybest(用高級(jí)詞？匚替換：3.spare_noeffort)todowellinmyfinalexamifpossible.Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation.Couldwemakeanotherappointmenttogotothebookstoretogether?PleaseletmeknowwhattimeisOKforyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua應(yīng)用文七投訴信寫(xiě)作點(diǎn)撥V在生活中，人們經(jīng)常會(huì)遇到一些令人煩心的事情，比如消費(fèi)權(quán)益受損、正常生活和工作受到干擾等，此時(shí)寫(xiě)投訴信不失為一個(gè)解決問(wèn)題的辦法。投訴信通常包括以下幾個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容：說(shuō)明投訴的原因并表示遺憾；實(shí)事求是地闡述問(wèn)題發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò)，切記不要夸大其詞；指出問(wèn)題引起的后果；提出批評(píng)及處理的建議或敦促對(duì)方采取措施，或者提出期望的賠償以及補(bǔ)救方式。組織提綱時(shí)要遵循“三步走”的寫(xiě)作規(guī)律：第一段：表明來(lái)信所要投訴的問(wèn)題，盡可能做到客觀、禮貌，給讀信人留下好印象。應(yīng)該記住讀信人不一定就是犯錯(cuò)誤的責(zé)任人，他的合作對(duì)事情的最終圓滿(mǎn)解決有著非常重要的作用。第二段：寫(xiě)明投訴的原因、問(wèn)題的經(jīng)過(guò)及產(chǎn)生的后果?？梢哉f(shuō)具體的理由，也可以說(shuō)問(wèn)題的具體體現(xiàn)方式。第三段：提出解決方案，不需展開(kāi)。這段應(yīng)體現(xiàn)書(shū)信的禮貌原則，可以用類(lèi)似“如果你能……，我將十分感激”這樣的表達(dá)方式，還要注意做到客觀、公正。藺句模板］V.段首常用語(yǔ)(1)Iamwritingtomakeacomplaintabout...(2)Iammostreluctanttocomplain,but...(3)Oneannoyingaspectofyourserviceis...(4)Ihavebeenpleasedwithyourserviceforyears,butnowIfeelverydisappointed.(5)Iwouldliketodrawyourattentiontotheproblem/fault...(6)IamwritingtoinformyouthatIfind...unsatisfactory.⑺Iwishtoexpressmydissatisfaction/disappointmentabout段尾常用語(yǔ)(1)Itwouldbehighlyappreciatedifyoucould...(2)Ibelieveyouwilltakemycomplaintsseriouslyand...(3)Ihopeyouwillgivedueattentiontothismatter.(4)Iwouldliketogetthismattersettledbytheendofthismonth.(5)Iwouldnotbemoresatisfiedifyoucouldkindly...(6)Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucould投訴信格式模板Dear Iam(自我介紹).IfeelbadtotroubleyoubutIamafraidthatIhavetomakeacomplaintabout投訴的事情).Thereasonformydissatisfactionis(總體介紹).Inthefirstplace,(抱怨的第一個(gè)方面).Inaddition,(抱怨的第二個(gè)方面).Underthesecircumstances,Ifindit(感覺(jué))to(被投訴的事情給自己帶來(lái)的消極影響).Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucould(提出建議和請(qǐng)求),preferably(進(jìn)一步的要求),andIwouldliketohavethismattersettledby(設(shè)定解決事情的最后期限).ThankyouforyourconsiderationandIwillbelookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,輔助練7假設(shè)你是李華，兩周前你從網(wǎng)上訂貝^了一套英語(yǔ)書(shū)蟲(chóng)系列讀物 (BookwormSeries),昨天才收到貨，且包裝破損、數(shù)量不足。請(qǐng)就此向網(wǎng)站客服寫(xiě)封郵件投訴。要點(diǎn)如下：.介紹購(gòu)物情況；.反映存在問(wèn)題；.提出解決方案。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫［審題謀篇通思路］本題要求考生以李華的身份進(jìn)行投訴：從網(wǎng)上買(mǎi)的書(shū)送貨太慢、包裝破損、數(shù)量不足。主體部分可分為三段：第一段：介紹在網(wǎng)上訂購(gòu)一套英語(yǔ)書(shū)蟲(chóng)系列讀物的事實(shí)。第二段：提出存在的問(wèn)題——送貨慢、書(shū)的封面破損、書(shū)的數(shù)量不足。第三段：表達(dá)自己對(duì)這次購(gòu)物的失望，表明自己的訴求 一一要么退錢(qián)，要么郵寄一套新書(shū)給自己。［修訂提升爭(zhēng)高分］DearSir/Madam,I'moneofyourcustomers.IorderedasetofBookwormSeriesonyourwebsitetwoweeksago.However,Ididn'treceivethemuntilyesterday.Andthebooksweresopoorlypackedupthatthecoverofonebookwastorn,whichmademeverydisappointed.(用含有disappointment的句子改寫(xiě)：1.And_much_to_my_disappointment,the_books_were_sopoorlypacked_up_that_thecoverofonebook_was_torn.)( 添加過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)：2.To_makematterswors/Worse_still/What's_worse),itisnotacompleteset,asIfoundonebookmissing.I'msorrytohavereceivedsuchpoorservice,andIbelieveIhaveeveryrighttoaskyoutodealwiththisproblem.Youcanreturnmymoney.Youcanalsodeliveranewsetofbookstome用either...or...改寫(xiě)：3.You_can_either_return_my_moneyordeliveranewsetofbookstome.)Besides,I'dliketobeinformedoftheprocessofyourdealingwithmycomplaint.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua應(yīng)用文八通知寫(xiě)作點(diǎn)撥1 V通知(Notice)是上級(jí)對(duì)下級(jí)、組織對(duì)成員布置工作、傳達(dá)情況或告訴公眾某件事情等時(shí)使用的一種應(yīng)用文體，通常分為口頭通知和書(shū)面通知兩種。.口頭通知是面對(duì)面地把信息傳達(dá)給對(duì)方。這種通知開(kāi)頭應(yīng)有稱(chēng)呼語(yǔ)，正式場(chǎng)合用Ladiesandgentlemen女士們、先生們)，有時(shí)也可以用Boysandgirls或Comradesandfriends回志們、朋友們)等。開(kāi)頭還常有提醒聽(tīng)眾注意的開(kāi)場(chǎng)白，如“Attention,please.或“MayIhaveyourattention,please?”或“Ihaveanannouncementtomake.”等；結(jié)尾常說(shuō) “That'sall.Thankyou.'或“Thankyouforlistening.等；以示禮貌?？陬^通知中不必說(shuō)明發(fā)布通知的日期和發(fā)布通知的人或單位。.寫(xiě)書(shū)面通知時(shí)，應(yīng)明確寫(xiě)出發(fā)出通知的單位和日期。一般情況下，書(shū)面通知的首行中央寫(xiě)上Noticeo通知的發(fā)布單位常寫(xiě)在正文結(jié)束的右下角。 也可以寫(xiě)在Notice的上方或前面，發(fā)布通知的日期一般寫(xiě)在正文的左下角(在落款的下一行)或?qū)懺谕ㄖ牡挠疑辖?在Notice的下一行)?？陬^通知和書(shū)面通知都是宣布即將發(fā)生的事情及其具體內(nèi)容，因而多用將來(lái)時(shí)，一般用祈使句來(lái)強(qiáng)調(diào)。通知的語(yǔ)言要簡(jiǎn)潔明了，條理清晰，準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤，特別是時(shí)間概念很重要，必須寫(xiě)得十分明確，不容絲毫含糊?？淳淠０? V.段首常用語(yǔ)⑴MayIhave/callyourattention,please?(2)Attention,please,everybody!(3)Ihaveanannouncementtomake.(4)Ihavesomethingtotellyou.2.段中常用語(yǔ)(1)Therewillbeatalkthisafternoon.(2)StudentUnionhasdecidedthat...(3)Weshallhavealectureon...(4)Ithasbeendecidedthatwe'llpayavisitto段尾常用語(yǔ)(1)Pleasebethereontimeanddon'tbelate.(2)Ihopeyoucanhaveagoodtime.(3)That'sall.Thankyou..書(shū)面通知格式模板NoticeApril1st,2019Inorderto,istobeheldon(0期)，at(時(shí)間)in(地點(diǎn)).Whoeverisinterestedinitiswelcometoattend.ThosewhowanttotakepartinpleasesignupatStudentUnion.Pleaseremember:.StudentUnion.口頭通知格式模板LadiesandgentlemenYourattention,please.Ihavesomethingtotellyou.具體內(nèi)容： Pleaseremember:Time:Place： Thankyouforlistening.輔助練7為了推廣中國(guó)文化，學(xué)生會(huì)將于2019年6月20日在學(xué)校報(bào)告廳舉辦“中國(guó)詩(shī)詞大會(huì)"(ChinesePoetryConference)請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一則通知告知該校同學(xué)有關(guān)參賽事宜。要點(diǎn)：1.報(bào)名時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；.比賽內(nèi)容：中國(guó)詩(shī)詞，以唐詩(shī)為主；.獎(jiǎng)品：《唐詩(shī)三百首》；.聯(lián)系人及聯(lián)系方式：李華12369@qq.c-o/m。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。［審題謀篇通思路］本題要求通知該校學(xué)生有關(guān)在學(xué)校報(bào)告廳舉辦“中國(guó)詩(shī)詞大會(huì)”的事情?？煞譃槿危旱谝欢危赫f(shuō)明通知的內(nèi)容——我們學(xué)校要舉辦“中國(guó)詩(shī)詞大會(huì)”。第二段：介紹此次活動(dòng)的具體情況：舉行的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)，對(duì)參加者的具體要求。第三段：告知大家聯(lián)系方式。［修訂提升爭(zhēng)高分］NoticeInordertopromoteChineseculture,ourschoolwillholdaChinesePoetryConference.I'dliketoinformyouofsomedetailsaboutit.Asitisscheduled改為省略結(jié)構(gòu)：1.As_scheduled),theconferenceistobeheldintheschoollecturehallat7：00pmonJune20,2019,beforewhichyouaresupposedtogetadequatelyprepared.添力口過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)：2.Therefore),it'sstronglyrecommendedthatyoureciteenoughclassicalpoetriesandfocusonthepoemsoftheTangDynasty.TheappealingprizeThreeHundredTangPoemsiswaitingforyou.Whoeverwantstoparticipate,pleasesignupattheStudentUnionOfficebeforeMarch31.Foranyquestion,pleaseemailLiHuaat12369@.Youaresureto(用高級(jí)詞匯替換：3.areboundto)benefitalotfromit.應(yīng)用文九倡議書(shū)

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V倡議書(shū)是公開(kāi)提倡某種做法，倡導(dǎo)某項(xiàng)活動(dòng)，鼓動(dòng)別人響應(yīng)的一種信函文書(shū)。倡議書(shū)分為個(gè)人倡議書(shū)和集體倡議書(shū)兩種。倡議書(shū)的結(jié)構(gòu)為：標(biāo)題、正文、署名和日期。高考一般只考查正文部分。倡議書(shū)的正文內(nèi)容一般包括三部分：第一部分：正文的開(kāi)頭。簡(jiǎn)明扼要地寫(xiě)出倡議的目的、意義和有關(guān)背景，讓人們懂得“為什么”要去做所倡議的活動(dòng)。只有了解了活動(dòng)的目的、意義，人們才會(huì)自覺(jué)地行動(dòng)起來(lái)。第二部分：正文的主體。寫(xiě)倡議的主要內(nèi)容和具體措施，即寫(xiě)“做什么”和“怎么做”。這是倡議書(shū)的核心部分。這部分最好用條款式分別列出，交代清楚，讓響應(yīng)者有所遵循，清楚要做什么和怎么去做，要寫(xiě)得明確、清晰。第三部分：結(jié)尾。寫(xiě)倡議者的決心和希望。這部分要寫(xiě)得熱情洋溢，富于鼓舞性，最好能提出一個(gè)能概括全文主旨的響亮、有力的口號(hào)，讓響應(yīng)者容易記住倡議的主要內(nèi)容，并受到鼓舞。福句模板V.段首常用語(yǔ)(1)Ithink/suggestweshould...(2)Inmyopinion,wehadbetter...(3)Inorderto...,Iadvise...(4)Itisrequiredthatwe段中常用語(yǔ)(1)I'mcallingforyouractiveparticipationin...(2)Doyoucherishpreciousopportunitiestovolunteerin...?(3)Ithinkweshouldfollowtheadvicebelow.(4)Hereisagreatonenottobemissedbyenthusiasticyouth..段尾常用語(yǔ)(1)It'stimethatwedidsomethingto...(2)Let'sjoinourhandsandtakeactionimmediately.(3)Inmyopinion,weshouldbepoliteandsparenoefforttodosomething...（4）Onlyinthiswaycanwesucceed..倡議書(shū)格式模板Inrecentyears,wehavetofacetheproblem（具體問(wèn)題），whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.Inorderto1!（出倡議目的）.Facedwiththeproblem,weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasures.Ontheonehand,（解決措施一）.Ontheotherhand,（解決措施二）.Moreimportantly,（ff決措施三）.Inmyopinion,I'mconvincedthat（我的解決措施）.Meanwhile,itishightime（號(hào)召人們解決這一問(wèn)題）.Inaword,onlywithoureffortscanweexpectabrilliantfuture.輔助練7越來(lái)越多的汽車(chē)進(jìn)入了我們的家庭，改善了我們的生活，但同時(shí)也帶來(lái)了很多問(wèn)題，如堵車(chē)和車(chē)禍，這給家庭和社會(huì)帶來(lái)了極大的危害。作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢？請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)交通安全的倡議書(shū)。內(nèi)容包括：.遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道/過(guò)斑馬線(xiàn)；.別在街道或馬路上玩耍；.勸父母不要酒后駕車(chē)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：斑馬線(xiàn)zebracrossing［審題謀篇通思路］本題要求考生寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)交通安全的倡議書(shū)?？煞譃槿危旱谝欢危赫f(shuō)明此次倡議的背景一一車(chē)輛的增加帶來(lái)了很多問(wèn)題：交通擁擠和交通事故。第二段：寫(xiě)出倡議的主要內(nèi)容一一遵守交通規(guī)則，不要在公路上玩耍，告訴父母應(yīng)該怎么做等。第三段：再次強(qiáng)調(diào)此次倡議的意義，表達(dá)希望一一交通安全，人人有責(zé)。［修訂提升爭(zhēng)高分］Moreandmorecarsarecomingintoourfamiliesandwearehappythatithasgreatlyimprovedou門(mén)ife.(改為含有with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)的句子：I.Withmoreandmorecarscomingintoourfamilies,ourlifehasbeengreatlyimproved.)Butunluckily,ithasalsobroughtmanyproblems,suchasheavytrafficandtrafficaccidents.Trafficsafetyiseverybody'sbusiness.Wemustobeytherules.Forexample,wemustwalkonthesidewalks.Whenwecrosszebracrossing,wemuststop,lookbothways,andthengoacrosstheroadfast.Don'tplayontheroad.Wecanremindourparentsnottodrivedrunk,nottorunthroughredlights,andnottotalkandlaughwhiletheyaredriving(改為省略結(jié)構(gòu)：2.whiledriving).Carsareanimportantpartoflifeformostpeople,butwecanstaysafedrivingonroadsandwalkingonsidewalksonlywheneveryone'sroadtrafficsafetyawarenessisenhancedandpromoted(改為倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)：3.butonlywheneveryone'sroadtrafficsafetyawareness__isenhanced_andpromoted_canwestay_safedrivingonroadsandwalking_onsidewalks)應(yīng)用文十演講致辭寫(xiě)作點(diǎn)撥1 V發(fā)表演說(shuō)，發(fā)言人都是為了達(dá)到某一特定的目的，所以根據(jù)致辭的目的，發(fā)言稿可分為宣講類(lèi)和歡迎(送)類(lèi)。其共同的特點(diǎn)在于要突出主題，易于被聽(tīng)眾接受。此類(lèi)寫(xiě)作在結(jié)構(gòu)安排上可分為如下三個(gè)部分：第一部分：稱(chēng)謂(對(duì)聽(tīng)眾或與會(huì)者的稱(chēng)呼)。如：Comrades,Friends,Ladiesandgentlemen,Dearfellowstudents,Boysandgirls,Goodafternoon,everyone...第二部分：正文或?qū)а?。正文部分明確介紹歡迎或歡送的對(duì)象，簡(jiǎn)單介紹其身份、經(jīng)歷，客人在逗留期間進(jìn)行了哪些活動(dòng)等。第三部分：結(jié)束語(yǔ)。如：That'sall.Thankyou!Thankyouforyourlistening/attention.等。藺句模板1 V.歡迎致辭常用語(yǔ)(1)Wearegladtohaveachancetogettogetherwith...(2)Wefeelgreatlyhonouredtohaveachancetobewith...(3)Let'sgiveourwarmwelcometo...(4)Thankyouforyouracceptingourinvitationtocometo...(5)Firstofall,allowmeonbehalfof...todo...(6)Nowletusasksb.tospeaktous..歡送致辭常用語(yǔ)(1)Inbiddingfarewelltosb....(2)Toconveyourprofoundfriendshiptosb....(3)Toconveyourbestregardsandrespectstosb....（4）Towishsb.apleasantjourneyhomeandgoodhealth...（5）Maythefriendshipbetween...befurtherdeveloped!.演講致辭格式模板Goodmorning/afternoon/evening,everyoneIt'ssonicetoseeallofyouhere.Ifeelgreatlyhonoredtohavetheopportunitytodeliveralectureon/It'sagreatpleasureformetospeakhere.Thetopicofmylectureis./TodayIwilltalkabout./It'snicetotalk/speakabout（演講主題）.Firstofall,.Besides,.Lastbutnotleast,./Tobeginwith,.Secondly,.What'smore,縣體內(nèi)容）.AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion,.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecansafelydrawtheconclusionthat.Thanksforyourattention/listening（演講結(jié)束語(yǔ)）.輔助練7假如你是李華，作為高三畢業(yè)生代表，你將在學(xué)校舉辦的畢業(yè)晚會(huì)上用英文作一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)短的告別演講。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：.對(duì)三年高中生活的懷念；.對(duì)老師的感謝；.對(duì)母校的祝福。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。［審題謀篇通思路］本題要求考生以李華的身份，在學(xué)校舉辦的畢業(yè)晚會(huì)上用英文作一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)短的告別演講?？煞譃槿危旱谝欢危罕磉_(dá)對(duì)三年高中生活的懷念。第二段：表達(dá)對(duì)老師的感謝。第三段：表達(dá)對(duì)母校的祝福。［修訂提升爭(zhēng)高分］DearteachersandfellowstudentsHowtimeflies!We'llsaygoodbyetoourschoolsoon.Nowit'sreallyhardformetoputmyfeelingsintowords.Thepastthreeyearshasbeenreallyawonderfuljourneywithyouguys.Ourgreatteacherscontributedtheirtime,energyandlovesothattheycanmakethejourneysafeandfruitful.改為簡(jiǎn)單句：1.Tomakethejourneysafe_and_fruitful,_our_great_teacherscontributed_their_time,energyandlove.）Here,weareextremelygratefulforallthat,ourdearteachers,havedoneforus.（改為what引導(dǎo)的名詞性從句：2.Here,weareextremelygrateful_forwhatyou,_ourdearteachers,_have_done_for_us.）It'llsoonbethetimeforustodepart.Butitisnottheend.Itjustmeansthatwe'regoingtobeginanewjourney.（添加過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)：3.Finally加astbutnotleast）,onbehalfofallthegraduatespresenthere,letmeextendoursincerewishestoourschoolandrespectableteachers.Thankyou!過(guò)關(guān)檢測(cè)（限時(shí)：25分鐘/篇）假設(shè)你是李華，彳^的美國(guó)朋友 Peter正在一家孔子學(xué)院學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)和中國(guó)文化，得知中國(guó)人很重視家風(fēng)傳承。他在給你的電子郵件中提到很想了解你的家風(fēng)以及家風(fēng)對(duì)你的影響。請(qǐng)你給他回復(fù)一封電子郵件。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：家風(fēng)familyspirits［精彩范文］DearPeterI'mgladtoknowyouarelearningChineselanguageandculture.Inyourlastletter,yousaidyouwantedtoknowsomethingaboutmyfamilyspirits.HereI'mwritingtosharesomethingaboutmyfamilyspiritswithyou.Therearemanygoodqualitiesthathavebeenpassedfromgenerationtogenerationinmyfamily.Myparentsalwayslayemphasisontheimportanceofhonesty,braveryanddili